00:31:903 (6) - really small thing but maybe NC this to fit how you NCd the previous pattern
00:51:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe make this stream slowly increase in volume to show the buildup? having no hitsounds on the first half of the stream is a bit off also as it gives no feedback on the 1/4
01:31:587 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1) - maybe make these streams curved and flow in a different direction as its almost an exact copy of the placement of 00:24:640 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1) -
same with 03:30:324 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1) - at least change the rotation of the pattern if anything as if this was to show the same 3 sounds then repetition should be used more consistently with other parts of the map
01:58:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - i feel like making this constant 1/4 fits the music better since the synth is a constant 1/4, and for example you made this 01:21:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - constant 1/4 despite the drums being all over the place
03:15:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Pretty hard to sightread since these overlaps kinda make it hard to see.. also you try it here 03:25:903 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This one is easier to play.. so It is kinda inconsistent