justnobody wrote:

[General]
please find another BG file, then FULL resubmit your beatmap.
your BG must have a resolution of 800*600 or 1024*768.
avoid non-english filename since my osu can't read your bg.

[Pereira's Hard]
00:20:201 (x) - i expected a note here...
00:23:138 (x) - ^
not much to pick.
though i would like the hitsound to be slightly louder it's completely fine now.

[Insane]
00:34:572 (1) - why short sliders?->fixed

00:38:453 (1,2,3,4) - i would like all the claps here to be whistle. the claps are... not too fit imo.->fixed

01:01:215 (3) - spacing? and i think moving (3,4,5,6) about 4 or 5 grids would look better...->fixed

01:15:376 (1) - start 1/2 later or 1/2 earlier?
if you decide to start 1/2 earlier then remove 01:15:166 (5).->fixed

01:17:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since you used lower distance snap in the 1/4 streams before i would consider this as spacing.->fixed

01:25:865 (4,5) - spacing->fixed

01:40:551 (1,2,3,4) - same as before...no claps but whistle?->fixed

01:59:432 (x) - add note with clap?
02:21:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - arrrrgh too difficult. maybe it's not difficult for you though.
02:51:355 (2) - reverse this slider?->fixed

03:41:180 (4,5,6,7,8) - make them straight->fixed

i feel that toooooo much noisy claps are in this diff.

[Inhuman]
00:22:509 (1,2,3,1,2) - make the sliders symmetrical to each other? now they don't look good.
00:35:096 (2,3) - these sliders looks a bit senseless...(sry again if i'm too harsh)
00:59:222 (1,2,3,4) - spacing in (2) and (3)...?
01:13:697 (1,2,3,4) - ^->fixed

01:24:816 (4,1) - still spacing...
01:37:194 (2,3) - same as the one before.
01:40:551 (1,2,3,4) - make them symmetrical?
02:04:886 (4) - new combo?->fixed

02:21:670 (1,2,3,4) - (nazi) align horizontally->fixed

03:25:446 (1,2,3,4,5) - at least make some shapes here....->fixed

03:32:159 (4) - new combo?->fixed

03:41:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - though it looks silly... i would like you use this to replace 02:21:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) in [insane]
03:55:446 (2) - (nazi) 1 grid right->fixed

03:58:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make them a better curve?->fixed

i can't complain about the difficulty since it's inhuman...
but some of the sliders in this diff is... VERY ugly imo.
and some of the placements of notes in this diff is....no good either.(sry if i'm too harsh)

Special offer:
i decide to take a quick look on normal. so here is the issues i found:
[Normal]
don't use 1/6 beat snap with no reason since it confuses modders. reset it to 1/2.
00:50:411 (x) - i think there should be a note here->fixed

00:50:830 (1,2,3,4) - (1) don't fit the music. remove the whistles in (2,3,4).->fixed

01:16:215 (1,2) - shouldn't there something between them?
just a quick look so not very many.

maybe i'm late.
i don't know how many suggestions here you have fixed.

akrolsmir wrote:

Second half of mod as promised. AIBat looks good, so...

Insane:
00:14:327 (4) - Not symmetric->fixed
00:18:732 (4) - I was expecting another repeat slider, like (1,2,3). I think it would fit well here.
00:48:942 (6) - The second repeat caught me by surprise, eliminate it?
00:59:432 (1,2) - These were frustrating since the first repeats once as normal, so I expected the second to also repeat once but it repeats like 5 times.
01:29:642 (1) - Looks ugly IMO->fixed->fixed
01:31:320 (1) - Stream seems overmapped, also i wished you'd use a consistent spacing for 1/4th notes like this.
01:48:103 (4) - Noticeably asymmetrical->fixed
02:01:530 (7) - ^^^^->fixed
02:05:725 (1,4) - Pick one and make the other a copy? (I like 1 better)->fixed
02:27:753 (9,10) - ^->fixed
03:35:516 (1,2) - ^->fixed
04:01:949 (6) - Make this repeat only twice, just like (4,5), so it's more consistent, and perhaps place a note on 04:02:369.

This diff seemed kind of... formless to me. Try putting in a few more patterns and having a coherent style.

Inhuman:
00:13:697 (2,3) - I see the pattern of sliders having a reflection, and I like it... but why aren't the sliders in question identical? Choose one, and make the other a copy of it so that the pattern looks better.->fixed
00:20:201 (1,2) - ^->fixed
00:22:509 (1,2) - ->fixed
00:23:558 (1,2) - ^->fixed
00:25:865 (1,2,3,4) - I like what you're trying to do here, but try making the expansion a lot more noticeable. Like, you currently expand from 1.5 to 1.7 to 1.8x. I'd recommend something like 1.3 to 1.7 to 2.1x.->fixed
00:31:110 (1,2) - See 00:13:697 (2,3)->fixed

00:35:096 (2,3) - ^->fixed

00:41:809 (1,2) - ^->fixed

01:22:299 (1,2) - ^->fixed

01:26:285 (7) - Try to make this more symmetric, see the guide on delicious sliders for help.->fixed
01:27:124 (1,2,3,4) - Why the random spacing here?->fixed
01:36:774 (1) - Put this note in the exact center?->fixed
01:37:194 (2,3) - See 00:13:697 (2,3)->fixed

01:50:621 (5,6) - ^->fixed

02:01:320 (1,2) - ^->fixed
02:05:725 (1,2) - ^->fixed
02:07:194 (4,6) - ^->fixed
02:17:054 (4) - The way the notes are it's almost impossible to tell which way that goes- in fact I assumed it would be going the other way based on how the other (1,2,3) was. This is probably unrankable, try and fix.->fixed
02:30:061 (1,1) - See 00:13:697 (2,3)->fixed
02:51:879 (1) - Try and get symmetric please.->fixed
02:55:236 (2,4) - See 00:13:697 (2,3)->fixed
03:04:677 (1,2) - Try and get symmetric please.->fixed
03:12:858 (1,2) - See 00:13:697 (2,3)->fixed
03:58:802 (1) - Feels overmapped

This feel like it had more shape to it compared to Insane, which is good. However, really try and fix the symmetry and making the sliders identical. Here, copy+pasting will not only save you time, it'll make your map look better!

phonic wrote:

Hello

The proposal is orange

The change is red.


-General-


BG
Please change it into 1024×768 or 800×600.

Title
Please change it into only my railgun (Full Ver.). ->fixed

Offset is a proposal to the end thought that 697 is good


Normal

OD-1

04:04:047 (1) You should end it by 04:10:760->fixed


Pereira's Hard

04:01:110 (1) You should end the spin by 04:03:837


Insane

HP+2 OD-1

01:51:879 (9) New combo->fixed
02:50:201 (1) Remove new combo->fixed

I think loneliness from 03:04:467



Overlooking it, please refer though it is thought that it is a lot
..Rnked.. do your best

Kudosu plz

Raging Bull wrote:

Pereira, how come you can make 00:34:257 (1) slider look good but not 00:35:935 (6) - 00:37:614 (5) - etc etc look nice too? ;_; I can try to make arcs if you want or is it intentional?

Also

Inhuman:
00:29:851 (3,4,5) - I don't really thing the timing section 1.2x is needed. Just change it back to 1x. It's rather confusing.->fixed
01:31:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/133779 I think you wanted it like this? Space 01:33:313 (1) - properly afterwards.->fixed
01:33:208 (x) - I would add a note here OR move 01:33:313 (1) - to white tick. On blue tick it sounds ugly.->Pattern is fixed

No kds. Not a full mod. Just checking map is.

Raging Bull wrote:

Pereira, how come you can make 00:34:257 (1) slider look good but not 00:35:935 (6) - 00:37:614 (5) - etc etc look nice too? ;_; I can try to make arcs if you want or is it intentional?

