Apocalypse

00:01:833 - you could do it as a triple (like Rh7thm's Cataclysm diff )

00:08:371 (8371|1,8371|2) - The sounds here don't seem that special, I think you should align them for consistency

00:10:550 maybe add a note here? like u did with 00:10:807

00:10:935 missing 1/2 LN for sound similar to 00:10:679

00:11:961 (11961|1) - how about moving this to col 3 to avoid large anchor 00:11:448 (11448|1,11576|1,11704|1,11832|1,11961|1,12089|1) -

or just make 00:11:704 jumptrill like the one before

for consistency i think u should express 00:12:089 the same as 00:10:038 (by adding 1/1 Ln on 00:12:089 and double Ln's for 00:12:474, 00:12:730, 00:12:986)

00:13:627 (13627|0) - shouldnt be a Ln here cuz there isnt any sound like 00:12:986

00:14:012 triple seems a bit excesive for a soft cymbal instead of using it for a loud snare like 00:13:627, consider reducing to a double

00:22:345 deserves at least a double for strong synth imo

00:23:627 (23627|1,23627|0,23756|1,23884|1,24012|0,24140|1,24140|0) - too hand biased, i would move this note 00:23:884 (23884|1) - to col 4

00:26:961 (26961|1) - seems like a ghost note

00:31:320 just single cuz no drum

00:31:961 (31961|3) - should be rice since there isnt any synth

00:32:602 (32602|3) - synth ends earlier than 1/2 snap so i suggest on reducing length to 00:32:858

00:56:191 (56191|3,56191|2,56320|2,56384|3,56448|2,56512|3,56576|2,56704|2,56768|3,56832|2) - too hand biased, consider rearranging

01:03:371 - 01:05:422

This section of full LN feels somewhat inappropriate here. Unlike the part at 02:09:012, there is no prior LN buildup leading into this section, making it seem very abrupt from a structural perspective.

Additionally in terms of musical expression, the music in this part does not exhibit very obvious changes, which is insufficient to justify such an abrupt shift. So I suggest reducing the density of LNs in this section.

01:07:474 - 01:23:884 could be improved by adding other patterns than just jump trill which is kinda monotonous, i would make short burst like this 01:07:858 into slit trills

01:07:922 (67922|0) - the idea of adding 1/4 Lns for synth is discarded later on so i suggest on deleting them

01:15:679 (75679|2) - for consistency make it 1/1 duration like 01:07:474 (67474|2) -

01:46:448 here is where strong kick sound starts to i suggest on make rice since there