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mapped by gzdongsheng

submitted 8 Feb 2025

qualified 5 days ago

This map is estimated to be ranked on 24 March 2025 if no issues are found. It is #23 in the ranking queue.

nominated by wIntEr7z and AelSan

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01:09:780

01:09:780 (69780|2,69895|0) - 这里是鼓+旋律吗，如果是的话这俩鼓听着是1/3

10 days ago

不完全是，还有点别的音，可能比较类似dump
如果完全1/3写准的话感觉这里手感打起来很诡异

9 days ago

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01:16:760

01:16:760 - 这有四个那个旋律声，感觉写成交互会更明显连贯一点

10 days ago

现在这样感觉还能稍微跟一下vocal的渐弱，我觉得还挺好

5 days ago

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01:40:530

01:40:530 - 这个叠的手感比较奇怪，打起来中间2个和首尾断得很开
我觉得可以直接忽略掉 1/2 的人声？因为不算很重要，这里稳住鼓的手感感觉会好点（这个点缀人声的效果也不算很好打起来

10 days ago

（如果apply的话顺手把类似的地方也改了xwx）

10 days ago

我打起来还行，先开着

5 days ago

我觉得还好

5 days ago

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5 days ago

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01:52:991

01:52:991 (112991|2,112991|3,112991|0,113049|1,113107|3,113164|2,113222|1,113280|3,113337|1,113395|2) -
这一串偏往左三轨吧，前面都是偏右这两边貌似是可以做大致对称的东西，或者你把前面的那部分做到左边去
我的意思是01:51:145右三轨01:52:991也是右三轨，所以右三轨或许压力过大，这两个地方可以做成大致对称

5 days ago

03:56:682 04:11:451

5 days agoLast edited by AelSan 5 days ago.

不是特别好改，因为刚好都是前一拍左手有东西，整体平衡其实还行，基本都是左右左右

5 days ago

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02:08:914

02:08:914 (128914|0,128953|1,128991|2) - 虽然这个鼓比较弱，但是感觉对比前后roll的手感还是太弱了(x
我觉得可以换成交互之类的

10 days ago

一整大段副歌只有这里情绪下来了，所以当成break不做强度太大的排列

9 days ago

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02:48:376

02:48:376 没看懂抓的吉他吗，为啥后面乱更密了，后面吉他不是和前面强度差不多的吗，如果是人声这里人声也是逐渐减弱的阿

5 days ago

是吉他，我觉得是渐强的，特别是02:49:299 - 这里

5 days ago

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02:48:606

02:48:606 - 02:49:760 - 1/10

13 days ago

03:28:990

03:28:990 - may be a better transition because of the original transition being a little sudden, and 03:28:574 (208574|2,208667|3,208759|2,208817|3,208932|2,208990|3,209105|2,209220|3) - being somewhat uncomfortable to hit and left hand seems to have a gap -> 03:28:620 (208620|1,208874|1,209336|1) -

5 days ago

1/5 is good but i intend not to put any LN coordination here so rearranged a bit

5 days ago

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03:29:105

03:29:105 - 这里锚一下呗，感觉松得有点快(

10 days ago

这样转后面单LN的时候落差会更大，大概有个渐弱效果就行了；实际上到第二拍03:29:451 - 已经基本没啥东西了

9 days ago

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03:43:355

03:43:355 (223355|1,223413|2,223470|3) - prefer delete
这里算一个buildup过渡给下一个阶段的，这里鼓应该是大于vocal，连起来太把vocal看重了，我还是觉得这里更突出鼓要好一点，停顿一下给后面一个好的过渡

5 days ago

我感觉还行，除非前面那些1/4全都不要了，但是那样感觉就有点太弱了

5 days ago

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04:42:835

04:42:835 我觉得该更密一点？这里鼓体现的比较低了，要不改两个红线变double吧

5 days ago

都这么说那我在后面那个1/2加一个

5 days ago

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04:43:008

04:43:008 - double?

10 days ago

没想着抓这么细节的鼓，感觉纯1/1的节奏给下一段铺垫比较好，只能说04:43:008 (283008|2,283065|1,283123|2,283181|3,283238|1) - 这个排列和后面纯单手稍微做了区别

9 days ago

Marked as resolved by gzdongsheng

04:43:296

04:43:296 - 04:43:527 - 感觉这里可以直接上三押给后面铺垫(

10 days ago

下一段也没有全三押，只有vocal的地方是三押，不然太无脑了而且没法做变化，所以这里也没必要，写的比较锚姑且算是铺垫了

9 days ago

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04:51:258

04:51:258 (291258|3) - 可以挪到col1？和后面鼓的猫连在一起了，感觉不是一个段的

10 days ago

10 days ago

有个vocal转乐器的感觉，不单纯是鼓
不过主要原因是我感觉这个放col1左手就爆了

9 days ago

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05:01:527

05:01:527 - vocal歪了吧

10 days ago

感觉这几个都歪歪的

10 days ago

调了一下

5 days ago

Marked as resolved by gzdongsheng

05:14:911

05:14:911 - 05:15:834 - etc, consider 1/5 dump for guitar

9 days ago

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5 days ago

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