whymeman wrote:

[Kirino's Hard]
00:39:827 (8,9) - What is this gap... a jump? Oops... sorry about that. That wasn't supposed to be a jump.
01:05:010 (1,2) - Too close together. hm? I already applied distance snap with this one

Rukarioman wrote:

Kirino's Hard:
00:09:170 - Remove this break. It's way too short. fixed.
01:29:097 - Why did you here suddenly add a kiai time? oops, that's a little hard to notice anyway I removed it. XD

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- If you add a custom hitcircle, you have to also add an approachcircle. If you don't have a custom one just take the one from the template skin. Hitcircle skin is just fine no need to add some approachcircle thing
- Every difficulty needs to have the same preview time. Open the .osu files in notepad and make them the same.
- ^ but this time Lead-in time.
- Letterboxing is enabled in some diffs and is not on others. Please decide on whether to enable or disable it and make it the same on all diffs.
- The diffciulties also have different video offsets. Make them the same too.
- This spread really looks kinda awful. I would really like an easier difficulty than normal too.Yeah your right and im planning to delete the kilala's rain diff

Hard:
00:08:952 - Add a note here? And then remove the break after it. It's way too short.FIX

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hmm... GL cousin for this map!
I just thought of doing this...
You can have a

XDD
EDIT: I'll give you another one XDDD

[Mapset]

1. An Insane difficulty cannot be included in a two-difficulty-only mapset. Because of the above rules, the easiest difficulty on a two-difficulty mapset will be an Easy or a Normal. Thus, the only possibly combinations are Easy-Normal and Normal-Hard.

Muya wrote:

- Generall:

[Mapset]

1. An Insane difficulty cannot be included in a two-difficulty-only mapset. Because of the above rules, the easiest difficulty on a two-difficulty mapset will be an Easy or a Normal. Thus, the only possibly combinations are Easy-Normal and Normal-Hard.

viewtopic.php?f=3&t=56528

maybe unrankable maps.

Tnx for this information

- Normal:
01:15:521 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Please check the spacing
00:07:106 (2,3) - 1grid left (Grid level 4)
00:12:698 - Unnecessary line here
00:15:521 (1) - reverse
01:25:156 (4) - remove 1 turn and 01:26:251 (1) - start at 01:26:032 end at 01:28:222

Fixed

- Hard:
00:08:721 (1) - start at 00:08:952
00:40:484 (3) - add new combo
00:41:141 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:864 (1) - ^ same
01:25:813 (1) - start at 01:26:032 end at 01:28:222

Fixed


- Kilala's Rain: (DELETED)
so low slider velocity ;_;
01:25:813 (1) - start at 01:26:032 end at 01:28:222

- Saten's Insane:
01:26:032 (1) - end at 01:28:222

Fixed

mapset is good.
but, many

Metro wrote:

General

I'd end the last slider of all diffs at 01:27:784. It can end somewhere else but all diffs should end that spinner at the same time.
Two shades of gray make it very confusing at some parts (remember NatsumeRin wowaka maps). I suggest using the brighter shade and yellow (it matches the credits colours).

Normal

Delete 00:08:837 timing section or choose one.

00:15:521 (1) - spacing
00:32:163 (1) - ^
00:33:477 (4) - ^
00:38:733 (3) - this is behind 00:36:981 (2) - which is not a good idea in a map designed for beginners
00:43:550 (4) - ^ 00:41:798 (2) -
00:45:302 (6) - ^ 00:43:550 (4) -
00:46:178 (1) - ^ 00:44:426 (5) -
00:50:119 (2,3) - spacing
00:57:127 (1) - ^
01:08:951 (2) - ^
01:11:579 (1) - ^
01:14:207 (5) - this is behind 01:12:893 (2) -
01:19:900 (2) - ^ 01:18:587 (6) -

Hard

Due to the song and the way it's mapped I suggest AR -1. NO

Kirino's Hard

Due to the song and the way it's mapped I suggest AR -1. NO

00:07:798 (6) - this slider is... wrong. Please fix it.
00:25:375 (3) - spacing
00:40:046 (9) - ^
01:26:032 (4) - I'd remove this note and start the spinner there.

Metro wrote:

Kirino's Hard

Due to the song and the way it's mapped I suggest AR -1.