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Pereira's Hard]
00:47:684 - Song goes louder but hitsound volume goes lower... what?omg okay fix
01:02:788 - Why on the beginning you use normal sampleset for this chorus yet, here you use soft sample set, also the beginning wasnt kiai but here you're using kiai, which is supposed to be an stronger section of the song and map, yet this makes no sense orz T.Tok change to normal
01:54:397 (4) - Uh i can barely see this slider due to the hitburst, consider moving it? wut I don't play hitburst lol but okay fix
03:05:516 ~ 03:32:159 I dont hear any hitsounds at all here consider increasing volume. raised to 601~
03:15:166 (3,4) - Spacing error.[b]Ho My God! O_O ffffffffff okay fixe[/b]
Despite all that, this is the best map of the set <3 ;___;

288,216,52718,2,0,B|288:184|304:152|336:136|368:136,2,120
384,232,53977,1,0

192,120,89642,6,0,B|256:160|304:168|352:160|416:120,1,240
344,296,91320,2,0,B|280:256|232:248|184:256|120:296,1,240

32,132,24187,2,0,B|60:92|104:80|148:92|176:132,1,170,4|8

64,180,34257,6,0,B|72:96|148:72|224:96|232:180,1,255,12|0

444,64,103068,2,0,B|500:96|520:172|500:248|444:280,1,255,4|0

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Start by removing (Full Ver) from the title, all songs are assumed to be full version unless stated otherwise.
Why do you have a Taiko BG if you dont have a Taiko diff? Taiko BG wont show up unless you actually add it to a diff
You have 2 .osb files, both are empty, please kill them all and full submit.
Use slider tick rate 2, works way better. (inb4 more slider breaks)

[InHuman]
Shouldnt the name be Inhuman?
Why do you rarely use finishes if any at all?
This diff in general lacks a lot of structure imo, but the diff plays fine for now, take that in mind for future maps.
00:50:830 (1) - Slider track and repeat covered by hitbursts.->fixed
02:14:537 (4,6) - Align better, looks kinda slanted.->fixed
Why the fast slider speed?
02:35:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Use a better pattern? these notes look kinda random positioned across the grid right now.->fixed
03:30:481 (1,2,3) - Use finishes and increase hitsound volume here? would sound better imo.->fixed

[Insane]
AR-1 (I really dont like how ppl use slow sliders with high AR and vice versa =_=)
00:48:942 (6) - Hard to predict the second repeat.->fixed
00:57:544 (1) - Slider return arrow hidden by hitburst->fixed
01:53:348 (2,3,4,5) - Too clustered, makes it hard to read X_X->location is fixed but pattern isn't fixed
02:23:348 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - More clustered notes->->fixed
02:25:865 (1,2,3) - More clusteredness X_X->Pattern is fixed
02:26:914 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as above
02:35:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Is not symmetrical?->fixed
03:47:264 (1) - Slider track and repeat can barely be seen at all!->fixed

[Pereira's Hard]
00:47:684 - Song goes louder but hitsound volume goes lower... what?
01:02:788 - Why on the beginning you use normal sampleset for this chorus yet, here you use soft sample set, also the beginning wasnt kiai but here you're using kiai, which is supposed to be an stronger section of the song and map, yet this makes no sense orz T.T
01:54:397 (4) - Uh i can barely see this slider due to the hitburst, consider moving it?
03:05:516 ~ 03:32:159 I dont hear any hitsounds at all here consider increasing volume.
03:15:166 (3,4) - Spacing error.
Despite all that, this is the best map of the set <3

[Normal]
Not too bad, hitsounds do sound bad tho, considering i heard this is in the challenge queue you're probably going to receive some hitsound modding anyways =P
00:50:201 (5) - Expected this slider to start 1/2 earlier and finish 1/2 later.
01:49:781 (1) - Ehh i wouldnt recommend any overlaps on the easiest difficulty->fixed
02:16:635 (3,4) - Spacing error.->fixed

Well this obviously is not ready and still needs a lot more mods before MAT check, sorry but i wont be rechecking this for a while, i will wish you good luck tho! o/

Index-San wrote:

Prereira's Hard

00:48:732 (4,1) - (1) is covered by hitburst ok
01:45:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134381 ? i like this better.....but yeah...it'll affect the spacing no
01:49:781 - suddenly got pretty quiet here : ( ok

Index-San wrote:

hello hello XD, from challange thread (Yay! FripSide song!!, at least i won't bored beause of the draining time xD)
i'll mod from the hardest diff okay? xD

okay okay....start from:

Insane (really sorry if im a bit like forcing something...you don't have to take all my mods...just pick whatever that's suits your style)

00:13:488 (1,2,3) - this part....from the song had kind of...err "energy" xD in it...make you want to make it unique like (no need to follow my suggestion, just make what you think to make this part epic"(anti jumps: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134322&#41;, or jumps, or slow reverse slider, etc etc?? .at least this part had different feel than other part
00:14:746 (1) - new combo ?
00:21:774 (7) - make it start at red tick?

00:23:348 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this part is better without 1/4
(delete (5) and move (4) to red tick)
00:27:544 (1,2,3,4) - this part fits with 1/4 notes (move 2 to blue tick, move 4 to blue tick)


00:36:355 (8) - add finish
00:36:355 (8,1) - too hard to predict...maybe make it closer?
00:40:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern..well it's not a problem...but maybe you want to make it more organized? (good looking pattern or sliders) (or remapping this part to follow the vocal)?
00:45:166 (1,2,) - i thought it was 1/4 spacing....make it more farther

00:47:264 (5) - make them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134345 the spacing becomes 1.00 because you had SV change after it
00:53:977 (7) - 2grids up (level 3)
01:01:215 (3,4,5,6) - this part.....has different feel from other parts, adding jumps is good option here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134353 (you don't have to follow my suggestion, just make what you think is good)

01:02:159 (1,2,3) - same, this part had different feel too, make them different from other part (i recommend anti jumps of slow reverse slider)
01:04:886 (2) - move it to 01:04:781?
01:11:180 (3) - move it to 01:11:075?
01:14:117 (2) - Ctrl+R this part...trust me xD
01:14:537 (3,4,5) - spacing?
01:15:166 (5) - this slider...make it good really (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134354)...the rythm really realllllyyyyy fits (sorry...it's no problem..but i can't help myself to write this)
01:18:523 (1,2,3) - i like this part....

01:29:956 (2) - move it into blue tick ends at 01:30:271
01:31:005 (4) - delete this and make slider that starts at 01:30:795 and ends at 01:31:005 ( that's what i like in fripside song xD, the song fits with chained notes)

01:48:103 (4) - this slider...make it unique ( this :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134362 or this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134363 or anything)

for this part there many unconsistent spacing (i mean not jumps or etc.... but something like):
02:11:914 (2,3,1) - this part the (3) is too close with 2 but to far with (1)...better make the spacing even
02:05:306 (6,7,1) - this too, (7) and (8) is toooo close but becomes far away with (1)... i know this is insane.... but maybe better make it consistent spacing....(there are some good things about it xD)
02:21:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think making this pattern is better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134370

02:55:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too random....making a slider or make a pattern is better

03:18:732 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - this part....(okay here comes my bad mod xD) if you're confused this, i usually make anti jumps http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134371, or zigzags http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134373&#41; xD

03:48:942 (1,2,3,4) - anti jumps can be friendly and fits with the music really...http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134374 but don't overuse it xD

okay thats all hope you can get some trick and something from my mod

Prereira's Hard

00:48:732 (4,1) - (1) is covered by hitburst
01:45:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134381 ? i like this better.....but yeah...it'll affect the spacing
01:49:781 - suddenly got pretty quiet here : (

