00:14:005 (14005|3) - no need the additional LN, since you're mapping drum, remove them & emphasize the cymbals https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14228375/76cf
I want to stick to the main melody as that's what people hear the most when they listen to a song. Also doing that would make the section harder than Hard diff so I'm not gonna do it
00:19:346 (19346|0) - this sudden emptiness is fine, it just stops the flow from previous beat, consider to keep following the 1/2 vocal rhythm
00:26:885 (26885|3,27042|3,27199|0,27356|0) - this at 191bpm is quite a big ask for players at this level; be careful about using these 1/2 stacks. Probably wouldn't use here anyway because of that potential problem.
00:28:141 (28141|3,28377|1,28613|2,28770|3) - i against using LN for 3/4 beats for this bpm (not to mention Hard diff is similar)
try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14228387/42e3
I want to make them doubles rather than singles but idk if that'll be too hard for a normal diff. I'll keep this for now but I'll keep your suggestion in mind
00:42:592 - by ur previous it should be like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13920637/99b4 , at least add note in 00:42:592 - to keep the 1/1 snapping
00:48:246 (48246|3) - why not you follow the trumpet here, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14228396/9e20
Not sure about this one as well. It does sound like it fits but the melody makes it hard to hear so I'll keep this one in mind