I fixed all these things wowshakhov has found, except of «non-rhythmic combo» (01:40:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ) for Hard diff and all breaks that start after 0:08:030 because there's no HP drain at 00:07:276 ~ 00:08:030.
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Topic Starter
Can I make a taiko diff ?
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Topic Starter
Umm... sure, but I don't know anything about Taiko diffs and modding of them so I guess you'll have to do it yourself.HeatKai wrote:
Can I make a taiko diff?
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I'm off for few days.
okay..
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1162 combo.
1 spinner used.
thanks Sander-don for some irc help :3
put my name at tags
EDIT: woops double post , sorry !!!
Download: F-777 - He's a Pirate (TicClick) [H's Taiko].osu
1 spinner used.
thanks Sander-don for some irc help :3
put my name at tags
EDIT: woops double post , sorry !!!
Download: F-777 - He's a Pirate (TicClick) [H's Taiko].osu
Hi ~
Here is my Taiko mod ~
Mod request by HeatKai
As requested, I won't use colors in this mod
Bolded + underlined ~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Bolded ~ I think you should fix this
? ~ Suggestions only
[H's Taiko]
I still discourage the uses of long and frequent 1/6s, esp the 00:41:030 &02:29:830. 1/6s in this song = 1/4s with BPM 225. I think players will generally hate long 1/6s ~
02:49:430 ( 853 ~ 911 ) - This stream is way too long Orz Please shorten it ~
? The accelerated notes in this diff are quite unpredictable at first sight and therefore should be either slowed down a bit or removed...?
? 00:13:730 ( 1 ) - Move the spinner 1/4 backward so that it won't stack the previous note like this ?
? 02:57:430 ( 922 ~ 936 ) - The patterns of this stream are much more difficult than others. Consider simplifying ?
The idea of the map is OK, but needs improvement imo ~
Rating : 6.5/10
Unfortunately, I can't star this because the system removed this function Orz
However, wish you a good luck on the map
Here is my Taiko mod ~
Mod request by HeatKai
As requested, I won't use colors in this mod
Bolded + underlined ~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Bolded ~ I think you should fix this
? ~ Suggestions only
[H's Taiko]
I still discourage the uses of long and frequent 1/6s, esp the 00:41:030 &02:29:830. 1/6s in this song = 1/4s with BPM 225. I think players will generally hate long 1/6s ~
02:49:430 ( 853 ~ 911 ) - This stream is way too long Orz Please shorten it ~
? The accelerated notes in this diff are quite unpredictable at first sight and therefore should be either slowed down a bit or removed...?
? 00:13:730 ( 1 ) - Move the spinner 1/4 backward so that it won't stack the previous note like this ?
? 02:57:430 ( 922 ~ 936 ) - The patterns of this stream are much more difficult than others. Consider simplifying ?
The idea of the map is OK, but needs improvement imo ~
Rating : 6.5/10
Unfortunately, I can't star this because the system removed this function Orz
However, wish you a good luck on the map
I keep the 1/6
But about the long stream orz
*hard-headed*
Download: F-777 - He's a Pirate (TicClick) [H's Taiko].osu
But about the long stream orz
*hard-headed*
Download: F-777 - He's a Pirate (TicClick) [H's Taiko].osu
Heya Cool remix!
[Normal]
00:27:630 (1) - I don't really think like it is needed, delete it.
[hack]
Switch the BSD to 1/6.
That's the only one, you're pretty good, and the customers of your guests too Good Luck
Cool remix![Normal]
00:27:630 (1) - I don't really think like it is needed, delete it.
[hack]
Switch the BSD to 1/6.
That's the only one, you're pretty good, and the customers of your guests too
Good Luck
Topic Starter
I removed that repeating slider on Normal and it doesn't confuse me anymore. Thanx.
I also changed hitsounds, some of them didn't sound well (now they do, ha-ha).
I also changed hitsounds, some of them didn't sound well (now they do, ha-ha).
[Kiai]
00:28:830 - I don't find this kiai time to be really that necessary as this section is just like the one before it so it doesn't stand out. IMO kiai should be used for sections that stand out, so it works for the second kiai time, but not for this one IMO. If you really want the kiai at this point I suggest putting it only at 00:41:630 - as it's completely different from any other part of the song.
[Hard]
00:38:830 (2,4,6) - Looks really fugly because of the way 6 is behind the 2 and 4. That, and for some reason this part kept tripping me up. I suggest you try to unclutter this combo.
01:19:630 (1,1) - Really? This is just lazy mapping to me. I think you should get rid of at least one of these and map the section. It would actually be preferable if both went away, but that's just me.
01:55:230 (1,1) - ^ Same as above. And I think this section might work with some slow sliders, but it's your map, you decide what to do with it.
[hackSL's Insanse]
00:00:076 (1) - I don't really like spinners like these that just start that song. Especially since this one prevents you from the mapping the beginning of the actual song. You can keep if you like, but I really don't think it adds to the map.
Pretty good maps, but there are things that bug me and I'm sure would bug others. But you get a star.
Edit: I messed up with a time in the kiai part of the mod, fixed now.
00:28:830 - I don't find this kiai time to be really that necessary as this section is just like the one before it so it doesn't stand out. IMO kiai should be used for sections that stand out, so it works for the second kiai time, but not for this one IMO. If you really want the kiai at this point I suggest putting it only at 00:41:630 - as it's completely different from any other part of the song.
[Hard]
00:38:830 (2,4,6) - Looks really fugly because of the way 6 is behind the 2 and 4. That, and for some reason this part kept tripping me up. I suggest you try to unclutter this combo.
01:19:630 (1,1) - Really? This is just lazy mapping to me. I think you should get rid of at least one of these and map the section. It would actually be preferable if both went away, but that's just me.
01:55:230 (1,1) - ^ Same as above. And I think this section might work with some slow sliders, but it's your map, you decide what to do with it.
[hackSL's Insanse]
00:00:076 (1) - I don't really like spinners like these that just start that song. Especially since this one prevents you from the mapping the beginning of the actual song. You can keep if you like, but I really don't think it adds to the map.
Pretty good maps, but there are things that bug me and I'm sure would bug others. But you get a star.
Edit: I messed up with a time in the kiai part of the mod, fixed now.
Topic Starter
rust45
Thank you. These spinners were the first what came in my mind and later I didn't change them.
I mapped these parts and left only 01:22:830 (1) - .
Insane is being remapped.
Thank you. These spinners were the first what came in my mind and later I didn't change them.
I mapped these parts and left only 01:22:830 (1) - .
Insane is being remapped.
[Hard]
00:04:476 (1,2) - лучше бы были короткие слайдеры+круги
01:34:030 (1) - не звучит. я бы сократил и добавил круг
02:14:430 (5) - брейк дальше на мой взгляд не подходит. можно начать его отсюда например 02:16:830 (X) -
в звуках мне не нравятся только слайдеры со свистком.. если ты хочешь их оставить, то мб поставь на начало этих слайдеров ещё свистки
[Normal]
02:14:430 (5) - тоже самое с брейком =\
самая цельная сложность в мапсете
собственно всё от меня
00:04:476 (1,2) - лучше бы были короткие слайдеры+круги
01:34:030 (1) - не звучит. я бы сократил и добавил круг
02:14:430 (5) - брейк дальше на мой взгляд не подходит. можно начать его отсюда например 02:16:830 (X) -
в звуках мне не нравятся только слайдеры со свистком.. если ты хочешь их оставить, то мб поставь на начало этих слайдеров ещё свистки
[Normal]
02:14:430 (5) - тоже самое с брейком =\
самая цельная сложность в мапсете
собственно всё от меня
Topic Starter
Заодно нашёл ещё один неритмичный момент. Спасибо.CracK wrote:
[Hard]
00:04:476 (1,2) - лучше бы были короткие слайдеры+круги — Исправил. И правда лучше.
01:34:030 (1) - не звучит. я бы сократил и добавил круг — Исправил.
в звуках мне не нравятся только слайдеры со свистком.. если ты хочешь их оставить, то мб поставь на начало этих слайдеров ещё свистки — Я убрал свисток с большинства тел, поставил на начало.
02:14:430 (5) - — Пофиксил брейк, как ты и посоветовал.
[Normal]
00:23:230 (4) - Add whistle?
03:01:230 (4,5,6) - strange triple since it's not in the rest of the map.
