BRIGHT STREAM

00:06:441 (1,2,3) - these just don't quite represent the violin here that well since they pretty much play the same due to linear flow and similar spacing, while the violin is descending. would recommend tuning the spacing difference more so that the instrument aspect can be shown.

smth like:

(no need to follow this but i think it shows an idea of how the spacing could be better arranged)

00:17:850 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 00:30:002 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - etc
it makes no sense to have such a long stream like these in verse which is supposed to be the most chilling section throughout the map

you def have a better rhythm choice instead of overmapping this

00:33:989 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:46:901 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

these tapping stuff are too intense and the music doesn't really support that at all

at least start up your 1/4 chains from 00:35:508 / 01:48:420. as for the previous part, don't overmap with bursts but instead have something that is able to represent the buildup

00:35:777 (6) - vocals would be grouped better with the following rhythm since 00:35:777 (6) - forces 00:35:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4) - to feel like they're all the same segment when the music sounds more like 2 segments of 00:35:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:35:872 (7,1,2,1,2,3,4) -

00:39:859 (1) - somehow all other high vocals (e.g. 00:36:821 (1) - 00:40:809 (4,5,6) - ) are emphasized in some way but this one just doesn't got anything special. would recommend emphasizing it more.

00:44:701 - would say could add note here to show the extended vocals

00:47:280 (3) - 02:00:192 (3) - 1/8 and lands on the blue tick

00:48:593 (1,2,3,4) - this plays wayyy harder than 00:48:973 (1,2) - but 00:48:973 (1,2) - should be where the song starts to go insane. ik that 00:48:593 (1,2,3,4) - has that instrument in the background but in general 00:48:973 (1,2) - still feels way stronger. def recommend reworking the pattern here to make them stand out.

00:52:217 (1,2) - 01:04:369 (1,2) - etc. stacking feels pretty underwhelming for the high pitches, could just space them out

especially you have this 00:53:356 (7,8) - with a sorta large spacing which is really weird. so if you prefer the section to be less jumpy, should stack them instead

00:55:255 (1,2) - 02:08:166 (1,2) - current pattern provides such redundant emphasis on the (2) and seems to be pretty isolated from the rest notes since it is the only object in the section that does not follow the given movement from the previous stream

sounds that deserve to be emphasized should be those cymbals (i.e. 00:55:255 (1) - 00:56:015 (1) - 00:56:774 (1) - ), so the patterning should be focusing on these sounds

^ for example

00:58:847 (4) - nc for new vocal measure?

01:15:555 (1) - tbh the drums here are quite obvious, maybe just map the streams here

01:16:521 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我草里的这么长的overmap 我看你音效怎么给他圆回来

01:17:660 (1) - 03:49:559 (1) - could add d-hn for the two reverses and the end to provide some feedback

01:20:017 - missing obvious snare, probably map it

01:30:935 (2) - 1.2 sv kinda baby here. could go beyond 1.5 to emphasize the instrument more

01:32:850 (1) - also 1/8

01:33:799 (4) -
add clap on the head and remove clap on the end

01:34:922 (2,3) - a bit diff spike, could nerf spacing a bit

01:41:379 (5,6,7,8,1) - vocals here are quite chill and deserve lower gen spacing so you can contrast the vibes with 01:38:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

01:49:733 (1,2) - 0.8 vs 1.0 is basically no sv contrast. if you wanna implement the contrast sv idea here do something like 0.5 and 1.2

01:50:872 (4) - would say this snare deserves to not be stacked since 01:50:682 (3,4) - is really close to 01:50:112 (2) - so there's basically no emphasis in movement.

01:53:340 (3) - this one is more optional but i think it would be better if you map out the drums and make it a triple due to how obvious the drums are

01:55:445 (5,6,7) - think the spacing is a bit too big in comparison to 00:42:534 (5,6,7) -, ~2.3x seems to be enough

01:57:612 - could map this out to compensate for you followed vocals for 01:55:809 (1) - so it's not just an abrupt switch into another rhythm layer being followed

01:58:277 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - overmapping here is kinda taking the emphasis away from the actually intense part 01:58:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . think you could just do the same thing as 00:45:366 (1,2,3,4) -

02:26:394 (1,2) - spacing

02:30:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I think you can slightly nerf the density&spacing here. it is a pretty diff spike in the next 5 seconds since you start the section through some finger control stuff and introduce some linear jumps afterward

given the intensity is actually going up from 02:32:090, could buffer the streams by having a 1/1 slider at 02:30:951 and a 1/2 slider at 02:31:711 (3) -

02:38:546 (4,1,2) -
02:40:065 (5,6,7) -
02:41:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
02:45:761 (5) -
03:38:546 (1) -
留意这些地方的HS变化

02:38:926 (1) - tbh I don't think the snapping here should be 1/3

02:39:306 (2) - this sounds to be accurate since there are literally just three guitar sounds in one beat, as for 02:38:926 (1) - idk maybe it is there but just overridden by the drums. I can only hear two guitars at 02:38:926 and 02:39:116

don't resolve until 2nd bn checked @poyoyo

03:08:910 (2,3) - minor but should be stacked like 03:08:150 (7,8) - imo

03:17:074 (3,4,5) - nc for different measure

03:26:204 (6,1) - think you could move the (6) to the top right like this to make it easier to recognize as a 1/2 gap (and the spacing is quite big for 1/4 gap as well)

03:33:783 (1,2,3) - considering object density is lower than the previous similar structures i.e. 02:19:922 (1) - etc. could you buff the spacing here to make it more impactful, as it is pretty lame against the intensity of the part

03:37:787 (3,4) - just stack it to the previous slider tail like 03:36:268 (1,2) - 03:37:027 (5,6) - to continue executing the concept in this section?

03:39:669 (4,1,2,3,1) - these just feel really empty when the instruments are still going on in the background. it would be better if you reserve the low rhythm density for the later part of 03:40:619 (1,2,1) - cuz thats where the instruments fade out. right now it's kinda too much space in the middle of nowhere and really cuts the momentum of the music. would recommend adding some notes and kick sliders to make it more compact.

03:41:631 - 03:41:695 - drum sampleset

03:43:277 (7) - snare is on 7 but 03:42:897 (6,7) - being closer than 03:43:277 (7,1) - makes 03:43:467 (1) - stand out a lot more which sorta violates the music here

03:44:432 (6) - NC，
03:44:622 (1) - 取消NC，
03:45:002 (5) - NC这个不加也行
因为排列和节奏都表示着03:44:432 (6) - 有个切轨，应该在这里nc