00:19:268 (19268|1,19525|1) - How about make it Double? Because the drum in this section is represent as double
00:24:397 (24397|2,24397|1) - here are double, but 00:24:781 (24781|1,25038|2) - are single, they are all hitsound, so they can write same
01:03:115 (63115|0,63115|2,63243|1,63307|2,63371|3,63371|0) - This background music repeats itself every other paragraph,such as 01:02:602 (62602|3,62602|2,62730|0,62858|1,62858|2) - and 01:02:089 (62089|1,62089|0,62217|2,62345|3,62345|0) - , you should wirte them same
01:56:704 to 02:25:422 - How about make the stream like this one 01:59:909 (119909|3,119974|1,120038|2,120038|0,120166|3,120230|0,120294|1,120294|2) - Become more readable. Because I think this pattern in this BPM is too Hard to read for player
Example:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19387956/d17b
02:29:525 - 02:37:474 - How about shorten LN with stream like this 02:30:294 (150294|2,150422|1,150486|3) - Because I found it not enjoyable in this level
Example:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19387964/8a85