jumps on 00:29:980 - are a bit unexpected & unpredictable
per example:
-> 00:35:197 (5,6,7,8) - & 00:43:545 (1,2,3,4) - are a bit too intense. they're is similar to 00:33:893 (8,9,1) - which is supposed to be the climax of this part
-> 00:42:241 (3,1) - could be more dense. if you look at the whole chorus it's chillest part despite every other similar sound being fairly intense
i recommend focusing on making the biggest jumps when a finish hit is reached, while dialing back on some of the other patterns a bit
01:01:284 (1,1,1,1) -> spacing here seems a bit odd.
I get the idea of increasing the spacing but right now the spacing between 01:02:328 (1) and 01:03:371 (1) seems very big and from 01:03:371 (1) to 01:04:415 (1) underwhelming compared to it.
I would suggest to reorganice this and try to make a progression of the spacing, e.g.
01:01:284 (1,1) -> 3x ds
01:02:328 (1,1) -> 4x ds
01:03:371 (1,1) -> 5x ds