00:45:554 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - vs 00:53:297 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - First instance feels so nice, very cool at representing that vocal phrase, but for 00:53:297 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel like it should have started only at 00:54:265 - instead of starting the pattern idea at 00:53:297 -
I'd recommend mapping normally after 00:46:764 (3) - with normal rhythms, just like you did for 00:55:475 (3,1,2) - and change up the patterning for 00:53:297 (1,2,3) - so 00:54:265 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - feels much more highlighted.
I still think you should map 00:53:294 (1,2,3) - differently from 00:54:261 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - perhaps doing a long slider for 00:53:536 (3) - into circle at 00:54:020 -
Would also make sure to make a different movement so the triangle movement is unique for 00:54:261 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -