00:07:025 (1) - End this on red tick instead to catch vocal on sliderend since you're primarily following vocals anyways?
00:07:365 (2,1) - there's a high snare with a minimum spacing while 00:07:478 (1,2) - there are kicks with a high spacing. Other patterns are using spacing on kicks, it would match better if you do the same thing on this circle 00:07:365 (2) - since it has a strong sound as well
same as 00:12:006 (4,1) - 00:14:723 (1,2) -
00:08:720 (3,1,2,3,4) - should space it a bit more because instrumentals are going crazy, compared with previous, especially 00:08:833 (1,2,3,4) - these drums.
00:10:082 (4,1,2,3) - flow is kinda awkward here, id move 00:10:421 (2) - below 00:10:534 (3)
00:16:421 (4,1) - this stack feels unnecessary, id prolly just move this to the left close to 00:16:308 (3)