(l) 00:39:817 (1,2) - flow here feels really off because of how close these sliderheads are, would play much better if you ctrl + g 00:40:140 (2) imo ^-^
(l) 00:54:011 (1) - minor, but would be nice if this were angled better to fit the rest of the map + blanket 00:53:688 (3) as well >.<
(l) 00:55:301 (1) - also similar, but the flow on 00:56:108 (2,3,4) feels really awkward too, so a pattern like this might fit better
01:13:366 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this being spaced the same as the previous section is very underwhelming when you consider that this is picking up in pace. I suggest making this more spaced and specifically spacing 01:13:366 (1,1) - away to emphasize the strong kicks happening
01:14:656 (6,7) - by removing these you give more emphasis to 01:14:334 (4,5) - which personally for me works better since 01:14:575 - to 01:14:817 - calls for a break anyway.
you could then stack 1 and 5 for better emphasis, move 01:14:979 (2) - further away etc.
me personally i think that keeping the tri-note burst here would be better because the drum sounds are audible here but i do agree that removing the burst and stacking 1 with 5 give the part more emphasis
main problem is that there's no feasible way to implement the stacking of 1 and 5 without needing to remap a lot of the surrounding notes
(l) 01:34:979 (10,11,12) - would be really cool if you curved these sliders to the stream shape, maybe something like this :O