00:07:798 (6) - this slider is... wrong. Please fix it. nope
00:25:375 (3) - spacing FIX
00:40:046 (9) - ^FIX
01:26:032 (4) - I'd remove this note and start the spinner there.No

1. Tag:Wmfchris -> wmfchris
2. 00:03:183 (13,14,15,16) - Remove these 2-plet because this part is really calm and they don't fit the music very well.
3. 00:08:952 (35) - change it to kat?
4. 00:17:492 (24) - ^Same.
5. 00:20:557 (39,40,41,42,43) - This pattern is really awkward for me (全換/半換都係因為要用第2隻手) and doesn't fit the music too much,ddddk seems good to me.
6. 00:34:791 (111) - Change it to d?
7. 00:42:236 (139,140,141) - No,3/4 is really weird here and doesn't fit the music.1/2 is pretty good for me!
8. 00:43:988 (146,147,148) - ^Same.
9. 00:50:557 (179,180,181,182) - Probably follow the music?Remove them and add a note at 00:50:776 - and 00:50:995 - (don it please)
10. 00:52:528(x) - Add a don here.
11. 01:06:324 (59) - Change it to d?
12. 01:26:251 (1) - Remove this spinner please,It's unnecessary for me!

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Thanks Genkishi for fixing my guest diff... If you did. XD
(I got hospitalized these past few days so I wasn't able to be here, plus I will go through some more check ups so I might not be here again for a couple of days)

wmfchris wrote:

most fixed, it seems that I've made qutie a lot mistake here ><

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

I'm back~ XD
I kinda fixed a few things with my diff.
Here's the latest
[attachment=0:2b2e9]Aqua Timez - Mayonaka no Orchestra (TV Size) (Genkishi) [Kirino's Hard].osu[/attachment:2b2e9]

HeatKai wrote:

Star

useless irc mod

Elize wrote:

Aqua Timez


good map !!!



Star

Yuuiii wrote:

i wub this song ^^

good maps, love that skin :]

~starr

...

Tomari Hoshi wrote:

Cute Beatmap...
I hope it get ranked...

SPOILER

Go go!

Combo1 : 237,149,84
Combo2 : 139,177,186
Combo3 : 190,109,112

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod ~

General;
- So otaru-soad made the hitcircle ? Well, is not necessary to mention him on the tags, is enough to mention him in the op of the thread
- Could you find a more fitting BG ? I mean something related to Naruto
- I recommend not using gray tones on combo colours, because they might blend with the video, try these instead ?

Combo1 : 237,149,84
Combo2 : 139,177,186
Combo3 : 190,109,112

Skin;(DELETED except for the hitcircle,i already add approach circle)
- Missing elements:
* Approach-circle
* Spinner approach-circle
* Spinner-osu, spinner-spin
- I don't like how the blue sparkle at spinner-clear is cut ;/
- The hitcircle doesn't look good imo, looks like cheese ):..it's rain drop not cheese xD and i dont have a plan to delete it
- If you need help with any of this or finding a BG I'd be glad to help you ~ Sure

Normal;
- 00:05:029 (1,2) >> This doesn't fit imo, try these maybe (by the way, it starts from 00:04:106 (1))

- 00:08:952 >> Add whistle
- 00:35:229 >> Extend, so it reverses at 00:35:886
- 00:46:178 (1,2,3) >> Mix into a slider
- 00:58:003 >> New combo then remove new combo at 01:00:192
- 01:10:265 (5~1) >> Remove a repeat from (1) and move it to 01:12:017; extend (5) so it reverses on 01:10:922
- 01:27:784 >> Change to soft hitsound

Hard;
- Is weird that you start mapping before the metronome starts
- 00:43:112 >> Move to 00:43:331 and shorten so the repeat falls at 00:43:769

DONE

* Star ~

lovhin456 wrote:

Kirino's Hard;
- 00:33:258 (1) >> The slider should start here I think no. No change. :<

lovhin456 wrote:

Saten's Insane;
- 01:12:017 >> Could you make it a little more pretty ? (: it looks somewhat prettier now~
- 01:13:769 >> Add a note ? done
- 01:17:273 >> ^ done

Kite wrote:

[General]
2 osb files, remove "Aqua Timez - Mayonaka No Midnight Orchestra (Genkishi)" and full submit, or remove both and full submit