Normal

01:18:313 (5) - move this up 1 grid
01:26:285 (6) - 3 grid up 3 grid left
01:45:166 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - you can make good pattern like in hard...so maybe you want to make this pattern good http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134390 it's just suggestion...you don't have to follow it
01:53:138 (1,2,3,4) - make a pattern?
01:56:495 (1,2,3,4) - make a pattern (sorry...i got a bit annoying here xD, if you're confused... making sliders is your answer xD)
02:08:243 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it more beautiful like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134391?
02:15:795 (1,2,3,4) - make a square or something?
02:29:222 (1,2) - got covered by hitburst
02:53:977 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i like this part...it's more organized

Inhuman

01:10:551 (1,2,3,4) - make it more beautiful (hope you're not bored by this mod xD)
01:18:942 (2) - CTRL + R this (some parts other than this fits with this pattern....you should find out by yourself xD)->fixed
01:42:229 (5,6) - make it in the center of (4) and (1)
02:06:355 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134399 hey copy pasteing is not a bad thing xD ->fixed
02:31:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make a pattern (you can make good pattern like 02:35:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - just don't use it too much, because people can get bored)->fixed
03:00:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134403 continue with http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134404
03:02:788 (1) - make a spinenr here that ends at 03:03:628

this map still needs some work
hope you can get some technique and some tricks from my mods.........
and make this map more better xD

CMP wrote:

Index-San wrote:

hello hello XD, from challange thread (Yay! FripSide song!!, at least i won't bored beause of the draining time xD)
i'll mod from the hardest diff okay? xD

okay okay....start from:

Insane (really sorry if im a bit like forcing something...you don't have to take all my mods...just pick whatever that's suits your style)

00:13:488 (1,2,3) - this part....from the song had kind of...err "energy" xD in it...make you want to make it unique like (no need to follow my suggestion, just make what you think to make this part epic"(anti jumps: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134322&#41;, or jumps, or slow reverse slider, etc etc?? .at least this part had different feel than other part
00:14:746 (1) - new combo ?
00:21:774 (7) - make it start at red tick?->fixed

00:23:348 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this part is better without 1/4
(delete (5) and move (4) to red tick)
00:27:544 (1,2,3,4) - this part fits with 1/4 notes (move 2 to blue tick, move 4 to blue tick)


00:36:355 (8) - add finish->fixed
00:36:355 (8,1) - too hard to predict...maybe make it closer?->fixed
00:40:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern..well it's not a problem...but maybe you want to make it more organized? (good looking pattern or sliders) (or remapping this part to follow the vocal)?->fixed
00:45:166 (1,2,) - i thought it was 1/4 spacing....make it more farther->fixed

00:47:264 (5) - make them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134345 the spacing becomes 1.00 because you had SV change after it
00:53:977 (7) - 2grids up (level 3)->fixed
01:01:215 (3,4,5,6) - this part.....has different feel from other parts, adding jumps is good option here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134353 (you don't have to follow my suggestion, just make what you think is good)

01:02:159 (1,2,3) - same, this part had different feel too, make them different from other part (i recommend anti jumps of slow reverse slider)->->note location is fixed
01:04:886 (2) - move it to 01:04:781?
01:11:180 (3) - move it to 01:11:075?
01:14:117 (2) - Ctrl+R this part...trust me xD->fixed
01:14:537 (3,4,5) - spacing?->fixed
01:15:166 (5) - this slider...make it good really (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134354)...the rythm really realllllyyyyy fits (sorry...it's no problem..but i can't help myself to write this)
01:18:523 (1,2,3) - i like this part....

01:29:956 (2) - move it into blue tick ends at 01:30:271
01:31:005 (4) - delete this and make slider that starts at 01:30:795 and ends at 01:31:005 ( that's what i like in fripside song xD, the song fits with chained notes)

01:48:103 (4) - this slider...make it unique ( this :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134362 or this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134363 or anything)

for this part there many unconsistent spacing (i mean not jumps or etc.... but something like)->fixed
02:11:914 (2,3,1) - this part the (3) is too close with 2 but to far with (1)...better make the spacing even->a few is fixed
02:05:306 (6,7,1) - this too, (7) and (8) is toooo close but becomes far away with (1)... i know this is insane.... but maybe better make it consistent spacing....(there are some good things about it xD)->fixed
02:21:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think making this pattern is better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134370

02:55:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too random....making a slider or make a pattern is better ->fixed

03:18:732 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - this part....(okay here comes my bad mod xD) if you're confused this, i usually make anti jumps http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134371, or zigzags http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134373&#41; xD->fixed

03:48:942 (1,2,3,4) - anti jumps can be friendly and fits with the music really...http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134374 but don't overuse it xD->fixed

okay thats all hope you can get some trick and something from my mod

Prereira's Hard

00:48:732 (4,1) - (1) is covered by hitburst
01:45:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134381 ? i like this better.....but yeah...it'll affect the spacing
01:49:781 - suddenly got pretty quiet here : (

Normal

01:18:313 (5) - move this up 1 grid->fixed
01:26:285 (6) - 3 grid up 3 grid left->fixed
01:45:166 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - you can make good pattern like in hard...so maybe you want to make this pattern good http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134390 it's just suggestion...you don't have to follow it
01:53:138 (1,2,3,4) - make a pattern?->fixed
01:56:495 (1,2,3,4) - make a pattern (sorry...i got a bit annoying here xD, if you're confused... making sliders is your answer xD)->fixed
02:08:243 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it more beautiful like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134391?->fixed
02:15:795 (1,2,3,4) - make a square or something?->fixed
02:29:222 (1,2) - got covered by hitburst->fixed
02:53:977 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i like this part...it's more organized->fixed

Inhuman

01:10:551 (1,2,3,4) - make it more beautiful (hope you're not bored by this mod xD)
01:18:942 (2) - CTRL + R this (some parts other than this fits with this pattern....you should find out by yourself xD)->fixed
01:42:229 (5,6) - make it in the center of (4) and (1)->fixed
02:06:355 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134399 hey copy pasteing is not a bad thing xD ->fixed
02:31:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make a pattern (you can make good pattern like 02:35:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - just don't use it too much, because people can get bored)->fixed
03:00:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134403 continue with http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134404
03:02:788 (1) - make a spinenr here that ends at 03:03:628

this map still needs some work
hope you can get some technique and some tricks from my mods.........
and make this map more better xD

indyinyou wrote:

[Normal]

00:14:117 : add fin ?->fixed
00:20:830 : ^->fixed
00:24:187 : make silder to 00:24:607 / http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134170
00:29:642 : spin start here end to 00:32:579
00:32:579 : add green line use soft hitsound volume 5 %
01:02:788 : add fin ?->fixed
01:43:068 : ^->fixed
01:46:438 : add fin and new combo ?->fixed
01:47:264 : add fin remove new combo if you add new combo at 01:46:438-
01:48:103 : add fin->fixed
01:49:781 : ^->fixed
01:56:495 : ^->fixed
03:05:306 : ^->fixed
03:06:145 : add whistle->fixed
03:06:984 : ^->fixed
03:12:858 : ^->fixed
03:14:537 : ^->fixed
03:25:446 : add fin ->fixed
03:38:872 : ^->fixed
03:43:907 : make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134175
03:55:656 : add fin->fixed
03:59:012 : ^->fixed
03:59:851 : ^->fixed

[Hard]
01:02:788 : add fin
01:28:383 : remove whistle add fin
01:28:802 : add fin
01:42:858 : remove this note ?
02:30:481 : add fin
02:30:900 : ^

sry i`m noob at modding

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Pereira's Hard]
01:10:970 (1) - Whistle instead of finish? okay.face

Uh, some patterns have a lot of straight sliders and boxy circle patterns that don't look or read very well, but it's not that much of a bad thing, and it's probably also your style.hmmm ok this is relax play orz

Some hitsounds sound like they go offbeat sometimes but it could be your intention...T_T i hate my hitsound...
Simply hard to mod orz. orz

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
BG seems sort of low quality... maybe find new picture?

