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XianZi - Dui Zhu Tan Qin

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JoJo
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JoJo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年11月28日 at 16:55:47

Artist: XianZi
Title: Dui Zhu Tan Qin
Tags: pig killer zui qing feng nymph nymph_ joshua lost
BPM: 80
Filesize: 5725kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Love (4.89 stars, 411 notes)
  2. Nymph (2.96 stars, 211 notes)
Download: XianZi - Dui Zhu Tan Qin
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~ 弦子 - 对猪弹琴 ~

Normal by Nymph
Skin by sherrie__fay

Everything done , enjoy <3

(Last full submission: 2011/11/28 17:03 GMT+8)
Last edited by JoJo , edited 29 times in total.
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
對BakaJo彈H-miku =A=
乃們都去屎10次
這麼坑爹的歌
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
JoJo

kanpakyin wrote:

對BakaJo彈H-miku =A=
乃們都去屎10次
這麼坑爹的歌
魂淡KPY!! 嘛 Kudosu kanpakyin for hitsound help,
And log here

话说不射个星么魂淡。。
KayeSara
KayeSara
太坑了啊
极力需要自重啊
星星困难ing（-1KD）
Nymph
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Nymph
对KPY KANA BAKAJO 弹HMIKU 姆哈哈哈哈哈 8-)

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字数补丁
JoJo
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JoJo
H-Miku躺着也被弹~ 8-)

Thanks for stars ~ Hentai KPY and God Nymph ~

顺便还有扔不出星的moe Sara =w=

Meanwhile , Nymph's guest diff uploaded ~
Nymph
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Nymph
Normal diff totally finished this time~


Blablablablablablablablablablablablablablablablablablabla

Download: XianZi - Dui Zhu Tan Qin (JoJo) [Nymph].osu
Last edited by Nymph , edited 2 times in total.
KayeSara
KayeSara
哼，楼上的都是baka！
什么都是baka！
还有什么弹不出星星！我总算从-2到1啦！
Breeze
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Breeze
话说给kanpakyin的kudos最好把你们的聊天记录贴出来
不然很可能被回收
JoJo
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JoJo

Breeze wrote:

话说给kanpakyin的kudos最好把你们的聊天记录贴出来
不然很可能被回收
我回复的帖子里贴了呢O.O 那个不行么...?_?
Raging Bull
2,785 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
General:
Nothing major, but add a space between Nymph_ and Joshua Lost.
Right now it's Nymph_Joshua Lost when it should be Nymph_ Joshua Lost.
Eh I wouldn't mind having another difficulty here. Two diff spreads are usually bad.

Nymph:
01:32:280 - Make break start here?
Seems okay.

Love:
00:12:030 (3,4,5) - Well Gonz modded my map today and windmill like this. He suggested to do Ctrl+R it to make it flow better and it did. I suggest you do the same, Ctrl+R.
If you follow the above mod, go vertical flip this 00:11:655 (2) .
00:33:780 (6) - Don't like how this gets overlapped by (4). Can you move it?
01:32:280 - Make break start here?
01:46:530 (7,8) - Don't know why this is a jump. Nothing in the music here is jumpy. It's still calm. You could try this maybe? I removed notes so it's easier to see. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143030
01:50:280 (1,2) - Yeah. Dunno why is there a jump.
02:13:905 (9) - Lol I thought this was a jump now. Since you were kinda spacing jumps like these ;_;
02:44:280 (1,3) - Overlaps ;_; Can you get rid of them? Up to you.
02:45:405 (4,6) - ^
02:53:280 (2) - Reverse select this please.
02:54:030 (3) - Reverse select this too so it will still have the flow but no jump.
JoJo
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JoJo
@Raging Bull
SPOILER

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Nothing major, but add a space between Nymph_ and Joshua Lost. There is a space already.. @.@
Right now it's Nymph_Joshua Lost when it should be Nymph_ Joshua Lost.
Eh I wouldn't mind having another difficulty here. Two diff spreads are usually bad. K, I will consider about this.

