00:55:450 (2,3) - i would connect these slider insead of leaving a small blank between them, or do a pattern with the rhythm https://imgur.com/a/lRgcBfq
01:17:907 (4,1) - , 03:24:078 (3,1) - could definitely move them closer, this gap is quite too large for 1/3
02:08:650 (4) - , 02:10:021 (5) - , 02:11:392 (4) - I'd replace them with single circles to better highlight the build up, right now the rhythm is kinda similar to kiai's