[Timing]
Second red section -7 ms

[Normal]
00:02:491 (2,3,4) - Its better to follow white ticks here so I suggest removing 2 and move 3,4 to previous white tick
00:03:875 - If you done previous then add a beat here


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You should try using a custom hitsound clap for this song I think it would fit well.
Check this collection of hitsounds out http://www.mediafire.com/?j4j360l6444ce5b
Credits to happy30 and the creators of the sounds (included in filenames)

No_Gu wrote:

May I make a easy diff？

Nice map
Starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

• 
  Resnap all notes
  Use -278 as the first offset
  Start Kiai Time at 00:57:996

• 
  01:08:507 (1): I suggest removing this whistle hitsound
  01:12:017 (1): Add finish here

• 
  00:33:477 (7,8): Whistle sounds a bit noisy here
  01:12:667 : Add a circle here
  00:40:357 00:52:747 : Why 1.0X here…
  01:10:039 (4,5,6,7): Finish
  01:24:061 (4,5,6,7): ^

• 
  00:09:163 (1): Start the spinner here
  00:54:273 (1): ^
  00:58:003 (1): Finish
  01:10:046 (1,2,3,the beginning of 4): Finish
  01:22:309 (3,1): Too close
  01:24:054 01:24:492 01:24:930 01:25:368 : Add finish

• 
  00:08:945 (4): Mute here sounds a bit strange
  01:10:039 (1,2,3,4): Finish
  01:11:791 : Add a circle here
  01:19:674 : ^
  01:24:054 01:24:492 01:24:930 01:25:368 : Add finish

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]

• 
  Resnap all notes
  Use -278 as the first offset
  Start Kiai Time at 00:57:996

[Normal]
In some parts clap hitsound sounds a bit strange

• 
  01:08:507 (1): I suggest removing this whistle hitsound
  01:12:017 (1): Add finish here

[Hard]
Same as Normal

• 
  00:33:477 (7,8): Whistle sounds a bit noisy here
  01:12:667 : Add a circle here
  00:40:357 00:52:747 : Why 1.0X here…
  01:10:039 (4,5,6,7): Finish
  01:24:061 (4,5,6,7): ^

Good map~

HeatKai wrote:

by the way , I recommend you to have an easy diff ==
Its tv size , whats so hard about it ==

Genkishi wrote:

HeatKai wrote:

by the way , I recommend you to have an easy diff ==
Its tv size , whats so hard about it ==

Ok,gonna make an easy diff. right away...and i dont accept guest diff anymore because the map is full of guest diff

Weezy wrote:

Ok,gonna make an easy diff. right away...and i dont accept guest diff anymore because the map is full of guest diff

Kite wrote:

[Kimo's Hard] Correction: It's Kirino. XD
01:15:411 & 01:15:521 - Add beats here? sounds a bit awkward right now as you didnt map the vocal on the blue tick <- resnap 01:15:740 (4) if you added them fixed.

impossiblexu wrote:

[Kirino’s Hard]

• 
  00:09:163 (1): Start the spinner here fixed. But I started the spinner at "00:09:175".
  00:54:273 (1): ^ fixed. But I started the spinner at "00:54:285".
  00:58:003 (1): Finish Hmm, I think no but I put it anyway, for now.
  01:10:046 (1,2,3,the beginning of 4): Finish Ok. Fixed.
  01:22:309 (3,1): Too close fixed.
  01:24:054 01:24:492 01:24:930 01:25:368 : Add finish Fixed.

Weezy wrote:

If you want to make an easier diff go ahead, its your map. Just pointing out this still can be ranked as it is.

lovhin456 wrote:

Here's the bg! No kds
http://puu.sh/4B5N
Tell me if it's okk ~

1. Check the offset like whymeman says also resnap all notes in all diffs~
2. Resnap All inherited timing section
3. Audio Lead In +4 in all diffs?
4. No Easy and Two Hard... well anyway~

1. 00:02:491 (2) - Check the spacing, this is a bit away to 1
2. 00:15:533 (1) - Again, not is a big problem and not is appreciated with ease, but preserve the spacing is a thing very important, Ctrl+R is my best solution~
3. 00:08:952 - Uhm a spinner same as Hard would be better imo
4. 00:26:475 (6) - New combo here and remove the new combo to the next note
5. 00:46:183 (1,2,3) - Change these beats for a slider imo sound better maybe something like this ~
6. 00:57:132 (1) - Remove new combo, imo is needless
7. 01:01:511 (5) - New combo here, then...
8. 01:03:701 (1) - ...remove new combo here and put the new combo in the next note, to preserve the 8 white ticks of each new combo to since the begin of chorus furthermore looks better
9. Well Made :3

