01:10:785 - this lil section til 01:13:366 - is when music drops the intensity a bit so it would be nice to represent that with better note choice, aka by removing triples maybe 01:11:350 (4,8) - where there's nothing in music anyway for them to be here, and just trying to slow movement a bit by lowering SV. would represent the music better:)
01:52:237 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - feel like these don't really play out good, first i think every note on 01:52:398 - this active sound would work better if it were clickable and second, 01:52:479 - these blue ticks don't have any sound on them, but these ones do 01:52:640 -
here's my recommendation: https://puu.sh/Kn9Hx/72d336331f.png https://puu.sh/Kn9HT/3106208fc6.png of note choice, although you can of course think of your own ways to represent music if you wish