03:09:630 (2) - This slider needs to decide if it's straight or curved.
03:19:630 (2) - Center this beetween the sliders better, it's a bit off.
03:21:830 (2,3,4,5) - What I said before...not in the rest of the map except twice? Kinda strange.
[Hard]
00:22:230 (8) - This slider shape could be better.
00:23:030 (10) - ^
00:28:830 (1) - ^
00:32:630 (2) - Move this note to it's in the center of those sliders.
00:40:030 (7) - Ahhh I dislike this slider shape too.
01:26:430 (x) - I'd end the slider here.
01:55:630 (2) - I don't hear any music at this part, kinda strange for a note to be there.
I don't play taiko or insanes so I don't mod them. <3
I love this song, gl on ranking,
00:23:230 (4) - Add whistle?
03:01:230 (4,5,6) - strange triple since it's not in the rest of the map.
03:09:630 (2) - This slider needs to decide if it's straight or curved.
03:19:630 (2) - Center this beetween the sliders better, it's a bit off.
03:21:830 (2,3,4,5) - What I said before...not in the rest of the map except twice? Kinda strange.
[Hard]
00:22:230 (8) - This slider shape could be better.
00:23:030 (10) - ^
00:28:830 (1) - ^
00:32:630 (2) - Move this note to it's in the center of those sliders.
00:40:030 (7) - Ahhh I dislike this slider shape too.
01:26:430 (x) - I'd end the slider here.
01:55:630 (2) - I don't hear any music at this part, kinda strange for a note to be there.
I don't play taiko or insanes so I don't mod them. <3
I love this song, gl on ranking,
Topic Starter
Thanx for the help.Lizzehb wrote:
[Normal]
00:23:230 (4) - Add whistle? — Not bad.
03:01:230 (4,5,6) - strange triple since it's not in the rest of the map. — No. But I found another mistakes, thank you.
03:09:630 (2) - This slider needs to decide if it's straight or curved. — Okay. It decided to be curved.
03:19:630 (2) - Center this beetween the sliders better, it's a bit off. — Remapped.
03:21:830 (2,3,4,5) - What I said before...not in the rest of the map except twice? Kinda strange. — I like this moment so I think I leave it as it is.
[Hard]
00:22:230 (8) - This slider shape could be better. — No; that's exactly what I want.
00:23:030 (10) - ^ — The same.
00:28:830 (1) - ^ — Okay, fixed.
00:32:630 (2) - Move this note to it's in the center of those sliders. — Done.
00:40:030 (7) - Ahhh I dislike this slider shape too. — Me too; I deleted it and used notes here.
01:26:430 (x) - I'd end the spinner here. — No, I think it sounds better when it ends at 01:25:630.
01:55:630 (2) - I don't hear any music at this part, kinda strange for a note to be there. — I made slider instead of two notes
[hackSL's Insane]
00:00:076 (1) - лучше бы поставил что-нибудь начиная с 00:01:276
00:02:342 (X) - круг
00:03:076 (1,2,3) - не подходит. потому что здесь не 1/4 и нет такого в самой музыке
переделай под 1/3. и следующий слайдер тоже
00:06:342 (X) - круг
я бы и здесь ещё добавил правда 00:06:209 (X)
01:03:730 (X) - круг
01:10:130 (4) - перенеси на 01:10:330
01:29:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - что-то неладное со спейсингом здесь. если хочешь - можешь не менять, но хотя бы отодвинь всё подальше от следующего слайдера
02:00:696 (8) - плохо. потому как должна быть кнопочка на 02:00:830, иначе странно звучит
02:07:630 (1,2,3,4,5) - переделай в 1/3. такие слайдеры с возвратами очень не ок
02:14:230 (9) - тоже
02:16:230 (2) - ^
02:18:530 (6,7) - ^
00:00:076 (1) - лучше бы поставил что-нибудь начиная с 00:01:276
00:02:342 (X) - круг
00:03:076 (1,2,3) - не подходит. потому что здесь не 1/4 и нет такого в самой музыке
переделай под 1/3. и следующий слайдер тоже
00:06:342 (X) - круг
я бы и здесь ещё добавил правда 00:06:209 (X)
01:03:730 (X) - круг
01:10:130 (4) - перенеси на 01:10:330
01:29:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - что-то неладное со спейсингом здесь. если хочешь - можешь не менять, но хотя бы отодвинь всё подальше от следующего слайдера
02:00:696 (8) - плохо. потому как должна быть кнопочка на 02:00:830, иначе странно звучит
02:07:630 (1,2,3,4,5) - переделай в 1/3. такие слайдеры с возвратами очень не ок
02:14:230 (9) - тоже
02:16:230 (2) - ^
02:18:530 (6,7) - ^
Done~CracK wrote:
[hackSL's Insane]
00:00:076 (1) - лучше бы поставил что-нибудь начиная с 00:01:276
00:02:342 (X) - круг
00:03:076 (1,2,3) - не подходит. потому что здесь не 1/4 и нет такого в самой музыке
переделай под 1/3. и следующий слайдер тоже
00:06:342 (X) - круг
я бы и здесь ещё добавил правда 00:06:209 (X)
01:03:730 (X) - круг
01:10:130 (4) - перенеси на 01:10:330
01:29:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - что-то неладное со спейсингом здесь. если хочешь - можешь не менять, но хотя бы отодвинь всё подальше от следующего слайдера
02:00:696 (8) - плохо. потому как должна быть кнопочка на 02:00:830, иначе странно звучит
02:07:630 (1,2,3,4,5) - переделай в 1/3. такие слайдеры с возвратами очень не ок
02:14:230 (9) - тоже
02:16:230 (2) - ^
02:18:530 (6,7) - ^
Et Tic here is my mod 
, good luck with your song and remember, this is only suggestion
Offset and BPM ok
I think you need a kiai more: 01:28:030 to 01:40:830, like the others.
Normal
03:22:830 (6) - That I think sounds better in soft, I think.
00:06:076 (2) - That finish in the white line.
00:20:830 (1) - Try whistle
00:40:830 (4,5) - Try soft
Hard
00:42:830 (1) - Remove new combo to make 00:43:230 (2) here the new combo.
00:52:830 (1,2) - Move it to stack "2".
01:16:030 (8) - Finish in taiko in middle of a stream is imposible I think.
01:19:096 (9) - ^
01:29:430 (7) - Stack
01:36:030 (7) - New combo
02:14:430 (3) - ^
02:16:030 (3) - ^
02:30:030 (1) - Remove new combo to put new combo in 02:30:430 (3)
02:49:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hmm, correct the spacing of the circles.
03:01:630 (9,1) - Very near I think.
03:18:030 (1) - Remove new combo to put new combo in 03:18:430 (3)
Insane
00:29:030 (1) - Remove new combo to put in 00:28:830 (13)
00:35:230 (7) - New combo and remove new combo here: 00:35:630 (1) -
00:38:430 (4) - New combo
00:44:830 (5) - ^
00:45:430 (1) - Remove new combo
00:46:430 (9) - New combo
00:46:830 (1) - Remove new combo
00:48:030 (7) - New combo
00:48:430 (1) - Remove new combo
00:51:230 (4) - New combo
00:52:030 (1) - Remove new combo
00:52:830 (7) - New combo
01:34:030 (1) - Remove New combo
01:34:430 (2) - New combo...
01:37:630 (8) - ^
01:38:430 (1) - Remove
01:39:230 (6) - New
02:14:430 (9) - New combo
02:17:630 (5) - ^
02:36:830 (8) - ^
02:37:830 (1) - Remove
02:38:430 (6) - New
02:41:630 (6) - ^
02:42:830 (1) - Remove
02:44:830 (7) - New
02:45:030 (1) - Remove
02:46:230 (1) - ^
02:46:430 (9) - New
02:48:030 (3) - ^
02:58:430 (1) - Remove
02:59:230 (15) - New
03:01:630 (1) - Remove
03:02:430 (13) - Neeew
03:03:230 (1) - Remove...
