Rucker wrote:

你可以先移到WIP那裏:o
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

LastMonster wrote:

[Insane]

00:51:697(5)(6) 距離微調
02:33:995(4) 沒有疊好
02:07:163(1) new combo?

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抱歉昨天突然有點事情
所以晚回了

S h i o n wrote:

[Normal]
几个spinner太短,后面还有马上接note,对于normal来说比较困难 - 我想不到怎麼改lol

[Hard]
00:31:573 (6) - 在2跟白线之间放个1/8的slider。 - 保留...

SPOILER

01:29:709 (1,2,3,4) - 排列有点别扭 - 不知道怎麼改lol
02:31:014 (1) - 放这比较好

SPOILER

- 真的..！
02:44:244 (2,3,4) - 节奏乱 简单点就好

SPOILER

我用這樣:3↓


[Insane]
01:01:200 (1,2,3,4) - 为了和后面01:03:436 (4,5,6,7) - 节奏保持一致 改成这样

SPOILER

• 00:25:425 (2) - add whistle
  00:40:332 (2) - change slider.start 0:39:959 end 00:40:332

• 00:31:573 (6) - slider end 00:31:666
  00:320132 (2) - slider end 00:32:877
  01:00:641 (3) - remove clap
  01:06:790 (3) - change slider start 01:06:790 end 01:06:977 http://puu.sh/4NYz
  01:07:163 (4,1) - add newcombo(4) remove newcombo (1)

• spell miss Diffucult? so Difficult
  00:25:610 (7,1) - add newcombo(7) remove newcombo(1)
  01:07:163 (7,1) - ^
  01:19:008 (6,1) - add newcombo(6) remove newcombo(1)
  02:34:741 (5,1) - add newcombo(5) remove newcombo(1)

• 00:13:498 (1) - slider end 00:13:871
  00:42:939 (5) - add finish
  00:43:685 (3,1) - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1)
  00:55:610 - add new combo
  02:04:182 - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1)
  02:19:088 - add new combo

rui wrote:

In my mod. You can ignore me

[Easy]

• 00:25:425 (2) - add whistle Fixed!
  00:40:332 (2) - change slider.start 0:39:959 end 00:40:332 No Fixed

rui wrote:

In my mod. You can ignore me

[Normal]
nice map!

[Hard]

• 00:31:573 (6) - slider end 00:31:666 - I makethis:3
  00:320132 (2) - slider end 00:32:877 - I make this :3
  01:00:641 (3) - remove clap - OK~
  01:06:790 (3) - change slider start 01:06:790 end 01:06:977 http://puu.sh/4NYz - OK~
  01:07:163 (4,1) - add newcombo(4) remove newcombo (1) - NO

[Diffucult]

• spell miss Diffucult? so Difficult
  00:25:610 (7,1) - add newcombo(7) remove newcombo(1)
  01:07:163 (7,1) - ^
  01:19:008 (6,1) - add newcombo(6) remove newcombo(1)
  02:34:741 (5,1) - add newcombo(5) remove newcombo(1)

This is my style,I don't want to fix them. lol

[Insane]

• 00:13:498 (1) - slider end 00:13:871 - I think it's OK...
  00:42:939 (5) - add finish - OK
  00:43:685 (3,1) - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1) - OK
  00:55:610 - add new combo - OK
  02:04:182 - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1) - OK
  02:19:088 - add new combo

- OK

qazok4444 wrote:

good song~~~
kotoko's fan!
hope it can be ranked~
頑張る!

rui wrote:

In my mod. You can ignore me

[Easy]

• 00:25:425 (2) - add whistle
  00:40:332 (2) - change slider.start 0:39:959 end 00:40:332

[Normal]
nice map!

[Hard]

• 00:31:573 (6) - slider end 00:31:666
  00:320132 (2) - slider end 00:32:877
  01:00:641 (3) - remove clap
  01:06:790 (3) - change slider start 01:06:790 end 01:06:977 http://puu.sh/4NYz
  01:07:163 (4,1) - add newcombo(4) remove newcombo (1)

[Diffucult]

• spell miss Diffucult? so Difficult
  00:25:610 (7,1) - add newcombo(7) remove newcombo(1)
  01:07:163 (7,1) - ^
  01:19:008 (6,1) - add newcombo(6) remove newcombo(1)
  02:34:741 (5,1) - add newcombo(5) remove newcombo(1)

[Insane]

• 00:13:498 (1) - slider end 00:13:871
  00:42:939 (5) - add finish
  00:43:685 (3,1) - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1)
  00:55:610 - add new combo
  02:04:182 - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1)
  02:19:088 - add new combo

o0cannian0o wrote:

:D 做的比我好多了-0-提几个建议(也许没有什么用-0-
[insane]
开头个人觉得有些不和节奏,建议把开头稍微改一改,或者用我的参考一下>W<
01:08:281 (5,1) - 这两个差了1分拍但是重叠在一起,我打到那里老是以为是二分拍然后抢拍了QAQ
01:08:281 (5,1) - 中间为什么少一个节奏,打起来有一种突然一停的感觉,好像这样的地方还有好几处,我不一一列举了,我只是觉得这样子打起来有一种切断节奏的感觉,后来我发现了也许你是按vocal下的节奏,我个人觉得这样下节奏在那些鼓点不明或者清唱时比较适用,有明确节奏的时候最好跟着节奏,所以我建议你可以用slider起节奏,如果觉得不舒服可以用音效做适当调整,比如那个01:08:281 (5,1) - 就可以在(5)处摆滑条直到01:08:467,然后在下一个节拍处用NC的circle,这样既让节奏感觉流畅又符合vocal的感觉.

我懂你想說什麼，只是我早就打算以這種排列方式為特色
你說以SLIDER起頭那種形式我當然懂，我不過是喜歡突然一停的感覺而已=w=
開頭我覺得沒啥問題說...你那樣當然也是好，只是改掉有些麻煩了...

[difficult]
这个我个人觉得问题比较多,我先说几个吧www 比如排列,有些地方的排列特别是在重叠的地方处理的不是很美观,由于是AR7,来回重叠过多容易导致读图不清(我技术比较渣,这里慎用),藏note有些严重(这个嘛,我自己开了hidden试了一下一不留神就fail了,不过我技术很差就是了,条可以看你个人情况采用)还有一些节奏不太理解,比如00:24:306 (3) - ,01:22:070 (7,1) - 的衔接等等

「遮擋嚴重」的圖其實我滿喜歡...，於是我做徒的當下就打算做出這種圖了...=口=
AR7是極限，不能在高了(因為要低於INS難度)
這種類型的「遮蔽」應該是沒問題....(因為也是有很多遮蔽的圖啊...= =)
嘛，我再多蒐集各方意見好了

>,<马上要出去应酬,所以暂时先写这么多,你可以适当采用一下XD 歌很好听呢~加油蛤

Mok wrote:

Is that Hartmann from Strike Witches?

zoern66 wrote:

0.0
can i help you?
but i don't know much about how to make a map>.<

ooooooops wrote:

再幫你評一顆star
補字1補字2補字3補字4補字5...................

-Gamu- wrote:

SPOILER

hi-

All suggestions

[General]

●Tag: -Gamu- ×
　　　　 gamu ○
Please change

[Normal]

●00:13:498 - circle add
●00:16:107 (4) - 1 grid left
●02:15:548 (1) - short spinner . spinner remove

[Hard]

●OD+1
●00:13:498 - circle add
●02:48:343 (1) - 02:47:225 (2) - stack


[Insane]

●00:13:498 - circle add
●01:04:927 (6) - 01:04:182 (3) - stack to the end

●01:23:933 (3) - 01:22:256 (8) - stack

●02:00:082 (2) - 01:59:523 (4) - stack to the end


[Lunatic]

●00:40:703 (1) - 00:39:213 (2) - stack



Good map!!!!!!!!!!!!!]

