我心不甘情不願地給KD了 XDLastMonster wrote:
[Insane]
00:51:697(5)(6) 距離微調
02:33:995(4) 沒有疊好
02:07:163(1) new combo?
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抱歉昨天突然有點事情
所以晚回了
快去給你的圖射星吧~
你說的我都改了
3Q
我心不甘情不願地給KD了 XDLastMonster wrote:
[Insane]
00:51:697(5)(6) 距離微調
02:33:995(4) 沒有疊好
02:07:163(1) new combo?
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抱歉昨天突然有點事情
所以晚回了
- 我覺得原本那樣還行S h i o n wrote:
[Normal]
几个spinner太短,后面还有马上接note,对于normal来说比较困难 - 我想不到怎麼改lol
[Hard]
00:31:573 (6) - 在2跟白线之间放个1/8的slider。 - 保留...01:29:709 (1,2,3,4) - 排列有点别扭 - 不知道怎麼改lol
02:31:014 (1) - 放这比较好 - 真的..!
02:44:244 (2,3,4) - 节奏乱 简单点就好 我用這樣:3↓
[Insane]
01:01:200 (1,2,3,4) - 为了和后面01:03:436 (4,5,6,7) - 节奏保持一致 改成这样
Mod thank you~rui wrote:
In my mod. You can ignore me
[Easy]
- 00:25:425 (2) - add whistle Fixed!
00:40:332 (2) - change slider.start 0:39:959 end 00:40:332 No Fixed
Thank for your modding~rui wrote:
In my mod. You can ignore me
[Normal]
nice map!
[Hard]
- 00:31:573 (6) - slider end 00:31:666 - I makethis:3
00:320132 (2) - slider end 00:32:877 - I make this :3
01:00:641 (3) - remove clap - OK~
01:06:790 (3) - change slider start 01:06:790 end 01:06:977 http://puu.sh/4NYz - OK~
01:07:163 (4,1) - add newcombo(4) remove newcombo (1) - NO
[Diffucult]This is my style,I don't want to fix them. lol
- spell miss Diffucult? so Difficult
00:25:610 (7,1) - add newcombo(7) remove newcombo(1)
01:07:163 (7,1) - ^
01:19:008 (6,1) - add newcombo(6) remove newcombo(1)
02:34:741 (5,1) - add newcombo(5) remove newcombo(1)
[Insane]- OK
- 00:13:498 (1) - slider end 00:13:871 - I think it's OK...
00:42:939 (5) - add finish - OK
00:43:685 (3,1) - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1) - OK
00:55:610 - add new combo - OK
02:04:182 - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1) - OK
02:19:088 - add new combo
哈哈qazok4444 wrote:
good song~~~
kotoko's fan!
hope it can be ranked~
頑張る!
Thank you foy your star. ><rui wrote:
In my mod. You can ignore me
[Easy]
- 00:25:425 (2) - add whistle
00:40:332 (2) - change slider.start 0:39:959 end 00:40:332
[Normal]
nice map!
[Hard]
- 00:31:573 (6) - slider end 00:31:666
00:320132 (2) - slider end 00:32:877
01:00:641 (3) - remove clap
01:06:790 (3) - change slider start 01:06:790 end 01:06:977 http://puu.sh/4NYz
01:07:163 (4,1) - add newcombo(4) remove newcombo (1)
[Diffucult]
- spell miss Diffucult? so Difficult
00:25:610 (7,1) - add newcombo(7) remove newcombo(1)
01:07:163 (7,1) - ^
01:19:008 (6,1) - add newcombo(6) remove newcombo(1)
02:34:741 (5,1) - add newcombo(5) remove newcombo(1)
[Insane]
- 00:13:498 (1) - slider end 00:13:871
00:42:939 (5) - add finish
00:43:685 (3,1) - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1)
00:55:610 - add new combo
02:04:182 - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1)
02:19:088 - add new combo
o0cannian0o wrote:
:D 做的比我好多了-0-提几个建议(也许没有什么用-0-
[insane]
开头个人觉得有些不和节奏,建议把开头稍微改一改,或者用我的参考一下>W<
01:08:281 (5,1) - 这两个差了1分拍但是重叠在一起,我打到那里老是以为是二分拍然后抢拍了QAQ
01:08:281 (5,1) - 中间为什么少一个节奏,打起来有一种突然一停的感觉,好像这样的地方还有好几处,我不一一列举了,我只是觉得这样子打起来有一种切断节奏的感觉,后来我发现了也许你是按vocal下的节奏,我个人觉得这样下节奏在那些鼓点不明或者清唱时比较适用,有明确节奏的时候最好跟着节奏,所以我建议你可以用slider起节奏,如果觉得不舒服可以用音效做适当调整,比如那个01:08:281 (5,1) - 就可以在(5)处摆滑条直到01:08:467,然后在下一个节拍处用NC的circle,这样既让节奏感觉流畅又符合vocal的感觉.
