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Other suggestions for future maps :
- 2009 in tags has no sense. Please remove it.
- I really dislike the dark blue in combo colours: Since the SB has a black-and-white background along major part of the song, the dark blue is pretty almost invisible. Please consider about switching it to another colour. White fits well imo.
- 00:40:350 (8) - New combo here... 15 combos are pretty ugly and since the difficulty has a HP Drain Rate of 7, I think they are really a lot.
- 00:54:235 (8) - ^ for the same reason. (14 combos)
- 01:48:780 (6) - I suggest to add another arrow; I think it will fit well although there isn't any kind of sound/beat in that moment. Up to you.
- 02:05:392 (1,2,3,4) - Well, the 4 is pretty far from the 1-2-3 pattern on the time-line. It's like a trap, in my opinion, since it's a jumpy pattern and the player could fail on the 4 by clicking it in advance. You should consider about finding a solution, maybe this way but it's pretty awful.
- 02:08:119 (10) - Same of 00:40:350 (8)
- 02:11:838 (3,4,5,6) - Lol, I like this! Well done Bassmy <3 Rhythmic and catchy!
- 02:20:888 (9,10,11,1) - Well, it could be hard to provide for a player since there is another 1/4 pattern just 1/2 before. I think it will fit well and it will be more expected if you make a jump. Just move those notes some grid up.
- 02:25:722 (10) - Same of 00:40:350 (8)
- 02:35:888 (?) - Unfilled space : Ugly. Make a triplet... This will fit well imo (2,3,4).
- 02:37:127 (8) - Same of 00:40:350 (8)
- 03:02:912 (11) - ^
- 03:26:342 (Timing Section) - Why suddenly change volume? Please keep the same of previous ones.
- 03:37:623 (8) - Same of 00:40:350 (8)
- 04:02:416 (8) - ^
- 04:06:383 (6) - ^ just for consistency of patterns.
- 04:16:053 (10,11,12) - Gleeeh, awful end. Please : 1) Make a new combo on 10 and 2) Try to place the final triplet in the centre of the axis.
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- 00:47:540 (1) - This is ugly for me. When you placed this spinner, it's like you broke the rhythm of the song you were following on the
- 00:44:565 (1,2,3) notes-set. Pleace just remove the spinner and places notes and sliders; this will fit well imo (I added the "4" and "5" hitcircles and the "1" slider)
- 02:20:764 (1) - Well, it's similar to what I said right above, but it's hard to find some solutions. Keep this or maybe just try to change it with notes and sliders.
- 02:22:995 (2) - It doesn't follow the vocal imo. Just move it 1/2 later and add a hitcircle on 02:22:995. Warning : If you want to follow this suggestion you should pay attention to the distance of 02:24:483 (1).
- 03:22:747 ~ 03:36:135 - I suggest to use Soft hitsounds like Bassmaster did on •Darkness•
- 04:00:433 - What??? This is the end? Orz, please map the whole song D:
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- 01:21:259 (8,9) - Well, those could be hard to read for a beginner. You can solve this just by letting them cross on each other like this
- 02:25:722 (7) - New combo.
- 03:05:888 (1) - This spinner is too fast for an Easy imo. Please consider about changing it with some notes.
Other suggestions for future maps :
- By checking the HP Drain Rate, be able to get an idea of what should be the maximum of combos you can use in a diff.