This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, July 14, 2009 at 10:12:10 PM

Artist: Saeko Chiba
Title: Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan
Source: Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan
Tags: anime bokusatsu tenshi dokurochan dokuro chan chiba aeko
BPM: 170
Filesize: 1612kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. DJPop's Angel (5 stars, 359 notes)
2. Jar's Torture (4.99 stars, 244 notes)
3. Normal (4.44 stars, 225 notes)
4. Ryuukun's Hard (4.78 stars, 276 notes)

Download: Saeko Chiba - Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ok this bad boy is ready

Modded on IRC.

this anime is my favorite thanks

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

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DJPop wrote:

Collaboration request



Pipirupirupirupipirupii~~~☠

go for it DJPop

Lol, Dokuro-Chan X-D

Well, the map is still in progress, but I do have hope for this one so i'll give it a star. I'll be waiting to see how this turns out. :-3

Finished both catch the beat model and difficulty. Feel like correcting my badly covered graphical mistakes? Feel free to.



Download: Saeko Chiba - Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan (ztrot) [Jar's Torture].osu

Wheeee~ She clubs her to death so many times.

[Normal]:
00:13:13 (x) - Circle here?
00:15:95 (7) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3.
00:23:72 (4,5) - I dislike this inconsistent spacing.
00:43:66 (7) - Move to make it between (6) and (8). If you don't want it that way, move the whole vertical line closer.

[Jar's Torture]:
00:22:66 (1) - Why not make this to where the fading (2-5) was?

I didn't do anything exhaustive, forgive me on that.

The mp3's quality isn't something I totally love...if you can find a better one, then please do so...But that would mean new offset...:/

Add a lead-in time...Probably of something like 1.5-2 seconds.

Can't wait for more difficulties!

I can't hear the song D=

Download: Saeko Chiba - Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan (ztrot) [DJPop's Angel].osu


+Star

DJPop wrote:

I can't hear the song D=

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+Star

ok i'll see what might be wrong ok if if does it again plz tell me

Normal
00:10:48 (6) - Look at eats that are 1/2 away from each other, they overlap, the slider start is NOT overlapping the 5 slider.
00:14:19 (1) - this is farther from the last combo then the spacing of beats that are 1/1 full stanza apart.
00:25:48 (1) - Same as ^.
00:31:13 (6) - Same as ^.
00:43:66 (7) - This isn't overlapping the 6 as much as other beats like this.
00:48:78 (2) - Slightly too far like 00:14:19
00:53:72 (1) - Same as ^.
00:54:78 (5) - Same as ^.
00:55:66 (9) - Same as ^.
01:22:66 (2) - Same as ^.

Jar's Torture
00:24:78 (1,2,3) - With hitcircles of that size and difficulty, I don't think this is a intuitive jump at all.
00:32:54 (12) - Make this a new combo?

DJPop's Angel
00:45:60 (1,1,1,1) - Now this is a intuitive jump that I like
No issues here.

Wow the girl can't sing. She kills cats on high notes also a better quality of .m3 would be nice...
starred for the complete humor on this map.

GFdsarfear

Download: Saeko Chiba - Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan (ztrot) [Jar's Torture].osu

[Normal]
00:43:664 (7-11) - Right 1 grid. (Lvl 4 grid)
01:07:488 (1) - Not sure aboute this, but... Maybe remove this note?

[Jar's Torture]
00:22:664 (1) - Hmm~ Maybe down 2 grid?
00:24:605 (6-1) - Zomg, so evil jump.
00:31:841 (9) - New combo?

Great map, starred.

Forgot the star.

took me some time but here it is

Download: Saeko Chiba - Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan (ztrot) [Ryuukun's Hard].osu

[Normal]:
00:23:72 (4,5,6) - Spacing~ (4 and 5)
01:07:48 (1) - Is this beat needed?

[Ryuukun's Hard]:
00:18:95 (1,1,2,3) - Where's the whistles?
00:41:90 (1,2) - Inherit the timing sections here!
00:47:54 (1,2) - Where's the inherited timing sections here?
00:53:19 (1,2) - Inherited timing sections.
01:04:48 (1,2) - Same as above. If you're going to stick with something, best to stick to it. If not, then remove the timing sections from the beginning there.
01:10:13 (1,2) - Same as above. Pattern?
01:15:78 (1,2) - Same as above.

[Jar's Torture]:


[DJPop's Angel]:
Lovely stuff.

This is a good map now. I still have qualms about the low volume or the gentleness of the Soft soundset towards this. The mp3 once more can always need some revision, but there's always those offset cahoots.

On Ryuukun's Difficulty, there's those two timing sections that can tell a lot. Either you want to have those Claps (The 1-2) as soft, or those were there by accident. I had my own style when doing the thing up there. Perhaps you can do your own way, Ryuukun/ztrot. This still needs to corrected, regardless.

I wish you my best of luck.

there we go.

totaly forget this timing section xD
was intending to make all of them like this but claps just sound better.

Edit:
one more thing.
its TV size so put in a (TV Size)

Download: Saeko Chiba - Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan (ztrot) [Ryuukun's Hard].osu

The music is very quiet. Please use a program to make it louder.

So happy you don't have the video

Normal:
00:11:37 (1,2,3) - nazi mod: inconsistent spacing
00:18:95 (9) - align with 7
00:31:13 (6) - make the same distance from 4 that 5 is
00:37:13 (2,3) - make parallel to 1,4
00:43:48 (6,7) - the spacing between these 2 is huge
00:45:60 (2,3,4) - nazi mod: inconsistent spacing
01:04:13 (7) - align with 3
01:21:95 (1) - center between 11 and 12
01:26:72 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
01:27:43 (7) - align with 5?