03:04:030 (7) - New
03:05:630 (6) - ^
03:06:030 (1) - Remove
03:06:830 (1) - Remove
03:07:230 (10) - New
03:08:030 (1) - Remove
03:08:830 (4) - New
03:09:830 (1) - Remove
03:10:430 (7) - New
03:12:030 (7) - ^
03:12:430 (1) - Remove
03:13:630 (6) - New
03:14:430 (1) - Remove
03:15:230 (9) - New
03:16:230 (1) - Remove
03:17:430 (1) - Remove
03:18:430 (17) - New
So much combo correctiosn for a map... I think you need to learn about combo and a little bit of music theory: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=58959
Good map I hope you rank it
Bye
here is my mod , good luck with your song and remember, this is only suggestion Offset and BPM ok
I think you need a kiai more: 01:28:030 to 01:40:830
, like the others.Normal
03:22:830 (6) - That I think sounds better in soft, I think.
00:06:076 (2) - That finish in the white line.
00:20:830 (1) - Try whistle
00:40:830 (4,5) - Try soft
Hard
00:42:830 (1) - Remove new combo to make 00:43:230 (2) here the new combo.
00:52:830 (1,2) - Move it to stack "2".
01:16:030 (8) - Finish in taiko in middle of a stream is imposible I think.
01:19:096 (9) - ^
01:29:430 (7) - Stack
01:36:030 (7) - New combo
02:14:430 (3) - ^
02:16:030 (3) - ^
02:30:030 (1) - Remove new combo to put new combo in 02:30:430 (3)
02:49:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hmm, correct the spacing of the circles.
03:01:630 (9,1) - Very near I think.
03:18:030 (1) - Remove new combo to put new combo in 03:18:430 (3)
Insane
00:29:030 (1) - Remove new combo to put in 00:28:830 (13)
00:35:230 (7) - New combo and remove new combo here: 00:35:630 (1) -
00:38:430 (4) - New combo
00:44:830 (5) - ^
00:45:430 (1) - Remove new combo
00:46:430 (9) - New combo
00:46:830 (1) - Remove new combo
00:48:030 (7) - New combo
00:48:430 (1) - Remove new combo
00:51:230 (4) - New combo
00:52:030 (1) - Remove new combo
00:52:830 (7) - New combo
01:34:030 (1) - Remove New combo
01:34:430 (2) - New combo...
01:37:630 (8) - ^
01:38:430 (1) - Remove
01:39:230 (6) - New
02:14:430 (9) - New combo
02:17:630 (5) - ^
02:36:830 (8) - ^
02:37:830 (1) - Remove
02:38:430 (6) - New
02:41:630 (6) - ^
02:42:830 (1) - Remove
02:44:830 (7) - New
02:45:030 (1) - Remove
02:46:230 (1) - ^
02:46:430 (9) - New
02:48:030 (3) - ^
02:58:430 (1) - Remove
02:59:230 (15) - New
03:01:630 (1) - Remove
03:02:430 (13) - Neeew
03:03:230 (1) - Remove...
03:04:030 (7) - New
03:05:630 (6) - ^
03:06:030 (1) - Remove
03:06:830 (1) - Remove
03:07:230 (10) - New
03:08:030 (1) - Remove
03:08:830 (4) - New
03:09:830 (1) - Remove
03:10:430 (7) - New
03:12:030 (7) - ^
03:12:430 (1) - Remove
03:13:630 (6) - New
03:14:430 (1) - Remove
03:15:230 (9) - New
03:16:230 (1) - Remove
03:17:430 (1) - Remove
03:18:430 (17) - New
So much combo correctiosn for a map... I think you need to learn about combo and a little bit of music theory: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=58959
Good map
I hope you rank it Bye
Topic Starter
Thanx. I'll fix the rest of your mod tomorrow.K i R a wrote:
Normal
03:22:830 (6) - That I think sounds better in soft, I think. — Yea!
00:06:076 (2) - That finish in the white line. — No.
00:20:830 (1) - Try whistle — No.
00:40:830 (4,5) - Try soft
Hard
00:42:830 (1) - Remove new combo to make 00:43:230 (2) here the new combo. — Nope. I want all 4 sliders with the same colour
00:52:830 (1,2) - Move it to stack "2". — Done
01:16:030 (8) - Finish in taiko in middle of a stream is imposible I think. — I have Taiko diff for taiko, hah. Also it is 1/3, not 1/4.
01:19:096 (9) - ^ — The saem thing.
01:29:430 (7) - Stack — Done.
01:36:030 (7) - New combo — Done
02:14:430 (3) - ^ — No.
02:16:030 (3) - ^ — Fixed.
02:30:030 (1) - Remove new combo to put new combo in 02:30:430 (3) — Fixed.
02:49:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hmm, correct the spacing of the circles. — Fixed
03:01:630 (9,1) - Very near I think. — Yea.
03:18:030 (1) - Remove new combo to put new combo in 03:18:430 (3) — Yea.Insane00:29:030 (1) - Remove new combo to put in 00:28:830 (13)
00:35:230 (7) - New combo and remove new combo here: 00:35:630 (1) -
00:38:430 (4) - New combo
00:44:830 (5) - ^
00:45:430 (1) - Remove new combo
00:46:430 (9) - New combo
00:46:830 (1) - Remove new combo
00:48:030 (7) - New combo
00:48:430 (1) - Remove new combo
00:51:230 (4) - New combo
00:52:030 (1) - Remove new combo
00:52:830 (7) - New combo
01:34:030 (1) - Remove New combo
01:34:430 (2) - New combo...
01:37:630 (8) - ^
01:38:430 (1) - Remove
01:39:230 (6) - New
02:14:430 (9) - New combo
02:17:630 (5) - ^
02:36:830 (8) - ^
02:37:830 (1) - Remove
02:38:430 (6) - New
02:41:630 (6) - ^
02:42:830 (1) - Remove
02:44:830 (7) - New
02:45:030 (1) - Remove
02:46:230 (1) - ^
02:46:430 (9) - New
02:48:030 (3) - ^
02:58:430 (1) - Remove
02:59:230 (15) - New
03:01:630 (1) - Remove
03:02:430 (13) - Neeew
03:03:230 (1) - Remove...
03:04:030 (7) - New
03:05:630 (6) - ^
03:06:030 (1) - Remove
03:06:830 (1) - Remove
03:07:230 (10) - New
03:08:030 (1) - Remove
03:08:830 (4) - New
03:09:830 (1) - Remove
03:10:430 (7) - New
03:12:030 (7) - ^
03:12:430 (1) - Remove
03:13:630 (6) - New
03:14:430 (1) - Remove
03:15:230 (9) - New
03:16:230 (1) - Remove
03:17:430 (1) - Remove
03:18:430 (17) - New
Ну, сам попросил.
General
во-вторых : сайт, откуда ты это сдул, нельзя считать полноценным источником. Не писать же всем источники iTunes или какой-нибудь freakenergy.ru , Источник - это если данный трек играл в каком-то аниме, фильме, игре и тп.
исходя из вышесказанного, удали источник вообще. Т.к. замиксованный он вообще не играл нигде, как я полагаю.
Дальше больше.
По-моему вполне ясно, что исполнитель именно Jesse Valentine, а F-777 пора спульнуть в тэги.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/439735 <= просто ссылка на песню, но там исполнитель чотко виден. яснее, чем на его странице.
Если будешь менять артиста, то ознакомься : viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443&start=0
Я был бы рад, если бы ты мне показал данный трек в аудиозаписях этого исполнителя. ибо его там элементарно нет. Следовательно я и в титле не очень уверен.
Pirates of the Carribean - тоже все понятно, но вот тебе линки : http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 0&g=0&la=0
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 0&g=0&la=0
Что он показывает? он показывает, что осу!поисковик мап работает минимум от 4х букв в слове. предлоги типа of или the не работают, а with с 4мя буквами - работает,поэтому в нем бы смысл был, но он тут неуместен. Поэтому по идее of the как бы и не нужны. Никто их удалять не заставляет, читабельность, все дела. просто инфа на будущее, мб пригодится.
hackSL - у него тут инсейн
HeatKai - упс, тэги неодинаковые. в hackSL's Insane не хватает этого словечка.
Taiko BG
Можешь говорить, что я придираюсь, но тут уж назвался груздем, как гриццо...
Твой титл : He's a Pirate
На бг написано : He's A Pirate
Да-да, letter "a" was capitalized without any reason. По идее, если бы это несовпадение произошло в титле, то это важно - нужен фуллсабмит, все дела. Тут вроде как нет, но лучше поправить.
