[General]Your mp3 has only 75% mapped, you need to cut the rest[Lunatic]00:33:751 (1,1,1) - Please avoid using portal combos (NC spam) they mess up HP calculations.
00:34:383 (1,1) - Spinner is pretty short and having a note 1/2 after at this speed is not a good idea01:58:383 (1,2,3) - Why suddenly use some jumps? they dont fit with this part of the music imo, nor with the pattern you were using.
02:03:909 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps look somewhat random positioned to me, since they dont seem to form a pattern nor the music seems to be jumping either.
02:05:014 (5,1) - Switch new combo.
02:35:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Can you at least form a shape with these notes? they look like randomly thrown around the grid ._.
see?[Hard]00:33:751 (1,1,1) - Same comment as [Lunatic]
00:34:225 - Delete this green line while you're at it.
01:39:120 (3) - I couldnt see this slider due to the hitburst :<
[zsr123's Taiko]02:06:593 (807,808,809,810,811,812,813,814,815,816,817,818,819,820,821,822,823,824,825,826,827,828,829,830,831,832,833,834,835,836) -
This is a really mean move at such a high bpm to put so many finishes even if they are 1/2 plus switching around, i recommend instead that you use regular katsus.
02:16:541 - This is a really weird kiai section actually, plus isnt it kinda long?
[Leyko's Normal]Tag "zsr123" is missingReally, lower SV or increase AR, it makes no sense when approach circles are much slower than the sliders specially on a song with such adrenaline as this one.
The 2 sections where you're using kiai sound really different, try fore a more consistent kiai?
01:10:067 (5) - Start this slider 1/2 earlier then extend it by 1 repeat, so it follows the music more, it's pretty awkward right now.
00:32:488 (1,1) - Remove NC on those 2.
00:35:488 - Why have a kiai fountain when you could just have kiai regularly?
01:05:804 - ^
01:44:962 (5) - My ears X_X please dont spam such a loud hitsound on a repeat slider
[Easy]00:17:172 (2), and all others - Please dont use small sliders that repeat more than once because they confuse new playersNote to both of the guest mappers: I know kiai can be different on a guest difficulty but it'd be better to see some kiai that makes more sense, remember kiai is your appreciation of the strongest parts of the song, and it makes very little sense if all your kiai sections sound different
Really great map pieguy, you deserve a star--- icon lol