[Normal]
00:15:795 (1) - Middle point, two ticks to the right->fixed
00:16:635 (2) - Middle point, two ticks to the left->fixed
Makes them look nicer ><

00:25:026 (1) - Whistle?->fixed

00:50:201 (5) - Extend this to 00:50:621->fixed
00:50:830 (1) - Start at 00:51:040 and make it end at 00:51:460
00:51:879 (2,3) - Move to white tick
00:52:509 (4) - Remove this
Less confusing this way...
Will look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137670

02:18:313 (1) - Finish?
Good diff. Good job :3
[Pereira's Hard]
01:10:970 (1) - Whistle instead of finish?

Uh, some patterns have a lot of straight sliders and boxy circle patterns that don't look or read very well, but it's not that much of a bad thing, and it's probably also your style.

Some hitsounds sound like they go offbeat sometimes but it could be your intention...
Simply hard to mod orz.
[Inhuman]
21mil is unrankable... has to be under 18mil (or is it 19?). Either map less, or use less circles orz...
Or maybe this diff is for approval?->Score is fixed

01:59:222 (6) - Sounds better ending at 01:59:432->fixed
02:51:879 (1) - O_O Only five points needed: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137675 :3->fixed

03:12:019 (3) - Finish?->fixed
03:13:697 (2) - Also here->fixed

Wow, pretty ugly (heh), but it's a good map, plays really well.
Just a tip, when you make compressed streams, user gird snap 4 or some will be farther...
[Insane]
00:51:460 (5,6) - Use repeat slider instead?->ok,fixed

Hmm... I didn't nazi mod since your style flows more without it
But it's a good map, good luck ><

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-the BG looks a bit distorted, perhaps find another one?

Normal:

-CS 3?
-Hitsounds seem a bit quiet, but it might be me

00:40:970 (1) - add finish on start?->fixed
00:54:816 (2,3) - looks somewhat odd->fixed
02:17:474 - add a note?->fixed
03:43:907 (2) - end it 1/4 earlier?->fixed

Pereira's Hard:

-Tick rate 1?
-Hitsounds seem quiet here too >.<

01:27:963 (5,1) - Switch NCs?
01:29:851 (3,1) - ^
02:30:061 (5,1) - ^
02:31:949 (3,1) - ^
03:04:677 (1) - this? http://puu.sh/4Q0e
03:34:677 (4) - remove whistle
03:35:096 (6) - add whistle
03:37:614 (4) - add whistle
03:37:823 (5) - remove whistle
03:38:453 (1) - add whistle on start
03:39:082 (3) - add whistle on end etc, etc... if you change these please go through the next part and put whistles on every other beat too
03:57:334 (5,1) - Switch NCs?
03:59:222 (3,1) - ^

Insane:

-Some parts aren't spaced right... such as 00:15:166 (9,10,1) which is spaced farther than the other parts, and then 00:23:663 (5,6,7,8,9), then 00:38:977 (2), and so on I recommend going through the map and fixing these parts so they are spaced correctly (however, you can keep any ones that you intended to be jumps~)->fixed

00:59:851 (2) - after (1), I was expecting this to have one repeat too, perhaps change it?->fixed
01:59:012 - add note?->fixed
01:59:432 - ^->fixed
02:08:872 (5,6) - make this into a stream?->fixed
02:10:760 - add note?
02:21:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these jumps seem a bit too much perhaps reduce them?
02:27:544 (10) - new combo->fixed
02:27:753 (11) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137796 (then, make 12 a rotated version of this)
02:31:530 (1,2) - this doesn't really make that much sense, perhaps just use 3 notes at 02:31:530, 02:31:739, and 02:31:949?->fixed
02:33:523 (2,3,4) - I think it would be better if these had an equal number of repeats, as it is is seems odd->fixed
03:02:788 (9) - new combo?->fixed
03:55:026 (5) - covered up by (1) ->fixed
04:01:949 (6) - end it at 04:02:264 and put a note at 04:01:949?->fixed

InHuman:

-CS 4?

01:31:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - pattern nazi:

SPOILER

(2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137799
(4,5) - down 1 level 3 grid
(6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137800, then move right 1 level 3 grid
(7) - right 3 level 3 grids
(8) - make this one diagonal as well, then move it right 2 level 3 grids. Remember to fix the spacing afterward
If you fix all these, this will look a lot nicer

01:53:558 (1,2,3) - This is confusing because it looks like they're 1/4 apart, perhaps change it?
01:56:809 (3,4,5) - up 1 level 3 grid and right 1 level 3 grid->fixed
03:19:572 (1) - Remove new combo->fixed
03:41:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these jumps don't really work that well, perhaps change it?
03:56:704 (1) - Remove new combo->fixed

Nice map so far, but IMO it could be improved a bit

pieguy1372 wrote:

(no kds for this post~)

Normal:

00:32:159 (1) - start this 1/1 later? (oops, didn't notice this last time)->fixed
01:32:579 (1) - ^->fixed

Pereira's Hard:

04:01:110 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier?

Insane:

00:55:026 (4) - (nazi) 1 level 3 grid up, then 1 level 3 grid left->fixed
02:09:921 - add a note?->fixed

Inhuman:

00:34:677 (1) - this clap seems really loud ->change to whistle
03:47:264 (1) - remove whistle from repeat->fixed

This map is much better than it was the last time I checked it. Good luck, I have no doubt this will be ranked someday~

Ekaru wrote:

Insane:

00:37:614 (1,2,3) - I would stack these; the anti-jumps you have now just feel weird and out of place.->fixed
01:01:425 (5,6) - These should be jumps; the music is saying, "Make me a jump! Please? Pretty please with a cherry on top?"
03:25:446 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - The music is clearly building up, and is the exact opposite of what you have here with the first combo. As for the second two combos? Those should have higher spacing, and the last one in particular should be giant jumps IMO.->pattern is fixed

That's all, not too bad.

Behonkiss wrote:

Overall:
Hitsounds seem too quiet, and looking at timing shows they're down to 60-80% on average. Crank them up a bitmy diff is fine i guess

Pereira's Hard:
- The numerous 1/4 rebounding sliders are weird and don't match the lyrics or beat well. Cut down on some of them by either removing them or getting rid of some of the rebounds. Sorry I tried 10 times to hear this music the numerous 1/4 i can hear have drums soft and strong also the lyrics is matter IMO so no sorry my poor english
- 01:30:691 (3): Shorten by 1/4 or change to two circles.change sorten by 1/4

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]

[Pereira's Hard]
00:25:865 (5) - left 1 grid(size4)okay
01:08:663 - remove whistleokay
01:15:376 - ^okay
03:08:453 (3) - up 1 grid Intentional
03:38:872 (2,4) - stack itokay

Mok wrote:

Hi hello~~

[Pereira]
00:40:551 - Add a circle.no sorry

Behonkiss wrote:

Overall:
Hitsounds seem too quiet, and looking at timing shows they're down to 60-80% on average. Crank them up a bit.

Normal:
- 00:50:830 (1): Move forward 1/2 a beat.
- 02:16:635 (3): Try changing this to a slider 3/4 of a beat long, with the endpoint at - 02:16:949 and a rebound to 02:17:264.
- 03:00:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Select all of these, then drag 1 to match up horizontally with the previous 5 circle.

