As requested,
I love the OP and ED for Tsuyokiss 3gakki 
[
General]
- Please add
hentai eroge game visual novel opening Candy Soft Reason is found here
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tsuyokiss. Also add
full ver version as this is the full version I presume.
- Please resize your background to 800x600 (use photoshop / gimp to resize or other programs, be sure to save in .jpg).
Other than that, everything looks good to me.
[
Easy]
00:40:331 (2,3) - Change to slider, it follows the song nicer because the singer is holding a note here and it feel weird to be hitting two hit circles rather than holding a slider.
http://puu.sh/7Xc5 - Copy (4) and paste it here.
00:58:219 (4,1) - Since (4) is place further than the other hit circle, I suggest making them a slider. This is also to give rest to the player as it's tiring to try get 300s on 8 hit circles and this will give them a little rest.
01:10:517 (5) - This slider can be better.
01:17:598 (2) - Move the middle (3rd) anchor point 1 grid left (grid 3) looks nicer to me.
01:32:877 (4,5) - I feel a slider fits better with the flow here since I can hear her singing at 01:33:250 and it feels a little weird to have nothing there. Place it something like this maybe,
http://puu.sh/7XdZ.
01:39:213 (2.3.4) - Can you make this a repeating slider instead? It's a bit disorienting to hit hit circles on white ticks when I can hear notes on red ticks. Making a repeating slider feels much better. Ideas on how to put it -
http://puu.sh/7XeU.
01:56:355 (3,4) - Slider, for the same reason as 01:32:877. I can hear singing at 01:56:728 so a slider make this feel less "empty."
02:07:163 (4,5) - ^
02:16:107 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Adding sliders somewhere in this section feels better. 8 hit circles in a row is tiring for beginners.
02:36:977 (1,2,3,4) - I would love two sliders here to emphasize the down beat and the third beat.
http://puu.sh/7Xg5. But it's fine if you want to keep it.
02:44:430 (1,2) - ^ Slider to emphasize the down beat.
02:47:784 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - So many hit circles, I would like if you make 02:47:784 (2,3) a slider, or make 02:48:902 (1,2,3,4) a repeating slider with 2 repeats.
02:51:883 (1,2,3) - Placing notes like this can be confusing for beginner (they will think they have to hit 3 first). I also feel (1,2) should be slider to follow the vocal just a bit more. So something like this?
http://puu.sh/7Xh0It's not bad, but I feel you should use more sliders as some part feel a little empty / play weird with hit circles and to give a little break for beginners. So consider them!
[
Normal]
00:13:498 - 00:25:424 - The notes are placed in a very linear way, maybe you can try something interesting?
01:14:244 (4,5,6,7) - Since your previous stack were in group of 3s, i would prefer if you make it a repeating sliders with 2 repeats or two short sliders
http://puu.sh/7XiC.
Well the rhythm seems good, but the way you place the notes is very linear. Try to rework it (curve some sliders, etc.).
[
Hard]
00:56:355 (3) - I don't get why you snap this to 1.6x distant snap? Shouldn't be hard to adjust so that it's snapped to 1.5x.
01:10:517 (1) - Can you reduce the spacing for this jump a bit? 2.66 is quite high for Hard.
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - Place like this
http://puu.sh/7XkZ seems nicer.
01:20:579 (1) - And this like this
http://puu.sh/7Xl201:27:101 (1,2,3) - I don't get why you increase the spacing here, why not 1.5x distant snap like before (01:26:169)?
02:42:939 (1) - Again big jump for a Hard, please reduce.
02:54:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The way you placed these note is quite linear, try to rearrange a bit so that it's less linear?
Looks pretty good.
[
Insane]
- Consider higher stack leniency, look at 01:22:070, it doesn't look too good.
00:30:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - Feel like there should be a jump here. How about this
http://puu.sh/7XnA (all is snapped to 1.5x distant snap). (1.3) are stacked with each other, (2,4) are stacked with each other. Don't have to be placed like this, but I feel there should be a jump here.
00:39:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would prefer if you make the jump smaller. You snap the previous notes to 1.0x distant snapping and all the sudden, a 2.0x jump. It doesn't play bad, but feel very sudden and nothing in the music really give a reason to why the jump should be so big. So, please reduce.
00:44:430 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Didn't suggest for 00:43:312 (1,2,1) as it seems fine.
01:29:709 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:22:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ I didn't suggest for others as it plays fine.
01:31:386 (1,3) - Should curve these two sliders, look nicer imo.
01:33:809 (2,3,4) - Place more like this?
http://puu.sh/7XpW (Snap all to 1.1x distant snap).
01:59:896 (5,6,7,8,9) - Feel like the jump should be smaller.
02:10:331 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:35:859 (2,3) - Don't see any reason for spacing not to be equal here. Please fix it (snap 2 to 1.3x distant snap).
02:52:256 - 02:55:610 - Curve some of the sliders, look nicer.
I feel some jump should be smaller (all mention in my mod) since they feel a bit sudden. I didn't suggest for all since for some of them, the way you place the note, the jump make sense, so maybe rearrange the note a bit if you don't want to reduce the jumps. Looks good in general through, maybe self mod and polish the diff a little through.
[
Lunatic]
- I find it weird that for the hardest difficulty, you are using circle size 3, but I guess it's fine.
- Consider higher stack leniency, look at 02:46:852 & 02:53:374, etc. to see what I mean.
00:22:815 (1,2,3) - Hm, stacking another stream on top of a stream doesn't play too good imo, prob better to space it out. Something like this?
http://puu.sh/7XrK.
02:50:020 (2) - Considering you curved all the slider here, you should probably curve this one as well.
Similar comments about jumps. I didn't mention them since this is the hardest diff for this beatmap and they seems to play well enough. But I feel the jumps are just there to make it harder and doesn't really fit the song. It's pretty fun to play through.
Overall, the mapset is good, just make Normal less linear. Some sliders could use a little of polish so look through your diffs a bit. No star since this map already have lot of stars.
Good luck!
