Hoodstar

switch source to full "ヒプノシスマイク -Division Rap Battle-"
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/921737#osu/1924818

bg file size > 2.5 mb

_ Do NOT resolve, let me do such _

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(This is a copy&paste format to avoid dqs and to make sure those things above is actually check more thoroughly)

Unused files.
"SB\Character\cef_debug.log"
"SB\Instraction\GET.png"
"SB\Instraction\Title0.png"
"SB\Instraction\Title1.png"
"SB\Instraction\Title2.png"
"SB\Instraction\Title3.png"
"SB\Instraction\Title4.png"

could add "rap j-rap 石谷春貴 Ishiya Haruki 木村昴 Kimura Subaru 天﨑滉平 Amasaki Kouhei 駒田航 Komada Wataru 浅沼晋太郎 Asanuma Shintarou 神尾晋一郎 Kamio Shinichirou 斉藤壮馬 Saitou Souma 白井悠介 Shirai Yuusuke 野津山幸宏 Nozuyama Yukihiro 木島隆一 Kijima Ryuuichi 速水奨 Hayami Shou 伊東健人 Itou Kento" in tags

add "_Star" in tags

Hip Hop Japanese should be in tags

This sounds like pop too so pop jpop jpop in tags as well

04:05:210 - missing snare

03:23:210 - sections like this would be nicer with a 10% volume decrease

Quite a few of the portraits of the guys have light pixels at the edges, which looks bad in the storyboard against dark backgrounds. would remove those lines by cropping them out or something

http://puu.sh/Hzsem/25720547de.jpg

http://puu.sh/HzseO/f50972e96e.jpg

it's on all of the portraits except for C1 so you could probably just make them uniformly a pixel smaller on the right and bottom

04:00:301 - I recommend not using additive color for the spectrums in this section - it breaks through background dim and as a result only looks good on 0% dim, the contrast is bigger on lower dims and looks kinda bad :<

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16483591/2172

05:01:117 - this part in the storyboard feels a bit unfinished?

When "you" comes in, "are" gets bumped to the right, goes a bit further and comes back

but when "ready?" comes in, "You are" don't get bumped in the same way, and the final text is uncentered.

I suggest you

• adjust this to make sure each time the text is centered, so "are" should be centered, "are you" should be centered, and finally "are you ready?" should be centered.
• add in the movement for "are you" when "ready?" comes in

00:17:755 - 01:01:391 - 02:30:846 - 03:14:482 - since this refrain repeats all over the place, storyboard wise I kind of want to see something more to bring them together beyond the standard layout of the guys that's there for their unique sections anyways

I think something similar to what you have in the end 04:37:391 - , have a lineup of all the guys - but they'd be in their groups together and it would be constantly scrolling instead of starting+stopping

then transition focus to the 3 for that section at scream

or something else could be cool too ^^

02:24:044 - please style the numbers like the text and make them higher res, right now they're visually crusty and look bad especially when they're side by side the better text

05:55:390 - once the bg is faded out, rather than scaling the gray bar in the middle, you could add in dark images on the top and bottom that would scale instead, that way when it "closes" it would close over the text too ovo

Since I noticed these things on my map (while pending and after rank):
Tags:

ill-DOC is misspelled (1 i too much)
Gentaro Yumeno's MC name is missing. "Phantom" should be added (:blobpain:)

sb suggestions

00:00:015 - "file" in the caution text is spelt wrong (though u could go without the caution entirely)
01:47:210 - this is the only main section without constant moving parts, which makes it have less impact than other sections. i suggest adding a moving pattern
02:22:301 - numbers are noticeably pixelated, u should get cleaner imgs for these
05:02:754 - i dont rly understand what "GET!" means, i think "GO!" would make more sense
05:34:527 - the text gets hard to read at really low % dim (less than 20%ish), since the outer glow gets pretty bright. i suggest reducing the amount of glow if u want to avoid this

sb is missing