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for these 00:01:014 (1014|0,1089|1,1164|3) - in this section 00:00:264 - 00:08:664 - you miss a kick here 00:01:239 -. here are some ways you can pattern them 1: 2:

16 days ago

those should be doubles now, also kept the same pattern overall in the section, assuming thats okay tho

16 days ago

Marked as resolved by skullsiac

00:05:232

00:05:232 (5232|2,5232|3,5232|1) - could make to double to differentiate from the louder snare above

17 days ago

fixed

17 days ago

Marked as resolved by skullsiac

00:05:332

snow_stargazer

00:05:332 - the hand put here may be more reasonable

21 days ago

oh yes ur right, fixed

20 days ago

Marked as resolved by skullsiac

00:10:432

00:10:432 (10432|1,10432|3,10432|2) - the guitar is just higher pitch, could just make this single ln

17 days ago

00:11:032

00:11:032 (11032|2,11032|3,11032|1) - #4858842

17 days ago

00:14:582

00:14:582 (14582|3,14582|2) - should be 1/1

17 days ago

fixed

17 days ago

Marked as resolved by skullsiac

00:15:861

00:15:861 - why is this a hand when the rest of the one in the section EX: 00:14:664 -, 00:17:064 -, 00:17:664 -, I would suggest making it a double. Then for this one 00:18:264 - make it a double since it's the some finish sound, and it even has a snare.

16 days ago

00:15:861 removed the note beside the cymbal ln to make it a double 00:18:264 added a note here, def looks better now

16 days ago

Marked as resolved by skullsiac

00:18:314

00:18:314 (18314|0,18414|0,18464|1) - these should just be 1/8 00:18:339 - 00:18:376 - 00:18:414 - , this 00:18:439 - might be a bit extra but add it if you want

16 days ago

00:18:339 and 00:19:389 were changed to a 1/8 snap, everything else should be the snap it originally had, I think

16 days ago

Marked as resolved by skullsiac

00:18:564

imo 00:18:564 (18564|2,18714|2,18864|3,18914|2,19014|3,19014|2,19164|2,19164|3,19314|3,19414|3) - this feels to dense on the right hand I would suggest rearranging them Ex:

16 days ago

re-arranged it similarly to how u did it, tho I did keep some things the same

16 days ago

Marked as resolved by skullsiac

yeah its fine

16 days ago

00:29:657

snow_stargazer

00:29:657 - this parts jack's single notes put 1-2-3-4-3-2-1-...for so long. And you can try more ways to arrange these single like 1-3-2-4,4-1-3-2 and so on.

21 days ago