As requested
[
General]
- mp3 doesn't sound too good to me. Can you try this mp3?
http://www.mediafire.com/?01pl5vkyc7ptwr9 Listen to the piano at the beginning and you'll see the difference. The offset I got is 2272, but some part feel really off (20ms late) so not sure about the offset. I will be modding to this offset through.
- Audio lead-in is 1004. Change to 1000 via notepad?
Folder looks fine, but I'm not experience with storyboard-related stuff so sorry If I miss anything.
[
Easy]
- Tick rate 1 look much better imo
- Quite high difficulty settings for an Easy. -1 hp drain and overall difficulty?
- Would prefer circle size 3, but your choice.
00:28:240 (1) - I don't' get why you didn't curve this slider, would look better.
00:30:398 (1,2,3) - ^
http://puu.sh/7fiG00:50:681 (1,2,3,1,2) - Too many straight sliders for my taste. Can you change (1,2,3) to like this?
http://puu.sh/7fj001:07:946 (1,2,3) - I would prefer this more,
http://puu.sh/7fjm Adjust (1) to be like the picture, then rotate each time by 45 degrees.
01:23:486 (1,2,3) - ^ Something similar here would be nicer.
01:30:392 (3) - Would be nicer if you curve this slider.
01:43:125 (2,3,4) - Feel like a box pattern, easiest to fix is to perhaps make (2) like this?
http://puu.sh/7fjU02:12:901 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:07:946. I feel you use too many straight sliders here as well.
02:29:734 (4) - Perhaps copy (1) and paste it over (4). Also Ctrl+J it as well? More interesting than a straight slider.
02:43:547 (5) - Nicer if you curve 5 so that you get this sort of pattern
http://puu.sh/7fkT.
02:48:727 (2) - Do something similar to (1) ?
http://puu.sh/7fl2. Prefer this over a straight slider.
03:22:395 (2,3) - Move 2 and 3 more right...
http://puu.sh/7fld Look nicer and better flow.
03:29:302 (4,5,6,7) - I would prefer if you make (4,5) a slider to follow the vocal and place them in a pentagon shape.
http://puu.sh/7flA.
03:31:029 (1) - And this slider should be curved.
03:41:388 (1,2) - Meh, straight sliders. Change to something more interesting?
03:44:841 (1,2,3) - ^
http://puu.sh/7flZ03:49:590 (4) - ^
http://puu.sh/7fmg03:57:791 (3,1,2) - Use red points for these sliders. Maybe like this for (1,2)
http://puu.sh/7fmQ04:28:866 (1) - Move the end point down 1 grid. Looks better to me.
Would be nicer with less straight sliders.
[
Normal]
00:19:178 (1,2,3) - Hm, this could be nicer, maybe this?
http://puu.sh/7fnZ00:22:199 (1,2) - Don't get why you didn't do something like this
http://puu.sh/7fnC.
00:28:671 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - More interesting if you rotate everything 5 degree anti clockwise. Be sure to fix spacing afterward.
00:42:051 (1,2,3,1) - Straight sliders :/
http://puu.sh/7foH Why not like this?
00:56:292 (1,2,3) - Hm, this instead?
http://puu.sh/7fp001:51:325 (2) - Ctrl+J and put back in same spot. Better flow (it points to next note) and is more interesting.
01:55:640 (1) - ^ Similarly here.
02:14:195 (4) - ^ Ctrl+J seems better to me.
02:23:044 (5) - Don't think you should overlap the slider track with each other. Just do a blanket or something else instead?
03:40:525 (5) - Should Ctrl+J this so it point to the next note.
04:23:255 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Make them go the other direction instead (counter clockwise instead of clockwise). More interesting. Easiest way is to Ctrl+J them all, but you get a mini jump (1.0x). But I think it's fine, since the jump is very small anyway. If not just rearrange them a bit.
Similar comment as Easy.
[
JoJo's Hard]
- Grid level 2? :S
00:05:251 (6) - Would prefer if you move this to x:148 y:88 (grid level 4) so that the jump is a bit easier and the spacing is more even.
00:17:021 - 00:27:593 - You should map here considering all the other difsf map this and this part doesn't feel like a break to me.
01:27:802 (5) - Curve this so it doesn't touch the hp bar.Look nicer as well.
