S h i o n wrote:

[Normal]
几个spinner太短,后面还有马上接note,对于normal来说比较困难 - 我想不到怎麼改lol

[Hard]
00:31:573 (6) - 在2跟白线之间放个1/8的slider。 - 保留...

SPOILER

01:29:709 (1,2,3,4) - 排列有点别扭 - 不知道怎麼改lol
02:31:014 (1) - 放这比较好

SPOILER

- 真的..！
02:44:244 (2,3,4) - 节奏乱 简单点就好

SPOILER

我用這樣:3↓


[Insane]
01:01:200 (1,2,3,4) - 为了和后面01:03:436 (4,5,6,7) - 节奏保持一致 改成这样

SPOILER

• 00:25:425 (2) - add whistle
  00:40:332 (2) - change slider.start 0:39:959 end 00:40:332

• 00:31:573 (6) - slider end 00:31:666
  00:320132 (2) - slider end 00:32:877
  01:00:641 (3) - remove clap
  01:06:790 (3) - change slider start 01:06:790 end 01:06:977 http://puu.sh/4NYz
  01:07:163 (4,1) - add newcombo(4) remove newcombo (1)

• spell miss Diffucult? so Difficult
  00:25:610 (7,1) - add newcombo(7) remove newcombo(1)
  01:07:163 (7,1) - ^
  01:19:008 (6,1) - add newcombo(6) remove newcombo(1)
  02:34:741 (5,1) - add newcombo(5) remove newcombo(1)

• 00:13:498 (1) - slider end 00:13:871
  00:42:939 (5) - add finish
  00:43:685 (3,1) - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1)
  00:55:610 - add new combo
  02:04:182 - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1)
  02:19:088 - add new combo

rui wrote:

In my mod. You can ignore me

[Easy]

• 00:25:425 (2) - add whistle Fixed!
  00:40:332 (2) - change slider.start 0:39:959 end 00:40:332 No Fixed

rui wrote:

In my mod. You can ignore me

[Normal]
nice map!

[Hard]

• 00:31:573 (6) - slider end 00:31:666 - I makethis:3
  00:320132 (2) - slider end 00:32:877 - I make this :3
  01:00:641 (3) - remove clap - OK~
  01:06:790 (3) - change slider start 01:06:790 end 01:06:977 http://puu.sh/4NYz - OK~
  01:07:163 (4,1) - add newcombo(4) remove newcombo (1) - NO

[Diffucult]

• spell miss Diffucult? so Difficult
  00:25:610 (7,1) - add newcombo(7) remove newcombo(1)
  01:07:163 (7,1) - ^
  01:19:008 (6,1) - add newcombo(6) remove newcombo(1)
  02:34:741 (5,1) - add newcombo(5) remove newcombo(1)

This is my style,I don't want to fix them. lol

[Insane]

• 00:13:498 (1) - slider end 00:13:871 - I think it's OK...
  00:42:939 (5) - add finish - OK
  00:43:685 (3,1) - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1) - OK
  00:55:610 - add new combo - OK
  02:04:182 - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1) - OK
  02:19:088 - add new combo

- OK

qazok4444 wrote:

good song~~~
kotoko's fan!
hope it can be ranked~
頑張る!

rui wrote:

In my mod. You can ignore me

[Easy]

• 00:25:425 (2) - add whistle
  00:40:332 (2) - change slider.start 0:39:959 end 00:40:332

[Normal]
nice map!