BakaHuang wrote:

hii mod time

[general]
关于音效
以下mod很多都是个人的style 如果不喜欢可以skip
soft-finish尽量少用 多了反而让人觉得有点吵杂
如00:14:244-你可以找一个 custom hitsound-clap 与音乐自带的一个节奏音差不多的那种

[Lunatic]
00:13:498(1)-换成2条一样长短的silder (1)上加nor-whis (2)的头上加soft-finish
00:14:244(2,3,4,5)-(2) add clap ; (3) remove finish ; (4) add whis ; (5)头上取消音效 转折点上用clap 最后用finish
其实我觉得这样更好
[attachment=1:0916b]333.png[/attachment:0916b]
如果你也改成这样的话 就是(7)的头尾上分别加clap和finish
00:15:734(2,5)-change whis to clap
00:16:852(1)-换个样子 然后这段的音效和前面一段修改方式是一样的
[attachment=0:0916b]433.png[/attachment:0916b]
00:20:765(5,6)-时间轴上得位置交换
00:22:442(4)-换成finish
00:22:908(2)-add note
00:24:492(1,2,3)-(1)与(2,3)的时间轴上位置交换
00:31:386(1)-remove nc
00:31:759(5)-add nc (3,5)add whis (5)只要头上加
00:34:554(5)-(5)要和(3,4)同一排吗
00:37:536(5)-这个也jump一下？与(4,5,1)形成等腰三角形
00:39:958(1,2)-时间轴上位置对换 the same as 00:47:598-
00:50:393(3,4)-交换note位置
01:40:331?(6)-add finish , remove clap

to be continued ...

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Wcx19911123's mod queue~
feel free to ask me if you have anything trouble about this mod~

EASY diff doesn't have a preview time,and have a different OFFSET! oh...fixed

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Wcx19911123's mod queue~
feel free to ask me if you have anything trouble about this mod~

General:
BG is 1044*835, you should fix it~ 800*600 is better I think. 咦咦？這樣不會太小嗎？800x600可以？等待回復=w=

EASY diff doesn't have a preview time,and have a different OFFSET! 我沒注意到...=口=

Tag has " , " in it, not sure if it is ok. and the easy diff tag is different from other diffs. Other diffs have more space between "koigokoro Gamu". You should fix it I think.


And for your req, I only check the last 3 diffs~

Normal:
02:19:461 (1) - new combo bug, add new combo here. 好怪的bug啊XD


Hard:
Issue/unrankable stuff
01:19:088 (5) - Inherited Points is not snapped.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:15:548 (1,2,3) - spacing is weird,2 3 is closer than 1 2. maybe try to use grid level 4 to avoid this kind of problem. Same issues about these won't be mentioned again. 我不會調網格大小...
00:35:300 (2) - this overlap is kinda of ugly.
02:59:709 (1) - using a Kiai fountain at the end of this spinner would be nice imo=A= 同意OAO

Hitsound
00:22:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part should not add clap imo. I prefer still only whistles here.
00:31:759 (7) - Finish here?
00:32:132 (2) - clap on 00:32:505?
01:17:598 (3) - I think this finish is weird to listen.
01:22:442 (6) - use whistle instead of finish on the 2nd arrow of this slider? finish is kinda of loud.
01:27:846 (5) - I prefer to delete the finish on the tail of this slider.
02:16:107 (4) - ^ same
02:19:461 (2) - ^ delete finish? a little loud for me, just suggestion.
02:48:343 (1) - ^ won't mention again, these are just my personal suggestion, I think maybe you like 2 finish use together, my fault.是我的錯...你的建議比較OK :3


Insane:
Issue/unrankable stuff
It is a bit weird when hard diff using circle size 4 but Insane is 3.. and with the default skin, circle size 3 really a little mass..
01:19:088 (6) - again Inherited Points is not snapped.

Beatmap design/suggestion
seems good, played well. 噢耶><

Hitsound
00:23:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same suggestion as hard, clap sounds weird here.


Lunatic:
Issue/unrankable stuff
00:42:939 (3) - again Inherited Points is not snapped.
01:19:088 (6) - again Inherited Points is not snapped.
00:54:678 (2) - touching the hp bar.. 我都不知道有這條規定...= =

Beatmap design/suggestion
02:48:157 (4) - add a note here? kind of uncomfortable that no beat here. 啊呀，我想保留原來的樣子...
02:57:846 (5,6) - make these into a long slider? played more comfortable for me.

Hitsound
00:55:610 (1,2,3) - a little loud, low down the volumn a little bit?
00:55:610 (1,2,3) - weird whistles,maybe delete the whsitle on red tick and slider body, then volumn lower? current sounds too sudden and noisy.
02:20:579 (6,7,8,9) - same ^
02:35:672 (2) - why the finish is here? It really should be at 02:35:486 imo.
02:45:362 (5) - same ^ won't mention again, seems you do that on purpose.
02:50:393 (3,4,5,6,7) - too loud for me...
02:55:983 (5,6) - soft clap is more fit imo.
02:58:778 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think claps are kind of mess up. Only the last note need a clap imo.

我的K姐不可能这么萌的声音=A=

这么多star也不差我一个 我省个KUDO好了 SORRY.. 不會，省個KD去幫助有需求的人吧0.0

Nymph_ wrote:

BG的话 800 600或者640 480都可以吧
系統會自動填滿整個畫面0.0？

网格的话 在上面的菜单调：View---Grid Level---4
潛藏已久的謎題被輕易地解開了！OAO

然后你说的什么起始点什么NOTE的..我没明白什么意思..

Nymph_ wrote:

Issue/unrankable stuff
01:19:088 (5) - Inherited Points is not snapped.
這個...你翻譯一下看看有沒有跟我解讀的一樣...

最后 K姐我最喜欢的歌 必然是这个无误！=A=
KOTOKO-Sakuranbo Kiss
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/17667
這首歌也很Q~><

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph again~ and from ingame request~

-Gamu-'s Easy:
Issue/unrankable stuff
sorry to mention this again, but your preview time is different with others. Please check it in the osu file.
ATTACH[-1.jpg]

Lots of Inherited points are not snapped well, for example:
01:07:910
01:19:090
01:19:462
01:31:388
02:28:034
02:39:587
02:39:959

Check them and use the "Use current time" button to snap them well.

Beatmap design/suggestion
Feel really empty of this diff, really need to add some notes.
00:16:107 - add note?
00:19:088 - ^
00:22:070 - ^
00:51:883 - ^
01:06:045 - ^
01:06:790 - ^
01:21:697 - ^
01:32:877 - ^
01:33:623 - ^
01:36:604 - ^
01:37:349 - maybe make this slider more beautiful
01:40:331 - don't need to be a slider, a note is better.
01:54:678 - why this slider start at here? shouldn't it be started at 01:54:492?
01:55:237 - add note?
02:00:827 - ^
02:07:908 - ^
02:18:343 - ^
02:21:324 - ^
02:48:529 - ^
03:00:827 - note is better than slider, I prefer only a note here and add a finish on it.

Hitsound
00:25:796 (1) - I suggest not to silence this end of the spinner. Actually I prefer to make it even louder to help people get the rhythm, So I suggest to use volumn around 70, and maybe add a soft whistle on it.
00:50:393 (2) - maybe whistle again on the head of this slider?

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph again~ and from ingame request~


Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
00:31:014 (1) - this spinner is way too short for a normal diff!
01:10:517 (1) - still feel short. why not stops at 01:12:008, same length as the last spinner.
02:20:952 (1) - again short spinner.
02:30:827 (1) - same issues won't be mentioned again.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:28:778 (3) - not very beautiful, more symmetrical？
00:36:977 (1,2) - don't stack them please, like 3 4, they are fine.
00:49:461 (2) - little ugly.... well...

