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That timing. ><
[General]02:50:693 - It would have been cool to have silenced sliderslides for the quiet parts like this
[Storyboard]
The names for the SB have this glow effect that seems to have been applied a bit too rigorously. Think you can smooth out those edges on all of the SB names?
[Easy]Change this line
256,192,17093,12,4,21693
to this line
256,192,17093,12,4,21683
to snap the spinner end correctly.
[swish]
00:35:199 (1,2) - This overlap could be easily avoided.
00:38:825 (4) - I don't recommend stacking notes under slider ends for easy difficulties. They're hard to tell what the rhythm is for newer players.
01:04:540 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Surely you could have found a more interesting rhythm than this.
01:19:045 (4,1) - Ugly overlap ><
02:59:924 (1) - You should raise the volume here. Can't hear the hitsounds when the music kicks in.
04:05:858 (3,4,1) - These should all have soft finishes on them.
04:13:554 (1) - ^
[Sorda]
01:46:243 (1) - Is this blue tick note intentional? I wouldn't recommend it for an easy. As a slider it would be more acceptable.
02:19:045 (4,1,3) - The soft finishes on these didn't fit at all.
02:23:001 (1) - Feels better like this:
03:30:254 (4) - to 03:49:704 - is so blaaah rhythmically. It's all 1/1/1/1/1
Overall it's okay, but it gets a little boring in some parts since you're just hitting on the beat to a very slow beat.
[Normal]01:05:199 (2,2,1) - Finishes don't fit on these to me
01:35:364 - Strange not having a note to hit here considering how much you follow the vocal for the chorus.
02:08:166 (1,2) - Easily avoidable overlap
02:18:715 (1,1) - Finishes don't fit on these to me
02:23:990 (2,3) - This overlap is kinda bad. :<
03:07:836 - Should raise the volume here.
04:12:840 - Set this to soft hitsounds so it doesn't have that "pop" noise
[Taiko]Feels really over-mapped during quiet parts of the song. :/
[kpy]
02:38:001 (195,196) - Really? Going with the vocals instead of the band? With drums?! Then starting your own riff where the rest of the band is resting? 2;jo;uadfu;doj Turn in your drummer card please.
04:11:088 (556) - No need for a finish on this. Would fit better as a k if you absolutely -must- have a note where nobody else in the band is playing anything
04:13:554 (1) - :/
KanaRin has stuff along the lines of the mapping along parts that aren't really appropriate for taiko drums to be at all as well, but eh.
[Hard][Storyboard]
01:13:111 - rEdo's name just disappears here instead of fading out or whatever.
01:14:430 - And farto's name just appears. No transition.
03:39:485 - Spinning farto's name doesn't fit here at all. Just do a fast fade.
[fartownik]
00:42:452 (4,5,1) - Move these down and right a little so that the stacking doesn't ugly up the pattern
01:23:331 (4,5) - Feels kinda cramped. Also has the same issue as earlier, though there's nowhere to go. :/
03:12:287 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This part doesn't read very well at all. From the 3 slider that feels off and the squished spacing to the small jump to the slown down slider. It'd play better if you had a hitcircle at 03:12:287 - then have sliders from 03:12:452 - to 03:12:617 - etc. and have the squished part start at 03:13:111 - and hopefully have a smoother transition through the patterns from 03:14:100 (6) - to 03:14:430 (1) -
03:29:595 (3,4,1) - Scraping the HP bar a bit here
[Collab]Maybe rename to Insane? Easy, Hard AND the Taiko were all Collabs as well.
[Sorda]
Your new combo usage has almost no discernable pattern during the beginning. Please try to follow something, be it the vocalist, the stanzas, or whatever. Right now it's just kind of a mess.
[Patchouli]
00:17:193 (1) - Extend this 00:21:293 -
[KanaRin]
00:38:825 (5) - Sticking into HP bar
00:49:375 (3) - ^
00:53:331 (1) - This spinner doesn't feel right to me.
01:48:386 (4,2) - This overlap necessary?
02:01:737 (6) - This one was really bad. You switch between going with the stacked slider start/ends to this? Please choose one or the other.
02:01:902 (1,2) - Easily avoidable overlap
02:07:177 (1) - Your use of short spinners to finish your parts doesn't fit very well at all. :/
[Muya]
01:16:573 (7,1) - Easily avoidable overlap
02:50:693 (1) - This slider speed feels rather over-the-top for such a slow part of the song.
03:06:518 (2) - ^
03:15:419 (7) - Should reduce one repeat and add a note at 03:15:748 -
03:39:485 (1) - Slider speed feels pretty fast for this part too.
[Sorda]
01:26:298 (6,1,2,3,4) - I really don't like the way this pattern flows. It goes against everything else you mapped in your part. :/
04:01:243 (2,3) - Kinda ugly overlap
04:11:088 - Should start using soft hitsounds by here.
[ykcarrot]
02:37:507 (1,2) - Switching from the band to the vocal at 02:38:001 (1,2) - was kinda weird. Maybe add in another note at 02:38:331 - to cover everything.
Sorry to be picky, but it's supercell, so I want it to be the best it can be. :D
Easy could use the most attention, though.