00:18:808 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - current rhythm feels a bit too active for such a calm part of the song, would map the piano with reverses here instead to remove the sudden spike in density.
it felt kinda sudden on a sightread as someone who knows this song very well, i wasnt expecting the rhythm to be so active so quickly. i guess since its 1/3 it can work but i just think itd work best with reverses instead, though ultimately this is up to you