Comboburst
ох уж мне эти тохопикчи из ниоткуда с привязкой в никуда...
А по делу : Combo-burst has wrong resolution : 578x600.
Official Ranking Submission Criteria says :
Темплэйт комбобёрст : 383х767
Примечание от МАТа :
hackSL's Insane
HP 5 , OD 8 => выстави семерки оба
Не вижу причин для тикрейта 2, когда везде 1. Поставь тикрейт 1 в этой диффе.
00:27:230 (7) - новое комбо сюда
02:14:430 (1) - добавь финиш
02:19:230 (2) - а сюда бы нормал-финиш
02:20:830 (5) - здесь бы тоже нормал финиш вместо софта
02:44:830 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - весь вот этот стрим-червяк просит себе софт вистлов везде.и рассавь комбо как на картинке :
02:58:230 (8) - нк сюда
03:01:430 (8) - ^
03:02:030 (13,14) - 1 грид вправо, чтобы держать спейсинг в стриме постоянным
Hard
наличие нормал свистков радует. но стоят слишком просто, ими же можно такой ритм накрутить... ну ладно, нестрашно.
Вообще, по стримам... эта диффа сложнее.
00:59:830 (3) - 1 грид вправо
00:59:830 (3) - такие слайдеры лучше выглядит по центру, ну ок
01:46:430 (6) - не ок, смотри, 1/6 в конце :
02:52:830 (9) - лучше финиш вместо свстка
03:22:830 (1) - убери нк
H's Taiko
00:34:163 (145,146,147) - 1/3 sounds off
Normal
03:22:030 (3,4) - дистанс снэп х)
в целом, без ошибок
General
Source : Newgroundsда ладно? во-первых: newgrounds.com
во-вторых : сайт, откуда ты это сдул, нельзя считать полноценным источником. Не писать же всем источники iTunes или какой-нибудь freakenergy.ru , Источник - это если данный трек играл в каком-то аниме, фильме, игре и тп.
исходя из вышесказанного, удали источник вообще. Т.к. замиксованный он вообще не играл нигде, как я полагаю.
Дальше больше.
Artist: F-777Некто F-777 известен как Jesse Valentine. Не веришь - на : http://puu.sh/4WDw
По-моему вполне ясно, что исполнитель именно Jesse Valentine, а F-777 пора спульнуть в тэги.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/439735 <= просто ссылка на песню, но там исполнитель чотко виден. яснее, чем на его странице.
Если будешь менять артиста, то ознакомься : viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443&start=0
Title: He's a PirateКстати о его странице. http://f-777.newgrounds.com/audio/
Я был бы рад, если бы ты мне показал данный трек в аудиозаписях этого исполнителя. ибо его там элементарно нет. Следовательно я и в титле не очень уверен.
Tags: Hans Zimmer Pirates of the Carribean hackSLОкей, Hans Zimmer - автор оригинала
Pirates of the Carribean - тоже все понятно, но вот тебе линки : http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 0&g=0&la=0
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 0&g=0&la=0
Что он показывает? он показывает, что осу!поисковик мап работает минимум от 4х букв в слове. предлоги типа of или the не работают, а with с 4мя буквами - работает,поэтому в нем бы смысл был, но он тут неуместен
. Поэтому по идее of the как бы и не нужны. Никто их удалять не заставляет, читабельность, все дела. просто инфа на будущее, мб пригодится.hackSL - у него тут инсейн
HeatKai - упс, тэги неодинаковые. в hackSL's Insane не хватает этого словечка.
Taiko BG
Можешь говорить, что я придираюсь, но тут уж назвался груздем, как гриццо...
Твой титл : He's a Pirate
На бг написано : He's A Pirate
Да-да, letter "a" was capitalized without any reason. По идее, если бы это несовпадение произошло в титле, то это важно - нужен фуллсабмит, все дела. Тут вроде как нет, но лучше поправить.
Comboburst
ох уж мне эти тохопикчи из ниоткуда с привязкой в никуда...
А по делу : Combo-burst has wrong resolution : 578x600.
Official Ranking Submission Criteria says :
Темплэйт комбобёрст : 383х767
Примечание от МАТа :
Надеюсь, ты понял, что с ним делать. Всегда можно удалить на крайняк.Gonzvlo wrote:
Just a side-note: "500px" is the max width for the Combo-Burst file, I guess the current file it's alright.
hackSL's Insane
HP 5 , OD 8 => выстави семерки оба
Не вижу причин для тикрейта 2, когда везде 1. Поставь тикрейт 1 в этой диффе.
00:27:230 (7) - новое комбо сюда
02:14:430 (1) - добавь финиш
02:19:230 (2) - а сюда бы нормал-финиш
02:20:830 (5) - здесь бы тоже нормал финиш вместо софта
02:44:830 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - весь вот этот стрим-червяк просит себе софт вистлов везде.и рассавь комбо как на картинке :
02:58:230 (8) - нк сюда
03:01:430 (8) - ^
03:02:030 (13,14) - 1 грид вправо, чтобы держать спейсинг в стриме постоянным
Hard
наличие нормал свистков радует. но стоят слишком просто, ими же можно такой ритм накрутить... ну ладно, нестрашно.
Вообще, по стримам... эта диффа сложнее.
00:59:830 (3) - 1 грид вправо
00:59:830 (3) - такие слайдеры лучше выглядит по центру, ну ок
01:46:430 (6) - не ок, смотри, 1/6 в конце :
02:52:830 (9) - лучше финиш вместо свстка
03:22:830 (1) - убери нк
H's Taiko
00:34:163 (145,146,147) - 1/3 sounds off
Normal
03:22:030 (3,4) - дистанс снэп х)
в целом, без ошибок
Topic Starter
Some changes:
— Removed comboburst
— Changed tick rate to 1 for Insane
— Changed metadata a little
— Added some new combos for Insane and also removed some
— Edited taiko BG ("A" letter is not capitalized now, ha-ha)
— Removed comboburst
— Changed tick rate to 1 for Insane
— Changed metadata a little
— Added some new combos for Insane and also removed some
— Edited taiko BG ("A" letter is not capitalized now, ha-ha)
Requested Taiko Mod:
Initial Overveiw: Fun map, creative patterns although the flow isn't so good.
First off, change the Slider Velocity to 1.4, 1.6 is unnecessary at this BPM.
Change the HP Drain to 6
Change the Overall Difficulty to 6
Delete all those 1.3 speed up points, the speed up is not needed at all and unrankable.
00:41:030 - Try changing this 1/6 pattern to kkkd, it plays a lot smoother.
00:59:630 - add d
01:28:030 - change to d
01:30:530 - add k
01:30:730 - ^
01:30:830 - remove finish
01:46:630 - unnecessary 1/6 roll, try a different pattern.
01:53:630 - change to d
03:11:230 - unnecessary 1/6 roll, try a different pattern.
Initial Overveiw: Fun map, creative patterns although the flow isn't so good.
First off, change the Slider Velocity to 1.4, 1.6 is unnecessary at this BPM.
Change the HP Drain to 6
Change the Overall Difficulty to 6
Delete all those 1.3 speed up points, the speed up is not needed at all and unrankable.
00:41:030 - Try changing this 1/6 pattern to kkkd, it plays a lot smoother.
00:59:630 - add d
01:28:030 - change to d
01:30:530 - add k
01:30:730 - ^
01:30:830 - remove finish
01:46:630 - unnecessary 1/6 roll, try a different pattern.
01:53:630 - change to d
03:11:230 - unnecessary 1/6 roll, try a different pattern.
THANKS , some of them I didn't fix , i think :3MMzz wrote:
Requested Taiko Mod:
Initial Overveiw: Fun map, creative patterns although the flow isn't so good.
First off, change the Slider Velocity to 1.4, 1.6 is unnecessary at this BPM.
Change the HP Drain to 6
Change the Overall Difficulty to 6
Delete all those 1.3 speed up points, the speed up is not needed at all and unrankable.
00:41:030 - Try changing this 1/6 pattern to kkkd, it plays a lot smoother.
00:59:630 - add d
01:28:030 - change to d
01:30:530 - add k
01:30:730 - ^
01:30:830 - remove finish
01:46:630 - unnecessary 1/6 roll, try a different pattern.
01:53:630 - change to d
03:11:230 - unnecessary 1/6 roll, try a different pattern.