Pereira's Hard:
- The numerous 1/4 rebounding sliders are weird and don't match the lyrics or beat well. Cut down on some of them by either removing them or getting rid of some of the rebounds.
- 01:30:691 (3): Shorten by 1/4 or change to two circles.

Insane:
- 00:34:572 (1 through 8): I don't think this combo matches the lyrics or beat well.
- 02:57:124 (1): Doesn't need to be a new combo.

Inhuman:
- Either slow the sliders down or make the long ones shorter.

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
vol = 70% is too low for me . I can listen hitsound

[Normal]
AR use 5 I think
00:50:830 (1) - strange rhythm...
00:53:977 (6) - finish?
00:54:816 (2,3) - not use clap... you can use other but clap and finish...
01:03:208 - 01:04:047 - 01:04:886 - 01:05:725 - clap?
01:09:502 (2,3,5) - ^
01:05:306 (1,3,1) - whistle? I don't think so it was good
01:16:635 (2,3,5,6) - same as 01:03:208 - ... clap?
02:03:208 (4) - left 1 grid
03:00:271 (1) - up 1 grid
03:10:341 (5) - right and up 1 grid
03:13:697 (3) - down 1 grid
03:38:872 (1,2) - not good type
03:46:844 (4,5) - right and up 1 grid

[Pereira's Hard]
00:25:865 (5) - left 1 grid(size4)
01:08:663 - remove whistle
01:15:376 - ^
03:08:453 (3) - up 1 grid
03:38:872 (2,4) - stack it

[Insane]
00:22:509 (1,2) - spacing
00:34:572 (1,2,3,4) - what's this...
00:54:397 (1,2,3,4) - not good type. It's cause confuse for player...((MAT says...
01:08:872 (1,2,3,4) - I think you need let it more pretty
01:48:103 (4) - ...Let it more pretty
01:53:767 (3,4) - ^
02:15:795 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - not good point
02:30:271 (5,9) - stack
03:15:586 (1) - why has spinner at this way and finish spinner time was very strange
03:41:809 (9) - down 1 grid
04:02:369 (7,1,2) - uneven spacing

[Inhuman]
00:19:152 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
01:31:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ...

Mok wrote:

Hi

[BG]
Why haven't you used the same BG for all difficulties? Not that i don't like your fan art or something.
Your BG seems to have been converted from 16:9 to 4:3, find a better pme-

[Normal]
00:15:795 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:16:635 (2) - New Combo.
00:17:474 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:28:383 (2) - Put it in the lower part of your screen.
00:30:061 (4,5,6) - Delete.
00:32:579 (1) - Let it start at 00:29:642 and end at 00:32:579.
00:50:201 (5) - Remove reverse.
00:50:830 (1,2) - 1/2 later, thenn add a circle.
00:56:495 (4) - Clap on start and end.

[Pereira]
00:40:551 - Add a circle.

[Insane]
More spacing and more Approach Rate.

pieguy1372 wrote:

no kds~

Normal:

00:51:040 (1) - too close to (5)

Inhuman:

00:55:446 (5) - too close to (4)
03:12:649 (5) - too close to (4)

Kanon wrote:

General
What is inhuman diff mean? imo this diff is not so hard that only inhuman player can fc it XD

Normal
00:21:670 (2,3,1) - make it nicer
00:28:383 (2) - reached the hp bar
00:40:760 useless green line
00:58:593 (3,4) - make it nicer
01:29:642 (1,2) - ^
02:51:040 (3,4,5,1) - ^
03:07:823 (1) - dont use short kicker slider on easiest diff. hard for new player to read.
03:29:642 (1,2) - make it nicer

Pereira's Hard
Hitsound volume is too low, i can only hear the normal whilstle. incream plz
OD-1
solid diff

Insane
00:34:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern you created imo not fit the music.
00:38:977 (2) - delete note
00:40:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lazy..
00:57:544 (1) - unpredicable, cut one loop and add note
02:21:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make it nicer

Inhuman
03:02:579 (4,1) - spacing very weird to play

Kanon wrote:

Pereira's Hard
Hitsound volume is too low, i can only hear the normal whilstle. incream plz i think is fine i can hear o.o but okay increassing
OD-1 no i think is fine
solid diff

DragonSparta wrote:

Hello~ hi tail :3

Pereira's Hard
In my opinion, in the Soft parts of this song, add some finishes for the times a cymbal could be heard I think is really is fine

-Sekai- wrote:

[Pereira's Hard]
HP +1 or 2+1
00:23:767 (3) - clapyes
00:25:446 (3) - ^yes
00:39:292 (3) - remove the finish and add it to 00:39:502 (4) - ~no
02:27:544 (5) - NCorz
02:27:753 (1) - remove the NCokay
02:51:460 (3) - remove the whistle on repeat and add a finish~okay
02:53:558 (3) - remove whistle on the start and add a finishokay
02:56:075 (3) - ^no
03:00:271 (4) - finishyes
03:05:306 (2) - ^huuuh is aldready
03:32:159 (2) - ^yes o.o

-Sekai- wrote:

NC i think it's good to fix them =w="

[Normal]
00:47:684 (1) - remove the NC
00:48:103 (6) - NC here~
00:53:977 (5) - ^
00:54:397 (1) - remove the NC
01:06:565 (4) - 1 grip down~
01:06:984 (1) - remove the NC?
02:06:565 (1) - ^
02:07:823 (6) - NC~
02:08:243 (1) - remove the NC
03:49:362 (1) - ^

[Pereira's Hard]
HP +1 or 2
00:23:767 (3) - clap
00:25:446 (3) - ^
00:39:292 (3) - remove the finish and add it to 00:39:502 (4) - ~
02:27:544 (5) - NC
02:27:753 (1) - remove the NC
02:51:460 (3) - remove the whistle on repeat and add a finish~
02:53:558 (3) - remove whistle on the start and add a finish
02:56:075 (3) - ^
03:00:271 (4) - finish
03:05:306 (2) - ^
03:32:159 (2) - ^

[Insane]
HP +1
fine~

[Inhuman]
hp +1
fine

Nyquill wrote:

[General]
Offset 680, the current offset is much too late.I not agree this sorry because this offset is later and wrong by me

[Pereira's]
o/ hi again. Yet another good diff ^^
01:09:082 (2,5,1,4,3) - I suggest you don't switch to 1 3 1 3 hitsounds here. Stick with 2 4 2 4 xD. This means remove whistle on (2,5) and so on and making them on the end of (3, 6) and so on. In fact, just have 2 4 2 4 hitsounds for this entire section, that will sound much nicer.omg i m derp and fix
03:30:481 (5) - should really just keep it consistant like thisfix

SPOILER

03:39:711 (5) - Yet another sudden switch to 1 3 1 3, hitsounds don't sound good if you suddenly switch their patterns in the same sectionfix

Pereira006 wrote:

Nyquill wrote:

[General]
Offset 680, the current offset is much too late.I not agree this sorry because this offset is later and wrong by me

Nyquill wrote:

asdf sorry about the late mod, been really busy lately :/

[General]
Offset 680, the current offset is much too late.

[Normal]
Well er, I was going to do a more texty mod, but I don't really know how to explain some of my suggestions in words, so going to go ahead and do a lot of screenshots xD

The first pattern is kind of random, want to try to make it fit the vocals more?
Here is a possible way to do it:

SPOILER

00:17:042 (1,2) - Try something like this?->no

SPOILER

00:20:818 (1) - ehh... yeah->no

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/5AW5

00:59:420 (4) - Flip this horizontally and place it back->no
01:09:490 (2,3) - Remove claps from beginning. Claps at the end of these sliders instead.->fixed
01:17:042 (3) - ^->fixed
01:19:979 (1,2) - Clap at the end of this slider and on (2).->fixed

I guess most other stuff is fine...

