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00:16:683 (24) - you can delete this note for consistency rhythm expression

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intentionally made longer pattern to raise the intensity before a break, but did remove some notes to lower the gap with kantan

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K

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00:23:808 (47,48) - you didn't place notes at 00:17:808 - 00:17:996 - where has same rhythm structure, you can delete two notes for consistency and make rest moment

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fixed

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K

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00:26:433 - i think wouldn't hurt to add note here to map the chiptune melody fully

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Add a note as volta said in dm

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00:33:371 (75) - add finish
you have added finishes on every first note on the vocal part and there's symbol sound

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finisher sounds too loud here imo, no change

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K

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I think if consider 00:39:371 (90) - strong cymbal sound, I think don't need emphasize a this vocal sound with K. because, it's a lower than that. It a my suggestion, Move on 00:38:433 - and change d on this note. I think this is fit for vocal and you can further emphasize the finisher sound of 00:39:371 (90) -

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keep the K to emphasis the shouting voice and consistency with 00:50:996 -

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00:57:183 (150) - there are symbol sounds back and forth, you can delete this note

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i don't understand, i put notes because there are the cymbal sounds.

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K

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00:59:808 (158) - there's tom sound so k or delete to emphasize 00:59:996 - < here

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i think d is also fine since the drum sound is going lower

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K

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01:05:808 - move to 01:05:433 - to consistently map vocals?

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deleted 01:05:808 - and 01:05:996 - instead of moving for consistency with 01:17:996 -

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01:13:308 (201) - move to 01:13:121 - makes more sense

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01:19:308 (221) - same here

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no change to emphasize the vocal at 01:12:933 - and 01:18:933 -

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K

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01:13:871 (204) - move to 01:14:058 - for same reason with #1272500

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changed

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K

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01:26:246 - from here, changing colors can reflect vocal pitch.
simple way : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14140768/c41a

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i think current color is fine and can represent the drum better

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