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00:00:891 - a sound here, also represented at 00:02:891

00:01:735 (1735|1,1766|3) - this notes are too strict release, within 1/8 snap i wouldn't recommend because it on 240 bpm
suggest to make them rice instead or do 1/4 snap.

00:01:766 - honestly this could just be 1/4, the last note doesnt really sound like its at 1/8

if 00:02:391 is ln, 00:03:141 and 00:03:516 should also be ln

00:07:141 - could be put at 1/2 really or be made a grace (then 00:07:266 should also be a grace for fun) if u want to use 1/8

a bit hard to tell, but 00:07:516 should either be a 1/3 or perhaps the 2/4 note should be moved to 4/4

00:07:610 - align as double might be better ,cause it too dense for this sound
for example

from 00:08:860 - to 00:15:360 - got too many double on the right, so if possible you should rearrange it to flow better and keep balancing

00:10:610 - vs 00:12:610 - they got different structure on these one has double + 1/8 other has double only

00:16:766 - weird emphasis starting from here, 00:17:266 sounds much stronger than 00:17:016

00:22:766 - i think melody is not accurately represented, some sounds like 00:23:453 and 00:23:578, while others feel quite weak. i wouldnt say this deserves a consistent stream

00:25:141, 00:27:141 - feels like an unnecessary double

00:31:141 - should be a double

00:45:016 - 00:46:641 - structure wise this section doesn't make too much sense, you have some blunders with anchors such as 00:45:141 (45141|2,45266|2,45391|2,45516|2) - and 00:45:516 (45516|3,45641|3,45766|3,45891|3) - which can make it dense on the right hand. You could use a more simplified version or a variation of in

careful with hand density here 00:45:391 (45391|2) - 00:43:141 -
for example try to avoid doing anchors like these 00:41:516 (41516|1,41641|1,41766|1,41891|1) - , 00:41:766 (41766|3,41891|3,42016|3,42141|3,42266|3) -, 00:42:641 (42641|2,42766|2,42891|2,43016|2) - , 00:41:891 (41891|2,42016|2,42141|2,42266|2,42391|2) -

00:45:453 - i think the stream begins here, so a note should be here

00:46:047 (46047|3,46110|2) - swap each other

00:47:766 - 00:48:266 - It seems you have missed the 1/4 here 00:47:953 - and here 00:48:203 - I would suggest making it jump stream

00:48:360 (48360|0,48485|0,48610|0,48735|0,48860|0,48985|0,49110|0,49235|0,49360|0,49485|0,49610|0) - got very long anchor here, can do following as example

remove note here 00:50:953 since no sound, and add note here 00:50:828 - since there's a sound here. Make this 1/1 ln 00:50:391 (50391|2) - so you can make room for hand by moving this 00:50:766 (50766|1) - to col 3

00:51:078 - doesnt feel worthy of a note
i am quite nitpicking right now but its still little polishing here and there which is never too bad right

move to col 1 00:51:266 (51266|1) - and ctrl+g 00:51:141 (51141|1,51203|0) - This pattern better fits the pitch of the sound

There is no prevalent sound here 00:52:578 (52578|3) - so remove

I would suggest applying what is provided in the image in order to avoid this large anchor which I'm assuming wasn't intentional 00:56:266 (56266|1,56391|1,56516|1,56641|1,56766|1) -

01:20:610 - any one rice for this one, there are synth as i heard

01:23:610 - this one can be arrange better, make some specific column being repetitive might be good
ex.

01:54:578 - missed note?

01:55:578 - should be a note while 01:55:703 shouldnt

01:55:766 - could be made a triple