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CMP
155 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
CMP

Nyquill wrote:

asdf sorry about the late mod, been really busy lately :/

[General]
Offset 680, the current offset is much too late.

[Normal]
Well er, I was going to do a more texty mod, but I don't really know how to explain some of my suggestions in words, so going to go ahead and do a lot of screenshots xD

The first pattern is kind of random, want to try to make it fit the vocals more?
Here is a possible way to do it:
SPOILER
00:17:042 (1,2) - Try something like this?->no
SPOILER
00:20:818 (1) - ehh... yeah->no
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/5AW5
00:59:420 (4) - Flip this horizontally and place it back->no
01:09:490 (2,3) - Remove claps from beginning. Claps at the end of these sliders instead.->fixed
01:17:042 (3) - ^->fixed
01:19:979 (1,2) - Clap at the end of this slider and on (2).->fixed

I guess most other stuff is fine...

[Pereira's]
o/ hi again. Yet another good diff ^^
01:09:082 (2,5,1,4,3) - I suggest you don't switch to 1 3 1 3 hitsounds here. Stick with 2 4 2 4 xD. This means remove whistle on (2,5) and so on and making them on the end of (3, 6) and so on. In fact, just have 2 4 2 4 hitsounds for this entire section, that will sound much nicer.
03:30:481 (5) - should really just keep it consistant like this
SPOILER
03:39:711 (5) - Yet another sudden switch to 1 3 1 3, hitsounds don't sound good if you suddenly switch their patterns in the same section

[Insane]
Ahh, stream spacing is all over the place :<
00:16:110 (2,3) - Wanna have this have the same spacing as 00:14:851 (6,7,8) ?->fixed(Very thank you,I didn't see this)

[Inhuman]
Don't really see any mapping issues worth mentioning here, except again hitsounds are all over the place. A 2 4 2 4 clap would be good for this diff in the kiai sections imo.
Thank you
Breeze
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Breeze
[General]
  1. title shoud be fripside-only my railgun (Full Ver.), there is a space bettwen "railgun" and "(", and there is a spot after "Ver"
    click here to check how to change title
[Normal]
I don't sure what rhythem you follow to add hitsound, I'll try my best to understand your style and give some suggestions
  • 00:17:474 (2,3,4) - Add whistle to the start of each slider, add whistle to both start and end to 4
  1. 00:23:767 (3,5) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 00:23:348 (2,4,1), remove both whistle and finish from 00:24:607 (5)
  2. 00:25:865 (2) - Add finish
  3. 00:42:649 (3) - Add finish
  4. 00:45:166 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:50:621 (4) - Add clap
  6. 00:54:397 (2) - Add finish
  7. 01:01:110 (3) - Add finish or whistle seems better
  8. 01:02:788 (1) - Add finish
  9. 01:07:823 (3) - Add finish or whistle
  10. 01:09:502 (2) - Add finish
  11. 01:29:642 (1) - ^
  12. 01:55:656 (6) - Remove clap
  13. 02:03:208 (4) - Add whistle or finish, and some more other same stuff like this, leave them to you to decide whether add hitsound, so I won't post
  14. 02:14:956 (3) - Add finish
  15. 02:30:061 (3), 02:31:739 (1,2,3) - Add finish
  16. 03:22:089 (1) - ^
  17. 03:30:481 (2) - ^
  18. 03:52:299 (1) - ^
  19. 04:00:691 (3) - ^
    Notes are fine, I think you can make your sliders more neat
[Pereira's Hard]
  1. 00:14:117 (2) - Remove clap, add finish
  2. 00:14:956 (5) - Remove clap
  3. 00:14:537 (3), 00:15:376 (1) - Add clap
  4. 00:25:865 (5) - Add finish
  5. 00:34:257 (1) - Remove clap, finish mixed with clap sounds bad, really
  6. 01:22:509 (1) - Remove whistle
  7. 01:17:054 (4) - Remove whistle, shouldn't whistle added at 01:16:635 (2), 01:17:474 (5)?
  8. 01:27:124 (1) - remove whistle, add to 3
  9. 01:30:481 (2), 01:31:320 (4) - Remove whistle, add to 01:30:900 (3)
  10. 02:07:823 (6) - Add whistle
  11. 02:14:117 (4) - Remove whistle, add to 6
  12. 02:24:607 (1) - Remove whistle
  13. 02:50:201 (1) - Add finish
  14. 03:52:718 (4) - Add whistle
[Insane]
  1. 01:17:264 (5,7) - These 2 claps sounds a bit odd here
  2. 01:19:572 (3) - Add finish
  3. 01:36:355 - KIAI ends here
  4. 01:43:068 (1) - Add finish
  5. 01:54:082 (4) - remove clap
  6. 03:22:089 (3) - Add finish
  7. 03:31:530 - 03:35:306 - Add clap at only 03:32:579 (5), 03:33:418 (2), 03:34:257 (5), 03:35:096 (9)
  8. 03:48:942 (1) - Remove whistle
  9. 03:51:670 - 03:56:075 - Add clap at only 03:52:718 (4), 03:53:558 (8), 03:54:397 (2), 03:55:236 (6), add finish to 03:52:299 (1)
  10. 03:59:012 (1,3) - Add finish at slider start
  11. 04:00:691 (1) - Add finish
[Inhuman]
  1. 00:19:152 (1,2,3) - Add whistle or finish to 3 all, or leave they 3 both empty sounds better
  2. 01:01:110 (4,5,6) - I feel soft hitfinish sounds better here
  3. 01:24:187 (2) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 01:24:607 (3)
  4. 02:03:208 (1,2,3) - try soft finish
  5. 02:57:858 (4,5) - spacing odd
  6. 03:18:732 (1) - Add finish
    Lots of your streams has odd spacing :/ I think you'd better reput them by turing on distance snap
CMP
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Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
CMP
I am thinking that I give up mapping



So boring..


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Breeze
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Breeze
Well, all depends on yourself, game is for relax first, just do whatever you like :)
But it's DO a pity that you give up it since this is your long time effort :roll:
Pereira006
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Pereira006
All fixed orz

Download: fripSide - only my railgun (CMP) [Pereira's Hard].osu


CMP wrote:

I am thinking that I give up mapping



So boring..


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What? you tell me you dream is get you map rank and now you wanna quit mapping? well you decided
Tanmak
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Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Pereira006님 난이도 업로드 되는 데로 모딩을 개시할게요.

일단은 보류해놓겠습니다.
Pereira006
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Pereira006

Tanmak wrote:

Pereira006님 난이도 업로드 되는 데로 모딩을 개시할게요.

일단은 보류해놓겠습니다.
I can't understand you korean :/ but i did transleted google (I hope not troll orz)

I can hold 1 year or 2 year or 3 year bla bla
but he said
I am thinking that I give up mapping
... why?
Because Big mod ? If big mod will be helpfully and good as he is new mapping

I Will be happy he can do it, Study more how mapping and work lot this map

sorry my poor english and i can't write korean sorry :(
CMP
155 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
CMP

Pereira006 wrote:

Tanmak wrote:

Pereira006님 난이도 업로드 되는 데로 모딩을 개시할게요.

