01:28:718 - Starting from here, I think you made the change a bit drastic, while the music does not changing too much. You increased SV and made more spacing here, which looks a bit overdone. Making such dense rhythm without any 1/1 gaps and bigger jumps with SV might be really feels like overdone for this. For the best solution, I think mapping this just with the SV 0.9x would be enough to show how this section has been changed.
If you really would like to leave as now, maybe at least you could improve rhythm choice? Just in case 01:30:351 (3,4,5) vs. 01:29:047 (2,3,4) - is not following vocals well, so replace this 01:30:677 (4,5) as 01:33:286 (4,5) ? It will also improve gameplay here, because now 01:29:047 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - it looks so repetative 2 circles + 3 sliders, and this small improvement will also make gameplay more engaging here
01:46:653 (4) ; 02:41:436 (4) - I think, would be much cooler if you change this to circles for highlighting the snare-sounds here.
02:38:501 (4,5) - Replace this to 1/2 slider for better following the vocals in song? This will also nerf these huge spacing jumps, since you making this almost the same as for the active snares here 02:53:990 (3,1,2,3,4).