[Pereira's]
o/ hi again. Yet another good diff ^^
01:09:082 (2,5,1,4,3) - I suggest you don't switch to 1 3 1 3 hitsounds here. Stick with 2 4 2 4 xD. This means remove whistle on (2,5) and so on and making them on the end of (3, 6) and so on. In fact, just have 2 4 2 4 hitsounds for this entire section, that will sound much nicer.
03:30:481 (5) - should really just keep it consistant like this

SPOILER

03:39:711 (5) - Yet another sudden switch to 1 3 1 3, hitsounds don't sound good if you suddenly switch their patterns in the same section

[Insane]
Ahh, stream spacing is all over the place :<
00:16:110 (2,3) - Wanna have this have the same spacing as 00:14:851 (6,7,8) ?->fixed(Very thank you,I didn't see this)

[Inhuman]
Don't really see any mapping issues worth mentioning here, except again hitsounds are all over the place. A 2 4 2 4 clap would be good for this diff in the kiai sections imo.

1. title shoud be fripside-only my railgun (Full Ver.), there is a space bettwen "railgun" and "(", and there is a spot after "Ver"
   click here to check how to change title

• 00:17:474 (2,3,4) - Add whistle to the start of each slider, add whistle to both start and end to 4

1. 00:23:767 (3,5) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 00:23:348 (2,4,1), remove both whistle and finish from 00:24:607 (5)
2. 00:25:865 (2) - Add finish
3. 00:42:649 (3) - Add finish
4. 00:45:166 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:50:621 (4) - Add clap
6. 00:54:397 (2) - Add finish
7. 01:01:110 (3) - Add finish or whistle seems better
8. 01:02:788 (1) - Add finish
9. 01:07:823 (3) - Add finish or whistle
10. 01:09:502 (2) - Add finish
11. 01:29:642 (1) - ^
12. 01:55:656 (6) - Remove clap
13. 02:03:208 (4) - Add whistle or finish, and some more other same stuff like this, leave them to you to decide whether add hitsound, so I won't post
14. 02:14:956 (3) - Add finish
15. 02:30:061 (3), 02:31:739 (1,2,3) - Add finish
16. 03:22:089 (1) - ^
17. 03:30:481 (2) - ^
18. 03:52:299 (1) - ^
19. 04:00:691 (3) - ^
    Notes are fine, I think you can make your sliders more neat

1. 00:14:117 (2) - Remove clap, add finish
2. 00:14:956 (5) - Remove clap
3. 00:14:537 (3), 00:15:376 (1) - Add clap
4. 00:25:865 (5) - Add finish
5. 00:34:257 (1) - Remove clap, finish mixed with clap sounds bad, really
6. 01:22:509 (1) - Remove whistle
7. 01:17:054 (4) - Remove whistle, shouldn't whistle added at 01:16:635 (2), 01:17:474 (5)?
8. 01:27:124 (1) - remove whistle, add to 3
9. 01:30:481 (2), 01:31:320 (4) - Remove whistle, add to 01:30:900 (3)
10. 02:07:823 (6) - Add whistle
11. 02:14:117 (4) - Remove whistle, add to 6
12. 02:24:607 (1) - Remove whistle
13. 02:50:201 (1) - Add finish
14. 03:52:718 (4) - Add whistle

1. 01:17:264 (5,7) - These 2 claps sounds a bit odd here
2. 01:19:572 (3) - Add finish
3. 01:36:355 - KIAI ends here
4. 01:43:068 (1) - Add finish
5. 01:54:082 (4) - remove clap
6. 03:22:089 (3) - Add finish
7. 03:31:530 - 03:35:306 - Add clap at only 03:32:579 (5), 03:33:418 (2), 03:34:257 (5), 03:35:096 (9)
8. 03:48:942 (1) - Remove whistle
9. 03:51:670 - 03:56:075 - Add clap at only 03:52:718 (4), 03:53:558 (8), 03:54:397 (2), 03:55:236 (6), add finish to 03:52:299 (1)
10. 03:59:012 (1,3) - Add finish at slider start
11. 04:00:691 (1) - Add finish

1. 00:19:152 (1,2,3) - Add whistle or finish to 3 all, or leave they 3 both empty sounds better
2. 01:01:110 (4,5,6) - I feel soft hitfinish sounds better here
3. 01:24:187 (2) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 01:24:607 (3)
4. 02:03:208 (1,2,3) - try soft finish
5. 02:57:858 (4,5) - spacing odd
6. 03:18:732 (1) - Add finish
   Lots of your streams has odd spacing :/ I think you'd better reput them by turing on distance snap

CMP wrote:

I am thinking that I give up mapping



So boring..


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Tanmak wrote:

Pereira006님 난이도 업로드 되는 데로 모딩을 개시할게요.

일단은 보류해놓겠습니다.

I am thinking that I give up mapping

Pereira006 wrote:

Tanmak wrote:

Pereira006님 난이도 업로드 되는 데로 모딩을 개시할게요.

일단은 보류해놓겠습니다.

I can't understand you korean :/ but i did transleted google (I hope not troll orz)

I can hold 1 year or 2 year or 3 year bla bla
but he said

I am thinking that I give up mapping

... why?
Because Big mod ? If big mod will be helpfully and good as he is new mapping

I Will be happy he can do it, Study more how mapping and work lot this map

sorry my poor english and i can't write korean sorry

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. title shoud be fripside-only my railgun (Full Ver.), there is a space bettwen "railgun" and "(", and there is a spot after "Ver"
   click here to check how to change title

[Normal]
I don't sure what rhythem you follow to add hitsound, I'll try my best to understand your style and give some suggestions

• 00:17:474 (2,3,4) - Add whistle to the start of each slider, add whistle to both start and end to 4

1. 00:23:767 (3,5) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 00:23:348 (2,4,1), remove both whistle and finish from 00:24:607 (5)
2. 00:25:865 (2) - Add finish
3. 00:42:649 (3) - Add finish
4. 00:45:166 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:50:621 (4) - Add clap
6. 00:54:397 (2) - Add finish
7. 01:01:110 (3) - Add finish or whistle seems better
8. 01:02:788 (1) - Add finish
9. 01:07:823 (3) - Add finish or whistle
10. 01:09:502 (2) - Add finish
11. 01:29:642 (1) - ^
12. 01:55:656 (6) - Remove clap
13. 02:03:208 (4) - Add whistle or finish, and some more other same stuff like this, leave them to you to decide whether add hitsound, so I won't post
14. 02:14:956 (3) - Add finish
15. 02:30:061 (3), 02:31:739 (1,2,3) - Add finish
16. 03:22:089 (1) - ^
17. 03:30:481 (2) - ^
18. 03:52:299 (1) - ^
19. 04:00:691 (3) - ^
    Notes are fine, I think you can make your sliders more neat

[Pereira's Hard]

1. 00:14:117 (2) - Remove clap, add finish
2. 00:14:956 (5) - Remove clap
3. 00:14:537 (3), 00:15:376 (1) - Add clap
4. 00:25:865 (5) - Add finish
5. 00:34:257 (1) - Remove clap, finish mixed with clap sounds bad, really
6. 01:22:509 (1) - Remove whistle
7. 01:17:054 (4) - Remove whistle, shouldn't whistle added at 01:16:635 (2), 01:17:474 (5)?
8. 01:27:124 (1) - remove whistle, add to 3
9. 01:30:481 (2), 01:31:320 (4) - Remove whistle, add to 01:30:900 (3)
10. 02:07:823 (6) - Add whistle
11. 02:14:117 (4) - Remove whistle, add to 6
12. 02:24:607 (1) - Remove whistle
13. 02:50:201 (1) - Add finish
14. 03:52:718 (4) - Add whistle

[Insane]