01:32:119 (1,2,1) - 3 straight sliders pointing in the same direction is quite boring. Maybe move (2) up/down like this?
http://puu.sh/7frE01:39:241 (4) - Plays and looks better if you curve it
http://puu.sh/7frU.
01:40:535 (1) - 0.50x slider speed is way too unexpected. 0.75x slider speed instead. If you want to keep, try to make it more readable (unstack 4 for example).
01:42:046 (1,2,3) - Try a pentagon shape
http://puu.sh/7fsm. Better flow. Be sure to fix spacing if you follow this suggestion.
01:44:851 (2,3,1,2,3) - I don't like this at all, overlap doesn't look good and straight pattern. Try Ctrl+R (3,1) and then for the rest like this
http://puu.sh/7fs (adjust a bit so it look better than in the picture). Better flow and looks better to me.
02:05:565 (4) - Rotate this 45 degree clockwise.
http://puu.sh/7ftb02:08:370 (6) - Ctrl+J and put back to same spot perhaps?
02:12:901 (2,4) - Please curve them
http://puu.sh/7fts02:20:023 (7) - May be better to put new combo here instead.
02:34:045 (2,6) - I feel you can do something more interesting with the sliders.
03:33:828 (5,6) - Maybe put red point in the center of these sliders?
http://puu.sh/7fuu03:38:145 (1) - This slider shape doesn't look good to me and doesn't play very well. Would be nicer to try something else.
04:27:781 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 3.91x jump is too much for a Hard. Also the jump doesn't really fit and anti jump > jump equals bad flow. I recommend you just space the note out properly instead.
04:31:018 (6) - Not fond of the overlap with 3. Make the jump bigger perhaps? Or remap this part. You could also try a slider.
Pretty good, the only problem I have with this map is the 3.91x jump at the end. This should be changed. The rest is just suggestions.
[
KPY x Karen]
00:24:378 (3) - This straight slider felt really weird considering the moist of the sliders before this were curved. Please curve it. Perhaps move (1.2) down a bit so you have more room to curve the slider.
00:27:829 (1) - Perhaps move to x:28 y:60?
00:45:957 (5) - Again, feel out of place, please curve it.
00:50:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can you make the decelerated spacing a bit more gradual? Right now it's ,1.2x>0.9x>0.6x>0.5x>0.5x. So reduce spacing a bit for (1,2,3) ?
01:44:225 (3) - Should be curved or something else. Just make sure it's not straight. Same reason as 00:24:378.
02:03:429 (5) - I would prefer if you use 1.2x distant snapping for this rather than snapping to the end of slider (5) from previous combo. 1.0x feel a little bit flow breaking and 1.2x distant snapping looks better to me.
02:09:470 (3) - Again, curve this, same reason as previous suggestions.
02:12:922 (2,4) - I feel like this two sliders could look better, but it's fine as is.
02:15:511 (2) - Curve, same reason as before.
02:25:439 (1,2) - Feel more interesting if you Ctrl+J them and put back at same spot.
02:31:698 (2) - Should curve so it doesn't overlap with (6) from previous combo.
02:50:475 (2,3) - Red points for these sliders seem nicer.
http://puu.sh/7fyC03:12:488 (2) - Looks better if you Ctrl+J this.
03:16:373 (6,7,8) - Would look better if you snap this to 1.72x/1.73x distant snapping like the rest.
03:19:179 (3) - Ctrl+H and put back in same spot feel better.
03:26:301 (6) - Ctrl+R this slider to keep things interesting.
03:27:596 (2) - I would like to see something other than a straight slider here.
03:34:071 (2) - Ctrl+R and make this part more jumpy feel nicer.
03:37:524 (6) - Ctrl+R so the slider in this section don't all point to the same direction. Also, back and forth work really nicely with this difficulty.
03:38:819 (4) - ^ Making a jump here is also more fun.
03:46:589 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Straight patterns, maybe you can do something nicer?
04:25:865 (2) - Prefer if you move the center anchor point down (Ctrl+J, Ctrl+H, Ctrl+R or just manually move it)
http://puu.sh/7fA8.
04:28:887 (1) - Ctrl+H and put back in same spot feel better to me.
Pretty fun to play
All is suggestion. Most are just to curve sliders (I hate straight sliders) and so forth so don't be dazzled by my long mod. All difficulties are really good and quite polish.
This deserves a star so starred, good luck on rank.