Hitsound
00:31:014 (1) - Finish is better imo.
00:43:685 (1) - ^
00:46:293 (1) - no hitsound is not a good idea, maybe add whistles on both head and tail?
00:50:393 (3) - Finish is better than clap imo.
00:55:983 (2) - delete this finish, really not necessary here.
00:58:591 (1) - and delete the finish on tail.
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - actually this part is early for claps, I think only whistle are better, well personal suggestion.
01:29:523 (4) - change the clap on arrow into whistle, this clap is very werid for only 1 clap among many whistles.
01:30:641 (5,6) - too loud with many finished, whistles maybe?
01:59:523 - actually here need a finish, but you have not beat here, so...
02:16:852 (2,3,1,2) - - why finish here? maybe delete it?
02:16:107 (5,2,4,2,4) - whistles are really better, claps are ok too. Finish.. no no no.
02:46:293 (6) - delete finish.
02:48:902 (2) - delete finish on first arrow and tail.
02:57:101 (1,2,3) - whistles on 1 2 and head of 3?

spboxer3 wrote:

recheck是嗎...
[-Gamu-'s Easy]
00:48:902 (1,2) - not pretty. really hmm....sorry If you leave this
01:03:064 (3) - NC no fixed
01:04:554 (5) - ^ no fixed
01:10:517 (5) - ^ no fixed
01:22:442 (3) - ^ no fixed
02:07:163 (4) - ^ no fixed
02:31:014 (3) - ^ 02:32:505 (4) - nc add
02:44:430 (6) - ^ fixed
02:59:709 (1) - too close to spinner finish ok.Reduced the note after the spinner.

spboxer3 wrote:

recheck是嗎...
音效不mod

[General]
很多難度的 03:00:734 - , 03:01:107 - 這兩個kiai time沒有在位置上 有啊，我檢查過了lol
極度建議最多4個diff就好 lol

[normal]
00:37:536 (2) - 這畸形了 我覺得還行..
01:09:399 (1) - (時間)距離轉盤結束太近了
01:12:380 (1) - 這太遠也(時間)距離轉盤太近
02:19:461 (1) - ^
02:22:442 (1) - 時間太近
太多了就不在挑轉盤的位置了全都改好了

[Hard]
別懶啦loool 拉條至少都要4個點以上
SV1.2在Hard裡面確實有些蛋疼了些
00:35:300 (2) - 黏住不行 怎麼說？
很多都是黏住的部份 可以的話希望你自己再看過一次因為真的太多了

[Insane]
說真的這我看到眼花了 note的排法好多都重複排 這不是一個好現象 因為對於新人mapper來說如何處理好那樣的排法是很困難的
還有就是spacing變化太過random了 給人太過突然的感覺 記得spacing變大是用來重點提示的 不是隨時都可以拿來用
像00:54:678 (1,2,3,4) - 這就不是個正常的spacing 第4個應該也是重音 可是你突然縮進來了
01:22:442 (1) - 太短是不能rank的 現在你有轉出2000但是這一定會被mat他們挑到爆的
01:29:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 這也是突然變化 讓人有種瞎了的感覺
01:59:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這排法太瞎眼了

說到底還是因為你的間距一開始沒有用好 太過黏在一起了 最起碼1/2拍的note不應該有碰在一起了 可是你都碰到了

跳的問題我都處理了，現在應該比較好看，不過「遮蔽」的特性我會堅持

[Lunatic]
00:32:877 (2,1,2) - 間距不平均 我覺得還可以...
00:34:554 (5) - 堆疊 OK
00:56:914 (4,6) - 這要對好阿 ... OK
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4) - 這要數一下格子 不能憑感覺就直接放了 你這歪掉了 OK
01:33:995 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 像這類的note連在一起 我們會用有弧度的排法來排這個 這樣會好看很多 我改變排法了
01:38:840 (5,6) - 這個感覺沒有對在節奏上 lol
02:08:654 (1,2,3,4) - 這種排法少用 為啥...？
02:19:088 (1,2) - 1/4拍連打最好別用slider配slider或note 我下次會注意...
02:41:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 這不好 反正就是很瞎眼就對了 mat首先是玩家後是modder阿 你讓玩家都不爽呢他怎麼會給你bubble呢

呃，瞎眼就不能RANKED？lol

這難度做的比其他你做的難度都好多了~

呼 mod完了~

I will be back wrote:

Lunatic

節奏都沒有什麼問題OAO''

我覺得這兩個滑條有點怪= =''

karenying wrote:

General
- BG應該是限制在1024*768或在此以下的,順帶一題現在這個是1044*835。
- osb最好刪掉。 都改好了

-Gamu-'s Easy
00:25:796 (1) - This spinner is too long for Easy,and too close to the next note.I suggest End at 00:30:268.
02:24:678 (5) - *nazi 2 grid up and 1 grid right

其他不想看了(...don't ask why)
不過有些kiai time好像是Unsnapped的,自己看。 一些是哪些...？=口=

winber1 wrote:

General
[b]-Gamu-'s

00:13:498 (1,2,3) - this feels awkward, cuz you are hitting the notes off the beat. I don't mind if you add a note at 00:13:498, but the three sliders should really start on one of the main beats, not the 2nd and 4th beat imo. 00:13:498 (1) - circle add
00:15:921 (4) - perhaps you could turn this into a slider that ends at 00:16:480 fixed
00:16:852 (1) - i would generally try to stay away from these in an easy diff. You can use them, but just use your discretion i guess. there's no point in adding them in random places that the music provoke.sorry.If you leave this
01:06:045 (7) - i would delete this note and extend 01:05:300 (6) - by one repeat. fixed

anyways, nice map! :3

terametis wrote:

Hi~~
These are all suggestions

[-Gamu-'s Easy]
00:22:815 (1)~(2)　　　Make it prettier (Example) fixed

SPOILER

ATTACH[70e5bc05918350fa863a9bed753d82f0.jpg]

01:17:598 (2)　　　　　　Make it prettier fixed

good map
I wish your map is Ranked~~

karenying wrote:

-Gamu-'s Easy
00:25:796 (1) - This spinner is too long for Easy,and too close to the next note.I suggest End at 00:30:268. fixed
02:24:678 (5) - *nazi 2 grid up and 1 grid right fixed

其他不想看了(...don't ask why)
不過有些kiai time好像是Unsnapped的,自己看。

winber1 wrote:

General

--The kiai times are a little different. Also, start the kiai fountain at 03:00:827, not 03:00:734. And end it at 03:01:014 or 03:00:921.
OK

Lunatic

00:32:877 (2,5) - I would put these two notes in the same place. OK

01:08:281 (5) - This, like all other spots in the kiai that you have this pattern, just feels a little awkward imo... especially since it's off from the vocals... I would definitely recommend changing it to make it flow better, but not the most major issue if you decide to keep it (or just lazy D:<) lol,I want to keep this part...
01:38:840 (5) - new combo, Also, try this (it fits a lot better with the music imo): orz...I made the other thing(I delete the last slider)

SPOILER

[attachment=0:e2a9d]screenshot134.jpg[/attachment:e2a9d]

Insane

00:31:200 (5) - remove two repeats, then add a finish at 00:31:386, and then rearrange spacing (i.e. you can move 00:31:759 (1) - further away or something). OK
01:08:467 (x) - add note NO...
01:12:567 - it would be nice if you could follow vocals here and add a note here somehow. Maybe by turning the slider into something else or something. OK
01:52:442 (2) - i don't like having the end of the repeat slider moving away from the next note. Sometimes, these types of sliders can look they only repeat once if the player isn't really paying attention, or is not very experienced. OK
01:53:188 (3) - new combo? OK
02:45:548 (4) - add clap to beginning. add finish to the end OK

Hard

--looks pretty much fine. I guess one or two jumps make me question a bit, but they seem fine. ><

Normal

00:31:014 (1) - this spinner is definitely too short for a normal OK
00:37:536 (2) - i wuold not stack this note under combo 1 I agree with you...
00:47:784 (3) - move note back 1/2 tick and rearrange spacing. Then add a note at 00:48:157 - I made a 3/8 slider
01:14:244 (1,2) - could a little confusing especially with this approach rate. fixed


This was longer than the 10 minute rule that I had in my queue by quite a lot actually, but I still modded it. I don't mind that much really, and the song is quite nice :3, but it would be very appreciated still if you followed the time limit D: sorry & thank you very much! >A<, I didn't notice the time limit... orz

anyways, nice map! :3

>w<

terametis wrote:

Hi~~
These are all suggestions

[Normal]
00:28:778 (3)　　　　　　Make it prettier

SPOILER

[attachment=1:6c10e]77caffce33c43c8cb62e037fa6c59fe5.jpg[/attachment:6c10e]

OK
01:32:505 (3)　　　　　　I think, circle is better than slider. OK

[Hard]
00:14:244 (3)　　　　　　add clap on the slider's end
00:14:989 (6)　　　　　　add clap
00:15:734 (2)　　　　　　remove whistle and add clap
00:16:480 (5)　　　　　　^
00:17:225 (1)　　　　　　add clap on the slider's end
00:17:970 (4)　　　　　　add clap
00:19:461 (4)　　　　　　^
00:20:206 (2)　　　　　　^
00:20:952 (4)　　　　　　^
00:21:697 (2)　　　　　　remove whistle and add clap
00:22:442 (4)　　　　　　^
00:23:188 (2)　　　　　　add clap on the slider's end
00:23:933 (1)　　　　　　add clap
00:24:306 (3)　　　　　　add finish
00:24:678 (3)　　　　　　add clap on the slider's end
00:25:424 (5)　　　　　　add whistle
00:33:250 (3)　　　　　　add finish
00:52:629 (1)~(3)　　　remove whistle on the slider's track
01:09:399 (4)　　　　　　How about this?