Thanks again , mapper 666 combo :3
Download: F-777 - He's a Pirate (TicClick) [H's Taiko].osu
[General]
~
[Normal]
OD-1? I know this is a normal, but is the easier difficulty in the mapset.
00:54:430 (3) This is the only stacked note in this difficulty, this is not recommended for the easier difficulty, please move it.
03:21:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Put something like this at the end of the difficulty is not good, the player becomes accustomed to a pattern, this may be something unexpected.
[Hard]
00:01:276 - Increase the distance between these notes, feels tight.
00:22:230 (8) Considering the previous pattern and how has this slider, at the first time that was very confusing, I thought the slider was 1/2 shorter.
00:34:830 (1) I don't feel an Anti jump here, please move this slider, don't fit with the music.
01:13:630 - Change these claps for whistles, don't fit with the music.
01:15:496 - The rhythm of this stream is very hard to read, I miss here, I suggest to change it for a slider, then it would be easier to keep up with the following streams.
02:09:896 - ^ Same problem with this stream, I can't read it, totally unexpected rhythm for me.
02:46:430 - Totally disagree with this pattern, is like an insane difficulty, to be honest, is more hard than the insane difficulty. I suggest to change it for sliders.
02:56:030 - In this moment, the difficulty ceases to be "Hard", becomes in insane for me, I suggest to change these streams, don't fit with the difficulty.
[Insane]
00:26:030 (3,4,5) Inconsistent spacing, looks bad when you're playing.
00:29:030 (1,2,3) Ok, that was strange for me, why not use the same distance in this stream that the previous stream?
01:15:496 - Why you decrease the distance in this stream?, is an 1/3 stream so you must increase the distance between the notes, not decrease.
01:18:696 (8) New combo? that was really confusing, due the hit-burst and the rhythm that you're following before, pressed to half thinking they had notes. Explain: http://puu.sh/58Gy
01:37:630 - Forgot the claps here ~
01:40:830 - Very long stream imo, please start the break here 01:47:230. Work better imo
02:20:830 - Very long break again, but if you reduce the previous break this work fine. Also, to reduce the break you can add a spin here 02:30:430 feels good.
02:57:630 - These streams sounds empty, add some claps?
03:02:030 (6) Clap?
03:06:830 (10) ^
[Taiko]
Please down a little the volume, sounds really noisy, 80% work fine.
What is the point to make the BG blurry? is annoying @.@
I love the song, I would like to make a difficulty, double star for you ~
Good luck !
~
[Normal]
OD-1? I know this is a normal, but is the easier difficulty in the mapset.
00:54:430 (3) This is the only stacked note in this difficulty, this is not recommended for the easier difficulty, please move it.
03:21:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Put something like this at the end of the difficulty is not good, the player becomes accustomed to a pattern, this may be something unexpected.
[Hard]
00:01:276 - Increase the distance between these notes, feels tight.
00:22:230 (8) Considering the previous pattern and how has this slider, at the first time that was very confusing, I thought the slider was 1/2 shorter.
00:34:830 (1) I don't feel an Anti jump here, please move this slider, don't fit with the music.
01:13:630 - Change these claps for whistles, don't fit with the music.
01:15:496 - The rhythm of this stream is very hard to read, I miss here, I suggest to change it for a slider, then it would be easier to keep up with the following streams.
02:09:896 - ^ Same problem with this stream, I can't read it, totally unexpected rhythm for me.
02:46:430 - Totally disagree with this pattern, is like an insane difficulty, to be honest, is more hard than the insane difficulty. I suggest to change it for sliders.
02:56:030 - In this moment, the difficulty ceases to be "Hard", becomes in insane for me, I suggest to change these streams, don't fit with the difficulty.
[Insane]
00:26:030 (3,4,5) Inconsistent spacing, looks bad when you're playing.
00:29:030 (1,2,3) Ok, that was strange for me, why not use the same distance in this stream that the previous stream?
01:15:496 - Why you decrease the distance in this stream?, is an 1/3 stream so you must increase the distance between the notes, not decrease.
01:18:696 (8) New combo? that was really confusing, due the hit-burst and the rhythm that you're following before, pressed to half thinking they had notes. Explain: http://puu.sh/58Gy
01:37:630 - Forgot the claps here ~
01:40:830 - Very long stream imo, please start the break here 01:47:230. Work better imo
02:20:830 - Very long break again, but if you reduce the previous break this work fine. Also, to reduce the break you can add a spin here 02:30:430 feels good.
02:57:630 - These streams sounds empty, add some claps?
03:02:030 (6) Clap?
03:06:830 (10) ^
[Taiko]
Please down a little the volume, sounds really noisy, 80% work fine.
What is the point to make the BG blurry? is annoying @.@
I love the song, I would like to make a difficulty, double star for you ~
Good luck !
Topic Starter
Fixed.eldnl wrote:
[Normal]
OD-1? I know this is a normal, but is the easier difficulty in the mapset. — I'll think about it.
00:54:430 (3) This is the only stacked note in this difficulty, this is not recommended for the easier difficulty, please move it. — Done.
03:21:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Put something like this at the end of the difficulty is not good, the player becomes accustomed to a pattern, this may be something unexpected. — 2 is removed.
[Hard]
00:01:276 - Increase the distance between these notes, feels tight. — It's 0.8x and it's fine.
00:22:230 (8) Considering the previous pattern and how has this slider, at the first time that was very confusing, I thought the slider was 1/2 shorter. — Err.. why? It's clear enough to see that it's longer that prev.
00:34:830 (1) I don't feel an Anti jump here, please move this slider, don't fit with the music. — I tried to place it further, but it becomes ugly
01:13:630 - Change these claps for whistles, don't fit with the music. — Done.
01:15:496 - The rhythm of this stream is very hard to read, I miss here, I suggest to change it for a slider, then it would be easier to keep up with the following streams. — Okay, I put three sliders instead.
02:09:896 - ^ Same problem with this stream, I can't read it, totally unexpected rhythm for me. — Eh. I love these 1/3s so I won't delete 'em.
02:46:430 - Totally disagree with this pattern, is like an insane difficulty, to be honest, is more hard than the insane difficulty. I suggest to change it for sliders. — No, thanks.
02:56:030 - In this moment, the difficulty ceases to be "Hard", becomes in insane for me, I suggest to change these streams, don't fit with the difficulty. — «No, thanks» again. I think I should keep player awake until the last note.
[Insane] — Let's see what will be fixed.
[Taiko]
Please down a little the volume, sounds really noisy, 80% work fine. — 75% now.
What is the point to make the BG blurry? is annoying @.@ — Hm, I just noticed that. Strange thing.
I love the song, I would like to make a difficulty, double star for you ~ — Thanks for the stars. Sorry, but you're a lil' bit late to make diff.
Taiko -
00:06:342 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - Make this dkddkddk as it plays better in 1/3rd.
00:17:230 (19) - Makee this a Big Don and all similarly place big katsu's should be a don. It doesent make any sense to make them big katsu. plus they sound so nasty...
00:34:296 - - d
00:34:430 - k
Uhh thats all I really see. After that, it got pretty good. Cept your use of 1/6. Consider using less of it.
00:06:342 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - Make this dkddkddk as it plays better in 1/3rd.
00:17:230 (19) - Makee this a Big Don and all similarly place big katsu's should be a don. It doesent make any sense to make them big katsu. plus they sound so nasty...
00:34:296 - - d
00:34:430 - k
Uhh thats all I really see. After that, it got pretty good. Cept your use of 1/6. Consider using less of it.
ALL DONE
MY MESSAGE IS TOO SHORT , WHY WHY ?
Okay
Still short orz
how many word/alphabet do you need ? orz
Download: F-777 - He's a Pirate (TicClick) [H's Taiko].osu
MY MESSAGE IS TOO SHORT , WHY WHY ?
Okay
Still short orz
how many word/alphabet do you need ? orz
Download: F-777 - He's a Pirate (TicClick) [H's Taiko].osu
H's Taiko
- I guess you need to consider more about composition of the music and the map.
- Some of big notes are random to me. Big notes are significant, so it can disrupt the map if it doesn't placed it correctly.
- Some 1/6s are kinda 'risky'.
00:04:176 (X) - Add k?
00:13:830 (1) - Even if you put finish in this, there won't be any sound in 00:14:430 when you really play this map, and there is a downbeat in there. I guess you'd better shorten it and add a note in 00:14:430. (and I think making this to start in 00:13:630 would be better.