일단은 보류해놓겠습니다.
I can't understand you korean :/ but i did transleted google (I hope not troll orz)

I can hold 1 year or 2 year or 3 year bla bla
but he said
I am thinking that I give up mapping
... why?
Because Big mod ? If big mod will be helpfully and good as he is new mapping

I Will be happy he can do it, Study more how mapping and work lot this map

sorry my poor english and i can't write korean sorry :(

I am not give up(100%),but I am thinking of giving up(~ing)

because of endless repeatation mapping,I be being boring and be interesting about drawing
CMP
155 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
CMP

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. title shoud be fripside-only my railgun (Full Ver.), there is a space bettwen "railgun" and "(", and there is a spot after "Ver"
    click here to check how to change title
[Normal]
I don't sure what rhythem you follow to add hitsound, I'll try my best to understand your style and give some suggestions
  • 00:17:474 (2,3,4) - Add whistle to the start of each slider, add whistle to both start and end to 4
  1. 00:23:767 (3,5) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 00:23:348 (2,4,1), remove both whistle and finish from 00:24:607 (5)
  2. 00:25:865 (2) - Add finish
  3. 00:42:649 (3) - Add finish
  4. 00:45:166 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:50:621 (4) - Add clap
  6. 00:54:397 (2) - Add finish
  7. 01:01:110 (3) - Add finish or whistle seems better
  8. 01:02:788 (1) - Add finish
  9. 01:07:823 (3) - Add finish or whistle
  10. 01:09:502 (2) - Add finish
  11. 01:29:642 (1) - ^
  12. 01:55:656 (6) - Remove clap
  13. 02:03:208 (4) - Add whistle or finish, and some more other same stuff like this, leave them to you to decide whether add hitsound, so I won't post
  14. 02:14:956 (3) - Add finish
  15. 02:30:061 (3), 02:31:739 (1,2,3) - Add finish
  16. 03:22:089 (1) - ^
  17. 03:30:481 (2) - ^
  18. 03:52:299 (1) - ^
  19. 04:00:691 (3) - ^
    Notes are fine, I think you can make your sliders more neat
[Pereira's Hard]
  1. 00:14:117 (2) - Remove clap, add finish
  2. 00:14:956 (5) - Remove clap
  3. 00:14:537 (3), 00:15:376 (1) - Add clap
  4. 00:25:865 (5) - Add finish
  5. 00:34:257 (1) - Remove clap, finish mixed with clap sounds bad, really
  6. 01:22:509 (1) - Remove whistle
  7. 01:17:054 (4) - Remove whistle, shouldn't whistle added at 01:16:635 (2), 01:17:474 (5)?
  8. 01:27:124 (1) - remove whistle, add to 3
  9. 01:30:481 (2), 01:31:320 (4) - Remove whistle, add to 01:30:900 (3)
  10. 02:07:823 (6) - Add whistle
  11. 02:14:117 (4) - Remove whistle, add to 6
  12. 02:24:607 (1) - Remove whistle
  13. 02:50:201 (1) - Add finish
  14. 03:52:718 (4) - Add whistle
[Insane]
  1. 01:17:264 (5,7) - These 2 claps sounds a bit odd here
  2. 01:19:572 (3) - Add finish
  3. 01:36:355 - KIAI ends here
  4. 01:43:068 (1) - Add finish
  5. 01:54:082 (4) - remove clap
  6. 03:22:089 (3) - Add finish
  7. 03:31:530 - 03:35:306 - Add clap at only 03:32:579 (5), 03:33:418 (2), 03:34:257 (5), 03:35:096 (9)
  8. 03:48:942 (1) - Remove whistle
  9. 03:51:670 - 03:56:075 - Add clap at only 03:52:718 (4), 03:53:558 (8), 03:54:397 (2), 03:55:236 (6), add finish to 03:52:299 (1)
  10. 03:59:012 (1,3) - Add finish at slider start
  11. 04:00:691 (1) - Add finish
[Inhuman]
  1. 00:19:152 (1,2,3) - Add whistle or finish to 3 all, or leave they 3 both empty sounds better
  2. 01:01:110 (4,5,6) - I feel soft hitfinish sounds better here
  3. 01:24:187 (2) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 01:24:607 (3)
  4. 02:03:208 (1,2,3) - try soft finish
  5. 02:57:858 (4,5) - spacing odd
  6. 03:18:732 (1) - Add finish
    Lots of your streams has odd spacing :/ I think you'd better reput them by turing on distance snap




all fixed
thank you
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
hi- :)

All suggestions

[General]

●fine~

[Normal]

●AR-1. HP+1
●01:55:656 (6) - 1 grid down
●01:56:495 (1) - 3 grid left. 1 grid down
●02:04:886 (2) - new combo add
●02:07:823 (1) - new combo remove
●02:08:243 (2) - new combo add
●02:07:823 (1) - 1 grid down
●03:06:145 (2) - 1 grid right
●03:06:984 (3) - ^

[Pereira's Hard]

●00:17:474 (1) - Move to the end 00:18:732. 00:19:152 - circle add
●00:25:865 (5) - Move to the end 00:27:124. 00:27:544 - circle add
●00:40:551 - circle add
●01:03:418 (4) - new combo add
●01:04:257 (7) - ^
●01:04:467 (1) - new combo remove
●01:05:096 (3) - new combo add
●01:10:131 (4) - ^
●01:11:809 (3) - ^
●01:16:844 (3) - ^
●01:17:684 (6) - ^
●01:19:572 (1) - Move to the end 01:20:830. 01:21:250- circle add
●02:05:516 (4) - new combo add
●02:06:355 (7) - ^
●02:06:565 (1) - new combo remove
●02:07:194 (3) - new combo add
●02:12:229 (4) - ^
●02:13:907 (3) - ^
●02:18:942 (3) - ^
●02:19:781 (6) - ^
●02:21:670 (1) - Move to the end 02:22:928. 02:23:348- circle add
●03:19:362 (4) - new combo add
●03:20:201 (7) - ^
●03:22:509 (1) - Move to the end 03:23:348. 03:23:767- circle add
●03:26:075 (4) - new combo add
●03:26:914 (6) - ^
●03:32:788 (4) - ^
●03:33:628 (6) - ^
●03:33:837 (1) - new combo remove
●03:34:467 (3) - new combo add
●03:39:502 (4) - ^
●03:41:180 (3) - ^
●03:48:942 (1) - Move to the end 03:50:201. 03:50:621- circle add

[Insane]

●fine~

[Inhuman]

●OD-1. HP+2 or 1


Good map!!!!!!!!
Pereira006
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Pereira006

-Gamu- wrote:

[Pereira's Hard]

●00:17:474 (1) - Move to the end 00:18:732. 00:19:152 - circle addno
●00:25:865 (5) - Move to the end 00:27:124. 00:27:544 - circle addno
●00:40:551 - circle addno
●01:03:418 (4) - new combo addno
●01:04:257 (7) - ^no
●01:04:467 (1) - new combo removeno
●01:05:096 (3) - new combo add no
●01:10:131 (4) - ^no
●01:11:809 (3) - ^no
●01:16:844 (3) - ^no
●01:17:684 (6) - ^no
●01:19:572 (1) - Move to the end 01:20:830. 01:21:250- circle addno
●02:05:516 (4) - new combo addno
●02:06:355 (7) - ^no
●02:06:565 (1) - new combo removeno
●02:07:194 (3) - new combo addno
●02:12:229 (4) - ^no
●02:13:907 (3) - ^no
●02:18:942 (3) - ^no
●02:19:781 (6) - ^no
●02:21:670 (1) - Move to the end 02:22:928. 02:23:348- circle addno
●03:19:362 (4) - new combo addno
●03:20:201 (7) - ^no
●03:22:509 (1) - Move to the end 03:23:348. 03:23:767- circle addno
●03:26:075 (4) - new combo addno
●03:26:914 (6) - ^no
●03:32:788 (4) - ^no
●03:33:628 (6) - ^no
●03:33:837 (1) - new combo removeno
●03:34:467 (3) - new combo addno
●03:39:502 (4) - ^no
●03:41:180 (3) - ^no
●03:48:942 (1) - Move to the end 03:50:201. 03:50:621- circle addno
THe new combo is fine not change all sorry and slider is fine because follow lyrics so no change too sorry
CMP
155 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
CMP
quit











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Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
It seems pretty stupid to quit after getting so much people to help and improve this map a lot. Seems as though you are accepting all mods, you know you can deny some suggestions right? If it doesn't fit your style or you don't believe you need it, just say no. Your map is doing way better than my first map. Took me 10 months to get it ranked and it has 13 pages of mods. It's only been in pending for 4 months and you have 9 pages already. Sooner or later a MAT (except Breeze cause he modded already) or BAT will come check it and bubble it.