[Hard]

• 00:31:573 (6) - slider end 00:31:666
  00:320132 (2) - slider end 00:32:877
  01:00:641 (3) - remove clap
  01:06:790 (3) - change slider start 01:06:790 end 01:06:977 http://puu.sh/4NYz
  01:07:163 (4,1) - add newcombo(4) remove newcombo (1)

[Diffucult]

• spell miss Diffucult? so Difficult
  00:25:610 (7,1) - add newcombo(7) remove newcombo(1)
  01:07:163 (7,1) - ^
  01:19:008 (6,1) - add newcombo(6) remove newcombo(1)
  02:34:741 (5,1) - add newcombo(5) remove newcombo(1)

[Insane]

• 00:13:498 (1) - slider end 00:13:871
  00:42:939 (5) - add finish
  00:43:685 (3,1) - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1)
  00:55:610 - add new combo
  02:04:182 - add newcombo(3) remove newcombo(1)
  02:19:088 - add new combo

o0cannian0o wrote:

:D 做的比我好多了-0-提几个建议(也许没有什么用-0-
[insane]
开头个人觉得有些不和节奏,建议把开头稍微改一改,或者用我的参考一下>W<
01:08:281 (5,1) - 这两个差了1分拍但是重叠在一起,我打到那里老是以为是二分拍然后抢拍了QAQ
01:08:281 (5,1) - 中间为什么少一个节奏,打起来有一种突然一停的感觉,好像这样的地方还有好几处,我不一一列举了,我只是觉得这样子打起来有一种切断节奏的感觉,后来我发现了也许你是按vocal下的节奏,我个人觉得这样下节奏在那些鼓点不明或者清唱时比较适用,有明确节奏的时候最好跟着节奏,所以我建议你可以用slider起节奏,如果觉得不舒服可以用音效做适当调整,比如那个01:08:281 (5,1) - 就可以在(5)处摆滑条直到01:08:467,然后在下一个节拍处用NC的circle,这样既让节奏感觉流畅又符合vocal的感觉.

我懂你想說什麼，只是我早就打算以這種排列方式為特色
你說以SLIDER起頭那種形式我當然懂，我不過是喜歡突然一停的感覺而已=w=
開頭我覺得沒啥問題說...你那樣當然也是好，只是改掉有些麻煩了...

[difficult]
这个我个人觉得问题比较多,我先说几个吧www 比如排列,有些地方的排列特别是在重叠的地方处理的不是很美观,由于是AR7,来回重叠过多容易导致读图不清(我技术比较渣,这里慎用),藏note有些严重(这个嘛,我自己开了hidden试了一下一不留神就fail了,不过我技术很差就是了,条可以看你个人情况采用)还有一些节奏不太理解,比如00:24:306 (3) - ,01:22:070 (7,1) - 的衔接等等

「遮擋嚴重」的圖其實我滿喜歡...，於是我做徒的當下就打算做出這種圖了...=口=
AR7是極限，不能在高了(因為要低於INS難度)
這種類型的「遮蔽」應該是沒問題....(因為也是有很多遮蔽的圖啊...= =)
嘛，我再多蒐集各方意見好了

>,<马上要出去应酬,所以暂时先写这么多,你可以适当采用一下XD 歌很好听呢~加油蛤

Mok wrote:

Is that Hartmann from Strike Witches?

zoern66 wrote:

0.0
can i help you?
but i don't know much about how to make a map>.<

ooooooops wrote:

再幫你評一顆star
補字1補字2補字3補字4補字5...................

-Gamu- wrote:

SPOILER

hi-

All suggestions

[General]

●Tag: -Gamu- ×
　　　　 gamu ○
Please change

[Normal]

●00:13:498 - circle add
●00:16:107 (4) - 1 grid left
●02:15:548 (1) - short spinner . spinner remove

[Hard]

●OD+1
●00:13:498 - circle add
●02:48:343 (1) - 02:47:225 (2) - stack


[Insane]

●00:13:498 - circle add
●01:04:927 (6) - 01:04:182 (3) - stack to the end

●01:23:933 (3) - 01:22:256 (8) - stack

●02:00:082 (2) - 01:59:523 (4) - stack to the end


[Lunatic]

●00:40:703 (1) - 00:39:213 (2) - stack



Good map!!!!!!!!!!!!!]

