1. 2009 in tags has no sense. Please remove it.
2. I really dislike the dark blue in combo colours: Since the SB has a black-and-white background along major part of the song, the dark blue is pretty almost invisible. Please consider about switching it to another colour. White fits well imo.

1. 00:40:350 (8) - New combo here... 15 combos are pretty ugly and since the difficulty has a HP Drain Rate of 7, I think they are really a lot.
2. 00:54:235 (8) - ^ for the same reason. (14 combos)
3. 01:48:780 (6) - I suggest to add another arrow; I think it will fit well although there isn't any kind of sound/beat in that moment. Up to you.
4. 02:05:392 (1,2,3,4) - Well, the 4 is pretty far from the 1-2-3 pattern on the time-line. It's like a trap, in my opinion, since it's a jumpy pattern and the player could fail on the 4 by clicking it in advance. You should consider about finding a solution, maybe this way but it's pretty awful.
5. 02:08:119 (10) - Same of 00:40:350 (8)
6. 02:11:838 (3,4,5,6) - Lol, I like this! Well done Bassmy <3 Rhythmic and catchy!
7. 02:20:888 (9,10,11,1) - Well, it could be hard to provide for a player since there is another 1/4 pattern just 1/2 before. I think it will fit well and it will be more expected if you make a jump. Just move those notes some grid up.
8. 02:25:722 (10) - Same of 00:40:350 (8)
9. 02:35:888 (?) - Unfilled space : Ugly. Make a triplet... This will fit well imo (2,3,4).
10. 02:37:127 (8) - Same of 00:40:350 (8)
11. 03:02:912 (11) - ^
12. 03:26:342 (Timing Section) - Why suddenly change volume? Please keep the same of previous ones.
13. 03:37:623 (8) - Same of 00:40:350 (8)
14. 04:02:416 (8) - ^
15. 04:06:383 (6) - ^ just for consistency of patterns.
16. 04:16:053 (10,11,12) - Gleeeh, awful end. Please : 1) Make a new combo on 10 and 2) Try to place the final triplet in the centre of the axis.

1. 00:47:540 (1) - This is ugly for me. When you placed this spinner, it's like you broke the rhythm of the song you were following on the
2. 00:44:565 (1,2,3) notes-set. Pleace just remove the spinner and places notes and sliders; this will fit well imo (I added the "4" and "5" hitcircles and the "1" slider)
3. 02:20:764 (1) - Well, it's similar to what I said right above, but it's hard to find some solutions. Keep this or maybe just try to change it with notes and sliders.
4. 02:22:995 (2) - It doesn't follow the vocal imo. Just move it 1/2 later and add a hitcircle on 02:22:995. Warning : If you want to follow this suggestion you should pay attention to the distance of 02:24:483 (1).
5. 03:22:747 ~ 03:36:135 - I suggest to use Soft hitsounds like Bassmaster did on •Darkness•
6. 04:00:433 - What??? This is the end? Orz, please map the whole song D:

1. 01:21:259 (8,9) - Well, those could be hard to read for a beginner. You can solve this just by letting them cross on each other like this
2. 02:25:722 (7) - New combo.
3. 03:05:888 (1) - This spinner is too fast for an Easy imo. Please consider about changing it with some notes.

1. By checking the HP Drain Rate, be able to get an idea of what should be the maximum of combos you can use in a diff.

1. Tags: "2009" seems way too generic, plus it's not directly related to the map/song. You should remove it.

1. 00:51:507 (5,6,7) - I don't encourage using this kind of patterns for the easiest diffs, I'd suggest to either use a repeating slider or a simple slider.
2. 01:31:673 (1) - This spinner is bugged, it's missing a NC. This is an unrankable issue, make sure to fix it.
3. 02:10:102 - I don't find this break really necessary, the last break was 10 seconds ago. I strongly suggest to map this little break, remember to use Breaks properly.
4. 02:16:301 (6) - The last repeat felt rather unintuitive, rookies will expect only 1 repeat. I'd suggest to remove the last repeat, that will also leave a little space before the next spinner.
5. 02:21:755 (1) - This object is way too far from the centre, remember that post-spinner notes are quite hard for rookies. This is really important, try to tweak the pattern a bit.
6. 03:30:185 (6,7,1) - Same as before.
7. 03:40:598 (4) - As I said before, using only 1 repeat would be way more intuitive for rookies. Also, it fits the vocals better, try it.

1. 80% of the patterns tweaked/re-arranged.