1. 01:17:264 (5,7) - These 2 claps sounds a bit odd here
2. 01:19:572 (3) - Add finish
3. 01:36:355 - KIAI ends here
4. 01:43:068 (1) - Add finish
5. 01:54:082 (4) - remove clap
6. 03:22:089 (3) - Add finish
7. 03:31:530 - 03:35:306 - Add clap at only 03:32:579 (5), 03:33:418 (2), 03:34:257 (5), 03:35:096 (9)
8. 03:48:942 (1) - Remove whistle
9. 03:51:670 - 03:56:075 - Add clap at only 03:52:718 (4), 03:53:558 (8), 03:54:397 (2), 03:55:236 (6), add finish to 03:52:299 (1)
10. 03:59:012 (1,3) - Add finish at slider start
11. 04:00:691 (1) - Add finish

[Inhuman]

1. 00:19:152 (1,2,3) - Add whistle or finish to 3 all, or leave they 3 both empty sounds better
2. 01:01:110 (4,5,6) - I feel soft hitfinish sounds better here
3. 01:24:187 (2) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 01:24:607 (3)
4. 02:03:208 (1,2,3) - try soft finish
5. 02:57:858 (4,5) - spacing odd
6. 03:18:732 (1) - Add finish
   Lots of your streams has odd spacing :/ I think you'd better reput them by turing on distance snap

-Gamu- wrote:

[Pereira's Hard]

●00:17:474 (1) - Move to the end 00:18:732. 00:19:152 - circle addno
●00:25:865 (5) - Move to the end 00:27:124. 00:27:544 - circle addno
●00:40:551 - circle addno
●01:03:418 (4) - new combo addno
●01:04:257 (7) - ^no
●01:04:467 (1) - new combo removeno
●01:05:096 (3) - new combo add no
●01:10:131 (4) - ^no
●01:11:809 (3) - ^no
●01:16:844 (3) - ^no
●01:17:684 (6) - ^no
●01:19:572 (1) - Move to the end 01:20:830. 01:21:250- circle addno
●02:05:516 (4) - new combo addno
●02:06:355 (7) - ^no
●02:06:565 (1) - new combo removeno
●02:07:194 (3) - new combo addno
●02:12:229 (4) - ^no
●02:13:907 (3) - ^no
●02:18:942 (3) - ^no
●02:19:781 (6) - ^no
●02:21:670 (1) - Move to the end 02:22:928. 02:23:348- circle addno
●03:19:362 (4) - new combo addno
●03:20:201 (7) - ^no
●03:22:509 (1) - Move to the end 03:23:348. 03:23:767- circle addno
●03:26:075 (4) - new combo addno
●03:26:914 (6) - ^no
●03:32:788 (4) - ^no
●03:33:628 (6) - ^no
●03:33:837 (1) - new combo removeno
●03:34:467 (3) - new combo addno
●03:39:502 (4) - ^no
●03:41:180 (3) - ^no
●03:48:942 (1) - Move to the end 03:50:201. 03:50:621- circle addno

CMP wrote:

quit

HellDawn wrote:

[b]Pereira's Hard
00:29:432- spinner start herelucky
01:31:530- ^lucky again
01:36:355- Break drag to hereno no no.avi
02:18:313- finishorz
02:28:383- whistlenope
02:33:628- you knowlucky again orz
03:55:656- whistlenah
04:00:900- start here *-*okay.jpg

Breeze wrote:

General

[notice]

Pereira's Hard

1. 00:28:383 (3) - Add finish? fix
2. 00:40:551 (6) - Add whistle, or use finish to both 00:40:131 (5,6) fix
3. 01:31:320 (4) - Remove whistle? This one seem to be extra no
4. 01:36:355 - Drag break to here?fix
5. 02:25:865 - 02:29:222 - Move all whistle in this part 1/2 beat forward to fit your previous whistle add partten?fix i guess
6. 02:32:579 (2), 02:33:418 (4) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 02:32:998 (3) fix
7. 02:31:739 (3) fix, 02:32:579 (2)no, 02:33:418 (4) fix - Add finish

Breeze wrote:

General

1. Source : Toaru Kagaku no Railgun or To Aru Kagaku no Railgun

no should be lower case. Checked this from previous RANK maps, so please fix this

All difficulties

1. The last spinner, [Normal] and [Inhuman] ends at 04:10:341, [Pereira's Hard] ends at 04:03:837, [Insane] ends at 04:10:760, end at same place seems better, at least all your own diff.s should end at same place?

Normal

1. 04:03:837 - KAI ends here? Not a big deal anyway
2. 00:54:397 (2,3,4) - Move these 3 claps 1/2 tick backward like the clap partten you used in previous notes, and remove finish sound of 00:54:397 (2) seem better
3. 01:44:746 (3) - Add finish?
4. 01:59:851 - 02:02:369 - Move these 3 claps 1/2 tick backward like the clap partten you used in previous notes
5. 02:50:201 (1) - Add finish?

Pereira's Hard

1. 00:28:383 (3) - Add finish?
2. 00:40:551 (6) - Add whistle, or use finish to both 00:40:131 (5,6)
3. 01:31:320 (4) - Remove whistle? This one seem to be extra
4. 01:36:355 - Drag break to here?
5. 02:25:865 - 02:29:222 - Move all whistle in this part 1/2 beat forward to fit your previous whistle add partten?
6. 02:32:579 (2), 02:33:418 (4) - Remove whistle, add whistle to 02:32:998 (3)
7. 02:31:739 (3), 02:32:579 (2), 02:33:418 (4) - Add finish

Insane

1. 00:40:131 (5) - Add finish?
2. 01:16:005 (1) - Remove whistle
3. 01:18:313 (7), 01:19:152 (2) - Remove whistle sounds better IMO, why here use continuous 4 whistle?
4. 02:21:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this part might be confusing, it's easily to read to1 beat space while playing IMO, maybe just for me though
5. 04:03:837 (3) - Add finish?

Inhuaman

1. HPDrainRate+1? It's even lower than [Hard] and [Insane] now
2. 01:31:530 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Emm, I can't find the rhythem you put at this part, it seems to be confusing
3. 02:33:418 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ^
4. 03:25:446 (1) - Add finish?

It looked like you remap many part of this map, and it looked more better now
have a star

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Normal]
You did follow my mod literally maybe.. some curve on some part will made this nicer
from 00:53:977 to 00:57:334 you inverted the hitsounds order. If it was Normal-Clap-Normal-Clap, you made it become Clap-Normal-Clap-Normal, you actually did use Clap on Snare, why in that part you won't use it?
00:57:334 (1,2,4,6) - Add clap in those notes
or better, you didn't remember to add some claps ( like in 01:27:124 (1,2) ends, 01:29:222 (4) and 01:29:642 (1,2,1,2) ends )
01:49:362 (6) - Start using clap like you done from 00:47:684 (1) -
Not about real problems, however, try to use more slider, in place like 02:25:865 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the plain circle get boring of overusing.

[Pereira's Hard]
00:29:012 (5,6) - well, one slider here would be awesome
01:18:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't like patterns like this... maybe conitnue in some way like the pattern before like that

[Insane]
Some overmapped stream though(pointing the divided 2 circle streams)
00:23:558 (x) - Add a note to complete the stream. don't use partially mapped stream.


P.s. You did draw well Misaka and Uiharu, SDaten feel generic and Kuroko's hair ar like greek medusa's one... she got them less curly and more wavy

artpiggo wrote:

Pereira
00:41:809 (2,3,4,5) - maybe thisI still stay this patterns sorry

02:27:544 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same no
03:57:334 (1) -Why is spinner here? you know what to do right? huh? http://puu.sh/6ylR nothing spinner...

Normal&insane&inhuman
can't find problem. sorry 'bout that.

