00:16:326 (1,2,3,4) - try this placement to give better emphasis for these sounds https://i.imgur.com/9SJnyd7.jpg cuz 3 looks overemphasized and others jumps kinda breaks your spacing consistency compared to the rest of the map
00:23:500 (1,2,3,4) - same with this part here 3 doesn't feels as a strong sound so maybe smth like this https://i.imgur.com/ae528bJ.jpg
00:31:326 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe apply the same rhythm like at 00:27:413 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:52:686 (1,2,3) - could stack these at 00:54:299 (5) - to be consistent with your spacing for sounds at 00:52:041 (1) - and 00:52:686 (1) -