Masshiro World (TV Size)

00:12:371 - #1359254

d k ddk;
k d dkk

00:23:714 (53) - move this to 00:23:902 - to make proper triplet

00:30:746 (80,81,82) - maybe reverse the colors to follow the vocal pitch more closely

00:32:808 - probably add triplet? you kind ignore this sound but next similiar note you added 3plet duh

00:39:183 - ki tambah note ben konsisten karo seng mbo gae neng 00:23:246 - karo 00:17:246 -

00:40:214 -> 00:40:027 - then change to ddd for vocals?

00:42:089 - 00:44:902 - 00:48:089 - think you can remove and nerf triplets in this section a bit to emphasize both next section and kiai

00:53:433 (174,175,176) - change to ddk for more consistency with the rhythm? Unless you made it a mono for difficulty reasons

00:54:933 - how about remove this then move 00:55:683 -> 00:55:308 - for consistency w/ how you mapped the vocals at 00:51:746 - ? Also to create rest moment on 00:54:371 -

00:55:964 (183,184) - move those notes to 00:56:058 - and change colors can reflect drum beats
example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14140775/d76e

00:56:808 - add note? consistency with this sound 00:53:808 (174) - , as the rhythm kind of repeating.

00:56:996 - ini double bass haruse finisher kabeh iki 3 note sampe 00:57:371 - , coba pindah 00:56:808 - neng 00:57:183 - trus dadekne DDD opo KKK sakarep

00:58:871 - patterning here could be changed to sth like k d k ddd k k like how you mapped 00:52:871 -

01:00:652 add d here?

01:01:683 - and 01:02:621 - #1359273

01:08:058 - remove for rest moment like 01:13:308 - ?

01:08:246 - how about don to contrast between pitch and avoid only kats

01:08:808 (243) - I'd change that to a d to both follow the rhythm and vocal pitch
edit : actually this is the same as #1272522 a bit later

01:11:058 (248) - there's too little sound to place a note on that point, it would be appropriate to remove this on this difficulty

01:13:308 - iki strim cek dowo e ndelok struktur e gk konsisten. coba note neng kene karo 01:13:027 - didelet

01:13:871 - add note? consistency with other diff. disini pada masang d, bahkan di oni kamu pasang kdddk disini. kok ga dipasang apa"? aneh juga flownya xd

01:20:808 (297) - there's no vocal sound but only low drum sound, change it to don would make sense

01:26:058 - think you can add note here, pretty strong drum and flows better into build up, with added note its 19/1 continuous mapping without spinner so should be good

01:26:996 - gegara wes enek break neng 01:26:058 - di losne ae ndek kene tambahne note rapopo ben mudun spread mu tekan oni ra kadohan

01:27:183 (328,329,330) - you can't use finish at 1/4 patterns, you have to reduce density if you want to use finisher at last note
I suggest this pattern : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14140796/9a4d