00:06:330 (21,22,23,24,25) - why is this a 5plet, it doesn't follow anything
Would suggest you remove 00:06:423 (22,24) -
same thing at 00:19:851 - except you would have to make 00:19:851 - a k and 00:19:944 (106) - a d
00:20:131 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123)
this is too long to be in an oni, would recommend you delete 00:20:783
00:27:591 (170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - would suggest you change the coloring on this up a bit as it is the same exact pattern as 00:26:099 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165) -
00:29:223 (180,181,183,184) - why are these in 1/8? The vocals are in 1/4
Would highly recommend you change these to 1/4
the first note definitely sound too early on 1/4, the other 2 sounds a bit early too
i think 00:29:176 (180) - should be on 00:29:223 and move this 2 00:29:269 (181,182) - to next 1/16 tick
00:40:459 (271,272,273,274,275,276) - I would suggest you make this a 7plet to follow the vocals and the perc sounds
move 00:48:386 (335) - to 00:48:292 - and make 00:48:199 (334) - a d to make it more playable and more accurate song representation wise
00:49:598 (344,345,346) - would make this a 5plet to follow the vocals and also make it coherent with 00:51:090 (355,356,357,358,359)
00:55:964 (392,393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400) Very long mono in this pattern without anything really supporting it, so I recommend turning 00:56:337 (396,397) and optionally 00:56:616 (399) to don.