00:51:166 (1) - as i hear you focus on melody here so maybe replace this tickslider with one hc to represent kick. you may say that this tickslider already represent it but pattern 00:51:166 (1,2,3) - shows that these 3 sounds are the same.
01:11:692 (1,1) - you did cool here but still overspaced, i'd suggest stack sliderhead (01:11:692 (1) - ) with 01:11:219 (5) - or on your own