Renatus

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[General Check]

[Background]: 117847824_p0.jpg - 🟩
-> [Dimensions]: 1920 x 1080
-> [Size]: 440KB
Minor suggestion, I'd like to remove below letters at BG, so if you want to take it, click this (1920 x 959 cut ver)

[Audio]: 192kps / .mp3 - 🟩
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[Beatmap Check]

[Timing / BPM]: not critical, offset 954 is better when I checked from lazer. - 🟩

[HP/OD]: 7.5/7.5 | 8/8 | 8/8 | 8/8.5 - 🟩 not dealbreaking, I suggest to make Insane HP to 8.2 for show ascenting HP.

[Hitsounds]: No hitsounds, please add hitnormal. - 🟥
-> also please reduce hs volume, current uses 100% but this is too big. Suggested volume is 30~40%.

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[Metadata]

[Title/Romanised Title]: Renatus / Renatus - 🟩

[Artist/Romanised Artist]: Soleily / Soleily - 🟩

[Current Tags]: some missing tags - 🟨
General: electronic instrumental
Song / Artist Reference: unisphere 地球ヤバイep chikyu yabai
Extra Tag: stream rice

You need to add general tags electronic instrumental
Also can be added verbal english of 地球ヤバイ, chikyu yabai
And stream rice can be added its pattern type.

Finalized Tag: electronic instrumental unisphere 地球ヤバイep chikyu yabai stream rice

[Primary Metadata Sources]: official EP, official soundcloud

(Insane and Hyper diff)
I felt underwhelming in 02:20:731 - 02:41:830 part which doesn't follow kick nor main sounds (actually blended.)

I'd like to suggest following main sound and give double for kick, and also not giving minor synths kicks (eg. 02:22:874 (142874|4) - ) cuz that minor synth isn't a big enough to give feedback to players and considering its difficulty.

01:02:784 (62784|5) - (all diff) I don't think this part need 1/16 piano expression, consider make 01:02:764 chord instead

not only the top diff is, overall diffs at stream parts need some remapping cuz of too many constructive issues that I see it

1. 01:35:896 - 01:46:445
   some piano sounds are inconsistently emphasized; 01:36:060 (96060|3,96143|0) - 01:36:390 (96390|4,96472|0) - both are same pitch but differently emphasized (col 1,4 - col 1,5)
   also I don't think emphasizing 01:36:637 (96637|1,96720|5) - just ctrl H isn't enough to give feedback. So my opinion, I suggest make sure about poly 1/4 piano sound like trill. (reference: https://rurv.s-ul.eu/CKjm5Q5q top diff example)

2. 00:22:049 - 00:32:599 (00:32:599 - 00:40:511)
   the pitch col placement seems weird for me, 00:24:687 and 00:24:852 are same pitch can be emphasized same col with jacks, but none of all diffs didn't do that. (reference: https://rurv.s-ul.eu/Vu5IjmCm also top diff.)
   Not even that I pointed part, most patterns can be refer that music's progression, the results is unclear feedback to players.

3. 01:17:764 - 01:18:093 - 01:18:423 - 01:18:753
   I think the stream's progression can also be changed its way depend on song's progression, each parts are have cut progression and can be better like this: https://rurv.s-ul.eu/ap4dSldk (this is Insane diff)

overall, the pattern need to refer song's progression and current pattern feels too randomly placed that can't give feedback to players, consider make sure the ruleset with it.

03:26:665 - 03:47:104 (except top diff)
current part seems too low density even you can emphasize main sound.

as you can see, the gap between insane and top diff is too large and same density with Hyper diff.

I suggest to make:

• minor main sound with LN at insane diff
• minor main except LN at Hyper diff
• keep pattern at Normal

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