Love:
00:12:030 (3,4,5) - Well Gonz modded my map today and windmill like this. He suggested to do Ctrl+R it to make it flow better and it did. I suggest you do the same, Ctrl+R. No thanks ._. I think it's not bad though.
If you follow the above mod, go vertical flip this 00:11:655 (2) .
00:33:780 (6) - Don't like how this gets overlapped by (4). Can you move it? No I like it :P It's funny xD
01:32:280 - Make break start here? If there's no storyboard I'll do this. But in this point it looks a little weird since Title and light appear at the same time.
01:46:530 (7,8) - Don't know why this is a jump. Nothing in the music here is jumpy. It's still calm. You could try this maybe? I removed notes so it's easier to see. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143030 K, made it easier and more readable.
01:50:280 (1,2) - Yeah. Dunno why is there a jump. Made this on purpose.
02:13:905 (9) - Lol I thought this was a jump now. Since you were kinda spacing jumps like these ;_; K, will try another pattern here.
02:44:280 (1,3) - Overlaps ;_; Can you get rid of them? Up to you. No I like this xD
02:45:405 (4,6) - ^ Same
02:53:280 (2) - Reverse select this please. I made this on purpose and I think it's readable enough ;_; So no change.
02:54:030 (3) - Reverse select this too so it will still have the flow but no jump.

Thank you for mod !
spboxer3
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spboxer3
沒有什麼大的問題阿

[尼芙姆_~]
00:51:030 (1,2,3) - 間距有點問題

[Love]
00:05:842 (2,3) - 壓在上面 我被MAT挑過 所以建議不要這樣擺
00:13:717 (6,7) - ^
00:33:030 (4,6,7) - ^
01:27:780 (1,2,3) - 排成正三角形吧 ((這感覺並沒有很正的感覺 [nazi]
01:48:967 (4,5) - 同樣...壓在上面
02:23:467 (4,5) - ^

歌很好聽阿!!map也做的很好
JoJo
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JoJo
@spboxer3
SPOILER

spboxer3 wrote:

[Love]
00:05:842 (2,3) - 壓在上面 我被MAT挑過 所以建議不要這樣擺 是指2碰到了3一点点？@.@ 为什么这也会被挑啊...lol
00:13:717 (6,7) - ^ 改了下排列~
00:33:030 (4,6,7) - ^ 抱歉~这边就不改了~
01:27:780 (1,2,3) - 排成正三角形吧 ((這感覺並沒有很正的感覺 [nazi] OK~这下绝对正了=w=
01:48:967 (4,5) - 同樣...壓在上面
02:23:467 (4,5) - ^ 抱歉~这2个都不改~ :o

歌很好聽阿!!map也做的很好
谢谢MOD~ ><
AoiX
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AoiX
深夜Mod可能精神状态不太好请见谅っ︶Д︶╮
=======以下是Mod内容=======
？个人意见，歌词图片再大点？有点看不清啊
·摘自百度百科“弦子全名:张弦子|英文名：Killer”，可以的话把Artist改了

[Nymph]
·将名称改成“Nymph's Normal”？
00:40:530 (4) - Grid4下移一格 (nazi
01:19:530 (4) - ^

[JOJO]
(≧ ≦)Zzzz没看出什么问题
00:10:530 (7,2) - 这边的2似乎有点被7的击打火焰遮挡
JoJo
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JoJo
@xykbear
SPOILER

xykbear wrote:

深夜Mod可能精神状态不太好请见谅っ︶Д︶╮ 我深夜精神最好了=w= （喂！）
=======以下是Mod内容=======
？个人意见，歌词图片再大点？有点看不清啊 重做太麻烦了~我超级懒 XD
·摘自百度百科“弦子全名:张弦子|英文名：Killer”，可以的话把Artist改了 咩哈哈哈~这个我MAP前就发现了~但是Killer这个名字太有杀气（喂）~用在这么可爱的歌感觉不太合适（嗯嗯）~而且国人一般都知道弦子但是不知道Killer吧（没错！）~所以还是决定用XianZi了（木哈哈哈）~ XD

[JOJO]
(≧ ≦)Zzzz没看出什么问题
00:10:530 (7,2) - 这边的2似乎有点被7的击打火焰遮挡 还好吧？~ 我觉得没有特别要改的必要呢。。 :o

谢谢MOD！~
Nymph
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Nymph

spboxer3 wrote:

[尼芙姆_~]
00:51:030 (1,2,3) - 間距有點問題 没有啊 :o

xykbear wrote:

深夜Mod可能精神状态不太好请见谅っ︶Д︶╮
=======以下是Mod内容=======
？个人意见，歌词图片再大点？有点看不清啊
·摘自百度百科“弦子全名:张弦子|英文名：Killer”，可以的话把Artist改了

[Nymph]
·将名称改成“Nymph's Normal”？ 不要 难看
00:40:530 (4) - Grid4下移一格 (nazi 不好意思 不过其实我没开GRID SNAP...
01:19:530 (4) - ^
谢了~
pieguyn
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Joined May 2009
pieguyn
Nymph:

00:35:280 (1) - too close to (3)
00:38:280 (1) - too close to (3)
00:44:280 (1) - too close to (3)

Love:

00:27:780 (6) - goes off the left edge of the playfield :?

nice map~ :)
JoJo
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JoJo

pieguy1372 wrote:

Love:

00:27:780 (6) - goes off the left edge of the playfield :? Yes~Fixed~

nice map~ :)
Thank you ~ ^^/
Leorda
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Leorda
Ohhh, Kanpakyin, Karenying, and KanaRin are in the BG!!!