BakaHuang wrote:

hii mod time

[general]
关于音效
以下mod很多都是个人的style 如果不喜欢可以skip
soft-finish尽量少用 多了反而让人觉得有点吵杂
如00:14:244-你可以找一个 custom hitsound-clap 与音乐自带的一个节奏音差不多的那种

[Lunatic]
00:13:498(1)-换成2条一样长短的silder (1)上加nor-whis (2)的头上加soft-finish
00:14:244(2,3,4,5)-(2) add clap ; (3) remove finish ; (4) add whis ; (5)头上取消音效 转折点上用clap 最后用finish
其实我觉得这样更好
[attachment=1:0916b]333.png[/attachment:0916b]
如果你也改成这样的话 就是(7)的头尾上分别加clap和finish
00:15:734(2,5)-change whis to clap
00:16:852(1)-换个样子 然后这段的音效和前面一段修改方式是一样的
[attachment=0:0916b]433.png[/attachment:0916b]
00:20:765(5,6)-时间轴上得位置交换
00:22:442(4)-换成finish
00:22:908(2)-add note
00:24:492(1,2,3)-(1)与(2,3)的时间轴上位置交换
00:31:386(1)-remove nc
00:31:759(5)-add nc (3,5)add whis (5)只要头上加
00:34:554(5)-(5)要和(3,4)同一排吗
00:37:536(5)-这个也jump一下？与(4,5,1)形成等腰三角形
00:39:958(1,2)-时间轴上位置对换 the same as 00:47:598-
00:50:393(3,4)-交换note位置
01:40:331?(6)-add finish , remove clap

to be continued ...

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Wcx19911123's mod queue~
feel free to ask me if you have anything trouble about this mod~

EASY diff doesn't have a preview time,and have a different OFFSET! oh...fixed

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Wcx19911123's mod queue~
feel free to ask me if you have anything trouble about this mod~

General:
BG is 1044*835, you should fix it~ 800*600 is better I think. 咦咦？這樣不會太小嗎？800x600可以？等待回復=w=

EASY diff doesn't have a preview time,and have a different OFFSET! 我沒注意到...=口=

Tag has " , " in it, not sure if it is ok. and the easy diff tag is different from other diffs. Other diffs have more space between "koigokoro Gamu". You should fix it I think.


And for your req, I only check the last 3 diffs~

Normal:
02:19:461 (1) - new combo bug, add new combo here. 好怪的bug啊XD


Hard:
Issue/unrankable stuff
01:19:088 (5) - Inherited Points is not snapped.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:15:548 (1,2,3) - spacing is weird,2 3 is closer than 1 2. maybe try to use grid level 4 to avoid this kind of problem. Same issues about these won't be mentioned again. 我不會調網格大小...
00:35:300 (2) - this overlap is kinda of ugly.
02:59:709 (1) - using a Kiai fountain at the end of this spinner would be nice imo=A= 同意OAO

Hitsound
00:22:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part should not add clap imo. I prefer still only whistles here.
00:31:759 (7) - Finish here?
00:32:132 (2) - clap on 00:32:505?
01:17:598 (3) - I think this finish is weird to listen.
01:22:442 (6) - use whistle instead of finish on the 2nd arrow of this slider? finish is kinda of loud.
01:27:846 (5) - I prefer to delete the finish on the tail of this slider.
02:16:107 (4) - ^ same
02:19:461 (2) - ^ delete finish? a little loud for me, just suggestion.
02:48:343 (1) - ^ won't mention again, these are just my personal suggestion, I think maybe you like 2 finish use together, my fault.是我的錯...你的建議比較OK :3


Insane:
Issue/unrankable stuff
It is a bit weird when hard diff using circle size 4 but Insane is 3.. and with the default skin, circle size 3 really a little mass..
01:19:088 (6) - again Inherited Points is not snapped.

Beatmap design/suggestion
seems good, played well. 噢耶><

Hitsound
00:23:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same suggestion as hard, clap sounds weird here.


Lunatic:
Issue/unrankable stuff
00:42:939 (3) - again Inherited Points is not snapped.
01:19:088 (6) - again Inherited Points is not snapped.
00:54:678 (2) - touching the hp bar.. 我都不知道有這條規定...= =

Beatmap design/suggestion
02:48:157 (4) - add a note here? kind of uncomfortable that no beat here. 啊呀，我想保留原來的樣子...
02:57:846 (5,6) - make these into a long slider? played more comfortable for me.

