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00:03:570 - 00:07:206 are sounds that were omitted unlike the inferior difficulties - I highly doubt the intention here since the top diff doesn't require much emphasis into adapting patterns by simplification, I'd recommend placing them to match up with Easy and Normal

00:13:115 (13115|2,13115|3) - for pitch clearance, move 3,4 col to 1,2 col

From 00:15:615 to 00:22:888 If I'm not wrong I think you are following trumpet + some bass sounds through the ln structure
It flows really well but I think it's kind of not precise in terms of lead melody

00:15:729 - 00:15:956 - 00:16:183 - 00:16:410 - 00:16:751 - 00:17:206 and similar long note objects; I can't determine what sound you are following as a priority, and perhaps it's because of the mixture between these two instruments which makes the structure a bit tricky

As of what I could check at 50% speed, theres no such sounds that follow up with the main melody to be represented
But instead there are sounds that are needed to be mapped with LNs (according to the concept applied) like 00:16:524 - 00:16:865 - 00:17:320

00:19:024 - можно добавить лн на 4 колонку до белой линии

00:19:251 - на 4 колонку можно добавить ноту, для выражения кика

00:19:251 to 00:21:979 the 1/2 snapped long notes are representing trumpet sounds that are way shorter (The previous section at 15sec timestamp aprox is exceptional) perhaps shortening them would be more precise

00:21:979 Would be nice to catch up the trumpet in that jumpstream percussion part (Wouldn't be too risky because this is the top difficulty)

00:23:910 - 00:24:138 - 00:24:251 - are representing the same sound, although are mappe differently
It's a light cymbal sound so all of those could act nice as double (If you are applying this maybe reducing that triple 00:23:797 to a double or single would fit the intensity of the instruments)

00:24:365 There is a missing note here because of the percussion and a ghost note here 00:24:592 because there is no instrument present there (editado)

00:25:729 to 00:26:524 - This is a bass section, a single instrument, so I think the pattern or note type choice should be one to match the consistency of the song

I'd suggest to map those as long notes or single notes only

00:26:070 (26070|0) - for guitar solo appearance part, make this single to 1/4 LN

00:29:933 - стоит убрать с 4 колонки ноту, она не стоит ни гроша!

00:31:865 - тут стоит поставить ноту т.к. стримы идут когда вокалист чё-то издаёт ртом, а на этом моменте прервалось немного

00:32:206 - лишняя нота на этой красной полосочке

00:34:706 (34706|2,34706|0,34820|1,34933|0,35047|1,35160|3,35160|2,35274|1) Felt a bit weird to play specially because of that 3 note anchor at the blue ticks which may have been unintentionally mapped here
It felt like a sudden transition between streams and then trills, for a part that doesn't emphasize much the "density" of the instruments (Or at least that's what I could see in this section) - I would recommend to rearrange this pattern accomodating notes in order to avoid those trills that feel out of place

But just in case if this is intentional I'd like to hear the justification

00:37:433 to 00:51:979 It would be great to go straight following all vocal syllabes because, this part feels like a calm section, where you decided to ignore the bass instrument, and also because there are parts where a syllable is longer and adequate to be placed as long notes but you decided to ignore it completely (Like 00:39:024 - 00:44:479 - 00:46:070 - 00:46:297) Or even give them to shorter syllables (Like 00:45:501 - 00:47:320)

00:46:297 - может стоит добавить вторую ноту куда-то на эту линию, довольно пенящий вокал как по мне

00:53:683 - стоит убрать тут ноту, т.к. по сути пустота + сликшом сложный по кпс и технике парт получается

00:54:365 - 00:54:592 are in the same intensity scale, unlike drums where you placed doubles - I think applying single notes for both would be more accurate

00:55:615 to 00:57:433 Some cymbals and kicks were represented with different type of pattern
Sometimes cymbals were represented as singles, and then with doubles
Same goes for kicks

I have a rearragement suggestion to catch up the consistency issue; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19506798/9dd9
I followed up the cymbal as double according to your mapping choice here 00:56:070 and kicks as single notes
But if that wasn't what you tried to represent then you can switch the pattern choice in here

00:57:433 In the "drop"/"chorus" I think the same thing happens as of 00:19:251 or 00:28:342 - The note representation of the mixture in instruments while a verse is playing is pretty confusing to me - It looks very inconsistent because you decide to firstly apply a vocal focus in terms of long note but then you follow up the trumpet

00:57:433 (57433|3,57547|2) Was represented with long notes
00:58:456 (58456|1,58570|2,58683|3,58797|0,58910|3,59024|2,59138|1) But what about these?

00:58:001 (58001|3,58229|2) - (and similars) I think they can go in the same column at 1/4 snap, same sound with the same PR
00:59:251 (59251|3,59365|3) - (optional) as well as these anchors, I think you could also apply it to other vocal melody sections, e.g here 00:58:570 -
01:02:433 (62433|3,62547|0,63001|3,63115|0) - I think you could change them around, since the pitch is different
01:07:433 - missing LN for vocal
(there are some mods in Russian with the same timestamps so if there is something repeated, let me know pls u.u)

00:59:251 - 01:04:706 - сильный перегруз на 1 колонке, вторая пустует, стоит разверенуть стримы как-то

01:06:751 (66751|3) - vocal + guitar for 1/4 LN

01:08:115 (68115|3,68115|1,68229|2,68229|0) I don't think this type of pattern suit vocal or bass sounds - And specially because your main concept was long notes, not doubles

01:12:774 "Ku" which is still audible imo, should be considered too as a single note

01:13:115 (73115|2,73229|1) This part should actually correspond to a single note, not a 1/4 grace

01:13:683 Missing note of percussion

01:15:615 The final part consist of some minijacks which felt a bit of a sudden in gameplay, I would highly recommend to introduce these type of minijacks somehow throughout the map and not only at the end so the player can have an idea of the main map's concept (As I've said before in general suggestion tab)

01:16:183 - as last part of the song, a bass guitar stand outs of the song.
recommend mapping Long notes for bass guitar rather than vocal
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19494822/b61c

01:17:547 Ghost note (No instrument playing) and missing note 01:17:774 because of percussion
01:18:229 (78229|1,78229|0) I'd recommend to reconsider this double (Maybe a single suits better for this quiet sound) (01:21:865 Same)

The same thing happens with these two 01:21:183 (81183|0,81410|3) - (editado)

01:18:456 - 01:18:683 - 01:22:092 - 01:22:320 - missing notes for percussion

01:28:342 It would be acceptable as a triple if this included a biiig cymbal but it's the same sound and has the same intensity as the previous doubles