我懂你想說什麼,只是我早就打算以這種排列方式為特色
你說以SLIDER起頭那種形式我當然懂,我不過是喜歡突然一停的感覺而已=w=
開頭我覺得沒啥問題說...你那樣當然也是好,只是改掉有些麻煩了...
[difficult]
这个我个人觉得问题比较多,我先说几个吧www 比如排列,有些地方的排列特别是在重叠的地方处理的不是很美观,由于是AR7,来回重叠过多容易导致读图不清(我技术比较渣,这里慎用),藏note有些严重(这个嘛,我自己开了hidden试了一下一不留神就fail了,不过我技术很差就是了,条可以看你个人情况采用)还有一些节奏不太理解,比如00:24:306 (3) - ,01:22:070 (7,1) - 的衔接等等
「遮擋嚴重」的圖其實我滿喜歡...,於是我做徒的當下就打算做出這種圖了...=口=
AR7是極限,不能在高了(因為要低於INS難度)
這種類型的「遮蔽」應該是沒問題....(因為也是有很多遮蔽的圖啊...= =)
嘛,我再多蒐集各方意見好了
>,<马上要出去应酬,所以暂时先写这么多,你可以适当采用一下XD 歌很好听呢~加油蛤
No... I just take this picture as the background. :3Mok wrote:
Is that Hartmann from Strike Witches?
zoern66 wrote:
0.0
can i help you?
but i don't know much about how to make a map>.<
哇喔,超感謝的說><ooooooops wrote:
再幫你評一顆star
補字1補字2補字3補字4補字5...................
All done.-Gamu- wrote:
SPOILERhi-
All suggestions
[General]
●Tag: -Gamu- ×
gamu ○
Please change
[Normal]
●00:13:498 - circle add
●00:16:107 (4) - 1 grid left
●02:15:548 (1) - short spinner . spinner remove
[Hard]
●OD+1
●00:13:498 - circle add
●02:48:343 (1) - 02:47:225 (2) - stack
[Insane]
●00:13:498 - circle add
●01:04:927 (6) - 01:04:182 (3) - stack to the end
●01:23:933 (3) - 01:22:256 (8) - stack
●02:00:082 (2) - 01:59:523 (4) - stack to the end
[Lunatic]
●00:40:703 (1) - 00:39:213 (2) - stack
Good map!!!!!!!!!!!!!]
排列我很少改...BakaHuang wrote:
hii mod time
[general]
关于音效
以下mod很多都是个人的style 如果不喜欢可以skip
soft-finish尽量少用 多了反而让人觉得有点吵杂
如00:14:244-你可以找一个 custom hitsound-clap 与音乐自带的一个节奏音差不多的那种
[Lunatic]
00:13:498(1)-换成2条一样长短的silder (1)上加nor-whis (2)的头上加soft-finish
00:14:244(2,3,4,5)-(2) add clap ; (3) remove finish ; (4) add whis ; (5)头上取消音效 转折点上用clap 最后用finish
其实我觉得这样更好
[attachment=1:0916b]333.png[/attachment:0916b]
如果你也改成这样的话 就是(7)的头尾上分别加clap和finish
00:15:734(2,5)-change whis to clap
00:16:852(1)-换个样子 然后这段的音效和前面一段修改方式是一样的
[attachment=0:0916b]433.png[/attachment:0916b]
00:20:765(5,6)-时间轴上得位置交换
00:22:442(4)-换成finish
00:22:908(2)-add note
00:24:492(1,2,3)-(1)与(2,3)的时间轴上位置交换
00:31:386(1)-remove nc
00:31:759(5)-add nc (3,5)add whis (5)只要头上加
00:34:554(5)-(5)要和(3,4)同一排吗
00:37:536(5)-这个也jump一下?与(4,5,1)形成等腰三角形
00:39:958(1,2)-时间轴上位置对换 the same as 00:47:598-
00:50:393(3,4)-交换note位置
01:40:331?(6)-add finish , remove clap
to be continued ...