00:34:163 (145,146,147) - The music isn't 1/3 here?
00:39:630 (X) - Add something here?
00:45:030 (219) - Can't understand this big note.
00:50:430 (251) - ^
00:55:030 (278,279,280) - d k d?
00:56:030 (281,282,283,284,285) - K d d K d?
00:57:630 (286,287,288,289,290) - K d d k d?
01:41:496 (542,543) - The sounds here aren't 1/3.
01:42:296 (545,546) - ^
01:43:330 (X) - Add a note?
01:55:230 ~ 02:19:230 - Big note placement is generally random.
02:21:230 (686) - Remove finish.
02:23:363 (X) - Add a note?
02:29:830 (731,732,733,734,735,736,737,738,739,740) - To me this 1/6s don't make sense.
03:00:230 (948,949) - Finish in 949 instead of 948.
03:11:230 (1020,1021,1022,1023,1024,1025,1026) - To me this 1/6s don't make sense.
Mah, I'm kinda lazy.
- I guess you need to consider more about composition of the music and the map.
- Some of big notes are random to me. Big notes are significant, so it can disrupt the map if it doesn't placed it correctly.
- Some 1/6s are kinda 'risky'.
00:04:176 (X) - Add k?
00:13:830 (1) - Even if you put finish in this, there won't be any sound in 00:14:430 when you really play this map, and there is a downbeat in there. I guess you'd better shorten it and add a note in 00:14:430. (and I think making this to start in 00:13:630 would be better.
00:34:163 (145,146,147) - The music isn't 1/3 here?
00:39:630 (X) - Add something here?
00:45:030 (219) - Can't understand this big note.
00:50:430 (251) - ^
00:55:030 (278,279,280) - d k d?
00:56:030 (281,282,283,284,285) - K d d K d?
00:57:630 (286,287,288,289,290) - K d d k d?
01:41:496 (542,543) - The sounds here aren't 1/3.
01:42:296 (545,546) - ^
01:43:330 (X) - Add a note?
01:55:230 ~ 02:19:230 - Big note placement is generally random.
02:21:230 (686) - Remove finish.
02:23:363 (X) - Add a note?
02:29:830 (731,732,733,734,735,736,737,738,739,740) - To me this 1/6s don't make sense.
03:00:230 (948,949) - Finish in 949 instead of 948.
03:11:230 (1020,1021,1022,1023,1024,1025,1026) - To me this 1/6s don't make sense.
Mah, I'm kinda lazy.
General: shouldn't the timing point at 00:08:030 start one beat earlier, where the techno kicks in? You'll want measures to line up though, so place two of them.
Normal
Large parts of the map use only white ticks... this gets boring. Maybe move some notes to red/purple ones.
00:38:830 (2) - kinda confusing for Normal.
00:51:630 (2) - nice slider art!
01:55:230 (1) - feels jaggy, line up red anchor points with beats
02:16:030 (3) - the break after this circle is awkwardly placed.
02:20:830 (1,2,3) - move one white tick earlier, then fill up the space after it? (not important)
03:08:830 (1) - i'd end Kiai time here.
Hard
00:37:430 (9) - why no whistle on the start point?
01:06:430 (9) - make slider like 01:03:630 (1)
01:46:430 (6,7,8) - make one beat
01:46:830 (9) - end with finish
02:00:430 (5) - align end point with (6)?
02:23:830 (2,3,4,5) - i'd also make these sliders like the following ones. Then again, that might be boring; maybe make the combo spiral out a little
03:04:630 (10) - make three beats
Insane
03:22:330 (2,3,4,5,6) - feels a bit overmapped
Couldn't find much wrong except for the final combo, though.
Normal
Large parts of the map use only white ticks... this gets boring. Maybe move some notes to red/purple ones.
00:38:830 (2) - kinda confusing for Normal.
00:51:630 (2) - nice slider art!
01:55:230 (1) - feels jaggy, line up red anchor points with beats
02:16:030 (3) - the break after this circle is awkwardly placed.
02:20:830 (1,2,3) - move one white tick earlier, then fill up the space after it? (not important)
03:08:830 (1) - i'd end Kiai time here.
Hard
00:37:430 (9) - why no whistle on the start point?
01:06:430 (9) - make slider like 01:03:630 (1)
01:46:430 (6,7,8) - make one beat
01:46:830 (9) - end with finish
02:00:430 (5) - align end point with (6)?
02:23:830 (2,3,4,5) - i'd also make these sliders like the following ones. Then again, that might be boring; maybe make the combo spiral out a little
03:04:630 (10) - make three beats
Insane
03:22:330 (2,3,4,5,6) - feels a bit overmapped
Couldn't find much wrong except for the final combo, though.
Topic Starter
nooodl wrote:
General: shouldn't the timing point at 00:08:030 start one beat earlier, where the techno kicks in? — Hmm... No?
Normal
Large parts of the map use only white ticks... this gets boring. Maybe move some notes to red/purple ones.
00:38:830 (2) - kinda confusing for Normal. — Not sure
01:55:230 (1) - feels jaggy, line up red anchor points with beats — I made a circle out of this
02:16:030 (3) - the break after this circle is awkwardly placed. — Done on both diffs02:20:830 (1,2,3) - move one white tick earlier, then fill up the space after it? (not important)
03:08:830 (1) - i'd end Kiai time here. — No
Hard
00:37:430 (9) - why no whistle on the start point? — Because it should be at 00:37:630
01:06:430 (9) - make slider like 01:03:630 (1) — No, because if I do that, I'll have to fill the rest of the break. I'll think about it later.
01:46:430 (6,7,8) - make one beat — Um.. no, don't think so
01:46:830 (9) - end with finish — Ok
02:00:430 (5) - align end point with (6)? — Done with SHIFT
02:23:830 (2,3,4,5) - i'd also make these sliders like the following ones. Then again, that might be boring; maybe make the combo spiral out a little — No, I tried but it doesn't look nice
03:04:630 (10) - make three beats — Good!
Insane
03:22:330 (2,3,4,5,6) - feels a bit overmapped — Hah, a bit, yeah. But it's not critical. Let's see what others will say.
Couldn't find much wrong except for the final combo, though.
done most of themlepidopodus wrote:
H's Taiko
- I guess you need to consider more about composition of the music and the map.
- Some of big notes are random to me. Big notes are significant, so it can disrupt the map if it doesn't placed it correctly.
- Some 1/6s are kinda 'risky'.
00:04:176 (X) - Add k?
00:13:830 (1) - Even if you put finish in this, there won't be any sound in 00:14:430 when you really play this map, and there is a downbeat in there. I guess you'd better shorten it and add a note in 00:14:430. (and I think making this to start in 00:13:630 would be better.
00:34:163 (145,146,147) - The music isn't 1/3 here?
00:39:630 (X) - Add something here?
00:45:030 (219) - Can't understand this big note.
00:50:430 (251) - ^
00:55:030 (278,279,280) - d k d?
00:56:030 (281,282,283,284,285) - K d d K d?
00:57:630 (286,287,288,289,290) - K d d k d?
01:41:496 (542,543) - The sounds here aren't 1/3.
01:42:296 (545,546) - ^
01:43:330 (X) - Add a note?
01:55:230 ~ 02:19:230 - Big note placement is generally random.
02:21:230 (686) - Remove finish.
02:23:363 (X) - Add a note?
02:29:830 (731,732,733,734,735,736,737,738,739,740) - To me this 1/6s don't make sense.
03:00:230 (948,949) - Finish in 949 instead of 948.
03:11:230 (1020,1021,1022,1023,1024,1025,1026) - To me this 1/6s don't make sense.
Mah, I'm kinda lazy.
Thanks lepid
Download: F-777 - He's a Pirate (TicClick) [H's Taiko].osu
I like the map, errors are few, so mostly suggestions.
[easy]
00:38:830 (2) - This slider slides over the long white tick. Could you shorten and put a circle there? Helps with the flow of the rhythm a lot if you always hit something on the long white tick. Plus, 2x+ repeating sliders don't play well in general, since you don't know how many repeats there are.
01:10:830 (3) - sliders like these are sort of lazy. If you could at least attempt to make it more symmetrical that would be awesome. You don't have to use grid snap either.
