00:10:421 (5) - how about moving that note over here 00:09:790 - ? does fit the vocals.
if you consider this 00:08:368 (26,27,28,29,30) - and others similar patterns, you're currently following the vocals in this part.
01:01:105 (26) - current pattern is more than fine. You can just change that note as k to give more emphasis on this 01:01:421 (28) - . Thought, it may remove the d k swap you're trying to achieve earlier than expected, so really up to your preference.
01:20:921 (126) - just a small suggestion, since current pattern is more than fine, but if you remove that note, it'd allow you to have a slightly better build up.
It'll make something like this: