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Hatsune Miku - Shooting Star

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Shinxyn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on April-08-09 at 3:40:27 PM

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Shooting Star
BPM: 130
Filesize: 7120kb
Play Time: 02:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.82 stars, 375 notes)
  2. Normal (4.2 stars, 275 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Shooting Star
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Shooting Star by Hatsune Miku from Re packaged
done for James' beatmap project forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=10323
Feel free to nazi my hitsounds and random jumps

-Fixed what Skyripper suggested except the 02:04:01 (I just used Linear instead) and hard's 1:27:09 is fine because the notes before will stack and look lower so the 5 should match the beats when playing (not in edit)
-Followed most of Mafia's suggestions. Hmm.. I would have thought people wouldnt like that slider as much.
-Fixed matty's suggestions but still can't do Full submission on my computer to send the "storyboard"... Had someone else help me submit on their computer, thanks! (I trust that person) (and sorry for poor first time storyboarding)
-Fixed minyeob's
-Followed Matty's kiai times.. now its more like "Flinging Star" instead of "Shooting"
-Followed most of Metroid's suggestions.
-Made minor self changes (to try to avoid farther nazi-ism)
-Followed An64fan's intructions.
-Applied some of the hitsound changes on James' copy to own instead of replacing completely. Removed quite a bit of hitsounds, and applied a fair amount of suggestion from James, too, though I have minor doubts in some parts now, oh well, it'll need more mods.
-changed offset
Skyripper
Love the map. :) I am suffering from the glitched offset thing, but I can still mod it pretty fine.

[Normal]
00:47:62 (2,3,4,5) - move down a little starting with the 2 to match the end of the slider. This will in turn make the 5 line up with the 1 in the new combo (to the right)
02:04:01 (1) - This doesn't look that great and is a little confusing, but it goes with the style of the map alright I guess (don't hate me!). Also, the end of it doesn't match the spacing for the rest of that combo.
02:06:55 (5) - Move down slightly to match next combo
02:44:39 (1) - Niice!
02:54:78 (2) - I'm not really getting this 2 musically but then again I have the gimp offset, so I could just not be hearing it..

[Hard]
01:27:09 (5) - Hair up to match combo
02:04:01 (1) - same as up there somewhere

Anyway, nothing major. You're a really good mapper, it was hard to find anything wrong with these difficulties so I had to nitpick. So, sorry in advance :)

Star (haha)!
Mafiamaster
Just suggestions:

Normal~
00:05:16 (1,2,3) - Idk, maybe highlight these three and have 2 stack on the fading 4.
00:42:20 (1) - Is this suppose to be here? Or on that white tick?
02:16:70 (1) - I'd have this stacked on the fading 2.

Hard~
01:27:09 (5) - Move up a tick. (Ok, I just read the posts above, you don't have to do this)
02:30:55 (6) - I'd move this closer to 5.

LOVE THAT AWESOME SLIDER AT THE END.

I'll shooting a priority star your way. ;)
mattyu007
Timing
Sounds fine to me.

Hard
00:49:47 (2) - Might wanna move this farther away from (1)
01:09:09 - 01:14:62 - This section seems to lack hitsounds =/
02:43:93 (3) - Space this evenly between (2) and (4)
02:47:85 (1) - Rework this so that it is easier to tell how the slider moves or storyboard guide arrows for the player to follow
This seems to drop off very suddenly, maybe add a spinner from 02:55:01 - 02:57:55?

Normal
02:44:39 (1) - Same as on Hard.
This also seems to drop off quite suddenly, maybe add a beat here 02:55:24 and here 02:55:70

Overall
Overall, very nicely mapped, very nice song too :) Fix this and you get a bubble
Paulo8624
Not really a mod post, but this map is really incredible! I don't have nay problems with the beatmap, and it's quite creative too!

I look forward to see this map ranked ^^
minyeob
[Normal]
0:34:704(7)-> Don't stack with a slider.
2:16:170(5)-> Slider (X) Hit Circle (O)- Do you know what I mean? Remove a slider and put a hit circle on there.
2:55:245(3)-> Spacing Error. Move right a bit.

[Hard]
17:169(7),(8)-> Make closer from (6).

Nice map.
Star'd

EDIT: Normal 2:16:170-> 2:26:170
Sorry. :(
Topic Starter
Shinxyn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
mattyu007
Kiai time! :3
All the EVEN NUMBERS are Kiai time.
For Easy, just mark the last 1/2x section as no Kiai and ignore section 7 below

1. Offset: 321ms BPM: 130.00
2. Offset: 2,167ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 17,397ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
4. Offset: 79,704ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
5. Offset: 109,244ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
6. Offset: 138,782ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
7. Offset: 167,859ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)

Also for [Hard], could you storyboard a few more guides on the pretty shooting star? :)

Easy
00:32:16 - 00:36:09 - More hitsounds?
02:27:32 - 02:34:47 - ^
02:38:85 - 02:43:93 - ^
Hitsounds seemed to get weaker at the end ._.
vytalibus
OMG why isn't this bubbled yet? *bubbles*
Metroid
You requested a mod from me..

