00:21:335 (1,2,3,4) - rotate this -8 degres so that it doesn't overlap with 00:20:992 (3) - this circle (it'll still kinda overlap but less than the orignal pattern)
00:28:621 (5) - could space this much further to not make it look like a 1/2
01:09:507 (3) - same
00:44:992 (1,2,3,4,1) - feels a little gunga for such soft 1/4 sound esp when u already slowed the momentum down at 00:44:650 (1) -
00:55:450 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - i think the end of the pattern (so 00:55:963 (1,2,3,4,1) - these circles) should be scale down, since the synth increase from 00:55:621 - here to 00:55:964 - here and then decrease from 00:55:964 - here to 00:56:307 - here
01:14:478 (2) - would make more sense to snap this to the red tick as the vocals clearly stop there
could also put a circle after at 01:14:821 - to fill in the gap
I think it's the same idea as 01:08:992 (2,3) - where the synth is emphasized instead of the vocals, the current pattern works fine for me so unless it's still really rough for you then just reopen this