Nymph
00:30:405 (x) - Add note here for following vocal?
00:45:780 (2) - Remove this slider, copy 00:44:280 (1), paste at 00:45:780, and Rotate 90" Clockwise (Ctrl+>) 2 times
00:54:405 (5) - Add 1 repeating slider?
01:00:592 (1) -End it at 01:03:030?
01:06:405 (x) - Add note here for following vocal?
01:12:780 (3) - Not sure if this touch the HP Bar~

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Love
00:14:092 (8,1) - It looks bad seeing a stacked notes behind the slider (I guess...)
01:59:842 (4,5) - Unstack or restack this to tail slider, the stack is quite ugly in gameplay
02:12:967 (6,7) - Looks bad if you stack this in blanket combos :< (Nazi)
02:24:030 (5) - I think the tail slider makes the sliderpath is messy, orz (suggestion)

----------------------------------------------------------------------

Love those 3K Pigs <3

EDIT : Forgot to star it, sorry
Last edited by Leorda , edited 1 time in total.
winber1
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winber1
Love

00:57:592 (5) - perhaps you could delete this repeat slider and add a note at 00:57:592 and 00:57:967, or you could use one slider.
01:12:593 (4) - i like it better if you moved this note 1/4 tick forward (so that it's on the white tick). There isn't a bass pedal that the music plays and it sounds better imo if you have a note on the vocals on the white tick
02:01:717 (9) - you could consider extending this slider to 02:02:092 to fit a little more with vocals. you could also extend it to 02:02:280, but idk if you want to shorten the spinner or not.
02:39:592 (4) - move 1/4 tick forward? sounds better imo.
03:06:779 (4) - ^?

Nymph

00:07:155 (3) - I would just turn this into two notes like the previous pattern, also the green timing sections don't seem to be very useful
00:33:780 (3,1) - don't anti-space things in the easiest difficulty...? I understand it's a slow song and stuff, but still, I would stay away from that unless there's something in the music that really provokes something like this. You have these anti-spacings at the end of a regular vocal phrase; in fact, this particular one is in the middle of a phrase. I'm not sure if this was on purpose or not.
00:36:780 (3,1) - ^
00:42:780 (3,1) - ^
01:06:405 (x) - add note
02:19:530 (1) - remove combo for consistency purposes
03:09:405 (2,3) - switch these two notes around, so combo 3 is at 03:09:405 and the combo 2 slider starts at 03:09:780
03:17:280 (1,2,3,4) - i guess it's fine, but the spacing decreases a little here. Everything else was basically evenly spaced, so idk. if you want to space equally you can. it's not a big deal

nice map! :3
JoJo
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JoJo
@Leorda
SPOILER

Leorda wrote:

Ohhh, Kanpakyin, Karenying, and KanaRin are in the BG!!! Yah nice point ! <3

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Love
00:14:092 (8,1) - It looks bad seeing a stacked notes behind the slider (I guess...) OK ~ No longer overlapped =w=
01:59:842 (4,5) - Unstack or restack this to tail slider, the stack is quite ugly in gameplay OK manual stacked ~
02:12:967 (6,7) - Looks bad if you stack this in blanket combos :< (Nazi) Sorry can't understand this @.@ .. But anyway now I stack circle 7 on slider 8 ? Better now ? XD
02:24:030 (5) - I think the tail slider makes the sliderpath is messy, orz (suggestion) I think it's fine ?_?

----------------------------------------------------------------------

Love those 3K Pigs <3
Thanks Leo-chan ~ =w=

@winber1
SPOILER

winber1 wrote:

Love

00:57:592 (5) - perhaps you could delete this repeat slider and add a note at 00:57:592 and 00:57:967, or you could use one slider. Sorry I think it's fine even your suggestion is good as well ^^
01:12:593 (4) - i like it better if you moved this note 1/4 tick forward (so that it's on the white tick). There isn't a bass pedal that the music plays and it sounds better imo if you have a note on the vocals on the white tick Sorry but .. I guess you mean backward ? @.@ Maybe my poor English but for this part I won't change it because I must change a bit of following patterns if I do this... lol
02:01:717 (9) - you could consider extending this slider to 02:02:092 to fit a little more with vocals. you could also extend it to 02:02:280, but idk if you want to shorten the spinner or not. Good idea ~ Done.
02:39:592 (4) - move 1/4 tick forward? sounds better imo. OK fixed here ~
03:06:779 (4) - ^? I wish to keep the pattern here =w=

nice map! :3
Thank you winber ~ >w< For mod and star ~
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

JoJo wrote:

？个人意见，歌词图片再大点？有点看不清啊 重做太麻烦了~我超级懒 XD
·摘自百度百科“弦子全名:张弦子|英文名：Killer”，可以的话把Artist改了 咩哈哈哈~这个我MAP前就发现了~但是Killer这个名字太有杀气（喂）~用在这么可爱的歌感觉不太合适（嗯嗯）~而且国人一般都知道弦子但是不知道Killer吧（没错！）~所以还是决定用XianZi了（木哈哈哈）~ XD
You should add "Killer" to tag at least.
Kotone
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Kotone

Leorda wrote:

Ohhh, Kanpakyin, Karenying, and KanaRin are in the BG!!!
Love those 3K Pigs <3
:o :o :o
JoJo
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Topic Starter
JoJo
@KPY
OK加了。。。魂淡太偷懒了我要full mod啊啊啊啊啊啊。。。

@bakaying
谢谢星星...TwT 小ying大好人送你好人卡。。。><
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
这么萌的BG没问题吗OAO
好暖的曲子>/////<

[General]

[Nymph]

SC-1?
AR-1?
毕竟是唯一一个可以给新手打的diff._.
没啥问题._.

[Love]

00:14:280 (1) - 这边总感觉缺了点什么._.不弄个轻一点的fin吗？（Nymph的难度也一样
02:21:030 (4) - 太近了

没啥问题+1


没啥改的话就不用KD了

这么温馨的歌我就给个星星好了ovo
Nymph
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Nymph

Leorda wrote:

Nymph
00:30:405 (x) - Add note here for following vocal? I am trying to follow the drums *.*
00:45:780 (2) - Remove this slider, copy 00:44:280 (1), paste at 00:45:780, and Rotate 90" Clockwise (Ctrl+>) 2 times nah I don't like it
00:54:405 (5) - Add 1 repeating slider? sorry I think not
01:00:592 (1) -End it at 01:03:030? sorry I think it is fine
01:06:405 (x) - Add note here for following vocal? ok
01:12:780 (3) - Not sure if this touch the HP Bar~ think it is ok for me~

winber1 wrote:


Nymph

00:07:155 (3) - I would just turn this into two notes like the previous pattern, also the green timing sections don't seem to be very useful I think it is ok, and there is difference to slilence the slider arrow or not
00:33:780 (3,1) - don't anti-space things in the easiest difficulty...? I understand it's a slow song and stuff, but still, I would stay away from that unless there's something in the music that really provokes something like this. You have these anti-spacings at the end of a regular vocal phrase; in fact, this particular one is in the middle of a phrase. I'm not sure if this was on purpose or not.I am pretty sure it is on purpose, anyway I don't see it confused new players,just trying to make the spacing the way I like
00:36:780 (3,1) - ^
00:42:780 (3,1) - ^
01:06:405 (x) - add note ok
02:19:530 (1) - remove combo for consistency purposes ok
03:09:405 (2,3) - switch these two notes around, so combo 3 is at 03:09:405 and the combo 2 slider starts at 03:09:780 yeah right
03:17:280 (1,2,3,4) - i guess it's fine, but the spacing decreases a little here. Everything else was basically evenly spaced, so idk. if you want to space equally you can. it's not a big deal the rhythm slow down here so I think it is fine

thanks guys :P


Megurine Luka wrote:

这么萌的BG没问题吗OAO
好暖的曲子>/////<

[General]

[Nymph]

SC-1?
AR-1?
毕竟是唯一一个可以给新手打的diff._.
没啥问题._. :P 3星难度比较喜欢这么设置 还好啦
Download: XianZi - Dui Zhu Tan Qin (JoJo) [Nymph].osu
JoJo
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JoJo

Megurine Luka wrote:

这么萌的BG没问题吗OAO 大丈夫=w= 还是说乃想建议我摆张Real Pig上去呢~ XD
好暖的曲子>/////<

[Love]

00:14:280 (1) - 这边总感觉缺了点什么._.不弄个轻一点的fin吗？（Nymph的难度也一样 这里为whistle设置了高音量所以算了~不过受你启发在后面稍微加了点Fin~
02:21:030 (4) - 太近了 因为觉得这里应该有跳么。。@.@ 好吧~改了~