Thanks :3Nymph_ wrote:
Hi Nymph here and request from: Wcx19911123's mod queue~
feel free to ask me if you have anything trouble about this mod~
EASY diff doesn't have a preview time,and have a different OFFSET! oh...fixed
好幾首歌可以證明K姊是很萌的!(應該是她早期的聲音...)Nymph_ wrote:
Hi Nymph here and request from: Wcx19911123's mod queue~
feel free to ask me if you have anything trouble about this mod~
General:
BG is 1044*835, you should fix it~ 800*600 is better I think. 咦咦?這樣不會太小嗎?800x600可以?等待回復=w=
EASY diff doesn't have a preview time,and have a different OFFSET! 我沒注意到...=口=
Tag has " , " in it, not sure if it is ok. and the easy diff tag is different from other diffs. Other diffs have more space between "koigokoro Gamu". You should fix it I think.
And for your req, I only check the last 3 diffs~
Normal:
02:19:461 (1) - new combo bug, add new combo here. 好怪的bug啊XD
Hard:
Issue/unrankable stuff
01:19:088 (5) - Inherited Points is not snapped.
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:15:548 (1,2,3) - spacing is weird,2 3 is closer than 1 2. maybe try to use grid level 4 to avoid this kind of problem. Same issues about these won't be mentioned again. 我不會調網格大小...
00:35:300 (2) - this overlap is kinda of ugly.
02:59:709 (1) - using a Kiai fountain at the end of this spinner would be nice imo=A= 同意OAO
Hitsound
00:22:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part should not add clap imo. I prefer still only whistles here.
00:31:759 (7) - Finish here?
00:32:132 (2) - clap on 00:32:505?
01:17:598 (3) - I think this finish is weird to listen.
01:22:442 (6) - use whistle instead of finish on the 2nd arrow of this slider? finish is kinda of loud.
01:27:846 (5) - I prefer to delete the finish on the tail of this slider.
02:16:107 (4) - ^ same
02:19:461 (2) - ^ delete finish? a little loud for me, just suggestion.
02:48:343 (1) - ^ won't mention again, these are just my personal suggestion, I think maybe you like 2 finish use together, my fault.是我的錯...你的建議比較OK :3
Insane:
Issue/unrankable stuff
It is a bit weird when hard diff using circle size 4 but Insane is 3.. and with the default skin, circle size 3 really a little mass..
01:19:088 (6) - again Inherited Points is not snapped.
Beatmap design/suggestion
seems good, played well. 噢耶><
Hitsound
00:23:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same suggestion as hard, clap sounds weird here.
Lunatic:
Issue/unrankable stuff
00:42:939 (3) - again Inherited Points is not snapped.
01:19:088 (6) - again Inherited Points is not snapped.
00:54:678 (2) - touching the hp bar.. 我都不知道有這條規定...= =
Beatmap design/suggestion
02:48:157 (4) - add a note here? kind of uncomfortable that no beat here. 啊呀,我想保留原來的樣子...
02:57:846 (5,6) - make these into a long slider? played more comfortable for me.
Hitsound
00:55:610 (1,2,3) - a little loud, low down the volumn a little bit?
00:55:610 (1,2,3) - weird whistles,maybe delete the whsitle on red tick and slider body, then volumn lower? current sounds too sudden and noisy.
02:20:579 (6,7,8,9) - same ^
02:35:672 (2) - why the finish is here? It really should be at 02:35:486 imo.