Download: fripSide - only my railgun (Full Ver.) (CMP) [Inhuman].osu
mochi
779 posts
Joined June 2010
mochi
The huge problem with insane and inhuman is that it changes rhythm whenever it feels like it. At one point it'll follow vocals then it would start following mapper's own rhythm.

Also, why would you not have streams during the guitar solo in an insane. Disappointed.

No kudosu.
Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
Hi. I don't have time to mod right now sorry. I gave normal a quick check though.

01:32:998 (1,2,3) - Perhaps change this into a spinner and end it at 01:34:677. Make sure you end the kiai here too.
02:25:865 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Change this pattern a little bit? It's quite squarey.
03:03:628 (1) - Perhaps spinner from here to 03:05:306?
03:07:823 (1) - Remove kick slider, use a long slider instead.
03:38:872 (1,2) - Perhaps remake these slider? I prefer having a better looking arc.
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn

CMP wrote:

quit
please don't = =;;

just keep fighting~
Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
Just wanna say nothing much really bothered me except sliders. I believe they could do a bit more work.
Roddie
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Joined June 2009
Roddie
Hi.

Normal
  1. 00:47:684-Put a new combo here.
  2. 00:47:684-Remove new combo.
  3. 00:51:040 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?

Pereira's Hard
  1. 00:40:551 (x)-It feels like there should be a note here...
  2. 01:49:781-Incease the volume by 5%.

Insane
  1. 00:47:684 (1)-Add a finish?
  2. 01:11:704 (1)Remove the 1st note. I don't understand how it makes sense when it comes to rhythm.
  3. 01:11:809-Put a new combo here.
  4. 02:57:124-Remove new combo.

Inhuman
  1. 00:40:551-Remove new combo?

And that's it.
CMP
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Topic Starter
CMP
A second drawing is WIP=canceled



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Last edited by CMP , edited 1 time in total.
Pereira006
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Pereira006
all fixed

Download: fripSide - only my railgun (Full Ver.) (CMP) [Pereira's Hard].osu
HellDawn
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Joined April 2010
HellDawn
Normal
01:36:355- Break drag to here.
04:10:341- spinner finish here ?

Pereira's Hard
00:29:432- spinner start here
01:31:530- ^
01:36:355- Break drag to here
02:18:313- finish
02:28:383- whistle
02:33:628- you know
03:55:656- whistle
04:00:900- start here *-*
Pereira006
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Joined October 2010
Pereira006

HellDawn wrote:



[b]Pereira's Hard
00:29:432- spinner start herelucky
01:31:530- ^lucky again
01:36:355- Break drag to hereno no no.avi
02:18:313- finishorz
02:28:383- whistlenope
02:33:628- you knowlucky again orz
03:55:656- whistlenah
04:00:900- start here *-*okay.jpg
Download: fripSide - only my railgun (Full Ver.) (CMP) [Pereira's Hard].osu
Bobo_old
492 posts
Joined February 2011
Bobo_old
HIHI

Modded on request.

-Noooooormal-

00:19:152 - Make this slider one tick longer.
00:57:334 - Make this slider one long slider rather than a repeat slider.
01:07:823 - Make this slider one tick longer.
01:09:502 - Combo should start here. How it is atm isn't consistent with the rest of

themap.
01:21:250 - Make this slider one tick longer.
01:22:509 - Combo should start here.
01:23:348 - Add a note.
01:24:187 - ^
01:25:026 - ^
01:25:865 - ^
01:26:704 - ^
01:34:467 - Stack under (2) and push it 2 ticks forward.
01:59:012 - Push this 2 ticks forward. Add a clap on the end.
01:59:642 - Delete this note.
02:09:921 - One tick longer.
02:16:635 - ^
02:23:348 - ^
02:24:607 - Combo should start here.
02:53:558 - Stack under. (2)
03:10:341 - One tick longer.
03:23:767 - ^
03:26:285 - This note and (3) get covered by the healthbar.
03:30:481 - One tick longer.
03:37:194 - ^
03:43:907 - ^
03:44:527 - Forward 2 ticks.
03:50:621 - One tick longer.
03:52:728 - Add a note.
03:53:558 - ^
03:54:397 - ^
03:55:236 - ^
03:56:075 - ^

-Perry's Hard-

Nice diff~ :D

01:00:271 - Make this spinner two ticks longer.
02:02:369 - Two ticks longer.
04:03:942 - Pointless inhereting zone.
04:04:152 - ^

-Insane-

00:57:544 - Delete new combo.
01:14:537 - ^
01:27:124 - ^
01:45:586 - ^
02:15:376 - ^
02:17:684 - ^
02:21:670 - Holy sh*t sudden difficulty spike, please make these jumps smaller. D:
02:28:802 - Delete new combo.
02:57:124 - ^

-Inhuman-

00:28:802 - Delete new combo.
01:26:285 - ^
01:32:369 - ^
01:33:208 - ^
01:45:166 - ^
02:15:376 - ^
02:34:257 - ^
02:50:621 - ^
02:51:879 - ^
02:57:124 - ^
03:08:663 - ^
03:25:446 - Antijump.
03:32:998 - Nazi jump.
03:35:516 - Delete new combo.
03:50:621 - I wanna see symmetry on the Y axis.

Needs a bit of work.
Good tho~
Pereira006
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Pereira006
perry ? o.o

anyway all fixed

Download: fripSide - only my railgun (Full Ver.) (CMP) [Pereira's Hard].osu
Breeze
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Joined March 2009
Breeze

General

  1. Source : Toaru Kagaku no Railgun or To Aru Kagaku no Railgun
no should be lower case. Checked this from previous RANK maps, so please fix this

All difficulties

  1. The last spinner, [Normal] and [Inhuman] ends at 04:10:341, [Pereira's Hard] ends at 04:03:837, [Insane] ends at 04:10:760, end at same place seems better, at least all your own diff.s should end at same place?

Normal

  1. 04:03:837 - KAI ends here? Not a big deal anyway
  2. 00:54:397 (2,3,4) - Move these 3 claps 1/2 tick backward like the clap partten you used in previous notes, and remove finish sound of 00:54:397 (2) seem better
  3. 01:44:746 (3) - Add finish?
  4. 01:59:851 - 02:02:369 - Move these 3 claps 1/2 tick backward like the clap partten you used in previous notes
  5. 02:50:201 (1) - Add finish?