没啥问题+1


没啥改的话就不用KD了 都改了呢=w= 而且KD不给白不给><

这么温馨的歌我就给个星星好了ovo 谢谢呢.......TwT
Thanks for mod and star ~~
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
不不不这个BG很好我就是想吐槽一下它太美好了 :)
loveFantasy
526 posts
Joined August 2008
loveFantasy
8-)

[General]
  1. 01:27:780 這個storyboard一轉好就進spinner了, 導致看清的時間很短, 稍微改一下進來的方式?
[Nymph]
  1. 非常缺hitsound..SC1 clap堪用, 00:31:530這種重鼓我和JoJo想的一樣即是N的hitnormal
  2. 03:19:905 (x) - 補note或是如01:25:905 (4)那樣的slider
[Love]
  1. 00:14:280 (1) - 不懂這裡怎麼突然來個new combo? 要帶來進Break那種感覺就不該疊著..
  2. 00:42:405 (5) - 感覺結尾補個whistle比較對勁
  3. 00:48:873 (T) - 無用綠線
  4. 00:49:623 (T) - 無用綠線
  5. 01:44:280.. 這邊開始因為沒vocal了, 背景那個很帶感低聲部表現力變強, 竊以為可以用一些方法強調, 例如:
    01:44:280 (1) - 改成2 circle stack
    01:45:967 (5) - del, 造成01:45:592 (4) 開始的3/4拍停感
    後面類似不提
  6. 01:59:280 (3) - 可能需要手動移動或是乾脆不疊了..osu的重疊機制把這裡變得很醜
  7. 02:09:405 (5) - 結尾補whistle
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
JoJo

loveFantasy wrote:

8-)

[General]
  1. 01:27:780 這個storyboard一轉好就進spinner了, 導致看清的時間很短, 稍微改一下進來的方式?我觉得还好
[Love]
  1. 00:14:280 (1) - 不懂這裡怎麼突然來個new combo? 要帶來進Break那種感覺就不該疊著.. 嗯..于是删掉了..
  2. 00:42:405 (5) - 感覺結尾補個whistle比較對勁 OK补了~
  3. 00:48:873 (T) - 無用綠線 嗯删了=w=
  4. 00:49:623 (T) - 無用綠線删了+1
  5. 01:44:280.. 這邊開始因為沒vocal了, 背景那個很帶感低聲部表現力變強, 竊以為可以用一些方法強調, 例如:
    01:44:280 (1) - 改成2 circle stack
    01:45:967 (5) - del, 造成01:45:592 (4) 開始的3/4拍停感
    後面類似不提 抱歉这里不太想改呢..lol
  6. 01:59:280 (3) - 可能需要手動移動或是乾脆不疊了..osu的重疊機制把這裡變得很醜 OK不叠了~
  7. 02:09:405 (5) - 結尾補whistleOK~
感谢叔叔MOD+STAR~ =w=/
The 08 team_Bourdon
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The 08 team_Bourdon
你好~

Nymph
  1. Circle Size change to the large?
01:31:717 - make a Drag Break at here? --> http://puu.sh/5o2g
01:42:780 (1) - remove this New Combo?
02:37:905 (6) - why dont start the New Combo at here?
02:43:905 (4) - ^

Love
  1. HP Drain change to 7?
  2. Overall Difficulty change to 8?
01:50:842 (2) - move this circle overlap at 01:50:280 (1) - this slider behind?
02:57:780 (1) - delete this spinner? then at here add a slider to 02:58:155 - ? and add 4 circle at 02:58:530 , 02:58:717 , 02:58:905 , 02:59:092 ?
03:09:967 (6) - add a New Combo?

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Nice map~! 8-)
Good Luck~ ;)
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Nymph
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Nymph

loveFantasy wrote:

8-)
[Nymph]
  1. 非常缺hitsound..SC1 clap堪用, 00:31:530這種重鼓我和JoJo想的一樣即是N的hitnormal 虽然说故意不加HITSOUND可能有点欠抽...但是MP3这么丰富的打击音的情况下 我真心觉得加了跟没加一样....=A= 这次即使所有人都反对 我也要不加试试
  2. 03:19:905 (x) - 補note或是如01:25:905 (4)那樣的slider 嗯 加个NOTE

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Nymph
  1. Circle Size change to the large?
nah, don't want to= =
01:31:717 - make a Drag Break at here? --> http://puu.sh/5o2g I make the spinner to there.
01:42:780 (1) - remove this New Combo? already removed
02:37:905 (6) - why dont start the New Combo at here? I think mine is fine=v=
02:43:905 (4) - ^
thanks~

Download: XianZi - Dui Zhu Tan Qin (JoJo) [Nymph].osu
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