Normal
00:38:524 - Add a break here?
02:05:168(1) - Just a suggestion, Either kill the star slider or allow the combo to be visible....

Hard
01:19:705(8) - Just a suggestion, Add a soft finish....
02:16:244 - Add a beat here with a whistle... Just another Suggestion.
02:33:090(6) - Pure suggestion nazi, Make this slightly touch the 5 like the rest of the song...

Done, If I were a BAT I'd ask for small things then rank but here's a star for ya...
An64fan
Pop.

Resnap all notes.

Normal
~0:37 - Should there be a break here?
02:09:55 (7,8,9) - Clean up spacing between these.
02:43:24 (1,2,3,1) - Spacing.

Oh, and the skinning is fine. :)
James
request:
i dont want this ranked right now.
i want the whole project to be ranked at the same time.
so if you want to submit another map, just graveyard this one first or something.
Topic Starter
Shinxyn

James wrote:

request:
i dont want this ranked right now.
i want the whole project to be ranked at the same time.
so if you want to submit another map, just graveyard this one first or something.
First off, I need to work on this to the point it can get ranked....?
James
ok i change my mind in ranking everything all at the same time, its impossible.

first of all, hitsounds doesnt sound good after all. those claps are good, but placed in the wrong part of the song.
if i tell you that you need to change the whole thing, you might change the whole map too, so i just add/remove hitsounds randomly and hope that it sounds better than the original (because i dont like what i did here either)

you could use the file or not. its up to you.
if you want to change everything, here are some pointers that you might not understand lololol
dont use claps randomly.
dont spam whistles. i'll hate you for that.
try to listen to every hitsound you use on each part. its good if it sounds good to your ears. its bad if it is "so-so"

ok its modding time.

NOTE: these are ALL SUGGESTIONS, you can ignore all of them if you want to. its all good~

hard:
00:05:85 (3,4,5,6) - 3 and 4 = slider ; 5 and 6 = another slider
00:07:70 (1,2,3,4) - change into something... longer? like follow the vocal
00:11:39 (3,4) - use the slider similar to 00:09:55 (5)?
00:40:93 (4) - slider that ends in 00:42:09? use 1/2 bpm if ever
00:51:55 (2) - change 00:51:55 to a circle and 00:51:78 to a slider that ends in 00:52:47? not sure
01:00:55~01:01:24 - do something about this part, like the one you did in 00:32:16~00:50:16 up to you where to pinpoint which part am i talking about
01:09:09 (1,2,3,4) - 1 and 2 = slider ; 3 and 4 = slider?
01:16:47 (7,8,9) - do you really need to use triplet (osu term) for this?
01:17:85 (4,5,6,7,8) - 1 beat (repeating) sliders?
01:26:16 (3,4,5) - change 3 into a slider that ends in 4? and circles in 01:26:85 and 01:27:09
01:36:32 (4) - slider that ends in... idk where it ends!
01:38:85 (2) - same
01:43:70 (2) - slider that ends in 01:44:39
02:24:32 (1,2,3,4,5) - spinner?
02:33:55 (8) - longer slider~
02:38:85 (1) - slider that ends in circle 2
02:44:39 (4) - SB arrow? or make the endpoint appear like 70%
02:55:01 - circle with clap
02:55:24 - circle with clap
02:55:70 - circle with finish, and then the spinner starts afterwards. or you can just remove the spinner part.

normal:
i dont care hahahahaah its fine anyways.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Shooting Star (Shinxyn) [Hard].osu
mtmcl
Don't tell anyone I bubbled your map.

You can tell everyone I also Markstarred it for priority though.

...

...

In other, words, bubbled.
Zekira
D: *is offset nazi*

Sorry but I find the starting offset comfortable with 291. Not sure though, but when playing on Test, I get an avreage of 50% mistimed hits with the current 321. If I adjust it to 291, I get an average of 25% mistimed.

If ever you do adjust to 291, don't forget to adjust all the other timing sections.

...I'd like a better nazi to comment on this, but as of now offset is the best thing I nazi.
mattyu007
291 is really early for me...
Also the other sections don't need adjusting because they are Inherited.

309 Offset and you get my
mattyu007
Ranked then <3
Zerostarry
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Shinxyn

Zerostarry wrote:

Offset is still early for me.. i'm using +30 ms :(
:o not good?
mattyu007
@shin: If the offset needs to be adjusted, it doesn't need to be deranked or anything

@danny: +30?!?! O.o;
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