Da Capo 5 ~Megurimeguru Sekai~ (Game Ver.)

00:14:101 (5,6,1) - i suggest that you move these two sliders back in the timeline so that the (5) slider's head would be on the big white tick because that is a downbeat. Please refer to the image below:

Just adjust the patterning afterwards, so it would fit the map.

00:25:153 (2,3,4) - this rhythm would go alot better like https://imgur.com/a/TU8yKvZ to make the vocals be active more

00:35:395 (2) - 00:35:515 (4) - 听起来中间还有一拍，开八分节拍刚好可以塞一个note在这两个note之间，我觉得可以改成折返8分滑条，如果可以忽略这个拍子也可以喽

00:43:675 (2) - should make this active because of new measure on 00:43:915 - to make the big white tick be clicked

00:44:275 (4) - broken stack

00:55:675 (2,3,4) - given that you only spaced out the triple for emphasis in 00:51:115 (9,10,11), if you really want to put a burst here, it shouldn't be this spaced. It is also to intense for this section i would say.

00:58:795 (2,3,4,5,1) - - i think that 5 note bursts on this part of the song is too intense for such a quiet section especially one that has a big jump at the end (5 to 1). There is also nothing in the song that support this.

01:02:635 (6,7,8,1,2) -

00:59:155 (6) - 00:59:275 (1) - 这个地方太难了，打了三次才知道不是四分拍子

01:06:955 (1,2,3) - this would go alot better like https://imgur.com/a/ykgSJut to get the vocals on the blue tick like you're trying to do while also not ignoring the melody on 01:07:435 - . same with 01:10:795 (2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm

01:07:555 (3) - unnecessary as this is air

01:12:235 (7,8) - Doing such a pattern leaves the last syllable as an inactive note (since it is a sliderend), so I think a triple works better

01:17:755 (1,2,3,4,5) - there might just be too much reverse sliders here and they seem to be very out of place (nothing in song to support them)

01:21:115 might be a bit nitpicky but it would be nicer to make this 5-bursts not overlapping the 01:20:875 sliderend and spacing them a bit, because players tend to aim to the left when they see the bursts

01:29:995 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - fire pattern

01:33:355 (5) - please space this much farther than a half stack as there is a loud snare and vocal where stacking this feels incredibly underwhelming for representing the song. same with 01:37:195 (2) -

01:33:835 this can be a circle instead and put the new combo because the vocal starts here

01:47:275 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3) - 這個節奏我喜歡