Pereira's Hard

  1. 00:28:383 (3) - Add finish?
  2. 00:40:551 (6) - Add whistle, or use finish to both 00:40:131 (5,6)
  3. 01:31:320 (4) - Remove whistle? This one seem to be extra
  4. 01:36:355 - Drag break to here?
  5. 02:25:865 - 02:29:222 - Move all whistle in this part 1/2 beat forward to fit your previous whistle add partten?
  6. 02:32:579 (2), 02:33:418 (4) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 02:32:998 (3)
  7. 02:31:739 (3), 02:32:579 (2), 02:33:418 (4) - Add finish

Insane

  1. 00:40:131 (5) - Add finish?
  2. 01:16:005 (1) - Remove whistle
  3. 01:18:313 (7), 01:19:152 (2) - Remove whistle sounds better IMO, why here use continuous 4 whistle?
  4. 02:21:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this part might be confusing, it's easily to read to1 beat space while playing IMO, maybe just for me though
  5. 04:03:837 (3) - Add finish?

Inhuaman

  1. HPDrainRate+1? It's even lower than [Hard] and [Insane] now
  2. 01:31:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Emm, I can't find the rhythem you put at this part, it seems to be confusing
  3. 02:33:418 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ^
  4. 03:25:446 (1) - Add finish?

It looked like you remap many part of this map, and it looked more better now
have a star
Pereira006
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Pereira006

Breeze wrote:

General


[notice]

Pereira's Hard

  1. 00:28:383 (3) - Add finish? fix
  2. 00:40:551 (6) - Add whistle, or use finish to both 00:40:131 (5,6) fix
  3. 01:31:320 (4) - Remove whistle? This one seem to be extra no
  4. 01:36:355 - Drag break to here?fix
  5. 02:25:865 - 02:29:222 - Move all whistle in this part 1/2 beat forward to fit your previous whistle add partten?fix i guess
  6. 02:32:579 (2), 02:33:418 (4) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 02:32:998 (3) fix
  7. 02:31:739 (3) fix, 02:32:579 (2)no, 02:33:418 (4) fix - Add finish
also i did until finish here 04:03:837 because the drums strong is over then i finish here is fit for me
CMP you like me i finish here until 04:03:837 just same all diff thank

anyway thank you mod breeze

and source fix

Download: fripSide - only my railgun (Full Ver.) (CMP) [Pereira's Hard].osu

go cmp
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[Normal]
You did follow my mod literally maybe.. some curve on some part will made this nicer :D
from 00:53:977 to 00:57:334 you inverted the hitsounds order. If it was Normal-Clap-Normal-Clap, you made it become Clap-Normal-Clap-Normal, you actually did use Clap on Snare, why in that part you won't use it?
00:57:334 (1,2,4,6) - Add clap in those notes :D
or better, you didn't remember to add some claps :D ( like in 01:27:124 (1,2) ends, 01:29:222 (4) and 01:29:642 (1,2,1,2) ends )
01:49:362 (6) - Start using clap like you done from 00:47:684 (1) -
Not about real problems, however, try to use more slider, in place like 02:25:865 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the plain circle get boring of overusing.

[Pereira's Hard]
00:29:012 (5,6) - well, one slider here would be awesome
01:18:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't like patterns like this... maybe conitnue in some way like the pattern before :D like that

[Insane]
Some overmapped stream though(pointing the divided 2 circle streams)
00:23:558 (x) - Add a note to complete the stream. don't use partially mapped stream.


P.s. You did draw well Misaka and Uiharu, Saten feel generic and Kuroko's hair ar like greek medusa's one... she got them less curly and more wavy
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CMP
155 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
CMP

Breeze wrote:

General

  1. Source : Toaru Kagaku no Railgun or To Aru Kagaku no Railgun
no should be lower case. Checked this from previous RANK maps, so please fix this

All difficulties

  1. The last spinner, [Normal] and [Inhuman] ends at 04:10:341, [Pereira's Hard] ends at 04:03:837, [Insane] ends at 04:10:760, end at same place seems better, at least all your own diff.s should end at same place?

Normal

  1. 04:03:837 - KAI ends here? Not a big deal anyway
  2. 00:54:397 (2,3,4) - Move these 3 claps 1/2 tick backward like the clap partten you used in previous notes, and remove finish sound of 00:54:397 (2) seem better
  3. 01:44:746 (3) - Add finish?
  4. 01:59:851 - 02:02:369 - Move these 3 claps 1/2 tick backward like the clap partten you used in previous notes
  5. 02:50:201 (1) - Add finish?

Pereira's Hard

  1. 00:28:383 (3) - Add finish?
  2. 00:40:551 (6) - Add whistle, or use finish to both 00:40:131 (5,6)
  3. 01:31:320 (4) - Remove whistle? This one seem to be extra
  4. 01:36:355 - Drag break to here?
  5. 02:25:865 - 02:29:222 - Move all whistle in this part 1/2 beat forward to fit your previous whistle add partten?
  6. 02:32:579 (2), 02:33:418 (4) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 02:32:998 (3)
  7. 02:31:739 (3), 02:32:579 (2), 02:33:418 (4) - Add finish

Insane

  1. 00:40:131 (5) - Add finish?
  2. 01:16:005 (1) - Remove whistle
  3. 01:18:313 (7), 01:19:152 (2) - Remove whistle sounds better IMO, why here use continuous 4 whistle?
  4. 02:21:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this part might be confusing, it's easily to read to1 beat space while playing IMO, maybe just for me though
  5. 04:03:837 (3) - Add finish?

Inhuaman

  1. HPDrainRate+1? It's even lower than [Hard] and [Insane] now
  2. 01:31:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Emm, I can't find the rhythem you put at this part, it seems to be confusing
  3. 02:33:418 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ^
  4. 03:25:446 (1) - Add finish?

It looked like you remap many part of this map, and it looked more better now
have a star




most patterns are fixed But I will keep "Inhuman Round Slider Pattern(01:31:530)

Thank you
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CMP
155 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
CMP

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Normal]
You did follow my mod literally maybe.. some curve on some part will made this nicer :D
from 00:53:977 to 00:57:334 you inverted the hitsounds order. If it was Normal-Clap-Normal-Clap, you made it become Clap-Normal-Clap-Normal, you actually did use Clap on Snare, why in that part you won't use it?
00:57:334 (1,2,4,6) - Add clap in those notes :D
or better, you didn't remember to add some claps :D ( like in 01:27:124 (1,2) ends, 01:29:222 (4) and 01:29:642 (1,2,1,2) ends )
01:49:362 (6) - Start using clap like you done from 00:47:684 (1) -
Not about real problems, however, try to use more slider, in place like 02:25:865 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the plain circle get boring of overusing.

[Pereira's Hard]
00:29:012 (5,6) - well, one slider here would be awesome
01:18:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't like patterns like this... maybe conitnue in some way like the pattern before :D like that

[Insane]
Some overmapped stream though(pointing the divided 2 circle streams)
00:23:558 (x) - Add a note to complete the stream. don't use partially mapped stream.


P.s. You did draw well Misaka and Uiharu, SDaten feel generic and Kuroko's hair ar like greek medusa's one... she got them less curly and more wavy
some parts are fixed (not all)

Thank you
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
Pereira
00:41:809 (2,3,4,5) - maybe this

02:27:544 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same
03:57:334 (1) -Why is spinner here? you know what to do right?

Normal&insane&inhuman
can't find problem. sorry 'bout that.

8/10
Pereira006
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2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006

artpiggo wrote:

Pereira
00:41:809 (2,3,4,5) - maybe thisI still stay this patterns sorry

02:27:544 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same no
03:57:334 (1) -Why is spinner here? you know what to do right? huh? http://puu.sh/6ylR nothing spinner...

Normal&insane&inhuman
can't find problem. sorry 'bout that.

