00:08:098 - 00:13:098 - I do kind of think the emphasis on these hats are kinda unnecessary as it would look inconsistent with 00:05:806 - 00:09:140 - ... suggest to reduce

00:49:973 (49973|3,49973|2,50112|1,50112|0,50251|3,50251|2,50390|1,50390|0,50529|2,50529|3,50668|1) - not sure with this JT here since its kind of has huge gap with normal diff, why not reduce it to JS?
something like this will do

01:16:848 (76848|3) - kind of nitpick, move to col2? its sandwiched with 01:15:598 (75598|3,77056|3) - 2 LNs

00:25:806 - 00:29:348 - 00:32:473 - 00:39:140 - 00:41:015 - why not add notes here? to fill the gap in top diff

00:04:140 (4140|3) - this seems out of place since theres no LN in most intro parts, why not make this consistent to other parts 00:02:473 (2473|2,2681|1,2890|3,3098|0) - as im pretty sure theres some auditable sound 00:04:348 -

00:36:431 - add note?

01:17:473 - to 01:22:577 - EZ vs NM diff: normal represents vocal LNs with notes on piano sound while easy with only 2/1 and 1/1 LN which is kind of have huge gap... so why not fill it with some note in vocal in it?

so that somehow it will get near the gap for NM diff.

00:27:542 - why this suddenly 1-note in here while the other parts emphasize them as doubles? would suggest todo the same.

00:54:592 - 00:55:392 - you could emphasize this cybol by adding 1-note. while 00:56:192 - is optional since the dense rolls starts there

01:04:892 - add 1-note like what u did 01:05:292 - or remove note 01:05:292 -

01:06:592 (66592|1,66642|0,66692|1,66742|0) - kind of heavy in left-hand due to shields, can do this or rearrange ur ownn based on ur prefered

01:35:367 (95367|3) - the LN lenght for this is inconsistent with the rest 01:35:292 (95292|0,95304|1,95317|2,95342|5,95354|4) - , this should be end in 01:35:417 -

03:00:804 (180804|1,180831|0) - maybe move this somewhere as this is the only part that has dense LNs compare to other parts like 02:59:036 (179036|1,179116|1) - maybe like or u can come up ur own

03:51:426 - add 1-LN in here, same length as 03:51:492 (231492|4) - on col4 so it wont feel empty

same case with 04:48:426 - 04:49:026 - 04:49:626 -

00:14:946 - kinda smol probs, col1 looks soo empty here ( 4th 1/1 miss ) that its kinda unbalance, suggest to move atleast 1 note in there.. its either 00:15:795 (15795|1) - or 00:16:644 (16644|1) - or even 00:16:078 (16078|2) -
same for 00:16:078 - for col4

00:35:607 (35607|5,36173|4) - make this somehow alternate of 00:33:342 (33342|2,33908|1) - by using ctrl + g like what u did in first part 00:24:286 (24286|2,24852|1,26550|4,27116|5) -

00:48:059 (48059|2,48059|1) - HD diff uses only 1-note while this one is double and kinda in low kick one. instead of that, why not double this 00:47:210 - and 1-note on 00:48:059 - for the vocal expression since it matches 00:47:493 (47493|0,47493|2,47776|3,47776|6,48342|5,48342|4) -

01:39:003 (99003|1,99569|2) - same mod as 2272370#4666961

01:51:456 - same explanation as 2272370#4666962

02:19:757 (139757|4,139899|3,140040|2) - ctrl + h for alteration of 02:17:493 (137493|4,137635|3,137776|2) - ?

02:28:814 (148814|3,148956|4,149097|5) - smol suggestion: make this somehow same as 1st part but kinda blocks the LN 02:29:097 (149097|1,149380|2) - .. can rearrange to:

for the good flow

00:12:399 - 00:12:965 - 00:13:531 - 00:14:097 - I dunno if my understanding for RC is right but u can somehow can add note for the change of rhythm since the bpm is very low anyway and also for filling the gap for NM diff. Tho this is pretty much optional since this one is fine ig. tho if accepted, can apply 00:21:173 - section

tho this is very optional so feel free to reject

00:55:135 (55135|4,55135|6,56267|6) - why not reverse this one similar to 01:04:191 (64191|2,64191|0,65324|2) - ?

00:13:956 - missing note here for hat.

00:24:993 - has hithat same as 00:25:559 - tho has less one

00:27:540 - 00:27:824 - pretty much optional but theres hats there to add there.
same for 00:36:597 - 00:36:880 -

00:50:324 - optional too to add a note here, a kick

01:19:899 - 01:22:163 - theres hat in here

02:16:361 - 02:25:418 - pretty sure this one similar to 02:14:097 - . so add note?

00:22:446 - can add note like u did 00:13:390 - since its somehow similar part

00:25:701 (25701|4) - smol suggestion for this to express the vocal like what the IN did... cut this till 00:26:267 - and add another LN at same position till 00:26:691 - so the shield can still keep. heres the sample:
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if applied, do also to the alternate ones 00:34:757 (34757|2) - and the 2nd part

00:40:559 (40559|6,40701|0) - somehow the kicks are louder here, can emphasize to doubles

00:48:201 - add note for hat?

01:09:569 (69569|2) - theres no instru or vocal to represent this note. even the IN and EX doesnt have note too, suggest to remove

01:43:956 (103956|0,104097|6) - same reason for 2272370#4665622

01:51:597 - hat, same as 1st kiai I mention

00:00:660 (660|3) - better to extend this to 00:00:967 - as it doesnt represent anything to make a grace(also look cringy)

00:01:890 (1890|0) - same case ^

00:03:890 (3890|1) - better move to col1 coz it sandwitches with the LNs (looks uncomfy to play)

00:17:506 - 00:17:583 - these 2 worth adding double than 00:17:429 - tho I only suggest to double 00:17:583 - and remove 1 00:17:429 -

00:17:736 - can add 1 note

00:23:890 - this much better

00:33:736 (33736|1,33890|0,33890|3,34044|1,34044|0,34198|3,34198|0,34198|2,34352|3,34506|0,34506|1) - can make similar approach as what I suggest 00:23:890

00:38:967 (38967|3,39121|3,39275|3,39736|3) - I dont even kno what to feel bout this, can u atleast move 1 or 2 of these 00:38:967 (38967|3,39121|3,39736|3) - note somewhere?

00:39:890 (39890|0) - col3 for more comfy

00:43:121 (43121|0) - col2 for less strain 00:42:198 (42198|0,42352|0,42506|0) -

00:43:890 (43890|0,44044|0,44198|0,44660|0) - ^

00:47:583 (47583|0,47736|2,47890|1,48044|3,48198|0,48352|2,48506|1,48660|0) - can u somehow balance these LNs? too biased to left

00:58:967 - whats the reason for triple? sound kick only

01:30:044 (90044|0,90121|1,90198|0,90352|1,90429|0) - nice OH trill but looks disgusting, just rearrange whatever u like

add note:00:08:044 - to 00:16:660 - : 01:14:506 - to 01:23:121 - --> I somehow feel conflict with these parts as I dunno what to suggest... 00:08:352 (8352|0,8352|1,8967|3,8967|2,9583|3,9583|2) - these 1/2 LNs feels like it doesnt fit to be that long when comparing 00:08:044 (8044|2,8044|3) - coz this start 1/2 represent guitar while the others are just cybols. Ask opinions for this one

00:02:804 - to 00:06:157 - check out also for the bells in IN diff