Okeydokey
[Rito-Normal]
00:00:60 (1,2,3) - these notes feel kind of unnecessary, since right away it's a break. You're better off just allowing the intro to be skipped or whatever.
[Lala-Hard]
Ditto on the opening notes here.
As far as placement goes, that's really the only problem I had. There are some pretty tricky spots, but nothing a little bit of practice can't cure.
I don't get the sound volume going up and down, though. I'm not sure why it isn't just all at one level of volume =x
Spinner: like I said earlier, there's very little distinction in the colours, so it's hard to see the emblem. I spent a couple minutes pissin' about in Photoshop to get this:
I didn't do anything to the rough edges because I'm not sure if they're actually supposed to be smooth or not; I'm unfamiliar with the show. This would hopefully give you a rough idea of what I mean by contrast. You may use this spinner in place if you wish, but I personally think the rough edges should be cleaned up. (If it does fit the anime's theme, then ignore the clean up bit).