02:45:362 (5) - same ^ won't mention again, seems you do that on purpose.
02:50:393 (3,4,5,6,7) - too loud for me...
02:55:983 (5,6) - soft clap is more fit imo.
02:58:778 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think claps are kind of mess up. Only the last note need a clap imo.
我的K姐不可能这么萌的声音=A=
这么多star也不差我一个 我省个KUDO好了 SORRY.. 不會,省個KD去幫助有需求的人吧0.0
呃...提一個有些厚臉皮的要求Nymph_ wrote:
BG的话 800 600或者640 480都可以吧
系統會自動填滿整個畫面0.0?
网格的话 在上面的菜单调:View---Grid Level---4
潛藏已久的謎題被輕易地解開了!OAO
然后你说的什么起始点什么NOTE的..我没明白什么意思..最后 K姐我最喜欢的歌 必然是这个无误!=A=Nymph_ wrote:
Issue/unrankable stuff
01:19:088 (5) - Inherited Points is not snapped.
這個...你翻譯一下看看有沒有跟我解讀的一樣...
KOTOKO-Sakuranbo Kiss
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/17667
這首歌也很Q~><
All fixed!~Nymph_ wrote:
Hi Nymph again~ and from ingame request~
-Gamu-'s Easy:
Issue/unrankable stuff
sorry to mention this again, but your preview time is different with others. Please check it in the osu file.
ATTACH[-1.jpg]
Lots of Inherited points are not snapped well, for example:
01:07:910
01:19:090
01:19:462
01:31:388
02:28:034
02:39:587
02:39:959
Check them and use the "Use current time" button to snap them well.
Beatmap design/suggestion
Feel really empty of this diff, really need to add some notes.
00:16:107 - add note?
00:19:088 - ^
00:22:070 - ^
00:51:883 - ^
01:06:045 - ^
01:06:790 - ^
01:21:697 - ^
01:32:877 - ^
01:33:623 - ^
01:36:604 - ^
01:37:349 - maybe make this slider more beautiful
01:40:331 - don't need to be a slider, a note is better.
01:54:678 - why this slider start at here? shouldn't it be started at 01:54:492?
01:55:237 - add note?
02:00:827 - ^
02:07:908 - ^
02:18:343 - ^
02:21:324 - ^
02:48:529 - ^
03:00:827 - note is better than slider, I prefer only a note here and add a finish on it.
Hitsound
00:25:796 (1) - I suggest not to silence this end of the spinner. Actually I prefer to make it even louder to help people get the rhythm, So I suggest to use volumn around 70, and maybe add a soft whistle on it.
00:50:393 (2) - maybe whistle again on the head of this slider?
I forgot to post for this...Nymph wrote:
Hi Nymph again~ and from ingame request~
Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
00:31:014 (1) - this spinner is way too short for a normal diff!
01:10:517 (1) - still feel short. why not stops at 01:12:008, same length as the last spinner.
02:20:952 (1) - again short spinner.
02:30:827 (1) - same issues won't be mentioned again.
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:28:778 (3) - not very beautiful, more symmetrical?
00:36:977 (1,2) - don't stack them please, like 3 4, they are fine.
00:49:461 (2) - little ugly.... well...
Hitsound
00:31:014 (1) - Finish is better imo.
00:43:685 (1) - ^
00:46:293 (1) - no hitsound is not a good idea, maybe add whistles on both head and tail?
00:50:393 (3) - Finish is better than clap imo.
00:55:983 (2) - delete this finish, really not necessary here.
00:58:591 (1) - and delete the finish on tail.
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - actually this part is early for claps, I think only whistle are better, well personal suggestion.
01:29:523 (4) - change the clap on arrow into whistle, this clap is very werid for only 1 clap among many whistles.
01:30:641 (5,6) - too loud with many finished, whistles maybe?
01:59:523 - actually here need a finish, but you have not beat here, so...
02:16:852 (2,3,1,2) - - why finish here? maybe delete it?
02:16:107 (5,2,4,2,4) - whistles are really better, claps are ok too. Finish.. no no no.
02:46:293 (6) - delete finish.
02:48:902 (2) - delete finish on first arrow and tail.