Ryuukun:
00:11:72 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1
00:21:60 (6) - nazi post: too far (the gap makes the spacing here look weird)
00:23:72 (1) - make the same spacing from 3 as 2 is to 1
00:34:31 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 6 to make 2,3,4 a straight line
00:37:13 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 2
00:46:66 (5) - make a horizontal reflection of 1
00:49:13 (1,2) - make parallel to the following combo's 1,2
01:03:25 (4,5) - make a vertical reflection of 2,1 respectively
01:10:66 (1,2) - make parallel to the next combo's 1,2
01:12:42 (1,2) - make parallel to the previous 1,2
01:20:36 (5) - put underneath the purple 1,2
01:24:95 (2,3,4) - make a straight line
01:27:25 (7) - make a horizontal reflection of 7
01:27:60 (9,10,11,12) - make a vertical reflection of 5,4,3,2 respectively

Jar:
00:22:66 (1) - align with 9?
00:42:95 (4) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:48:78 (3,4,5) - make a straight line
00:49:13 (5,6,7,8) - make a straight line
01:00:69 (5,7) - new combo to show change in timing of beats
01:19:13 (1) - might ant to extend 3 measures

DJPop:
could not find anything

Nice beatmap. Star.

nazi mod =_=
fine... here is the result

Download: Saeko Chiba - Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan (ztrot) [Ryuukun's Hard].osu

I really like this map...Yeh, it's very funny

<Normal>
The only thing to say I don't like is
01:09:78 (8) - this one, I don't like its alignment (i think)...I'd move it down...at the height of 6 and 7...but with correct spacing

I think there are some parts too hard for being a Normal...maybe you should change some of them into easier parts.

<Ryuukun's Hard>
00:07:13 (1) - 1 less repeat
00:09:95 (1) - ^
00:19:135 (1,2,3) - I'd remove those 3...It sounds better without
00:26:900 (5) - I'd remove this one and use a finish on the previous note (4)
00:28:31 from here...spacing changes drastically...it seems be fast but it isn't...
00:39:25 (1) - remove new combo

<Jar's Torture>
00:18:25 (6) - it sounds better without
00:21:07 (5) - ^
00:24:60 (6,1) - Isn't this too much? O_O too hard I think...and spacing is confusionary

<DJPop's Angel>
Hehe, you already know I love your maps, Nothing to say here! You're one of my favourites beatmappers

Ah, yes...Star here

Zodiark1020 wrote:

<Ryuukun's Hard>
00:07:13 (1) - 1 less repeat no
00:09:95 (1) - ^ no
00:19:135 (1,2,3) - I'd remove those 3...It sounds better without no (instead added one more)
00:26:900 (5) - I'd remove this one and use a finish on the previous note (4) no
00:28:31 from here...spacing changes drastically...it seems be fast but it isn't... fixed
00:39:25 (1) - remove new combo) fixed

Ah, yes...Star here

Download: Saeko Chiba - Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan (ztrot) [Ryuukun's Hard].osu

General
Please, make the MP3 louder.

Normal
Feels kinda like a Hard...
Decrease Overall Difficulty to make it easily playable in Hard Rock.

00:33:95 (1,1,1) - These three combos all start around the same place. Maybe rotate the second one or something to make it less boring in that regard.
01:08:90 (5,6,7,8) - May be confusing. I read it perfectly though.
01:24:78 (6) - New combo?
01:28:66 (9) - Jump.

Ryuukun's Hard
I don't really like this difficulty for one reason: the combos ruin it. They confuse me, at least, and make the map less enjoyable.

Thus, I'm going to comment on the combos for the most part. Take these suggestions if you wish; please don't think I'm forcing you to take them.

00:07:13 (1,2) - Swap new combos.
00:09:95 (1,2) - Swap new combos.
00:17:19 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't fit the song.
00:17:72 (1,1) - Remove new combos.
00:19:66 (4) - Move up for symmetry.
00:18:95 (1,1) - Remove new combos.
00:21:25 (4) - Add new combo iff you have a new combo on 00:18:42.
00:25:48 (4) - New combo.
00:26:19 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:32:54 (4) - New combo.
00:39:25 (8) - New combo.
00:42:42 (1,1,1,1,1) - One combo please.
00:48:78 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I personally would swap these but it's completely fine as-is.
00:51:95 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:54:78 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:57:60 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:07:30 (1,2,1) - Too close.
01:14:54 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:17:36 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:21:25 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:21:78 (1) - Flip horizontally.
01:23:89 (2) - New combo.
01:27:60 (9) - Add new combo iff you have a new combo on 00:18:42.

Jar's Torture
Very creative.
Hit sounds are a bit quiet.

00:29:37 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Long combo.
01:02:19 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - etc. Repeat; kinda lame. Maybe have them in a different pattern, like the wiggly sliders curving up then the currently curving sliders going down.
01:04:48 (8,9) - etc. Clap?

DJPop's Angel
Increase Stack Leniency so 00:41:54 (3,4) stacks.
Hit sounds are a bit quiet.

Cake.

Download: Saeko Chiba - Bokusatsu Tenshi Dokuro-Chan (ztrot) [Jar's Torture].osu