00:58:001 (58001|3,58229|2) - (and similars) I think they can go in the same column at 1/4 snap, same sound with the same PR
00:59:251 (59251|3,59365|3) - (optional) as well as these anchors, I think you could also apply it to other vocal melody sections, e.g here 00:58:570 -
01:02:433 (62433|3,62547|0,63001|3,63115|0) - I think you could change them around, since the pitch is different
01:07:433 - missing LN for vocal
(there are some mods in Russian with the same timestamps so if there is something repeated, let me know pls u.u)
00:15:615 - to 00:22:888 - I have some questions about the LNs in this section, which are emphasizing the instrumental melody, but I think adjustments can be made:
00:43:505 (43505|0) - I think it is better to continue LNs for voices in 2/1 snap
00:46:283 (46283|3,49616|1) - 01:49:616 (109616|1) - 01:56:804 (116804|2) - 01:59:199 (119199|1) - 02:17:116 (137116|2) - 03:01:074 (181074|3) - you can replace these with single notes (also 00:52:533 (52533|1) - and 01:46:231 (106231|3) - to 01:46:283 - )
00:05:693 (5693|3) - I think this note should go to 00:05:623 -
00:12:359 (12359|0) - same ^