I sorta ran outta time unexpectedly, I'll finish this up in a little while.
okay I'm back
[normal] (oops, I don't always read diff names)
00:51:630 (2) - just want to point out how much WIN this is.
01:59:630 (2) - boo. I am not a fan of overmapping (putting a note where nothing exists in music). This whole section has a bunch. This isn't unrankable, and plenty of people don't care on osu!, but I do.
02:19:630 (5) - ^ only pointing out this one because it's not close to the rest of them.
02:24:030 (1,3) - these would look and play better if the "bounce" were in the middle. If you can make them symmetrical, do it.
02:48:030 (1) - ctrl H+J and you get a symmetrical pattern
03:21:230 (1,2) - reverse these 2
[hard]
00:22:230 (8,9,10,11) - move 8-10 1/2 later, and put 11 in the new empty space. see below for the rhythm i want.
00:25:630 (5,6,7) - This sounds really good, better than previous.
00:45:830 (4,2,3) - You don't have to fix these, but keep an eye out for these sliders that start on a red tick. If you put too many in a row, it plays awkward. I would say change (2) so it starts on a white tick instead. As long as you are consciously putting in offbeat sliders, it's okay.
01:55:230 (1) - overmapping as in normal. However, sliders are a bit different from circles as their ends aren't that important. I would be fine with making each note a slider, but to make it better, you should just use circles, or silence the end of the slider.
02:11:896 - end slider here?
02:43:230 (1) - http://puu.sh/5LFb
[insane]
00:03:409 (3) - delete, I don't really hear a clear note here, and even if there is one, it doesn't fit the previous patterns. Or you can do the next one
00:04:209 - move 3-5 back 1/3 to map this note. If you don't, add a note here.
00:04:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - press ctrl R after highlighting this rhythm and use that pattern (circle, repeating slider x4). This puts the repeating sliders ON the beat, rather than on the pickup.
00:07:142 (5) - if you feel the need to put in a slider here, do it anywhere but here or the first note in the stack. Otherwise just make it 2 circles.
00:16:630 (1,2,3) - for these types of compressed streams, it's best not to use the grid at all. If you click on 2, you'll see it's spacing is .71 and .78, which is close enough to be "okay" but clearly looks uneven, and thus looks bad. In general, you should use grid snap on the first and last notes of a compressed stream, but don't bother with the middle. If you do this for all the compressed streams it would look a lot better.
00:20:030 (5,6,7,8,9) - I'm also a bit confused on the stream spacing. Some are compressed, others aren't. It's just a bit inconsistent, that's all. Using only a few spacings would also be good. I see .4x, .56x, .7x, .8x, 1.2x, 1.3x, and the varying jump spacings (which don't really matter). Using .7x for compressed streams and 1.2x for normal spacing would be good.
00:41:230 (7,1) - unless you really like this, I think it's stupid.
00:46:430 (1,2) - ^
00:54:430 - new note here with new combo.
00:54:830 (1) - move back 1/2.
00:55:630 (5) - delete
about the previous 3 parts: you're mapping a tiny little echo that is completely insignificant. If this were taiko or you mapped everything in this section it would be okay, but picking and choosing what to map is akin to making up a new part, which I really hate, because it never fits.
01:00:830 - add circle, new combo or new combo 01:00:430 (5) - here.
01:03:130 (3) - delete, overmapped
01:03:430 (5) - ^
01:09:830 (2) - ^
01:13:930 (3) - not snapped right
01:19:630 (1) - add repeat, move 2 underneath the end
01:55:230 (1) - take whistle off the end of all these. It would be better to silence the ends...
02:01:230 (6) - delete, overmapped
02:02:296 - add a note
02:07:630 (1) - make this a normal slider of same length
02:09:230 (4) - circle
02:17:496 - add a note
02:18:830 (1) - make this a normal slider of same length
02:20:696 - add a note
02:45:630 (9) - new combo
03:08:030 (2) - This would sound better as a 1/2 slider, so that 3 and 4 are alone as a double.
[general]
Timing is off. I think it's 10 ms late (so +10ms) but I didn't really check. Normally I'm an early hitter too, so there's something wrong here.
[easy]
00:38:830 (2) - This slider slides over the long white tick. Could you shorten and put a circle there? Helps with the flow of the rhythm a lot if you always hit something on the long white tick. Plus, 2x+ repeating sliders don't play well in general, since you don't know how many repeats there are.
01:10:830 (3) - sliders like these are sort of lazy. If you could at least attempt to make it more symmetrical that would be awesome. You don't have to use grid snap either.
I sorta ran outta time unexpectedly, I'll finish this up in a little while.
okay I'm back
[normal] (oops, I don't always read diff names)
00:51:630 (2) - just want to point out how much WIN this is.
01:59:630 (2) - boo. I am not a fan of overmapping (putting a note where nothing exists in music). This whole section has a bunch. This isn't unrankable, and plenty of people don't care on osu!, but I do.
02:19:630 (5) - ^ only pointing out this one because it's not close to the rest of them.
02:24:030 (1,3) - these would look and play better if the "bounce" were in the middle. If you can make them symmetrical, do it.
02:48:030 (1) - ctrl H+J and you get a symmetrical pattern
03:21:230 (1,2) - reverse these 2
[hard]
00:22:230 (8,9,10,11) - move 8-10 1/2 later, and put 11 in the new empty space. see below for the rhythm i want.
00:25:630 (5,6,7) - This sounds really good, better than previous.
00:45:830 (4,2,3) - You don't have to fix these, but keep an eye out for these sliders that start on a red tick. If you put too many in a row, it plays awkward. I would say change (2) so it starts on a white tick instead. As long as you are consciously putting in offbeat sliders, it's okay.
01:55:230 (1) - overmapping as in normal. However, sliders are a bit different from circles as their ends aren't that important. I would be fine with making each note a slider, but to make it better, you should just use circles, or silence the end of the slider.
02:11:896 - end slider here?
02:43:230 (1) - http://puu.sh/5LFb
[insane]
00:03:409 (3) - delete, I don't really hear a clear note here, and even if there is one, it doesn't fit the previous patterns. Or you can do the next one
00:04:209 - move 3-5 back 1/3 to map this note. If you don't, add a note here.
00:04:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - press ctrl R after highlighting this rhythm and use that pattern (circle, repeating slider x4). This puts the repeating sliders ON the beat, rather than on the pickup.
00:07:142 (5) - if you feel the need to put in a slider here, do it anywhere but here or the first note in the stack. Otherwise just make it 2 circles.
00:16:630 (1,2,3) - for these types of compressed streams, it's best not to use the grid at all. If you click on 2, you'll see it's spacing is .71 and .78, which is close enough to be "okay" but clearly looks uneven, and thus looks bad. In general, you should use grid snap on the first and last notes of a compressed stream, but don't bother with the middle. If you do this for all the compressed streams it would look a lot better.
00:20:030 (5,6,7,8,9) - I'm also a bit confused on the stream spacing. Some are compressed, others aren't. It's just a bit inconsistent, that's all. Using only a few spacings would also be good. I see .4x, .56x, .7x, .8x, 1.2x, 1.3x, and the varying jump spacings (which don't really matter). Using .7x for compressed streams and 1.2x for normal spacing would be good.
00:41:230 (7,1) - unless you really like this, I think it's stupid.
00:46:430 (1,2) - ^
00:54:430 - new note here with new combo.
00:54:830 (1) - move back 1/2.
00:55:630 (5) - delete
about the previous 3 parts: you're mapping a tiny little echo that is completely insignificant. If this were taiko or you mapped everything in this section it would be okay, but picking and choosing what to map is akin to making up a new part, which I really hate, because it never fits.
01:00:830 - add circle, new combo or new combo 01:00:430 (5) - here.
01:03:130 (3) - delete, overmapped
01:03:430 (5) - ^
01:09:830 (2) - ^
01:13:930 (3) - not snapped right
01:19:630 (1) - add repeat, move 2 underneath the end
01:55:230 (1) - take whistle off the end of all these. It would be better to silence the ends...
02:01:230 (6) - delete, overmapped
02:02:296 - add a note
02:07:630 (1) - make this a normal slider of same length
02:09:230 (4) - circle
02:17:496 - add a note
02:18:830 (1) - make this a normal slider of same length
02:20:696 - add a note
02:45:630 (9) - new combo
03:08:030 (2) - This would sound better as a 1/2 slider, so that 3 and 4 are alone as a double.