8/10

Mr Color wrote:

[Pereira006's Hard]
00:24:187 (5) - Slider's fugly, please change
00:35:935 (6) - ^
00:37:614 (5) - ^ I'm not going to point out all of them but they all need to be fixed
This. is. Boring. It's filled with 1/2 with 1/4 kick sliders.

haha5957 wrote:

[General]
Normal = 150만
Pereira = 978만
Insane = 1550만
Inhuman = 1720만
으 퓨처게이저 (이 건은 다시한번 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ) 때 한번 말씀드렸다시피 제 퓨처게이저도
지금은 미사카 미코토가 되긴 했지만 당시 시라이 쿠로코였던 난이도가 1300만, 미사카 미코토 난이도가 1700만, 님이 처음
제작해주신 인세인이 1200만이어서 제가 하드로 낮추겠다고 말씀드린적이 있었죠?

당시 제 퓨처게이저의 점수 분포도가 80만 - 1200만 - 1300만 - 1700만이었는데 그래서 그런지 보는 사람마다 엄청나게 깠었어요
하드도 없고 노말도 없고 뭐하는거냐고 몹시 혼났습니다 'ㅁ' Difficulty Spread 가 몹시 나쁘다고 표현하더라고요. 랭크에도 엄청난 지장이 있다고 합니다..

일단 개인적인 평가로는 Inhuman 꽤 차별화가 된것 같지만 (사실 Insane보다 많이 어렵진 않지만)
Insane이랑 Pereira 난이도랑은 난이도가 꽤 비슷..한 것 같습니다. 디피컬티 세팅도 AR을 제외하면 같고..

난이도도 보시면 알겠지만 초록색 E 하나에서 파랑색 N, 노랑색 H를 건너뛰고 빨강색 I만 3개입니다.
빨강 I간의 난이도 차이가 꽤 크지 않으면 랭크가 불가능하다는 말도 #modhelp 에서 들어본것 같습니다 확실친 않지만..

아무튼 모든걸 떠나서 체감난이도상으로나 스코어난이도상으로나 노말과 하드가 없는것 같습니다..

2.65-4.86-4.89-5.00 정도인데 이 경우 사이에 난이도 3.8 정도 되는 걸 끼워넣으면 얼추 맞을 것 같긴 한데 그래서 뒤에
I난이도 3개에 대해선 좀 걸립니다 제가 귀에 못이 박히게 들었던거라... 특히 Insane이랑 Pereira난이도의 난이도차가 체감상 거의 없는것으로
느껴져서 더 그렇네용 ;ㅁ;

만약 제가 심장도 마음도 없는 매퍼였다면 인세인이나 게스트중에 하나를 빼라고 말씀드렸을 겁니다 (CMP님 난이도를 빼버린 제가 할 말은 아닙니다만 으앙 다시한번 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ)
근데 솔직히 인세인 매핑하는거 꽤 힘든데 그거 버리라는건 사람이 할 말이 아닌것같고 아무 죄도 없는 게스트를 버리..(어..죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ 하지만 다시한번 말씀드리지만 님것 뺀건 맵의 문제가 아니고 그냥 제 변덕 때문에..ㅠㅠ)는것도 할일은 아닌것 같아서
음.. 일단 3.8정도 되는 노말 (그리고 현재의 노말은 대충 이름을 이지로 바꿔버리면 됩니다!)을 만드는걸 권장드리고 싶고
인세인계열에 대해서는 으.. 굳이 해법을 찾자면 Inhuman을 SV를 더 증가(..) 하고 점프를 몹시 괴랄(...) 하게 해서 완전 넘사벽으로 리매핑하고 (사실 이러는건 이러는거대로 또 문젭니다 ㅠㅠ 정말 어려우면서 양질의 맵을 만드는건 저희같은 뉴비매퍼에겐 사실상 불가능..랭크맵이 10개쯤 되도 잘 안된다고 하네요. 제 퓨처게이저도 부적절한 오버매핑 돋아서 랭크는 힘들거라는 말 많이 듣습니당 'ㅁ')
현재의 Insane을 적당히만 리매핑해서 현재의 Inhuman 수준으로 올리면 차별화는 되겠지만... 잘 모르겠습니다.

인세인계열은 그렇다 치더라도 사이난이도가 하나 필요한 건 확실해 보입니당 'ㅁ';


[Normal]

00:20:830 (1) - 힛사가 맥이 뚝 끊기는 느낌이에요~
00:25:026 (1,2,3) - ^
01:29:642 (1) - 얘 아래로 옮기고 다음 (2) 는 위쪽으로 가는쪽이 나을것같아용
02:19:152 (2) - 플레이시 라이프게이지랑 좀 겹치는데 왠지 걸리네요 'ㅁ'
03:26:285 (2,3) - ^

[Pereira]
01:00:271 (1) - end this 01:01:110
01:07:614 (2,3,4,5) - I think every corus part (those parts that says "Only my railgun can shot it imasugu" or "kanarazu") is just mapped with 1/2
since this is hard difficulty, I think you can make this part much better by doing something special)
for example, I think 01:19:572 (1,2) sounds better then 01:06:145 (1,2,3,4,5)..
02:02:369 (1) - end this slider 02:03:208 or 02:03:837
03:57:334 (1) - uhm..I think something is wrong with this spinner..


[Insane]
음 제 생각일 뿐인지도 모르지만 AR에 비해 노트간 간격이 너무 좁지 않나 싶습니다 'ㅁ'
리매핑할수도 없으니 저는 AR -1를 추천드리고 싶습니다만...
00:14:537 (5) - 위치
01:38:872 (1,2,3) - 이저늬 01:36:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - 가 갔던 곳을 얘들이 다시한번 지나가고 있는데 완전히 겹쳐서 지나가는것도 아니고
음 그러니까 어떻게 표현하면 좋을까.. 느린 AR로 보면 겹쳐서 보기 안좋은 모양이 된다는 느낌이라고 해야할까요..?
02:29:222 (1) - x:100, y:32 정도로 옮기시던지 아니면 가만 두셔도 상관없을것 같지만 역시 너무 위쪽으로 치우친 느낌이..

[Inhuman]
02:33:418 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - 가운데를 중심으로 완전히 대칭이 아닙니다 (ctrl+h, ctrl+J 등등) 물론 신경 안쓰시면 상관없습니당 (사실 아무문제 없을듯)
괜찮네용



[Overall]
제가 쿠도스가 없어서 별을 드릴수가 없습니다 ㅠㅠ

haha5957 wrote:

[General]

[Pereira]
01:00:271 (1) - end this 01:01:110no
01:07:614 (2,3,4,5) - I think every corus part (those parts that says "Only my railgun can shot it imasugu" or "kanarazu") is just mapped with 1/2 no is fit more
since this is hard difficulty, I think you can make this part much better by doing something special)
for example, I think 01:19:572 (1,2) sounds better then 01:06:145 (1,2,3,4,5)..
02:02:369 (1) - end this slider 02:03:208 or 02:03:837 no i not wanna be very hard
03:57:334 (1) - uhm..I think something is wrong with this spinner.. omg wtf my fault and fix

Shiirn wrote:

Hard
01:19:572 (1) - i can withstand some of these ugly sliders, but holy crap one that repeats this much just grates my nerves. Turn it into a pretty simple curve please. wtf ok fine all slider is change nice curve 5 point aswome arco
02:02:369 (1) - this isn't perfect /nazi change lmfao
Slightly awkward like all your maps, but you're getting better, keep going!

1. 00:32:684 (1) - expand the spinner from 00:32:579 to 00:34:257
2. 00:51:879 (1) - reduce one reverse
3. 01:27:124 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - where is the hitsound?

1. 02:10:131 (14) - keep max combo under 14