8/10
Cyclohexane
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4,568 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyclohexane
Alright let's see.

[Inhuman]
The SV is a bit fast isn't it?
04:03:208 (1,2,3) - Very unreadable anti-jump. Please fix.

[Insane]
Eh, this one's fine.

[Pereira006's Hard]
00:24:187 (5) - Slider's fugly, please change
00:35:935 (6) - ^
00:37:614 (5) - ^ I'm not going to point out all of them but they all need to be fixed
This. is. Boring. It's filled with 1/2 with 1/4 kick sliders.

[Normal]
00:27:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That is one ugly hexagon.
All these square formations make me feel like I'm playing jubeat
Again the map is not bad, but it's boring, since it's almost always the same.
Pereira006
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Joined October 2010
Pereira006

Mr Color wrote:

[Pereira006's Hard]
00:24:187 (5) - Slider's fugly, please change
00:35:935 (6) - ^
00:37:614 (5) - ^ I'm not going to point out all of them but they all need to be fixed
This. is. Boring. It's filled with 1/2 with 1/4 kick sliders.
no is intetional you should read before i did post so many this time not fix sorry and kick slider ? wut where? if kick slider should be like bigger repeat times and my slider triple repeat is not kick slider

this is not boring
this is make sense lyrcis and ryhthm of course this is hard
map approved that is not boring yeah because so funny spacing example orz
Inhuman and insane is soo funny lmfao
anyway sorry my bad eng and thank you mod
Magicphoenix
2,142 posts
Joined April 2010
Magicphoenix
Yo ! ~Mod

[Inhuman]

*Copy a soft-sliderslide.wav into your folder and use S: C1 as custom hitsound
*This diff sounds really cruel and doesn't fit to the song/anime/anything at all. I recommend you to rename it.
*(NAZI)00:16:635 (1) - 2 Lv4 Grid left
*(NAZI)00:17:264 (3) - ^
*00:37:614 (1) - Remove whistle
*00:52:718 (1) - Add clap
*01:05:096 (7) - New Combo
*02:07:823 (6) - Way too offside the grid
*02:09:082 (3) - Add whistle
*02:16:635 (1) - Add finish

This is really overmapped X_X I am not even sure if you will still need this diff in your mapset

[Insane]

*00:27:544 (1,2) - Strg + R
*00:35:096 (2,3,4) - Adjust the spacing properly with 1.0x
*00:46:005 (3) - Add 1 reverse and place (4,5) nearer to the note
*00:46:844 (4,5) - Add whistles on both
*01:19:991 (1,2,3) - Make this to a bigger triangle, to make next (1,2,3) clearer? Place it like this :
SPOILER
*03:06:984 (1) - Add whistle
*03:08:243 (5) - Remove whistle
*03:08:663 (1) - Add whistle
*03:10:341 (1) - ^
*03:13:697 (1) - ^
*03:14:537 (1) - ^
*03:14:537 (1) - ^
*03:20:411 (3) - ^
*03:21:250 (1) - ^
*03:23:767 (1) - ^
*03:26:285 (2) - ^
*03:27:124 (3) - ^
*03:27:963 (1) - ^

Wow, this diff turned out really good ! I really think you should delete [Inhuman] , I know it hurts to delete a diff completely myself, but it just doesn't fit into the mapset. Insane is good enough...
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[Inhuman]
01:56:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't get this rhythm. Try to follow the vocal or the song atleast?
02:04:886 (1,2) - ^
04:03:208 (1,2,3) - This is a mean anti-jump. I really suggest you to fix this.

[Pereira]
The spinner at the very end is broken (starts at 03:57:334 for some reason). Please fix this.



In general, there were parts that aren't really empathizing the song. Specially towards [Inhuman] and [Insane]. I also recommand [Easy]. Can't be bad to have an easier diff.
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Hello CMP.. Thx for mod request..
I like fripside song.. It's give me spirit to mod this map.. ^^

General
You have two .osb file in your song folder.. You should delete it both of them if you're not going to use storyboard.

Insane
00:36:355 (5) - Remove the finish sound.. I think it's weird..
00:36:774 (1) - add whistle at then start of the slider.
00:37:194 (2) - ^
00:37:614 (3) - ^
00:38:453 (1) - Remove the whistle sound from the end of the slider , but add whistle sound on the start of the slider.
00:38:872 (2) - ^
00:39:292 (3) - ^
00:39:711 (4) - ^
00:43:488 (1) - remove the whistle sound from the body of the slider, but add whistle sound to the start of the slider..
00:57:124 (1) - remove new combo here.
00:58:802 (5) - move this slider down, until it allign with 1.. Look here.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/160436
01:41:809 (4) - remove this whistle sound just from it body..
01:47:264 (1) - remove whistle sound from this slider
01:59:432 (1) - this circle spacing is not intuitive.. :( You should move it further..
02:17:684 (5) - remove new combo

This difficulty is fun to play.. I like it ^^

Inhuman
00:41:809 (1,2,4) - i don't like the combination of whistle sound here.. I suggest you remove whistle sound here, but add whistle sound at the start of the slider.
00:46:215 (2,3,4) - ^
00:51:879 (1,2) - i think you should not overlap this slider..
01:45:166 (4) - remove new combo here
02:19:781 (1) - i think you should add new combo here
02:52:718 (2) - remove new combo here
03:35:516 (5) - ^
03:41:180 (2) - rotate 180*
03:44:746 (5) - remove new combo here

That's all for the mod :D.. Overall your map is fun to play.. :) Sorry if there's mistake on my mod.. Good luck on ranking ^^
haha5957
1,433 posts
Joined July 2010
haha5957
[General]
Normal = 150만
Pereira = 978만
Insane = 1550만
Inhuman = 1720만
으 퓨처게이저 (이 건은 다시한번 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ) 때 한번 말씀드렸다시피 제 퓨처게이저도
지금은 미사카 미코토가 되긴 했지만 당시 시라이 쿠로코였던 난이도가 1300만, 미사카 미코토 난이도가 1700만, 님이 처음
제작해주신 인세인이 1200만이어서 제가 하드로 낮추겠다고 말씀드린적이 있었죠?

당시 제 퓨처게이저의 점수 분포도가 80만 - 1200만 - 1300만 - 1700만이었는데 그래서 그런지 보는 사람마다 엄청나게 깠었어요
하드도 없고 노말도 없고 뭐하는거냐고 몹시 혼났습니다 'ㅁ' Difficulty Spread 가 몹시 나쁘다고 표현하더라고요. 랭크에도 엄청난 지장이 있다고 합니다..

일단 개인적인 평가로는 Inhuman 꽤 차별화가 된것 같지만 (사실 Insane보다 많이 어렵진 않지만)
Insane이랑 Pereira 난이도랑은 난이도가 꽤 비슷..한 것 같습니다. 디피컬티 세팅도 AR을 제외하면 같고..

난이도도 보시면 알겠지만 초록색 E 하나에서 파랑색 N, 노랑색 H를 건너뛰고 빨강색 I만 3개입니다.
빨강 I간의 난이도 차이가 꽤 크지 않으면 랭크가 불가능하다는 말도 #modhelp 에서 들어본것 같습니다 확실친 않지만..

아무튼 모든걸 떠나서 체감난이도상으로나 스코어난이도상으로나 노말과 하드가 없는것 같습니다..

