00:29:833 (2,3) - They shouldn't overlap. To fix this, move the slider 00:30:666 (5) a bit away from 00:29:833 (2) (you may have to move the next sliders to keep the patterns of your map).
Also note in the ranking criteria that 1/2 notes shouldn't overlap (which is even true as the ranking criteria suppose that the BPM is 180).
00:37:833 (2) - would move this a bit up to avoid overlap with 00:36:916 (2) - to improve visuals a bit
00:50:333 (5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - imo this entire section feels way too dense, i would deffenitely remove some 3/4th forexample here 00:50:666 (1) - you can perfectly fine not have this as 3/4th since there isnt specific sounds
01:01:999 (1,2,3,4,1) - Consider nerfing this because they seems really complicated for a hard difficulty.
01:10:999 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is wayyyy to much for a hard, consider removing 01:11:083 (3) - this and making it into a burst
I agree with you but then again, I don't want to include too much 1/3 and 1/6 rhythms in a 3* difficulty. I feel like the piano is too quick and it would be difficult to include the piano that would be easy enough for a 3*.
edit: I wish I could implement the piano in this section but it would be too hard for a 3* difficulty due to speed and quick rhythm changes.
i feel like you can include 1/3, and exclude 1/6 by simplifying them to 1/3, i get that you dont want to inflate the difficulty of the map, thats why you stuck with 1/4 rhythms through the section, i still feel like my mod stands
01:58:333 (3,1) - Should swap length of these and have the NC be the 3/4 instead, big kick on first sliderend is way more impactful of a note and should have that as the active click here
03:01:333 (1,2,3,4) - Those are 1/6, not 1/4. Maybe consider mapping this part differently if you think 1/6 sliders are too complicated.
03:03:666 (2,3,4,5,1) - is too difficult for a hard diff, 5 note bursts are already rare in hard diffs, but spacing them is even more rare. I would either suggest overlapping the burst, or just simply going for 1/4 kicksliders instead.
03:16:749 (5,6) - This could just be simplified as a circle on the red tick so that there is a 1/2 gap to break the chain.
03:21:666 (2,3,4) - This could be changed to something like https://imgur.com/a/hbezoVl, so that the instrumental on the red tick is mapped.