SPOILER

[attachment=0:6c10e]89c2caa401fbe76f0ee374103c70812a.png[/attachment:6c10e]

01:12:380 (4)　　　　　　How about this?

SPOILER

[Insane]
If you like,same as [Hard] costom sound

[Lunatic]
00:32:877 (2)　　　　　　add clap
00:36:231 (1)~(2)　　　remove whistle on the slider's track
01:55:237 (4)~(1)　　　make it prettier

SPOILER

01:58:032 (4)　　　　　　remove finish and add whistle
01:58:591 (1)　　　　　　add clap
02:00:082 (2)　　　　　　^
02:11:449 (7)　　　　　　add finish
I made something changed.


good map
I wish your map is Ranked~~

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~~

[Easy]

00:19:834 (1) - Finish fixed

00:31:759 (1) - ^ fixed

00:58:591 (1,2,3) - Make it prettier fixed

01:52:256 (1) - Finish fixed

02:29:150 (2,3) - Like this :33 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168609 fixed

祝早日Ranked~~!!

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~~


[Normal]

*Clap加在2.4拍比較好, 而不是1.3拍......:3 改好了...(汗)

01:31:386 (1) - 01:36:604 (1) - 有點擠>< 不理你><(?)

02:52:256 (1) - 02:56:728 (4) - ^ 不理你><(?)

[Insane]

*有點擠~ 間距可以調大一點@@" 解決了..

02:26:355 (1,2,3,4) -像這樣排~(有點長怕看不清楚 分拍兩張給你@@")

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168623 這樣太蛋疼了...我不想做太難= =
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168624

[Lunatic]

01:28:405 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣排??(分兩張拍lol)

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168626
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168628 這難度這樣子是沒問題，但是我好懶...= =，話說，改成這樣我也不會覺得舒服，我知道另外更好的排法...

02:33:250 (5) - 往左1格~ ??? 原本的樣子好像就對齊了的說...?


~

還不錯~

但排版要繼續加油@@"

祝早日Ranked~~!!

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod

[Easy]
00:51:883 add whistle

[Normal]
00:35:859 连续三个whistle我只能ahaha了 跟前面一样一拍一个clap多好 lol
01:31:386 0.6X唔嗯....微妙感我觉得这里应该不用0.6x就是了 你覺得用多少比較合適？
03:00:827 这后面空了一段的kiai的干啥用的 噴泉

[lunatic]
虽然我喜欢跳图但是这个跳的略没感觉啊。。尽量可以选择用高音或者重复的方式唔嗯。 擊中靶心...

还有注意下各种细小snap因为我不喜欢nazi就不指出来了 不太妙啊，這問題= =
在排版方面可以注意多用圆滑的slider代替直线什么的（主要指normal 太横平竖直了[/color] 哭了，這是我唯一留下來的早期作品，可是我不想重作啊TAT
剩下两个难度我犯懒了就不mod了[/color] 你...
star 說好的，不能反悔喔o.o

Mystica wrote:

Full Mod

[Normal]
横平竖直不受大众待见 唔...我承認當時做得不太用心lol
既然你决定01:31:386用0.6x那么请在00:55:610也用 这是对应的部分 我只打算加「副歌之後」的那部分，你說的另一個部分不算是對應...
01:59:523 明显对应finish开头的slider 3拍感觉不好 因為DS的關係，只能這樣了lol
02:16:107 参见第二条 （其他难度这部分请全参照这边
02:28:032 因为是normal鉴于前面一直是一个折返这地方2次折返对新手不友善 因为新手是不善于判别slider折返次数的 fixed
02:34:741 同上 fixed
03:00:827 只是为了喷泉的话请在03:00:921加一条线来终止kiai 要么会造成需要按skip 喷泉只是在kiai开始的瞬间就可以了 fixed
hitsound
03:00:921 add finish
00:35:859 同上次mod
00:57:101 add finish 这部分隔一个白线一个finish 然后三个一组感觉是最好的
01:00:082 ^
01:25:424 add finish
01:27:846 cancel finish
01:28:405 add finish
01:29:523 cancel finish
01:29:896 add finish[/color]

hitsound all done~

[Hard]
00:31:386 spinner结束在这里 然后后面白线+note 这样的话spinner开头感觉怪异 fixed
00:37:536 add finish fixed
00:39:026 ^ fixed
00:45:175 ^ fixed
00:48:157 finish提前到00:47:970 fixed
00:49:461 还是按面前的一白线一红线双finish fixed
01:31:386 distance变换下吧 现在这个坑人 fixed
最后部分kiai一样 [/color] fixed

[Insane]
为什么note会比hard还大啊 用large下面那级的比较好 fixed
顺便distance略显拥挤了 尝试用1.2x以及以上的话排列比较好（重要 看完直接觉得太挤了的感觉 Circle變小，應該就OK了吧0.0?
AR+1 fixed
00:39:026 这个跳OTL fixed...= =
kiai参见normal[/color] fixed

[Lunatic]
01:31:386 这段完全没有了hitsound么OTL 如你所見... - -
02:17:505 突然出现好违和 ...orz
收回前言 除了部分位置跳不舒服剩下地方还是不错的[/color] 就算是恭維我也很高興

PS：所有的diff可以参照normal的hitsound我觉得那个是感觉比较不错的各种运用 唔...我是想要每個難度都放不同的音效，比較不會聽膩...而且把音效改成nor這樣也是件大工程啊lol...先聽看看別人怎麼說

good luck

216,320,50393,2,0,B|168:248|264:184|208:72,1,240,2|4

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi

[Easy]
00:50:393 (2) - Try this code. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/173333

216,320,50393,2,0,B|168:248|264:184|208:72,1,240,2|4

00:51:883 (3) - x:288 y:48
02:32:505 (1) - Change beat like this 02:34:741 (3) ?
02:45:548 (4) - http://puu.sh/7SYv

All fixed~
Tired orz
Good luck

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi


[General]
5:4 ratio BG? Best one is 4:3 I don't know how to fix it... lol


[Lunatic]
Big circle size. o_o I suggest circle size 4, but it's up to you. I think big size is great. o.o
00:44:616 (2,3) - I'd like to switch their position fixed
01:38:840 (5,6) - Doesn't fit music. Try this. http://puu.sh/7SPY fixed
01:55:237 (4) - New combo fixed
01:55:796 (1) - Remove new combo fixed


[Insane]
00:43:685 (3) - New combo
00:43:871 (1) - Remove new combo
01:53:560 (3) - 1 grid down
02:16:107 (6) - New combo
02:16:852 (1) - Remove new combo
02:19:088 (6) - New combo
02:19:834 (1) - Remove new combo
02:56:355 (1) - This slider should be x0.6 speed. It's still in the section where tension relaxed.

all fixed

[Hard]
00:56:542 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
00:56:914 (3) - New combo fixed
01:07:163 (1) - New combo is not necessary fixed
01:22:256 (1) - According to your rhythm pattern, I think it should start from next long white tick. {Compared with 01:10:517 (1), 02:31:014 (1), 02:42:939 (1)} I made this diff two pattern,so...
02:39:585 (1) - New combo is not necessary fixed


[Normal]
00:31:759 (7) - New combo
00:32:132 (1) - Remove new combo
01:12:380 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo
02:04:182 (1) - Add finish to start of slider / Remove whistle from sliderslide
02:22:442 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo
02:32:505 (1) - ^
02:41:449 (1) - ^
02:44:430 (1) - ^
02:51:138 (5) - Add finish to end of slider

All fixed


Tired orz lol
Good luck

merchat7 wrote:

As requested, I love the OP and ED for Tsuyokiss 3gakki

[Easy]