2.65-4.86-4.89-5.00 정도인데 이 경우 사이에 난이도 3.8 정도 되는 걸 끼워넣으면 얼추 맞을 것 같긴 한데 그래서 뒤에
I난이도 3개에 대해선 좀 걸립니다 제가 귀에 못이 박히게 들었던거라... 특히 Insane이랑 Pereira난이도의 난이도차가 체감상 거의 없는것으로
느껴져서 더 그렇네용 ;ㅁ;

만약 제가 심장도 마음도 없는 매퍼였다면 인세인이나 게스트중에 하나를 빼라고 말씀드렸을 겁니다 (CMP님 난이도를 빼버린 제가 할 말은 아닙니다만 으앙 다시한번 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ)
근데 솔직히 인세인 매핑하는거 꽤 힘든데 그거 버리라는건 사람이 할 말이 아닌것같고 아무 죄도 없는 게스트를 버리..(어..죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ 하지만 다시한번 말씀드리지만 님것 뺀건 맵의 문제가 아니고 그냥 제 변덕 때문에..ㅠㅠ)는것도 할일은 아닌것 같아서
음.. 일단 3.8정도 되는 노말 (그리고 현재의 노말은 대충 이름을 이지로 바꿔버리면 됩니다!)을 만드는걸 권장드리고 싶고
인세인계열에 대해서는 으.. 굳이 해법을 찾자면 Inhuman을 SV를 더 증가(..) 하고 점프를 몹시 괴랄(...) 하게 해서 완전 넘사벽으로 리매핑하고 (사실 이러는건 이러는거대로 또 문젭니다 ㅠㅠ 정말 어려우면서 양질의 맵을 만드는건 저희같은 뉴비매퍼에겐 사실상 불가능..랭크맵이 10개쯤 되도 잘 안된다고 하네요. 제 퓨처게이저도 부적절한 오버매핑 돋아서 랭크는 힘들거라는 말 많이 듣습니당 'ㅁ')
현재의 Insane을 적당히만 리매핑해서 현재의 Inhuman 수준으로 올리면 차별화는 되겠지만... 잘 모르겠습니다.

인세인계열은 그렇다 치더라도 사이난이도가 하나 필요한 건 확실해 보입니당 'ㅁ';


[Normal]

00:20:830 (1) - 힛사가 맥이 뚝 끊기는 느낌이에요~
00:25:026 (1,2,3) - ^
01:29:642 (1) - 얘 아래로 옮기고 다음 (2) 는 위쪽으로 가는쪽이 나을것같아용
02:19:152 (2) - 플레이시 라이프게이지랑 좀 겹치는데 왠지 걸리네요 'ㅁ'
03:26:285 (2,3) - ^

[Pereira]
01:00:271 (1) - end this 01:01:110
01:07:614 (2,3,4,5) - I think every corus part (those parts that says "Only my railgun can shot it imasugu" or "kanarazu") is just mapped with 1/2
since this is hard difficulty, I think you can make this part much better by doing something special)
for example, I think 01:19:572 (1,2) sounds better then 01:06:145 (1,2,3,4,5)..
02:02:369 (1) - end this slider 02:03:208 or 02:03:837
03:57:334 (1) - uhm..I think something is wrong with this spinner..


[Insane]
음 제 생각일 뿐인지도 모르지만 AR에 비해 노트간 간격이 너무 좁지 않나 싶습니다 'ㅁ'
리매핑할수도 없으니 저는 AR -1를 추천드리고 싶습니다만...
00:14:537 (5) - 위치
01:38:872 (1,2,3) - 이저늬 01:36:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - 가 갔던 곳을 얘들이 다시한번 지나가고 있는데 완전히 겹쳐서 지나가는것도 아니고
음 그러니까 어떻게 표현하면 좋을까.. 느린 AR로 보면 겹쳐서 보기 안좋은 모양이 된다는 느낌이라고 해야할까요..?
02:29:222 (1) - x:100, y:32 정도로 옮기시던지 아니면 가만 두셔도 상관없을것 같지만 역시 너무 위쪽으로 치우친 느낌이..

[Inhuman]
02:33:418 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - 가운데를 중심으로 완전히 대칭이 아닙니다 (ctrl+h, ctrl+J 등등) 물론 신경 안쓰시면 상관없습니당 (사실 아무문제 없을듯)
괜찮네용



[Overall]
제가 쿠도스가 없어서 별을 드릴수가 없습니다 ㅠㅠ
CMP
155 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
CMP

haha5957 wrote:

[General]
Normal = 150만
Pereira = 978만
Insane = 1550만
Inhuman = 1720만
으 퓨처게이저 (이 건은 다시한번 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ) 때 한번 말씀드렸다시피 제 퓨처게이저도
지금은 미사카 미코토가 되긴 했지만 당시 시라이 쿠로코였던 난이도가 1300만, 미사카 미코토 난이도가 1700만, 님이 처음
제작해주신 인세인이 1200만이어서 제가 하드로 낮추겠다고 말씀드린적이 있었죠?

당시 제 퓨처게이저의 점수 분포도가 80만 - 1200만 - 1300만 - 1700만이었는데 그래서 그런지 보는 사람마다 엄청나게 깠었어요
하드도 없고 노말도 없고 뭐하는거냐고 몹시 혼났습니다 'ㅁ' Difficulty Spread 가 몹시 나쁘다고 표현하더라고요. 랭크에도 엄청난 지장이 있다고 합니다..

일단 개인적인 평가로는 Inhuman 꽤 차별화가 된것 같지만 (사실 Insane보다 많이 어렵진 않지만)
Insane이랑 Pereira 난이도랑은 난이도가 꽤 비슷..한 것 같습니다. 디피컬티 세팅도 AR을 제외하면 같고..

난이도도 보시면 알겠지만 초록색 E 하나에서 파랑색 N, 노랑색 H를 건너뛰고 빨강색 I만 3개입니다.
빨강 I간의 난이도 차이가 꽤 크지 않으면 랭크가 불가능하다는 말도 #modhelp 에서 들어본것 같습니다 확실친 않지만..

아무튼 모든걸 떠나서 체감난이도상으로나 스코어난이도상으로나 노말과 하드가 없는것 같습니다..

2.65-4.86-4.89-5.00 정도인데 이 경우 사이에 난이도 3.8 정도 되는 걸 끼워넣으면 얼추 맞을 것 같긴 한데 그래서 뒤에
I난이도 3개에 대해선 좀 걸립니다 제가 귀에 못이 박히게 들었던거라... 특히 Insane이랑 Pereira난이도의 난이도차가 체감상 거의 없는것으로
느껴져서 더 그렇네용 ;ㅁ;

만약 제가 심장도 마음도 없는 매퍼였다면 인세인이나 게스트중에 하나를 빼라고 말씀드렸을 겁니다 (CMP님 난이도를 빼버린 제가 할 말은 아닙니다만 으앙 다시한번 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ)
근데 솔직히 인세인 매핑하는거 꽤 힘든데 그거 버리라는건 사람이 할 말이 아닌것같고 아무 죄도 없는 게스트를 버리..(어..죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ 하지만 다시한번 말씀드리지만 님것 뺀건 맵의 문제가 아니고 그냥 제 변덕 때문에..ㅠㅠ)는것도 할일은 아닌것 같아서
음.. 일단 3.8정도 되는 노말 (그리고 현재의 노말은 대충 이름을 이지로 바꿔버리면 됩니다!)을 만드는걸 권장드리고 싶고
인세인계열에 대해서는 으.. 굳이 해법을 찾자면 Inhuman을 SV를 더 증가(..) 하고 점프를 몹시 괴랄(...) 하게 해서 완전 넘사벽으로 리매핑하고 (사실 이러는건 이러는거대로 또 문젭니다 ㅠㅠ 정말 어려우면서 양질의 맵을 만드는건 저희같은 뉴비매퍼에겐 사실상 불가능..랭크맵이 10개쯤 되도 잘 안된다고 하네요. 제 퓨처게이저도 부적절한 오버매핑 돋아서 랭크는 힘들거라는 말 많이 듣습니당 'ㅁ')
현재의 Insane을 적당히만 리매핑해서 현재의 Inhuman 수준으로 올리면 차별화는 되겠지만... 잘 모르겠습니다.

