Hoodstar

Quite a few of the portraits of the guys have light pixels at the edges, which looks bad in the storyboard against dark backgrounds. would remove those lines by cropping them out or something

http://puu.sh/Hzsem/25720547de.jpg

http://puu.sh/HzseO/f50972e96e.jpg

it's on all of the portraits except for C1 so you could probably just make them uniformly a pixel smaller on the right and bottom

04:00:301 - I recommend not using additive color for the spectrums in this section - it breaks through background dim and as a result only looks good on 0% dim, the contrast is bigger on lower dims and looks kinda bad :<

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16483591/2172

05:01:117 - this part in the storyboard feels a bit unfinished?

When "you" comes in, "are" gets bumped to the right, goes a bit further and comes back

but when "ready?" comes in, "You are" don't get bumped in the same way, and the final text is uncentered.

I suggest you

• adjust this to make sure each time the text is centered, so "are" should be centered, "are you" should be centered, and finally "are you ready?" should be centered.
• add in the movement for "are you" when "ready?" comes in

00:17:755 - 01:01:391 - 02:30:846 - 03:14:482 - since this refrain repeats all over the place, storyboard wise I kind of want to see something more to bring them together beyond the standard layout of the guys that's there for their unique sections anyways

I think something similar to what you have in the end 04:37:391 - , have a lineup of all the guys - but they'd be in their groups together and it would be constantly scrolling instead of starting+stopping

then transition focus to the 3 for that section at scream

or something else could be cool too ^^

02:24:044 - please style the numbers like the text and make them higher res, right now they're visually crusty and look bad especially when they're side by side the better text

05:55:390 - once the bg is faded out, rather than scaling the gray bar in the middle, you could add in dark images on the top and bottom that would scale instead, that way when it "closes" it would close over the text too ovo