[general]
Timing is off. I think it's 10 ms late (so +10ms) but I didn't really check. Normally I'm an early hitter too, so there's something wrong here.
Topic Starter
Also, I've got answer from Jesse!ziin wrote:
I like the map, errors are few, so mostly suggestions.
[easy]
00:38:830 (2) - This slider slides over the long white tick. Could you shorten and put a circle there? Helps with the flow of the rhythm a lot if you always hit something on the long white tick. Plus, 2x+ repeating sliders don't play well in general, since you don't know how many repeats there are. — Done
01:10:830 (3) - sliders like these are sort of lazy. If you could at least attempt to make it more symmetrical that would be awesome. You don't have to use grid snap either. — Done.. as I see
01:59:630 (2) - boo. I am not a fan of overmapping (putting a note where nothing exists in music). This whole section has a bunch. This isn't unrankable, and plenty of people don't care on osu!, but I do. — Removed 'em all
02:24:030 (1,3) - these would look and play better if the "bounce" were in the middle. If you can make them symmetrical, do it. — Done
02:48:030 (1) - ctrl H+J and you get a symmetrical pattern — Umm.. I rotated every repeating slider by 60 degrees, didn't try to make it symmetrical
03:21:230 (1,2) - reverse these 2 — I don't get it. What do you mean?
[hard]
00:22:230 (8,9,10,11) - move 8-10 1/2 later, and put 11 in the new empty space. see below for the rhythm i want. — Brilliant!
00:45:830 (4,2,3) - You don't have to fix these, but keep an eye out for these sliders that start on a red tick. — Done. Now I know why sliders like these sound a lil bit strange. Thank you!
01:55:230 (1) - overmapping as in normal. However, sliders are a bit different from circles as their ends aren't that important. I would be fine with making each note a slider, but to make it better, you should just use circles, or silence the end of the slider. — Done!
02:11:896 - end slider here? — Not bad
02:43:230 (1) - http://puu.sh/5LFb — He-he. Changed.Insane00:03:409 (3) - delete, I don't really hear a clear note here, and even if there is one, it doesn't fit the previous patterns. Or you can do the next one
00:04:209 - move 3-5 back 1/3 to map this note. If you don't, add a note here.
00:04:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - press ctrl R after highlighting this rhythm and use that pattern (circle, repeating slider x4). This puts the repeating sliders ON the beat, rather than on the pickup.
00:07:142 (5) - if you feel the need to put in a slider here, do it anywhere but here or the first note in the stack. Otherwise just make it 2 circles.
00:16:630 (1,2,3) - for these types of compressed streams, it's best not to use the grid at all. If you click on 2, you'll see it's spacing is .71 and .78, which is close enough to be "okay" but clearly looks uneven, and thus looks bad. In general, you should use grid snap on the first and last notes of a compressed stream, but don't bother with the middle. If you do this for all the compressed streams it would look a lot better.
00:20:030 (5,6,7,8,9) - I'm also a bit confused on the stream spacing. Some are compressed, others aren't. It's just a bit inconsistent, that's all. Using only a few spacings would also be good. I see .4x, .56x, .7x, .8x, 1.2x, 1.3x, and the varying jump spacings (which don't really matter). Using .7x for compressed streams and 1.2x for normal spacing would be good.
00:41:230 (7,1) - unless you really like this, I think it's stupid.
00:46:430 (1,2) - ^
00:54:430 - new note here with new combo.
00:54:830 (1) - move back 1/2.
00:55:630 (5) - delete
about the previous 3 parts: you're mapping a tiny little echo that is completely insignificant. If this were taiko or you mapped everything in this section it would be okay, but picking and choosing what to map is akin to making up a new part, which I really hate, because it never fits.
01:00:830 - add circle, new combo or new combo 01:00:430 (5) - here.
01:03:130 (3) - delete, overmapped
01:03:430 (5) - ^
01:09:830 (2) - ^
01:13:930 (3) - not snapped right
01:19:630 (1) - add repeat, move 2 underneath the end
01:55:230 (1) - take whistle off the end of all these. It would be better to silence the ends...
02:01:230 (6) - delete, overmapped
02:02:296 - add a note
02:07:630 (1) - make this a normal slider of same length
02:09:230 (4) - circle
02:17:496 - add a note
02:18:830 (1) - make this a normal slider of same length
02:20:696 - add a note
02:45:630 (9) - new combo
03:08:030 (2) - This would sound better as a 1/2 slider, so that 3 and 4 are alone as a double.I leave it for haskSL.Done. Some things are changed, some are not.
[general]
Timing is off. I think it's 10 ms late (so +10ms) but I didn't really check. Normally I'm an early hitter too, so there's something wrong here. — I'll ask somebody because I can't catch it, don't know why.
F-777 all the way haha thank you!Yee-haw, I don't need to change Artist field.
Yee-haw, I don't need to change Artist field.Окей, все равно "Jesse Valentine" в тэги-то добавь
plop this in the folder and full submit and your timing is perfect. re-encoded from source to have what the current offset is (38). recommended that people still-redl so that the timing is good~
http://puu.sh/5Nfw
http://puu.sh/5Nfw
Topic Starter
Hell yeah, all done.
Screw you, keystrokes.
Screw you, keystrokes.
When it will be submitted? Who knows? .........................................
Hi Nymph here and request from: Jojo's mod queue~
General:
Preview time are not the same. Please check the osu files of each diff.
Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
00:41:644 (1) - unnecessary timing line, delete it.
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:48:444 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make these spacing more neatly, like:
Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:56:044 (1) - delete the new combo here?
Hitsound
00:32:044 (1) - add a whistle on the head to fit with the whistle before?
00:33:644 (5) - don't understand why a whistle on the tail
hackSL's Insane:
Issue/unrankable stuff
Maybe OD+1? the score can be more than 13million.
00:41:644 (1) - unnecessary timing line. delete it.
01:34:044 (11) - a little hidden by the combo burst.
Beatmap design/suggestion
Fine for me, played well~
Hitsound
01:37:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - no claps here is on purpose? I suggest to add some.
About Insane: I think it played very well for me. I support it.
Good work! I wish you good luck! have my star~
General:
Preview time are not the same. Please check the osu files of each diff.
Normal:
Issue/unrankable stuff
00:41:644 (1) - unnecessary timing line, delete it.
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:48:444 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make these spacing more neatly, like:
Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:56:044 (1) - delete the new combo here?
Hitsound
00:32:044 (1) - add a whistle on the head to fit with the whistle before?
00:33:644 (5) - don't understand why a whistle on the tail
hackSL's Insane:
Issue/unrankable stuff
Maybe OD+1? the score can be more than 13million.
00:41:644 (1) - unnecessary timing line. delete it.
01:34:044 (11) - a little hidden by the combo burst.
Beatmap design/suggestion
Fine for me, played well~
Hitsound
01:37:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - no claps here is on purpose? I suggest to add some.
About Insane: I think it played very well for me. I support it.
Good work! I wish you good luck! have my star~
Topic Starter
Thank you.Nymph wrote:
General:
Preview time are not the same. Please check the osu files of each diff. — Done
Normal:
00:41:644 (1) - unnecessary timing line, delete it. — Done
00:48:444 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make these spacing more neatly — Done
Hard:
01:56:044 (1) - delete the new combo here? — Done
00:32:044 (1) - add a whistle on the head to fit with the whistle before? — Done
00:33:644 (5) - don't understand why a whistle on the tail — There's no whistle on the tail!
hackSL's Insane:
Maybe OD+1? the score can be more than 13million. — Okay, let's make it 'real' insane
00:41:644 (1) - unnecessary timing line. delete it. — Yea. I forgot to delete it after deleting kiai
01:34:044 (11) - a little hidden by the combo burst. — Err.. what? It's in center!
01:37:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - no claps here is on purpose? I suggest to add some. — Added. Maybe he just forgot about it.
TicClick wrote:
Nymph wrote:
Hard:
00:33:644 (5) - don't understand why a whistle on the tail — There's no whistle on the tail!
I mean: 00:34:444.
hackSL's Insane:
01:34:044 (11) - a little hidden by the combo burst. — Err.. what? It's in center!
only a little. not a big issue. Because I suck at playing =.=