1. 00:02:491 (1) - New combo senseless imo
2. 00:22:968 (6) - uhm maybe new combo here, check the music
3. 01:02:603 (1,2) - Sounds a bit weird, why? because (2) should be put here 01:03:034 to follow the voice, my best solution: shorten (1) 1/2, move (2) to 01:03:034 and finally put a beat in 01:03:034 ahoooy!, now the patter (really) follow the voice
4. 01:07:202 (1) - Again, this slider no follow the voice and sound a bit weird, my suggestion: remove 01:07:859 (2,3) , move 01:07:202 (1) 1/2 forward and put a beat here 01:07:195 not is neccesary move any beat, only put the beat of 01:07:195 in x: 8 y: 136
5. Strange way to place Nc but anyways~ :3

1. 00:51:883 (5) - Finish needless imo
2. 00:53:635 (5) - ^ furthermore sound a bit strong compared with the track an voice
3. 00:54:073 (7) - Finish? :3
4. 01:03:051 (1) - this new combo looks weird :v
5. Check the finish at the soft part of the song~ some are senseless

1. 00:09:165 - Consider put a spinner same the others diff to preserve the flow~
2. 01:24:056 (7) - Maybe new combo?
3. Good Job =w=b moe moe symmetric chorus~

Kenezz wrote:

Oh hi o/
Kenezz's Bakamod

General

1. Check the offset like whymeman says also resnap all notes in all diffs~
2. Resnap All inherited timing section
3. Audio Lead In +4 in all diffs?
4. No Easy and Two Hard... well anyway~

Normal

1. 00:02:491 (2) - Check the spacing, this is a bit away to 1
2. 00:15:533 (1) - Again, not is a big problem and not is appreciated with ease, but preserve the spacing is a thing very important, Ctrl+R is my best solution~
3. 00:08:952 - Uhm a spinner same as Hard would be better imo
4. 00:26:475 (6) - New combo here and remove the new combo to the next note
5. 00:46:183 (1,2,3) - Change these beats for a slider imo sound better maybe something like this ~
6. 00:57:132 (1) - Remove new combo, imo is needless
7. 01:01:511 (5) - New combo here, then...
8. 01:03:701 (1) - ...remove new combo here and put the new combo in the next note, to preserve the 8 white ticks of each new combo to since the begin of chorus furthermore looks better
9. Well Made :3

Hard

1. 00:02:491 (1) - New combo senseless imo
2. 00:22:968 (6) - uhm maybe new combo here, check the music
3. 01:02:603 (1,2) - Sounds a bit weird, why? because (2) should be put here 01:03:034 to follow the voice, my best solution: shorten (1) 1/2, move (2) to 01:03:034 and finally put a beat in 01:03:034 ahoooy!, now the patter (really) follow the voice
4. 01:07:202 (1) - Again, this slider no follow the voice and sound a bit weird, my suggestion: remove 01:07:859 (2,3) , move 01:07:202 (1) 1/2 forward and put a beat here 01:07:195 not is neccesary move any beat, only put the beat of 01:07:195 in x: 8 y: 136
5. Strange way to place Nc but anyways~ :3

Kirino's Hard

1. 00:51:883 (5) - Finish needless imo
2. 00:53:635 (5) - ^ furthermore sound a bit strong compared with the track an voice
3. 00:54:073 (7) - Finish? :3
4. 01:03:051 (1) - this new combo looks weird :v
5. Check the finish at the soft part of the song~ some are senseless

Saten's Insane

1. 00:09:165 - Consider put a spinner same the others diff to preserve the flow~
2. 01:24:056 (7) - Maybe new combo?
3. Good Job =w=b moe moe symmetric chorus~

Well, That's All, I hope to helps you~
Go go Genkishi! /o/
Good Luck! ^^

Kenezz wrote:

Saten's Insane

1. 00:09:165 - Consider put a spinner same the others diff to preserve the flow~ added a spinner~ somewhat different than the others though~
2. 01:24:056 (7) - Maybe new combo? kay
3. Good Job =w=b moe moe symmetric chorus~ moemoe