1. 01:49:524 (7) - This jumps felt a bid odd, I think you should simply stack this circle.
2. 02:51:259 (1) - This circle felt quite unexpected, there isn't any noticeable rhythm here. I strongly suggest to remove it, also, if you leave that little blank the chorus won't feel too overmapped.
3. 03:30:557 (3,1,2) - This part looks quite messy, thus hard to read. Also, (2)'s 2nd arrow is barely noticeable, this might be a good reason to pop a bubble. I strongly suggest to re-arrange this pattern, try with little streams or a single repeating slider.
4. 04:04:152 (11) - After such a spacing change you better use a NC here, also the combo is way too long so you better do it.

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Your SB code is in both the .osb and the Darkness .osu; please either keep it in only the .osu or .osb files; otherwise osu! will draw it twice and thus lag twice as much unnecessarily. fixed

[Brightness]

Your sliders could be lined up a bit better on all difficulties; I'll just point out a few examples here and leave it to you if you have time. For example, 00:46:053 (5,6,7) - By looking at http://puu.sh/5R7y (specifically the approach circle), it's pretty clear that they're not perfectly rounded. Similarly, 01:16:797 (1) isn't symmetrical. If you move the points like http://puu.sh/5R7S, it'll be symmetrical. In general, they could just be tweaked a bit if you have time. fixed

In my opinion, for an Easy at 121 BPM, two beats should be the minimum recovery time after a spinner, and there's a lot of 1-beat ones, so I'd have a look at that.

[Contrast]

00:50:516 (5) - I feel like a pattern like http://puu.sh/5R8t would ease into the off-beats a lot better.
01:09:359 (5) - Kinda covered by 3; how about changing it like http://puu.sh/5R8N? Wouldn't be covered.
01:22:499 (1) - I'd recommend not stacking this to make timing a bit easier to read.
04:04:400 (1,2,3) - Same as before; hard to read because it's stacked, especially since all the previous ones were 1/1 and this is suddenly 1/2.

[Darkness]

Too easy for 13m. I'd say that's the biggest issue here. not really... a lot of easy to pass on the hardest level maps have got score more than 10 mln

02:20:268 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Can you make these separated a bit more? It's hard to see that they're 4 notes each, not 5, since most of your patterns are 3 or 5 notes. fixed

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Tags: "2009" seems way too generic, plus it's not directly related to the map/song. You should remove it. fixed

[Brightness]

1. 00:51:507 (5,6,7) - I don't encourage using this kind of patterns for the easiest diffs, I'd suggest to either use a repeating slider or a simple slider. fixed
2. 01:31:673 (1) - This spinner is bugged, it's missing a NC. This is an unrankable issue, make sure to fix it. fixed
3. 02:10:102 - I don't find this break really necessary, the last break was 10 seconds ago. I strongly suggest to map this little break, remember to use Breaks properly. fixed
4. 02:16:301 (6) - The last repeat felt rather unintuitive, rookies will expect only 1 repeat. I'd suggest to remove the last repeat, that will also leave a little space before the next spinner. fixed
5. 02:21:755 (1) - This object is way too far from the centre, remember that post-spinner notes are quite hard for rookies. This is really important, try to tweak the pattern a bit. fixed
6. 03:30:185 (6,7,1) - Same as before. umm there isn't any spinner before, anyway fixed
7. 03:40:598 (4) - As I said before, using only 1 repeat would be way more intuitive for rookies. Also, it fits the vocals better, try it. fixed

[Contrast]

1. 80% of the patterns tweaked/re-arranged.

[Darkness]

1. 01:49:524 (7) - This jumps felt a bid odd, I think you should simply stack this circle. fixed
2. 02:51:259 (1) - This circle felt quite unexpected, there isn't any noticeable rhythm here. I strongly suggest to remove it, also, if you leave that little blank the chorus won't feel too overmapped. fixed
3. 03:30:557 (3,1,2) - This part looks quite messy, thus hard to read. Also, (2)'s 2nd arrow is barely noticeable, this might be a good reason to pop a bubble. I strongly suggest to re-arrange this pattern, try with little streams or a single repeating slider. fixed
4. 04:04:152 (11) - After such a spacing change you better use a NC here, also the combo is way too long so you better do it. fixed

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RandomJibberish wrote:

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General
Set the offset to 16292 - it makes the menu look much nicer. ok

Darkness
00:47:531 (9,1) - This antijump isn't confusing so much as annoying fixed
lots of the spacing changes don't make much sense but it's all playable and I've seen worse so

Contrast
Credit this to Gonz in the diff name? You wouldn't know it was a guest diff unless you read the description. Also, the difficulty name doesn't fit with the others anyway. fixed
03:23:730 (4) - I am disappoint with this slider well I know that Gonzvlo should know better, but I've remade this slider and it's symetrical and looks okay really... http://puu.sh/6gXH - how it looks now

Brightness
Very high drain for an easy - it's higher than Normal's. Lower it a bit? I'd probably drop the OD and AR a tick too. fixed

abalee