00:40:331 (2,3) - Change to slider, it follows the song nicer because the singer is holding a note here and it feel weird to be hitting two hit circles rather than holding a slider. http://puu.sh/7Xc5 - Copy (4) and paste it here.
00:58:219 (4,1) - Since (4) is place further than the other hit circle, I suggest making them a slider. This is also to give rest to the player as it's tiring to try get 300s on 8 hit circles and this will give them a little rest..
01:10:517 (5) - This slider can be better.
01:17:598 (2) - Move the middle (3rd) anchor point 1 grid left (grid 3) looks nicer to me.
01:32:877 (4,5) - I feel a slider fits better with the flow here since I can hear her singing at 01:33:250 and it feels a little weird to have nothing there. Place it something like this maybe, http://puu.sh/7XdZ.
01:39:213 (2.3.4) - Can you make this a repeating slider instead? It's a bit disorienting to hit hit circles on white ticks when I can hear notes on red ticks. Making a repeating slider feels much better. Ideas on how to put it - http://puu.sh/7XeU.
01:56:355 (3,4) - Slider, for the same reason as 01:32:877. I can hear singing at 01:56:728 so a slider make this feel less "empty."
02:07:163 (4,5) - ^
02:16:107 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Adding sliders somewhere in this section feels better. 8 hit circles in a row is tiring for beginners.
02:36:977 (1,2,3,4) - I would love two sliders here to emphasize the down beat and the third beat. http://puu.sh/7Xg5. But it's fine if you want to keep it.
02:44:430 (1,2) - ^ Slider to emphasize the down beat.
02:47:784 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - So many hit circles, I would like if you make 02:47:784 (2,3) a slider, or make 02:48:902 (1,2,3,4) a repeating slider with 2 repeats.
02:51:883 (1,2,3) - Placing notes like this can be confusing for beginner (they will think they have to hit 3 first). I also feel (1,2) should be slider to follow the vocal just a bit more. So something like this? http://puu.sh/7Xh0

It's not bad, but I feel you should use more sliders as some part feel a little empty / play weird with hit circles and to give a little break for beginners. So consider them!.

Good luck!

merchat7 wrote:

As requested, I love the OP and ED for Tsuyokiss 3gakki

[General]

- Please add hentai eroge game visual novel opening Candy Soft fixedReason is found here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tsuyokiss. Also add full ver version as this is the full version I presume.I don't know what you mean...lol
- Please resize your background to 800x600 (use photoshop / gimp to resize or other programs, be sure to save in .jpg). I don't have photoshop,and I fixed the background to 800x640...(It cannot be fixed to 800x600= =)

Other than that, everything looks good to me.

[Normal]

00:13:498 - 00:25:424 - The notes are placed in a very linear way, maybe you can try something interesting?
01:14:244 (4,5,6,7) - Since your previous stack were in group of 3s, i would prefer if you make it a repeating sliders with 2 repeats or two short sliders http://puu.sh/7XiC. done

Well the rhythm seems good, but the way you place the notes is very linear. Try to rework it (curve some sliders, etc.). ...daim lol

[Hard]

00:56:355 (3) - I don't get why you snap this to 1.6x distant snap? Shouldn't be hard to adjust so that it's snapped to 1.5x. fixed
01:10:517 (1) - Can you reduce the spacing for this jump a bit? 2.66 is quite high for Hard. fixed
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - Place like this http://puu.sh/7XkZ seems nicer. fixed
01:20:579 (1) - And this like this http://puu.sh/7Xl2 fixed
01:27:101 (1,2,3) - I don't get why you increase the spacing here, why not 1.5x distant snap like before (01:26:169)? fixed
02:42:939 (1) - Again big jump for a Hard, please reduce. fixed
02:54:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The way you placed these note is quite linear, try to rearrange a bit so that it's less linear? no..

Looks pretty good.

[Insane]

- Consider higher stack leniency, look at 01:22:070, it doesn't look too good.

00:30:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - Feel like there should be a jump here. How about this http://puu.sh/7XnA (all is snapped to 1.5x distant snap). (1.3) are stacked with each other, (2,4) are stacked with each other. Don't have to be placed like this, but I feel there should be a jump here.
00:39:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would prefer if you make the jump smaller. You snap the previous notes to 1.0x distant snapping and all the sudden, a 2.0x jump. It doesn't play bad, but feel very sudden and nothing in the music really give a reason to why the jump should be so big. So, please reduce.
00:44:430 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Didn't suggest for 00:43:312 (1,2,1) as it seems fine.
01:29:709 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:22:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ I didn't suggest for others as it plays fine.
01:31:386 (1,3) - Should curve these two sliders, look nicer imo.
01:33:809 (2,3,4) - Place more like this? http://puu.sh/7XpW (Snap all to 1.1x distant snap).
01:59:896 (5,6,7,8,9) - Feel like the jump should be smaller.
02:10:331 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:35:859 (2,3) - Don't see any reason for spacing not to be equal here. Please fix it (snap 2 to 1.3x distant snap).
02:52:256 - 02:55:610 - Curve some of the sliders, look nicer.

I feel some jump should be smaller (all mention in my mod) since they feel a bit sudden. I didn't suggest for all since for some of them, the way you place the note, the jump make sense, so maybe rearrange the note a bit if you don't want to reduce the jumps. Looks good in general through, maybe self mod and polish the diff a little through.

something fixed,I keep those jump 2.0x beacause it is "insane"...

[Lunatic]

- I find it weird that for the hardest difficulty, you are using circle size 3, but I guess it's fine.
- Consider higher stack leniency, look at 02:46:852 & 02:53:374, etc. to see what I mean.

00:22:815 (1,2,3) - Hm, stacking another stream on top of a stream doesn't play too good imo, prob better to space it out. Something like this? http://puu.sh/7XrK. fixed
02:50:020 (2) - Considering you curved all the slider here, you should probably curve this one as well. no..

Similar comments about jumps. I didn't mention them since this is the hardest diff for this beatmap and they seems to play well enough. But I feel the jumps are just there to make it harder and doesn't really fit the song....lol It's pretty fun to play through.

Overall, the mapset is good, just make Normal less linear. Some sliders could use a little of polish so look through your diffs a bit. No star since this map already have lot of stars.

Good luck!

bossandy wrote:

HI HI ~ 來mod摟~ 挑兩個diff mod~ (如果還需要 可以再post 一次XD

Insane:

SPOILER

02:18:343 (6) - 好醜的slider 調好了
WOW 這難度的風格好像Shinxyn做的Masayoshi Minoshima - Fire Insane 這也不是我願意的lol，只是放我覺得有趣的排列而已~

Lunatic:

SPOILER

00:28:778 (5) - NC
00:31:386 (1) - 刪除NC
00:31:759 (9) - NC並開頭加finish
00:32:877 (2) - 刪除whistle
00:56:542 (1) - 刪除NC
01:07:536 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這我聽節奏 沒什麼變化lol 確定要用jump 要用的話 擺好看點吧>_<
01:39:772 (7) - 這個地方改個節奏吧 像這樣




All fixed

01:53:747 (4) - NC
01:53:933 (1) - 刪除NC
01:56:169 (1) - 刪除NC
01:56:728 (6) - NC
01:57:473 (1) - 刪除NC
01:59:150 (1) - 刪除NC
02:00:455 (1) - 刪除NC
02:01:200 (6) - NC
02:03:809 (1) - 刪除NC
02:04:182 (2) - NC
02:07:163 (5) - NC
02:11:262 (6,7) - 間距 且7加NC
02:11:635 (1) - 刪除NC
02:12:380 (1) - 刪除NC
02:13:312 (7) - NC
02:20:579 (6) - NC
02:26:542 (7) - NC

除了一個NC沒改之外，其他都改好了~

這是東方的歌嘛? 怎麼會有Lunatic名稱呢?
不是東方的就改掉吧 還有把Source改成Tsuyokiss吧 OK
做的真好~
祝好運~!