02:57:101 (1,2,3) - whistles on 1 2 and head of 3?
Mod Thank you~spboxer3 wrote:
recheck是嗎...
[-Gamu-'s Easy]
00:48:902 (1,2) - not pretty. really hmm....sorry If you leave this
01:03:064 (3) - NC no fixed
01:04:554 (5) - ^ no fixed
01:10:517 (5) - ^ no fixed
01:22:442 (3) - ^ no fixed
02:07:163 (4) - ^ no fixed
02:31:014 (3) - ^ 02:32:505 (4) - nc add
02:44:430 (6) - ^ fixed
02:59:709 (1) - too close to spinner finish ok.Reduced the note after the spinner.
Thank you for your modding~spboxer3 wrote:
recheck是嗎...
音效不mod
[General]
很多難度的 03:00:734 - , 03:01:107 - 這兩個kiai time沒有在位置上 有啊,我檢查過了lol
極度建議最多4個diff就好 lol
[normal]
00:37:536 (2) - 這畸形了 我覺得還行..
01:09:399 (1) - (時間)距離轉盤結束太近了
01:12:380 (1) - 這太遠也(時間)距離轉盤太近
02:19:461 (1) - ^
02:22:442 (1) - 時間太近
太多了就不在挑轉盤的位置了全都改好了
[Hard]
別懶啦loool 拉條至少都要4個點以上
SV1.2在Hard裡面確實有些蛋疼了些
00:35:300 (2) - 黏住不行 怎麼說?
很多都是黏住的部份 可以的話希望你自己再看過一次因為真的太多了
[Insane]
說真的這我看到眼花了 note的排法好多都重複排 這不是一個好現象 因為對於新人mapper來說如何處理好那樣的排法是很困難的
還有就是spacing變化太過random了 給人太過突然的感覺 記得spacing變大是用來重點提示的 不是隨時都可以拿來用
像00:54:678 (1,2,3,4) - 這就不是個正常的spacing 第4個應該也是重音 可是你突然縮進來了
01:22:442 (1) - 太短是不能rank的 現在你有轉出2000但是這一定會被mat他們挑到爆的
01:29:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 這也是突然變化 讓人有種瞎了的感覺
01:59:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這排法太瞎眼了
說到底還是因為你的間距一開始沒有用好 太過黏在一起了 最起碼1/2拍的note不應該有碰在一起了 可是你都碰到了
跳的問題我都處理了,現在應該比較好看,不過「遮蔽」的特性我會堅持
[Lunatic]
00:32:877 (2,1,2) - 間距不平均 我覺得還可以...
00:34:554 (5) - 堆疊 OK
00:56:914 (4,6) - 這要對好阿 ... OK
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4) - 這要數一下格子 不能憑感覺就直接放了 你這歪掉了 OK
01:33:995 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 像這類的note連在一起 我們會用有弧度的排法來排這個 這樣會好看很多 我改變排法了
01:38:840 (5,6) - 這個感覺沒有對在節奏上 lol
02:08:654 (1,2,3,4) - 這種排法少用 為啥...?
02:19:088 (1,2) - 1/4拍連打最好別用slider配slider或note 我下次會注意...
02:41:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 這不好 反正就是很瞎眼就對了 mat首先是玩家後是modder阿 你讓玩家都不爽呢他怎麼會給你bubble呢
呃,瞎眼就不能RANKED?lol
這難度做的比其他你做的難度都好多了~
呼 mod完了~
我換個音效看看...I will be back wrote:
Lunatic
節奏都沒有什麼問題OAO''
我覺得這兩個滑條有點怪= =''
我超想知道為什麼的耶...karenying wrote:
General
- BG應該是限制在1024*768或在此以下的,順帶一題現在這個是1044*835。
- osb最好刪掉。 都改好了
-Gamu-'s Easy
00:25:796 (1) - This spinner is too long for Easy,and too close to the next note.I suggest End at 00:30:268.
02:24:678 (5) - *nazi 2 grid up and 1 grid right
其他不想看了(...don't ask why)
不過有些kiai time好像是Unsnapped的,自己看。 一些是哪些...?=口=