00:06:782 (12) - could change this to k because to emphasize the synth part,which is calm and the finisher at 00:07:720 (13) -
00:07:251 (13) - Why would you have to add a note here since this part doesn't have any sound? Removing this note could emphasize 00:07:720 (13) - just like what you did in Kantan, Futsuu and Muzu.
00:08:423 (14,15) - consider ctrl g this part because 00:08:423 (14) - has high vocal key than 00:08:657 (15) - 00:08:891 (16) - change this to k to emphasize the vocals
00:13:579 (23) - imo, you could add a note here to emphasize the synth. Or you could map it like this:
00:15:923 (29,30,31,32) - consider making this as kdkk to emphasize consistency of a pattern as what i suggest also in 00:08:423 (14,15,16,17) -
00:17:798 (32) - change this to k since it has a high vocal key as what you did on 00:10:298 (18) -
00:23:891 (45,46) - ctrl + g this part and 00:24:126 (46) - change this to k to represent the vocals itself.
00:50:727 (108) - consider move this note to 00:50:610 (108) - to emphasize the vocals, same as the rest as well as 00:51:665 (111,114) - as like what you did in 00:35:376 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74) -
01:25:053 - 01:28:803 - 01:32:553 - 01:36:303 - just personal idea but i kinda think these play too repetitive and not really interesting to play due to the spamming of 3 consecutive triplets. i would suggest making them as ooo ooooo instead to make the rhythm have more variety, as well as still increased the density comparing with the 1st kiai section.
Maybe add breaks at 01:26:928 and 01:34:428 for consistency with the other diffs. It also contrasts the break on 01:22:944 and 01:30:444 kind of nicely.
01:11:694 and 01:19:194 are identical soundwise to 01:15:444. even though they are different by pitch, I still prefer them with a note on 01:15:444. Maybe you could have the pattern be k k d d instead at 01:14:741 so that it's different from the other ones.