Laurier wrote:

hi
from my mod queue

General
delete osb and full upload. fixed
Please unify tag by all the diff. fixed


Heart
00:32:691 (5) - 1grid right fixed
00:33:064 (6) - 1grid down fixed
00:45:921 (3) - spacing fixed
00:54:119 (2) - 1grid up and 00:54:678 (3) move x56y112 i like this fixed
01:05:672 (4) - Please repile up. why?
02:01:014 (2) - It is better to pile up firmly with 01:59:523 (3) tail Sorry,I think this is fine
02:12:753 (1) - ^ No
02:49:461 (3) - ^ No

Kiss
00:15:734 (1,2) - How is it that piles up with 00:14:803 (5) -tail? fixed
00:35:300 (2) - 1grid up fixed
00:40:703 (2,4) - 1grid down and 00:42:380 (1,2,3,4) - 1grid left and 00:43:498 (2)piles up 00:42:939 (4) tail. how about this? No...I tried,but it would have the distance mistake if I did this.
Since a large correction is needed when this is performed, please take care.
01:12:939 (6) - new combo? fixed
01:58:032 (3) - 2grid up?The way of this thinks that the flow of a cursor is smooth. fixed
02:05:300 (2) - repile up 02:04:741 (4) and Some of after that fixed
02:15:175 (2) - move x240 y128 fixed
02:24:306 (1) - 1grid left? fixed

Tsuyokiss
00:45:175 (1) - 2nd way point x280y240 3rd x212y208 and end point x260y128 No
00:58:405 (11,2,6,7,8,2,3) -piles up 00:57:660 (9) No
01:12:008 (2) - move x176y144? No... I'm sorry . lol
01:27:101 (4) - remove finish fixed
01:27:846 (5) - ^ fixed
01:28:405 (1) - add finish? fixed
01:30:641 (7,8) - remve finish fixed
01:31:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Please do not forget hit sound. fixed
02:45:921 (1) - add finish fixed
02:46:666 (6) - remove finish fixed
02:47:598 (1) - ^ fixed
02:52:070 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - hit sound fixed

nice map GL

Takos wrote:

Hi~ >w</
Mod Request accepted from my modding queue

General

General

Tsuyokiss BG? No...
Slider Tick Rate fixed
Write which diff name corresponds to which diff in description fixed
Wrong tag for some diffs. Tag roge-> Eroge? fixed

Sweet
Looks fine 0.0

Heart

Heart

Looks fine, except for the inconsistent NC
Too many NCs imo... You aren't using confusing jumps so you don't need that many
00:34:741 (6) - NC
00:35:300 (2) - Remove NC
00:39:958 (1) - NC
00:40:144 (2) - Remove NC
00:42:008 (1) - ^
00:42:194 (2) - NC
00:44:616 (1) - Remove NC
00:56:914 (1) - ^
00:59:896 (1) - ^
01:10:517 (1) - ^
01:14:616 (2) - Ctrl+R?
01:22:256 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:101 (1) - ^
02:03:809 (1) - ^
02:04:182 (7) - NC
02:04:927 (1) - Remove NC
02:08:095 (1) - ^
02:16:852 (1) - ^
02:17:784 (1) - ^
02:20:765 (1) - ^
02:23:374 (1) - ^
02:31:014 (1) - ^
02:35:672 (1) - ^
02:42:939 (1) - ^
02:50:020 (1) - ^
02:50:393 (3) - NC
02:47:598 (1) - ^ Except 3 NC modding,the other are all fixed.

Kiss

Kiss

00:15:734 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:411 (1) - ^ fixed
00:27:660 (1) - ^ No
01:33:250 (1) - ^ fixed
01:27:101 (1) - ^ fixed
01:33:250 (5) - ^ fixed
02:30:455 (1) - ^ fixed
02:31:014 (3) - NC fixed
02:33:436 (1) - Remove NC No
02:35:672 (1) - ^ fixed
02:47:598 (1) - ^ fixed
02:51:138 (1,2,3) - This is quite confusing, stack instead? no
02:53:374 (1) - Remove NC fixed

Tsuyokiss

Tsuyokiss

Fun jumpy map
Circle Size -1? no...
01:55:796 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down no
01:56:728 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:57:473 (3) - NC fixed
02:42:101 (7) - I think this whistle is on the wrong note. This is a blue tick~ fixed

Good luck for rank~

Takos wrote:

Hi~ >w</
Mod Request accepted from my modding queue

-Gamu-'s Relaxing

-Gamu-'s Relaxing

00:48:902 (1) - Add finish to end? 最後にFinish追加?
02:49:647 (2) - This slider might be difficult to read for beginners (初心者にはスライダーが見えづらいかもしれません) http://puu.sh/8pjy
01:20:952 (1) - Add Whistle? ホィ　ッスルを追加?

Good luck for rank~

1. -Gamu- should be in tag but not Gamu
2. combo burst 丑！
3. 话说第一个简单难度的音效需要十分努力

1. Slider tick maybe use 1 ?
2. 01:55:237 (1,2,3) - this part is hard because you have missed one beat on 01:55:983. Maybe think of a new pattern ?
3. 02:49:647 (2) - Hidden by combo burst of 02:48:529 (3). You'd better change this ~

1. 00:31:386 (6) - 略遮挡 简单难度 干净点好
2. 00:33:064 (5) - 不推荐3连的1/4+ stack 略难, 而且我觉得这里用1/2更好听
3. 00:43:871 (2) - ^
4. 01:07:536 (1,1,2,3,1) - 建议去掉spinner用slider吧
5. 01:12:380 (1) - 转圈完恢复的时间太少了 同样的地方AIMod显示很多处,有些转完后紧接着的note离中心很近的就不指出了~
6. 02:17:970 (1,1) - ^
7. 02:44:430 (1) - ^

1. 00:13:871 (2) - 头finish
2. 00:45:921 (3) - whistle ?
3. 01:17:225 (6) - 改成向下弯的?
4. 01:36:604 (1) - 不跳好么 T.T
5. 02:15:734 (5) - 感觉这个仍然用normalhit好听一些
6. 02:28:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - 略难
7. 02:39:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
8. 02:42:008 (3) - 叠的略丑 (而且尾部稍许有些遮挡
9. 02:42:939 (6) - ^
10. 02:56:355 (4) - use soft hitsound

S h i o n wrote:

:)

先mod这3个吧 改天再补上


General

1. -Gamu- should be in tag but not Gamu nope!(ﾟдﾟ)

-Gamu-'s Relaxing

1. Slider tick maybe use 1 ? fixed
2. 01:55:237 (1,2,3) - this part is hard because you have missed one beat on 01:55:983. Maybe think of a new pattern ? no fixed
3. 02:49:647 (2) - Hidden by combo burst of 02:48:529 (3). You'd better change this ~ fixed

S h i o n wrote:

:)

先mod这3个吧 改天再补上


General

1. -Gamu- should be in tag but not Gamu 如他所說...= =
2. combo burst 丑！ 醜?什麼東西醜？
3. 话说第一个简单难度的音效需要十分努力 真的假的...

Sweet

1. 00:31:386 (6) - 略遮挡 简单难度 干净点好 fixed
2. 00:33:064 (5) - 不推荐3连的1/4+ stack 略难, 而且我觉得这里用1/2更好听
3. 00:43:871 (2) - ^ 唔...這個就先保留吧
4. 01:07:536 (1,1,2,3,1) - 建议去掉spinner用slider吧 之後會接不上啊...
5. 01:12:380 (1) - 转圈完恢复的时间太少了 同样的地方AIMod显示很多处,有些转完后紧接着的note离中心很近的就不指出了~
6. 02:17:970 (1,1) - ^
7. 02:44:430 (1) - ^ 這個我就不改了，因為4星這種情況應該能被接受

抱歉，這難度的MOD才改一個= =

Heart

1. 00:13:871 (2) - 头finish fixed
2. 00:45:921 (3) - whistle ? fixed
3. 01:17:225 (6) - 改成向下弯的? 好主意
4. 01:36:604 (1) - 不跳好么 T.T 唔...跳也不錯啊T.T
5. 02:15:734 (5) - 感觉这个仍然用normalhit好听一些 這是為了配合「系統音效」
6. 02:28:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - 略难
7. 02:39:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 恩...我想保留這個lol
8. 02:42:008 (3) - 叠的略丑 (而且尾部稍许有些遮挡 調好了(大概)
9. 02:42:939 (6) - ^ fixed
10. 02:56:355 (4) - use soft hitsound 好啦lol

↓ ↓ ↓ ↓

yay ~

bubbled
ranked yeah~

bakabaka wrote:

mod in irc

nice map :>>

LKs wrote:

BG
BG不错 但男主的脸太大了吧 违和

Sweet

[00:15:734] 45都向右1格 我把3往左移，距離就一樣了
[00:47:039] 向右1 OK

其他难度都没问题 找泡吧 真的可以！？

另外真不用这么多难度 都你做导致风格趋同 之前我有聽過類似的話lol
难度变化也不大 反而我期望中的那种难度没做出来 嘛，整體就是太簡單了是吧？我不太會做觸圖lol

• - 個人認為應該在Tsuyokiss/Kiss之間取捨一個, 同時存在兩個insane意義也不大

• 01:01:480 (T) - change volume to 50%?
  01:07:163 (1) - new combo when kiai starts?
  01:25:051 (6,7,1) - rhythm suggest: http://puu.sh/8E7a
  02:22:442 (2,3,4,5) - fix spacing between these sliders
  
  
  Sweet
  [list:8135f]- 多留意一下clap的下法, 不時斷掉後又突然出現比較違和
  - 相比後面的難度, 這個Normal稍微偷懶了

• - 想跳又要控制難度的感覺!

• - 有點shinxyn, 或者說baka2的感覺呢

• - 跳的稍微誇張呢o.o"" 能挑的似乎不多

Pokie wrote:

-Gamu-'s
[list:50733]01:01:480 (T) - 改成50%音量? 40>60音量差距稍大 fixed
01:07:163 (1) - kiai再開始new combo比較適合, 取消new combo fixed
01:07:536 (2) - new combo fixed
01:22:442 ~ 01:31:014 - 節奏突然變的密集, 建議: http://puu.sh/8E7a fixed
- 01:25:424 (7) - 改成2/1拍slider
- 01:26:169 (1) - 刪
- 01:26:914 (x) - 加circle, new combo
02:22:442 (2,3,4,5) - 4個slider中間的間距最好相同 fixed

單人做4難度還挺多的, 不錯不錯

-Gamu- wrote:

Chinese 0.0

Mod Thank you~

____________________

To DarknessAngel

My diff. Please update

Pokie wrote:

General

• - 個人認為應該在Tsuyokiss/Kiss之間取捨一個, 同時存在兩個insane意義也不大

唔，我就是要留！lol


Sweet

• - 多留意一下clap的下法, 不時斷掉後又突然出現比較違和
  - 相比後面的難度, 這個Normal稍微偷懶了

太切中核心，我無話可說lol
00:55:610 ~ 01:00:082 - 這一段的clap不太需要, 可以考慮刪掉 fixed
02:09:958 (2) - 結尾漏了個clap麼 XD? 02:11:449 (4) - 這裡有下呢 fixed
02:44:430 (1,2,3) - (1)跟(2)都是跟著vocal, 個人認為(3)會造成誤導而早按了, 把(3)往下移如何? fixed



Heart

• - 想跳又要控制難度的感覺!

又中了...
00:25:796 (1) - 縮短1/1拍 fixed
00:27:660 (1,1) - 前移/起始點前移1/1拍? 目前的方式和歌曲不搭 fixed
00:44:989 (x) - 這個位置需要一個空檔呢, 刪掉這位置的note? 這裡是跳專用:3
00:51:697 (3) - 第一拍加上whistle? fixed
00:59:337 (3) - ^ fixed
01:00:082 (5) - 第一拍可以考慮加whistle/finish fixed
01:10:517 (6) - 跳設置的比較突然, 建議下移一些(大概4個grid) fixed
02:25:424 (4,5) - spacing錯誤? 左移1 grid fixed
02:31:014 (7) - 同01:10:517 (6), 左移4 grid? fixed
02:39:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - 希望能換個排列, AR6下這類型來回方式的排列並不適合 我想留著lol，話說AR是7。:3
02:49:647 (4) - slider第一拍加whistle fixed
02:50:206 (2) - whistle fixed



Kiss

• - 有點shinxyn, 或者說baka2的感覺呢

有被這樣說過lol
00:25:610 (7) - 結尾finish效果似乎還不錯XD 同感ww
00:39:399 (6,7) - spacing fixed
00:41:076 (3) - new combo或者往左上微移, 分辦不出這位置還有一個slider fixed
00:55:610 (6) - new combo fixed
01:00:641 (7) - ^ fixed
01:03:436 (1) - 關掉grid snap後移成這樣比較美觀: http://puu.sh/8EaU
fixed
01:04:927 (6) - 結尾上移: http://puu.sh/8EaY
fixed
01:08:467 (x) - 加一個circle, 或是把01:08:095 (4) 改成1/2 slider 唔，我想保留這個...
02:05:113 (1,2,3) - 這裡只出現一次反而突兀, 最好把break後的整段都補上同樣的效果 好吧我把他刪了



TsuyoKiss

• - 跳的稍微誇張呢o.o"" 能挑的似乎不多

因為我對這歌很熟悉lol，還能接受嗎？我感覺很多地方能跳的lol


===
單人做4難度還挺多的, 不錯不錯

Firce777 wrote:

我來mod小車車太鼓了~

SPOILER

嘛~萌車車的排列實在是中規中矩 沒什麼可挑的
01:37:815 ~ 01:38:747 這裡的變速建議還是稍微調降一些 0.15x會讓人反應不過 尤其是開了mod 0.10x如何:3?
02:59:363 ~ 02:59:363 同上

不錯的譜 快RANK吧:3

hitsuchi22 wrote:

Keep what you think looks good...

Sweet
01:09:399 (1,2,3) - Consider removing (they're quite close to the spinner) and make the second spinner earlier. fixed
01:30:641 (5,6) - Move one step down, grid level 3 fixed
01:39:213 (6,7) - Move one step left, grid level 3 fixed
02:19:461 (1) - Remove this?
02:20:952 (1) - Too close to following beats, shorten/remove?
02:30:827 (1) - ^
02:41:449 - 02:42:939: same as previous spinners.
02:57:101 (1,2,3) - Move one step right on grid level 3

All fixed

Heart
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - These just don't look square... fixed
02:15:548 (4,5) - 4 a bit to the right and 5 a bit more to the right? No
02:17:411 (5) - Down to the left for symmetry with 2,3,4. If you want symmetry. No
02:54:492 (1) - A bit downwards? No

Kiss
I almost passed it *proud* 0.0
00:46:293 (5) - I step to the right, grid level 3...or not? No
01:31:386 (1) - 01:35:859 (4) - I want a clap or two somewhere in here. No
01:52:442 (2) - 1 step down , Grid level 3. Grid level now abbreviated GL. No
01:53:933 (2) - I suppose here too. fixed
02:25:610 (5) - 1 step down ,still GL3. fixed
02:28:032 (1,2,3,4) - Not a square/rectangle/paralello-something. yeah~

Tsuyokiss
Too hard for me, but I tried...
00:33:809 (3,4,5) - Should these be a straight line? No
01:15:548 (3) - Little bit to the left? fixed
02:19:554 (2) - Sounds too short. Make longer?fixed

hitsuchi22 wrote:

Keep what you think looks good...

-Gamu-'s Relaxing
01:56:355 (3) - slider isn't symmetrical e... I think I have become symmetrical
01:57:473 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:00:082 (1) - You could skip this beat, or place it 1/4 later. no fixed

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Good map, all suggestions here

[Relaxing]
00:34:741 (5) - if you want to make a semicircle, place a note and follow the approach circle. This one is not perfect. ok fixed
02:09:399 (1) - ^ ^
others are fine...

bossandy wrote:

[size=150]Hi hi!~
第二次mod from my queue~

-Gamu-'s Relaxing:

SPOILER

00:55:610 (1,2,3) - remove clap and add finish no fixed
00:58:219 (4) - remove finish and add clap start, remove clap and add finish end finish add (end)
00:59:337 (1,2) - remove clap and add finish no fixed
01:06:790 (7) - add clap fixed
01:07:536 (1) - add finish start fixed
01:34:368 (1) - add clap start fixed
02:04:182 (1) - remove whistle and add finish fixed

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Good map, all suggestions here


[Sweet]
00:28:778 (3) - it's not straight, a bit surprising :O
02:39:958 (1,1) - As it's a Normal, don't place notes immediately after a spinner. The new players (um?) need some time to find their cursor after it. I had fixed it... :O
02:48:902 (2) - add clap on 1st reverse? fixed

[Heart]
00:16:852 (1) - +1 reverse? No
02:28:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's not necessary to use a star formation here... yeah~Why not?:D

[Kiss]
00:39:958 (1,3) - overlapped and I failed to read fixed
00:35:672 (4) - wrong finish? yes,it is
00:39:958 (1) - remove head clap? OK
02:18:343 (7) - this?

002.jpg

[attachment=0:ca6ef]screenshot002.JPG[/attachment:ca6ef]

Maybe wrong link?
02:42:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - are you sure you want to use this here? = = OK I change the style...

[Tsuyokiss]
00:25:051 (2,4) - clap on 4 instead? fixed
00:41:449 (3) - add finish on head?No
01:08:654 (1,2,3) - um, spacing right? yes, it is
01:14:430 (3) - wrong clap? fixed
01:27:101 (4) - feels strange in some way... change 3 to slider and/or remove finish? fixed
02:06:418 (2,3,4) - 2sliders / 1slider + 2circle? sorry= =
02:15:921 (6) - use louder sound as well fixed
02:35:672 (2) - finish on 1 end? No
02:36:977 (8,3) - finish? No
02:58:778 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - whistle all? it sounds better than the current one I think the last clap is good... :O

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi!~
第二次mod from my queue~


Sweet:

SPOILER

00:50:952 (5) - 醜 噗！我改好了= =
01:07:536 (1) - 不建議用spinner帶過
01:10:517 (1) - ^
01:31:014 (6) - 這間距變大了一點...
02:30:827 (1) - 不建議這樣帶過...
02:39:958 (1) - ^
02:42:939 (1) - ^ 請原諒我這個不聽話的小孩...SPINNER我要留著orz

Heart:

SPOILER

不錯!

可能是mod已經很多的關係 找不到很多了
加油吧!! Good luck~!!

wmfchris wrote:

[小轟轟taiko]
00:43:126 - 要突出vocal的高音用d k 決定改前面的凸顯背景音，順便後面的也改了
01:58:964 - k ddd K 這...容我三思:P
基本上沒問題了 個人不讚成連續加速不過up to you
8/10

wmfchris wrote:

都第baka頁了都一堆mod o_o 是啊，因為在第5頁的時候又remap了一次

[General]
Tag littlecar3370 in [Relaxing]. fixed

[Tsuyokiss]
00:52:070 (4) - left 1 grid lv4 fixed
01:08:467 - feel empty as an insane here. try xxx x x here? (remove the next 1/4 note on blue tick) 我改了另一種形式
01:14:244 (1,5) - remove finish, you may finish on (5) fixed
01:23:049 (4) - up 1~2 grid lv4 fixed
01:58:778 (2) - Try to rotate the direction of slider a bit so that it looks parallel to (4), it looks a bit better fixed

[Kiss]
00:16:392 (3) - remove whistle fixed
00:17:411 (2,5) - left+up 1 grid fixed
00:22:256 (1~5) - uneven spacing where?
00:26:542 (2,4) - remove whistle may fit the vocal better? fixed
01:08:095 (4) - feeling empty, make the slider 1 beat long or add a 1/2 notes No,it is this diff's style
01:17:225 (6) - may look better if down 1 grid fixed
01:34:182 (8) - remove whistle? fixed
01:38:840 (9) - a finish to end the sentence will be cool yeah,so cool~
02:28:964 - same as 01:08 fixed

我覺得這個圖diff spread是E H H+ H+ I 這樣有點偏重於難的diff
其實[Heart], [Kiss] 化為一個diff應該不成問題 不過毀掉自己心血也是事實

做了都做了，我不會刪的！ˋˊ

加油 ._. 果然到第9頁還是要mod 謝謝你的提醒...

kenny012012 wrote:

:)

DarkRingSystem wrote:

;) 来 搓b mod来了
娇蛮之吻 我记得好像是我刚上高中的时候的事了 很怀念啊 XXD
废话有点多 看不爽可以 skip 要改你說的東西好麻煩呀lol，我盡量...Orz

[General]
TAG:hentai eroge game 恶趣味 orz..
在我有限的记忆中 这好像不是一款18x 变态 黄色 游戏 而且这个op是PS2平台上的主题曲 PC版的的確是18X，不過這首是從FOXY載到的，我後來才知道:O

[Tsuyokiss]

SPOILER

这不是第一pc 一般我觉得miss 比 100多 那么 map中肯定存在着一些排版不太合理的地方
而且这个图 日本味十足 质量上升空间很大 有些地方看似很好玩 其实还是有些不太合理的地方

00:44:430 (1) - 比如这个跳得很大 跟前面同样节奏的排版 感觉来说 奇怪了不少 唔，這個我保留一下lol
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4) - 这个跳跃 意义不太明了 就是副歌固定的跳躍啊... 0.0
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个也是 也许把他们间距弄小点 手感会好好些 恩 換了形式...
01:25:051 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里 读图 按道理应该是 4 5 完了之后 1 2 3 4 跳跃 是两段节奏比较合理 這裡我不太懂，能不能說詳細一點，或是給個圖說明一下？
但是这里很容易跟音乐 读成 一段节奏 那么 4 5 1 2 3 4 突然从1开始跳 就感觉不太好 建议 改变一下排版
让节奏 好读一点

整体不错

[Kiss]
很重的一股copy味 我本身不反对 但是有些pattern 不要滥用 Copy什麼的...我只是排出我喜歡的樣子而已啊lol
00:30:455 (1,2,3,4) - 这个就不是很好
01:08:467 (X) -加个点
01:29:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 再考虑下 orz

其他还好 XD


這些都改了

[Heart]
00:25:796 (1,1,1,1) - 这个很诡异
尝试一下 这样 OK

SPOILER

后面还好
我觉得这个难度跟[kiss]相当 都是hard 唔，經你這麼一說的確是


[Sweet]
01:07:536 (1,1,1) - 这个节奏不好 都进入kiai了 还转圈混节奏? 加的节奏 连贯一些 我改了一點...
02:22:070 (X) - 这里加个note 别怕 就是會怕= =，有人說反應時間太短了(對新手來說)
02:30:827 (1) - 这里 先把 02:30:082 (6) - 加一个回转 然后 这个spinner 在02:31:014开始 02:32:132结束 OK
02:32:505 (X) -这里加个note 要是你觉得有点快 那么久用slider来代替 同樣反應時間lol


断网 That's all good luck!!! and starrrrrrrr

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

skip 1st & 2nd diff

[heart]
00:15:175 (4) - 去掉finish或者减点音量。有点吵 還好吧o.o
00:47:970 (4) - 去finish 恩
01:07:536 (1) - finish 恩
01:14:244 (1,2) - 感觉容易被挑 不至於吧..
01:24:492 (1) - 去NC OK
02:13:126 (3) - finish换whistle fixed
02:28:032 (1) - ^ fixed

[Kiss]
00:20:206 (2) - 减个折返换circle No
00:26:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 考虑调下音量然后换normal 保留..
01:01:200 (3) - spacing ？？
02:17:598 (5) - 减个折返换circle No
02:56:355 (1) - NC好像不太对劲 我刪了..

[Tsuyokiss]
00:48:902 (1) - 删NC 這是為了標明跳的NC，不能刪
01:24:492 (3) - 别重叠 為啥？
02:11:449 (1) - 删NC。下个note NC fixed
02:42:008 (6) - NC fixed

1. At least, HP +1 & OD +1 please.
2. 03:00:827 (T) - why not use kiai fevering like other diffs?

• looking fine~

1. 00:18:529 (1,2,3,4) - move 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
2. 01:10:331 (5,6) - Hmm, this jump is awkward for me... try changing normal spacing?
3. 02:30:827 (6,7) - ^

1. 00:43:685 (1) - add finish?
2. 01:19:647 (2) - move 2 grid left (grid lv4)
3. 01:30:268 (3) - move 3 grid down & 2 grid left
4. 01:36:790 (2) - remove whistle on the silder's body
5. 01:53:001 (3,1) - switch new combo?
6. 02:04:182 (2) - add finish?
7. 02:35:859 (4,5,1) - move 2 grid left
8. 02:56:355 (5) - remove whistle on the silder's body

1. HP +1 or OD +1 will be better for score spread.
2. 00:36:045 (6) - move 2 grid right (grid lv4)
3. 00:43:126 (5,6,7) - make triangle jump?
4. 01:23:001 (4) - move 1 grid left
5. 01:28:405 (1,2,3,4) - make parallel
6. 02:32:877 (3,4) - move 1 grid right

banvi wrote:

[-Gamu-]

1. At least, HP +1 & OD +1 please. ok fixed
2. 03:00:827 (T) - why not use kiai fevering like other diffs? あ、気づきませんでした　fixed!

Oh, almost nazi mod xD
Good map & good luck~