인세인계열은 그렇다 치더라도 사이난이도가 하나 필요한 건 확실해 보입니당 'ㅁ';


[Normal]

00:20:830 (1) - 힛사가 맥이 뚝 끊기는 느낌이에요~
00:25:026 (1,2,3) - ^
01:29:642 (1) - 얘 아래로 옮기고 다음 (2) 는 위쪽으로 가는쪽이 나을것같아용
02:19:152 (2) - 플레이시 라이프게이지랑 좀 겹치는데 왠지 걸리네요 'ㅁ'
03:26:285 (2,3) - ^

[Pereira]
01:00:271 (1) - end this 01:01:110
01:07:614 (2,3,4,5) - I think every corus part (those parts that says "Only my railgun can shot it imasugu" or "kanarazu") is just mapped with 1/2
since this is hard difficulty, I think you can make this part much better by doing something special)
for example, I think 01:19:572 (1,2) sounds better then 01:06:145 (1,2,3,4,5)..
02:02:369 (1) - end this slider 02:03:208 or 02:03:837
03:57:334 (1) - uhm..I think something is wrong with this spinner..


[Insane]
음 제 생각일 뿐인지도 모르지만 AR에 비해 노트간 간격이 너무 좁지 않나 싶습니다 'ㅁ'
리매핑할수도 없으니 저는 AR -1를 추천드리고 싶습니다만...
00:14:537 (5) - 위치
01:38:872 (1,2,3) - 이저늬 01:36:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - 가 갔던 곳을 얘들이 다시한번 지나가고 있는데 완전히 겹쳐서 지나가는것도 아니고
음 그러니까 어떻게 표현하면 좋을까.. 느린 AR로 보면 겹쳐서 보기 안좋은 모양이 된다는 느낌이라고 해야할까요..?
02:29:222 (1) - x:100, y:32 정도로 옮기시던지 아니면 가만 두셔도 상관없을것 같지만 역시 너무 위쪽으로 치우친 느낌이..

[Inhuman]
02:33:418 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - 가운데를 중심으로 완전히 대칭이 아닙니다 (ctrl+h, ctrl+J 등등) 물론 신경 안쓰시면 상관없습니당 (사실 아무문제 없을듯)
괜찮네용



[Overall]
제가 쿠도스가 없어서 별을 드릴수가 없습니다 ㅠㅠ
모딩 감사합니다
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006

haha5957 wrote:

[General]

[Pereira]
01:00:271 (1) - end this 01:01:110no
01:07:614 (2,3,4,5) - I think every corus part (those parts that says "Only my railgun can shot it imasugu" or "kanarazu") is just mapped with 1/2 no is fit more
since this is hard difficulty, I think you can make this part much better by doing something special)
for example, I think 01:19:572 (1,2) sounds better then 01:06:145 (1,2,3,4,5)..
02:02:369 (1) - end this slider 02:03:208 or 02:03:837 no i not wanna be very hard
03:57:334 (1) - uhm..I think something is wrong with this spinner.. omg wtf my fault and fix
Download: fripSide - only my railgun (Full Ver.) (CMP) [Pereira's Hard].osu

thank you mod
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Shiirn
Normal
00:43:488 (1) - remove newcombo
00:44:327 (6) - new combo
00:45:166 (1) - remove newcombo
00:46:005 (1) - new combo
01:34:677 - to the break, a spinner fits more here than absolutely nothing
02:04:257 (1,2) - remove combo from 1, add to 2
02:51:879 (5,1) - add combo to 5, remove from 1
04:04:047 (1) - i generally dislike spinners this long, they're fodder for spinhackers and they get tiring and annoying.

Hard
01:19:572 (1) - i can withstand some of these ugly sliders, but holy crap one that repeats this much just grates my nerves. Turn it into a pretty simple curve please.
02:02:369 (1) - this isn't perfect /nazi
Slightly awkward like all your maps, but you're getting better, keep going!

Insane
AR+1
HP+2
not modding because i'm not good at modding overmaps

Inhuman
not modding sorry. too silly.
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006

Shiirn wrote:

Hard
01:19:572 (1) - i can withstand some of these ugly sliders, but holy crap one that repeats this much just grates my nerves. Turn it into a pretty simple curve please. wtf ok fine all slider is change nice curve 5 point aswome arco
02:02:369 (1) - this isn't perfect /nazi change lmfao
Slightly awkward like all your maps, but you're getting better, keep going!
thank you

Download: fripSide - only my railgun (Full Ver.) (CMP) [Pereira's Hard].osu
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21
Hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queue sorry for the late. :o

[Normal]
01:01:110 (3) - add finish
01:49:781 (1,2) - add clap instead 01:49:781 and 01:50:621.
02:03:208 (4) - add finish
02:14:956 (3) - grid : 2 times to the left
02:18:313 (1) - grid : 3 times to the right.
02:19:152 (2) - better if its looked like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/169709

[Pereira's Hard]
01:42:229 (1) - add finish

[Insane]
00:22:509 (1,2) - grid : 2 times to the right.
00:23:348 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - grid : 3 times down.
00:36:355 (5) - 4 times down.

love this song xD Good Luck :D
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Normal:
01:45:586(5) - NC

Pereira's Hard:
00:21:460(4) - NC
01:03:418(4) - ^
01:17:054(4) - ^
01:17:893(4) - ^
02:05:516(4) - ^
02:12:229(4) - ^
02:13:907(3) - ^
02:18:942(3) - ^
02:19:781(4) - ^
03:05:935(4) - ^
03:06:774(3) - ^
03:12:649(4) - ^
03:13:488(4) - ^
03:17:054(3) - this slider doesnt Aline like the 1st 2 sliders between 03:16:215-03:16:635
03:19:362(4) - NC
03:20:201(4) - ^
03:26:075(4) - ^
03:26:914(3) - ^
03:32:788(4) - ^
03:34:467(3) - ^
03:39:502(4) - ^
03:41:180(3) - ^
03:46:215(3) - ^
03:47:054(3) - ^

Insane:
00:14:746(6) - NC
00:21:460(6) - ^
01:57:753(4) - ^
02:09:292(8) - ^
02:27:334(8) - ^
02:27:753(4) - Remove NC
03:09:502(3,4) - Aline (3) to (1) and (4) to (2)
03:41:180(4) - NC

Inhuman:
00:49:781(5) - NC
01:51:460(7) - ^

This is the best i can do. GL :D
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Takos
Hi CMP~ >w</
Mod request accepted from my queue

I strongly recommend you to play more osu maps.

General
Shouldn't Kiai Time be same in all diffs?

Inhuman
So chaotic ;w;
I cannot mod this.

