00:09:444 (14) - should be standalone, it's incomplete with just one note, would fit if it was shifted to 00:09:622
Although honestly it would be better if the note was after at 00:10:694 - so that the break is before 00:09:979 - but the rhythm of 00:11:051 (16,17,18,19,20) - has to be adjusted to be more similar to the start at 00:04:265
At 00:09:444 has 1 kat at ghost beat, u need delete it or change the snap into first 1/1 snap next
Another at 00:12:122 but I think u need change into 1/1 snap b4
01:17:122 has weird and unheard 1/2, change it
02:02:336->02:07:122 is free time, add some note into the beat bcs some beat at here player do anything.
Too much kiai at last stage, decease it
00:18:551 (30,31) - shift them 1/1 later to be on 00:18:908 and 00:19:622 - capture most of the music emphasis here
00:33:372 (57,58) - 00:34:801 (60,61) - is there really a need to use 1/2s here? Now rhythm has to ignore the build up like 00:35:336
02:05:694 - at least have a note here, also rather have a note at 02:06:765 instead of 02:07:479 - with the instrumental change which gives more direction for rhythm
Likewise like 02:12:122 (16) - to 02:11:408
02:17:837 (7) - etc
The break could be at 02:04:622 - 02:16:051 instead of at 02:12:836