Hitsound
00:55:610 (1,2,3) - a little loud, low down the volumn a little bit?
00:55:610 (1,2,3) - weird whistles,maybe delete the whsitle on red tick and slider body, then volumn lower? current sounds too sudden and noisy.
02:20:579 (6,7,8,9) - same ^
02:35:672 (2) - why the finish is here? It really should be at 02:35:486 imo.
02:45:362 (5) - same ^ won't mention again, seems you do that on purpose.
02:50:393 (3,4,5,6,7) - too loud for me...
02:55:983 (5,6) - soft clap is more fit imo.
02:58:778 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think claps are kind of mess up. Only the last note need a clap imo.

我的K姐不可能这么萌的声音=A=

这么多star也不差我一个 我省个KUDO好了 SORRY.. 不會，省個KD去幫助有需求的人吧0.0

Nymph_ wrote:

BG的话 800 600或者640 480都可以吧
系統會自動填滿整個畫面0.0？

网格的话 在上面的菜单调：View---Grid Level---4
潛藏已久的謎題被輕易地解開了！OAO

然后你说的什么起始点什么NOTE的..我没明白什么意思..

Nymph_ wrote:

Issue/unrankable stuff
01:19:088 (5) - Inherited Points is not snapped.
這個...你翻譯一下看看有沒有跟我解讀的一樣...

最后 K姐我最喜欢的歌 必然是这个无误！=A=
KOTOKO-Sakuranbo Kiss
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/17667
這首歌也很Q~><

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph again~ and from ingame request~

-Gamu-'s Easy:
Issue/unrankable stuff
sorry to mention this again, but your preview time is different with others. Please check it in the osu file.
ATTACH[-1.jpg]

Lots of Inherited points are not snapped well, for example:
01:07:910
01:19:090
01:19:462
01:31:388
02:28:034
02:39:587
02:39:959

Check them and use the "Use current time" button to snap them well.

Beatmap design/suggestion
Feel really empty of this diff, really need to add some notes.
00:16:107 - add note?
00:19:088 - ^
00:22:070 - ^
00:51:883 - ^
01:06:045 - ^
01:06:790 - ^
01:21:697 - ^
01:32:877 - ^
01:33:623 - ^
01:36:604 - ^
01:37:349 - maybe make this slider more beautiful
01:40:331 - don't need to be a slider, a note is better.
01:54:678 - why this slider start at here? shouldn't it be started at 01:54:492?
01:55:237 - add note?
02:00:827 - ^
02:07:908 - ^
02:18:343 - ^
02:21:324 - ^
02:48:529 - ^
03:00:827 - note is better than slider, I prefer only a note here and add a finish on it.

Hitsound
00:25:796 (1) - I suggest not to silence this end of the spinner. Actually I prefer to make it even louder to help people get the rhythm, So I suggest to use volumn around 70, and maybe add a soft whistle on it.
00:50:393 (2) - maybe whistle again on the head of this slider?

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph again~ and from ingame request~


Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
00:31:014 (1) - this spinner is way too short for a normal diff!
01:10:517 (1) - still feel short. why not stops at 01:12:008, same length as the last spinner.
02:20:952 (1) - again short spinner.
02:30:827 (1) - same issues won't be mentioned again.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:28:778 (3) - not very beautiful, more symmetrical？
00:36:977 (1,2) - don't stack them please, like 3 4, they are fine.
00:49:461 (2) - little ugly.... well...