Insane
00:31:739 (1,2,3) - Suggestion. http://puu.sh/7Gf9
00:48:103 (4,5,6) - Don't overlap sliders~
01:32:788 (1) - This slider should be a stream
01:33:208 (2,3,4) - Don't overlap
03:23:767 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing bigger?
04:04:047 (1) - Maybe this should end at 04:10:760 -

Pereira's Hard
00:25:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggestion http://puu.sh/7GhF
00:28:383 (3) - Flip 00:27:753 (1) - instead?
01:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suggestion http://puu.sh/7Gif
01:06:145 (1) - Stack with 01:05:935 (7) - ?
01:15:166 (7) - Ctrl+R?
01:45:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a pentagon(http://puu.sh/7Giz) or square(http://puu.sh/7GiD)?
02:23:663 (2) - looks awkward.
02:50:201 (1,2,3) - This can be shaped better.
03:47:893 (1) - Few grids down so it aligns with 03:48:103 (2) -
Why not end samely as the other diffs?

Normal
02:50:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - Start at center?
03:38:872 (1,2) - Make these symmetrical across the y-axis?

I love fripside~
good luck for rank~
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
Well,playable but not enjoyable.Actually I don't like the mapset.So here's just some of my advise.
Inhuman
  1. 00:32:684 (1) - expand the spinner from 00:32:579 to 00:34:257
  2. 00:51:879 (1) - reduce one reverse
  3. 01:27:124 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - where is the hitsound?
Insane
  1. 02:10:131 (14) - keep max combo under 14
Jenny
2,200 posts
Joined November 2010
Jenny
Give people their kudos man o.O
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006

Teru21 wrote:

Hi! hello~~

[Pereira's Hard]
01:42:229 (1) - add finish ya orz
thank you mod

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this song because of ur request

Pereira's Hard:
00:21:460(4) - NC no
01:03:418(4) - ^ no
01:17:054(4) - ^ no
01:17:893(4) - ^ yup
02:05:516(4) - ^ no
02:12:229(4) - ^ no
02:13:907(3) - ^ no
02:18:942(3) - ^ no
02:19:781(4) - ^ no
03:05:935(4) - ^ no
03:06:774(3) - ^ no
03:12:649(4) - ^ no
03:13:488(4) - ^ no
03:17:054(3) - this slider doesnt Aline like the 1st 2 sliders between 03:16:215-03:16:635 yup
03:19:362(4) - NC no
03:20:201(4) - ^ no
03:26:075(4) - ^ no
03:26:914(3) - ^ no
03:32:788(4) - ^ no
03:34:467(3) - ^ no
03:39:502(4) - ^ no
03:41:180(3) - ^ no
03:46:215(3) - ^ no
03:47:054(3) - ^ no
i did change my owm combo my new style future

anyway thank you mod

[quote="Takos"]

General
Shouldn't Kiai Time be same in all diffs?

my diff is guest then is fine

Pereira's Hard
00:25:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggestion http://puu.sh/7GhF no
00:28:383 (3) - Flip 00:27:753 (1) - instead? hmm ok
01:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suggestion http://puu.sh/7Gif no
01:06:145 (1) - Stack with 01:05:935 (7) - ? no
01:15:166 (7) - Ctrl+R? no
01:45:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a pentagon(http://puu.sh/7Giz) or square(http://puu.sh/7GiD)? ok with pentagon
02:23:663 (2) - looks awkward. not because is follow lyrics
02:50:201 (1,2,3) - This can be shaped better. this is better my shape
03:47:893 (1) - Few grids down so it aligns with 03:48:103 (2) - no
Why not end samely as the other diffs?

my diff is guest then is fine

thank you mod

Download: fripSide - only my railgun (Full Ver.) (CMP) [Pereira's Hard].osu
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue

4m - hard inhuman

[Hard]
00:23:558 (4,5) - 1 grid right
00:35:935 (6) - whistle instead of finish
00:40:551 (6) - finish instead of whistle
00:45:376 (1) - remove NC
01:00:271 (1) - end at 01:01:739
01:44:746 (5) - x108 y276
01:51:460 (1) - overlap last 5
02:03:837 ADD a note

[inhuman]
01:01:425 (1) - remove NC
01:04:047 (1) - ^
01:32:159 (1,1) - ^
02:26:704 (1) - ^
02:32:579 (1) - ^
03:10:341 (1) - finish
03:10:656 (2) - whistle
CMP
155 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
CMP

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

4m - hard inhuman

[Hard]
00:23:558 (4,5) - 1 grid right
00:35:935 (6) - whistle instead of finish
00:40:551 (6) - finish instead of whistle
00:45:376 (1) - remove NC
01:00:271 (1) - end at 01:01:739
01:44:746 (5) - x108 y276
01:51:460 (1) - overlap last 5
02:03:837 ADD a note

[inhuman]
01:01:425 (1) - remove NC ->fixed
01:04:047 (1) - ^ -> fixed
01:32:159 (1,1) - ^ ->fixed
02:26:704 (1) - ^ -> no
02:32:579 (1) - ^ -> no
03:10:341 (1) - finish -> fixed
03:10:656 (2) - whistle
-> fixed
yuineee
84 posts
Joined June 2010
yuineee
hi from mod req~

normal

00:21:670 (2) remove whistle
00:23:348 (2) ^ at the end
00:47:684 (1) remove whistle (or add some more till kiai time)
01:59:642 (1) remove circle
01:59:851 new combo

* suggestion *
01:08:872 http://puu.sh/8Z0i
01:22:718 http://puu.sh/8YZe
01:34:253 ^
02:04:886 http://puu.sh/8YZu

Pereira's Hard

nice map, not too much to say here

00:17:474 (1) & 00:25:868 (1) too much repeats imo
01:43:068 (3) this slider dosnt look that great comparing it with the other sliders in this map

Insane

00:14:746 (6) NC
00:40:970 (1-6) can these be placed a bit more fun?
01:14:537 (3,4,1) spacing?
03:15:586 silence spinner

Inhuman

dunno about this one
01:31:530 (1-7) looks a bit ugly here
Haruhi_sama
333 posts
Joined September 2010
Haruhi_sama
good
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Shana Aisaka
Hi~ Mod request from My Modding Queue~

Red - Fix it? ( some of it, is a suggestion ~)
Purple - Seems Okay ~ ( Map )
Pink - Suggestion

[Normal]
01:30:900(x) = add note
02:00:900(x) = ^
02:10:760(x) = ^
02:11:180(x) = ^
02:12:858(x) = ^
02:14:537(x) = ^
02:16:005(x) = ^
02:17:684(x) = ^
02:17:893(x) = ^
02:18:103(x) = ^
02:18:732(x) = ^
02:20:411(x) = ^
03:03:418 = how about put break time here :) ---> http://puu.sh/9pK7 <---
03:40:131(x) = add note

[Hard]
00:32:788 = how about put break time here :) ---> http://puu.sh/9pKE <---
00:50:830(x) = add note
00:50:935(x) = ^
00:56:809(x) = ^
00:57:544(x) = ^
01:01:530 = make you spinner a bit longer~ ( 01:01:739 ~ ) http://puu.sh/9pLm
02:03:837(x) = add note
03:46:110(2) = put whistle ~
03:46:425(3) = remove whistle
03:46:844(4) = put whistle
03:47:264(5) = remove whistle
03:47:788(1) = put whistle

[Insane]
01:36:984(x) = add note
01:37:404(x) = ^
01:37:823(x) = ^
01:38:243(x) = ^
01:46:215(x) = ^
01:47:054(x) = ^
02:09:292(5) = NC
02:22:089(2,3,4) = the note is so far?? >~<
03:03:628 = put break time here :D http://puu.sh/9pPi
03:17:264 = ^ http://puu.sh/9pPD

[Inhuman]
can't mod here >~<"

That's all ~ ><"
CMP
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Topic Starter
CMP
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