Hitsound
00:31:014 (1) - Finish is better imo.
00:43:685 (1) - ^
00:46:293 (1) - no hitsound is not a good idea, maybe add whistles on both head and tail?
00:50:393 (3) - Finish is better than clap imo.
00:55:983 (2) - delete this finish, really not necessary here.
00:58:591 (1) - and delete the finish on tail.
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - actually this part is early for claps, I think only whistle are better, well personal suggestion.
01:29:523 (4) - change the clap on arrow into whistle, this clap is very werid for only 1 clap among many whistles.
01:30:641 (5,6) - too loud with many finished, whistles maybe?
01:59:523 - actually here need a finish, but you have not beat here, so...
02:16:852 (2,3,1,2) - - why finish here? maybe delete it?
02:16:107 (5,2,4,2,4) - whistles are really better, claps are ok too. Finish.. no no no.
02:46:293 (6) - delete finish.
02:48:902 (2) - delete finish on first arrow and tail.
02:57:101 (1,2,3) - whistles on 1 2 and head of 3?

spboxer3 wrote:

recheck是嗎...
[-Gamu-'s Easy]
00:48:902 (1,2) - not pretty. really hmm....sorry If you leave this
01:03:064 (3) - NC no fixed
01:04:554 (5) - ^ no fixed
01:10:517 (5) - ^ no fixed
01:22:442 (3) - ^ no fixed
02:07:163 (4) - ^ no fixed
02:31:014 (3) - ^ 02:32:505 (4) - nc add
02:44:430 (6) - ^ fixed
02:59:709 (1) - too close to spinner finish ok.Reduced the note after the spinner.

spboxer3 wrote:

recheck是嗎...
音效不mod

[General]
很多難度的 03:00:734 - , 03:01:107 - 這兩個kiai time沒有在位置上 有啊，我檢查過了lol
極度建議最多4個diff就好 lol

[normal]
00:37:536 (2) - 這畸形了 我覺得還行..
01:09:399 (1) - (時間)距離轉盤結束太近了
01:12:380 (1) - 這太遠也(時間)距離轉盤太近
02:19:461 (1) - ^
02:22:442 (1) - 時間太近
太多了就不在挑轉盤的位置了全都改好了

[Hard]
別懶啦loool 拉條至少都要4個點以上
SV1.2在Hard裡面確實有些蛋疼了些
00:35:300 (2) - 黏住不行 怎麼說？
很多都是黏住的部份 可以的話希望你自己再看過一次因為真的太多了

[Insane]
說真的這我看到眼花了 note的排法好多都重複排 這不是一個好現象 因為對於新人mapper來說如何處理好那樣的排法是很困難的
還有就是spacing變化太過random了 給人太過突然的感覺 記得spacing變大是用來重點提示的 不是隨時都可以拿來用
像00:54:678 (1,2,3,4) - 這就不是個正常的spacing 第4個應該也是重音 可是你突然縮進來了
01:22:442 (1) - 太短是不能rank的 現在你有轉出2000但是這一定會被mat他們挑到爆的
01:29:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 這也是突然變化 讓人有種瞎了的感覺
01:59:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這排法太瞎眼了

說到底還是因為你的間距一開始沒有用好 太過黏在一起了 最起碼1/2拍的note不應該有碰在一起了 可是你都碰到了

跳的問題我都處理了，現在應該比較好看，不過「遮蔽」的特性我會堅持

[Lunatic]
00:32:877 (2,1,2) - 間距不平均 我覺得還可以...
00:34:554 (5) - 堆疊 OK
00:56:914 (4,6) - 這要對好阿 ... OK
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4) - 這要數一下格子 不能憑感覺就直接放了 你這歪掉了 OK
01:33:995 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 像這類的note連在一起 我們會用有弧度的排法來排這個 這樣會好看很多 我改變排法了
01:38:840 (5,6) - 這個感覺沒有對在節奏上 lol
02:08:654 (1,2,3,4) - 這種排法少用 為啥...？
02:19:088 (1,2) - 1/4拍連打最好別用slider配slider或note 我下次會注意...
02:41:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 這不好 反正就是很瞎眼就對了 mat首先是玩家後是modder阿 你讓玩家都不爽呢他怎麼會給你bubble呢

呃，瞎眼就不能RANKED？lol

這難度做的比其他你做的難度都好多了~

呼 mod完了~

I will be back wrote:

Lunatic

節奏都沒有什麼問題OAO''

我覺得這兩個滑條有點怪= =''

karenying wrote:

General
- BG應該是限制在1024*768或在此以下的,順帶一題現在這個是1044*835。
- osb最好刪掉。 都改好了

-Gamu-'s Easy
00:25:796 (1) - This spinner is too long for Easy,and too close to the next note.I suggest End at 00:30:268.
02:24:678 (5) - *nazi 2 grid up and 1 grid right

其他不想看了(...don't ask why)
不過有些kiai time好像是Unsnapped的,自己看。 一些是哪些...？=口=

winber1 wrote:

General
[b]-Gamu-'s

00:13:498 (1,2,3) - this feels awkward, cuz you are hitting the notes off the beat. I don't mind if you add a note at 00:13:498, but the three sliders should really start on one of the main beats, not the 2nd and 4th beat imo. 00:13:498 (1) - circle add
00:15:921 (4) - perhaps you could turn this into a slider that ends at 00:16:480 fixed
00:16:852 (1) - i would generally try to stay away from these in an easy diff. You can use them, but just use your discretion i guess. there's no point in adding them in random places that the music provoke.sorry.If you leave this
01:06:045 (7) - i would delete this note and extend 01:05:300 (6) - by one repeat. fixed

anyways, nice map! :3

terametis wrote:

Hi~~
These are all suggestions

[-Gamu-'s Easy]
00:22:815 (1)~(2)　　　Make it prettier (Example) fixed

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01:17:598 (2)　　　　　　Make it prettier fixed

good map
I wish your map is Ranked~~

karenying wrote:

-Gamu-'s Easy
00:25:796 (1) - This spinner is too long for Easy,and too close to the next note.I suggest End at 00:30:268. fixed
02:24:678 (5) - *nazi 2 grid up and 1 grid right fixed

其他不想看了(...don't ask why)
不過有些kiai time好像是Unsnapped的,自己看。

winber1 wrote:

General

--The kiai times are a little different. Also, start the kiai fountain at 03:00:827, not 03:00:734. And end it at 03:01:014 or 03:00:921.
OK

Lunatic

00:32:877 (2,5) - I would put these two notes in the same place. OK

01:08:281 (5) - This, like all other spots in the kiai that you have this pattern, just feels a little awkward imo... especially since it's off from the vocals... I would definitely recommend changing it to make it flow better, but not the most major issue if you decide to keep it (or just lazy D:<) lol,I want to keep this part...
01:38:840 (5) - new combo, Also, try this (it fits a lot better with the music imo): orz...I made the other thing(I delete the last slider)

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Insane

00:31:200 (5) - remove two repeats, then add a finish at 00:31:386, and then rearrange spacing (i.e. you can move 00:31:759 (1) - further away or something). OK
01:08:467 (x) - add note NO...
01:12:567 - it would be nice if you could follow vocals here and add a note here somehow. Maybe by turning the slider into something else or something. OK
01:52:442 (2) - i don't like having the end of the repeat slider moving away from the next note. Sometimes, these types of sliders can look they only repeat once if the player isn't really paying attention, or is not very experienced. OK
01:53:188 (3) - new combo? OK
02:45:548 (4) - add clap to beginning. add finish to the end OK

Hard

--looks pretty much fine. I guess one or two jumps make me question a bit, but they seem fine. ><

Normal

00:31:014 (1) - this spinner is definitely too short for a normal OK
00:37:536 (2) - i wuold not stack this note under combo 1 I agree with you...
00:47:784 (3) - move note back 1/2 tick and rearrange spacing. Then add a note at 00:48:157 - I made a 3/8 slider
01:14:244 (1,2) - could a little confusing especially with this approach rate. fixed


This was longer than the 10 minute rule that I had in my queue by quite a lot actually, but I still modded it. I don't mind that much really, and the song is quite nice :3, but it would be very appreciated still if you followed the time limit D: sorry & thank you very much! >A<, I didn't notice the time limit... orz

anyways, nice map! :3

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